The Mare of The Waterfall

It was beautiful day for Comet Tail and his five friends, Thunderlane, Soarin, Caramel, Pokey Pierce and Noteworthy. They were all having a picnic hangout like they usually do around every weekend. They would get some food, eat it and talk about their day or just simply do various activities. Either way, they loved hanging out and it couldn't get any better than this. Right now, Pokey and Thunderlane are having a conversation about something. Caramel is relaxing against a tree, Noteworthy writing a song and Soarin is doing some aerial tricks.

However, Something was wrong with Comet. He was quiet, very quiet; he hasn't said a word since they got to their usual spot. That's when Noteworthy decide to say something if nopony wasn't.

"Hey...uhh...Comet? You okay?" He asked.

Comet slowly turned to the blue earth pony and slowly smiled which was creepy to the singer. His smile grew shorter as the yellow stallion sighed. He nodded and then continue on reading.

"Why do you ask?"

"Well...you've been reading the same page for 20 minutes, it only takes you 5 minutes to read 2 pages and your just staring into it. Is there something on your mind?" Noteworthy asked again.

All of Comet's friends soon stopped what they were doing and turned their attention to their yellow friend.

"Umm....I'm okay?" He lied.

Caramel trotted over to him and wrapped a hoof around Comet's back, He gave a suspicious look and spoke.

"Uhh Comet? We've known each other for 3 years now. Just tell us what's on your mind"

Comet took a deep breathe, all of his friends gather around him as he begin to speak.

"Well, I had that dream again, about the mare that was at the waterfall. She was beautiful with the water dancing around her and moving with her magic. It was just so alluring, I couldn't get a good look of her since it was only silhouette. But the way the night made her sparkle was just amazing enough" He blushed.

Soarin looked like he was about to barf while the others simply just nod and blush.

"I say Comet, She sounds very enticing, When did all this happen?" asked Pokey.

Comet begins to tell the tale of how met this beautiful mare at the waterfall. "Well, It all began in Celestia's Magic School of Gifted Unicorns"

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It was around night time, Comet was spending time in the Celestia School library with his friend Written Script. They were looking into stars and comets for the project. And had to make a Comet out of a magic to pass.

"Wow, this Comet Making spell is harder than I thought, I don't think I'm cut out for this crap! I'm a writer for Celestia's sake!" exclaimed Written

Comet chucked and shook his head, he then gazed out of the window and noticed the stars and moon. He smiled as a idea begin to formulate in his head.

"Hey Written, I'll be right back okay. I'm going to go for a midnight stroll to get some inspiration" Said Comet

"Hey! Comet! We're not supposed to be outside during nighttime, You'll get in some serious trouble!"

"Don't worry Written, I'm be gone and back before anypony realizes it. Trust me"

And with that, the yellow unicorn left the library and quietly, Good thing he learnt how to be sneaking from his older sister, Allie Way. Otherwise he would had been caught the moment he walked out the library door. He finally reached the exit of the school and opened the twin black doors.

"Ah fresh air, the night sky looks very beautiful; Just like Princess Luna" He thought to himself

Comet begin his walk throughout the Celestia School Park, Truth be told; his plan really wasn't to gain inspiration from the sky. He just wanted a break from the project and enjoy a nice quiet walk.

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The air was especially warm today and moon was illuminating beautiful along with the stars, funny because he had ability to move the star themselves, that explains his cutie mark. He chuckled to himself and continue his walk, He begin to walk down a stone path and noticed a forest.

"Hmmm, I never noticed that before....I guess it's safe to go in...better use some light" With that Comet use a illumination spell and begin to walk through the forest. It wasn't as dark or scary as the Everfree Forest, but it still sent chills down his spine.

"How come I never seen this part of the school before? Is it secretive or something?" He asked himself.

It reminded him of the legend of the Slendermane, how he stalks ponies and kills them. Comet hoped that monster wasn't in this little forest. His thoughts were soon interrupted when heard rushing water up ahead.

"Huh? Rushing water? That's odd?"

Wasting no time, he kept walking forwards until he reached the ending of his path, there's was a light, feeling curious Comet walked right into the light and it lead to him something surprising.

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"What the tartarus"He muttered

What the yellow unicorn saw was a beautiful. It was a waterfall and beautiful land, the rushing water to his ears were peaceful and the air felt so warm. The sight was just breath-taking to him, he had to get a closer look. Comet trotted down the rocky path carefully so he wont trip and hurt himself. Finally he had reached to a closer view and smiled at it's beauty.

"This is amazing, Why has this never been discovered?! This is so incredible, I can't wait to tell Written, Graphite and Amethyst about this. I made a remarkable discovery" Comet said to himself

Suddenly, he heard a splash that didn't came from the waterfall. It was strange, was there somepony else here? Well if there is, there goes his remarkable discovery. He begin to search for the source of the sound, when he did, he found a silhouette of a mare.

"Whose that?" He asked himself.

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The mare was on top of a stone facing the waterfall, her horn was glowing a lavender color aura and suddenly blobs of water begin to surround her. She then move them around her gracefully and spinning while she was doing it. Comet Tail was completely amazed and hypnotized of the beautiful dance coming from the beautiful mare. He couldn't see her, but he knew that she was beautiful.

"So....beautiful" He muttered.

The mare then made water rings around her body and made them float up towards the sky. She then start making them into shapes from stars to hearts. After she was down, she exploded the water and the drizzles of the water begin to shower on her, making her sparkle like a diamond.

"She's so beautiful....who was tha- AH!" His thoughts were interrupted when he slipped on a rock and fell into the water

"AH! I-IS SOMEPONY THERE?!" The mare called out, for 5 minutes of not receiving an response, she use a Teleportation spell and then she was gone. Soon, Comet resurfaced from the water and looked around.

"Hello? Hello? M-Mare? Are you there?!.......Darn.....she left.....I scared her off....." He sighed as he climbed out of the water and decide to go back to the school.

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All of Comet's friends were completely shocked at the story Comet just told them. After a moment of complete shock and silence, Noteworthy decides to break it.

"Okay...so let me get this straight. You were in Celestia's School of Gifted Unicorns?"

"Yup"

"And you saw this amazing forest that led to an amazing waterfall?" Pokey and Caramel asked in unison.

"Uh huh"

"And you meet this beautiful smoking hot mare that was dancing in the waterfall making tricks -n- stuff?" Asked Soarin.

"You got that right...."

There was once again, a moment of silence. Then Soarin had an idea, his smile formed a wicked grin as he looked at his yellow unicorn friend. It was creeping him out really, wondering what the wonderbolt could want.

"Say, Comet? How bout we help you find this beautiful pony. Who knows, you two might get together once we figure out who it is"

Soon, everypony begin to chime in with Soarin's idea.

"Yeah, it could be fun Comet? Whaddaya say?" Caramel asked.

"I really wanna help you Comet, So let's do this as a team! Come on!" Thunderlane chimed in.

"Who knows, this might make me a perfect love song once all of this is figured out! I'm helping you Comet ,either you like it or not!" Noteworthy said with a stern look on his face.

Before he knew it, Pokey Pierce joined as well and smiled "Alrightly! Detective Agency! Team Blue is to go!"

Soarin sighed "For the last time Pokey, were not a blue team...."

"Yes we are, I am blue, your blue, note is blue, Caramel and Comet have blue eyes and Thunderlane has a hint of blue in his mane" He smiled.

The rest of the colt 6 just stared at Pokey with utter confusion.

"Okay!...Well, Alright. Let's do this. Let's figure who is that beautiful mare is!" Comet commanded.

"Yes Sir!"