As it says on the tin, I will be trying to start this story over. Brand new slate. Now I don't want to leave this story undone nor do I want to sit here and beat myself up over the fact that this will be something that I had a good premise for. This, once again, was really more of the ice-breaker when it came to down-vote fodder. But allow me to start this off in more detail, give it a decent backstory, and actually get the POV right.

So once again, I will be starting this from scratch. This will be deleted when I have pended the rehash for publishing.

You have been very much warned.

Here's to hoping that the second shot hits it's mark a lot better than the first since I now know how to aim.

Author's Note

Also I will be posting the link to the better version on a later date. So those who favorited will have a chance to look it up.