My immortal wish.

by Mineingcreeper11

Rating: teen
Tags: Tragedy, Dark
Length: 843

She didn't know it would hurt her so much. If she did, she never would have done it. She should have realized it. Haven't a thousand years taught her enough to know this hurt? Those ponies, had been her students first true friends. Now they

She didn't know it would hurt her so much. If she did, she never would have done it. She should have realized it. Haven't a thousand years taught her enough to know this hurt? Those ponies, had been her students first true friends. Now they were gone.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-02-21 02:40:01 UTC

A finale letter (Edited)

A finale letter

Dear Princess Celestia,

I have come to find another lesson in friendship. My finale lesson.

Flutter Shy. She was so sweet, kind and strong. Living next to the Everfree forest, with a bunch on animal's. She stayed kind to the very end. We tried to warn her that Mr. Bear was to rough. He snapped her already fragile back. She ended up in the hospital. She wanted to comfort us, tell us it was okay, though, we knew it wasn't. She even comforted her roommate. Funny how she was too kind to say no to Mr.Bear when he wanted to play tag with her. Her kindness killed her.

Pinkie. She partied during her own funeral. But, nopony was up to partying. She still hold's a place in my heart. Diabetes. She was such a party pony she killed herself. The doctor's told her to stop eating sweet's, but she ignored them. I remember it like it was yesterday. She was eating a lollipop. Then she was put into a comma. I remember sitting, waiting for her to wake up, waiting for the first pony I saw in PonyVille to just wake up. She would laugh, smile, and hum even when she was dieing. She died the same day she woke up. We threw a party, thinking she was gonna come home. She was tired though. All four of us were sitting next to her when she died. She died singing her favorite song. Her last request was for us to laugh, and I was compelled to laugh through my sorrow.

Rarity. Her mane still had some color even after her death. The generosity. She died after a week without any sleep, trying to make you a dress to wear for your Birthday. Spike went into a self induced comma for several years. Took forever to wake him up. By then every pony had died.

Apple Jack. She told me, 'There always somepony who now's your secret, so why not tell everypony else?'. I'm going to prove she was the element of honesty to the very end. Never told a lie. If she did lie, she didn't even know the truth. She broke her hoof when apple bucking. After a year of being locked up in her house, she went mad. She begged her sister to let her apple buck one last time. It took another year to convince her, though we strongly disapproved. Even then she was only aloud one, small, tree. But the tree was all it took. Apple Jack died trying and failing to buck an apple tree. Nopony that was close to her has told a lie since. It just remind's me of her to much when I do.

Rainbow Dash. She became the oldest Pegasus to ever live. Oldest Pegasus mare in fact! Older than an earth pony stallion! She was also the oldest to ever fly. I remember crying, begging for her to not leave. I'm amazed the Wonderbolt's never excepted her, only pony to do a Sonic Rainboom, Element of Harmony, winner of Best Young Flyer's competition, she saved them from Rarity, and even passed WonderBolt academy. She died trying to faster then ever before. I wish my plea's could have saved her. I hate being alone. It hurt's so much...

I learned friend's can make you whole, but also break you just as fast, if not faster. Friendship is dangerous. I wish I could have rejected Alicornhood. Oh well. That won't stop me. I plan on proving immorality wrong. I'll be with my friend's by the time you find this.

Your faithful student,

Twilight Sparkle.

Her hooves beat the marble floor. She had searched every room in the castle. But one. And she was too late. Tear's trickled down her muzzle as she stared at the corpse. She had tide one end of rope up on a chandelier, and made a loop on the other. She had hanged herself. Sadly, immorality can be stopped. True to the letter, it was too late. Celestia never should have hurt her student. But she was being selfish and made her student live forever. She should have done it to her friend's to, but no, she didn't think of that. Now her student was dead. Celestia was a murderer.

"I'm so, so, sorry twilight..."

The funeral was short. Many ponies went up to the stage to have a word. Very few truly new Twilight. It had done a nice amount of damage to her. Ponies began to fear that Celestia Luna or Cadence would die from sorrow. Then it happened. The last family member of Twilight died. The gate's to Tartarus swung open. Sister's turned against brother's, brother's against sister's. Wives against husbands, husbands against wives. Friends against friends. You would've thought Discord finally snapped. All of Equestria went to war. Blood was shed, ponies murdered and were murdered. Bomb's fell. The element's of harmony, a princess, a prince and Captain of the royal guard were dead. It was only the start of world war III...