Why us? [Redone]

by Ice

Rating: everyone
Tags: Main 6, Princess Luna, Original Character, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Comedy, Romance, Adventure, Princess Celestia, DJ P0N-3, Alternate Universe, Human
Length: 19879

Okay so this follows Why me? to the letter up until the spell casting which caused the coma.

Okay so this is an alternate timeline to the current Why us? it follows the orginal story but Brice dosen't get put into a coma. This will change how the story works removing his powers and the confusion of the readers.

Published 2012-01-29 14:21:37 UTC
Last updated 2012-08-11 16:20:12 UTC

Chapter 1:An old foe

"Then the wonderbolts were like zoom then zaa and the crowd was like wwwwhhhhhaaa and...." Rainbow Dash had been talking about the show for hours as the group headed back to their respective homes, unfortuantly for Brice Zephyr and Blue had an "emergency" they had to rush home for.

"I know Rainbow Dash, I was there." he said trying to stay awake.

"Why do you call me Rainbow Dash all the time?" she said floating in front of him.

"It's your name isn't it?"

"Yheah, but all my friends call me Rainbow or Dashie how come you don't?" a small smile appeared on Brice's lips.

"All right then "Dashie" how about you start calling me Ice?"

"Why?" she said looking at him weirdly.

"What, I'm not alowed a nickname?" he said with an almost sadistic smile.

"I......uh....." she said monotonlety before dashing off yet again leaving a confused Brice to head home.

The next moroning

Fanfare could be heard throught Ponyville as an all to famaliar voice woke everypony up.

"I THE GREAT AND POWERFUL TRIXIE AM HERE TO...." Brice rubbed his now sore head after falling out of bed due to the sheer scale of the shouting.

"Trixie, I don't want to beat you up every second day......but I sure as hay love it." he thought as quickly got changed and ran to the source of the noise.

"WHO SHALL CHALLANGE ME?" shouted Trixie yet again thinking she could win.

"Ugh, SHUT UP I KICKED YOUR FLANK TWICE ALREADY WHAT MAKES YOU THINK I CAN'T MAKE IT THREE?" shouted Brice from the back of the crowd.

"Ah, human it's nice to see I shall finally have MY REVE..."

"I'm gonna stop you right there, let's just get this over with." he said as he walked on to the stage.

"WHAT, MAKES YOU THINK YOU CAN INSULT TRI..."

"ONE, I HATE GOING THROUGH THIS AND TWO I'M HATE GOING THROUGH THIS!" he yelled while approching Trixie slowly. Her horn began to glow but Brice wasn't fazed he just kept walking fore a few minutes but then a huge aqua light exploded outwards covering everything it touched.

"Um, what did you do?" said a slightly confused Brice.

"HELP!" shouted serveral stallions from the crowd as they where jumped on by multiple mares.

"I sped up the mating season waiting." said Trixie with an evil grin on her face.

"Okay, but I'm human.....how does this affect me?"

"Your male." she said as she dissapered leaving a very confused Brice.

(Listen to this and skip to 0:30)
"What was she talking abo...WOW!" shouted Brice as he ducked barely avoiding a mare who lept at him he looked up to all the stallions either being chased or...........*cough* by mares. Another three ran towards them with bloodshot eyes, he turned and ran with the trio in prusit. The peagsus zoomed ahead of the other two and was right behind him.

"Come back I wan't to be the first to try a human!" she shouted as she appeared beside him and started to ram into him.

"Sorry, your not my TYPE!" he yelled as he smashed his elbow in her face knocking her to the ground.

"One down, two to go." he thought as the earth pony caught up.

"YOUR MINE!" she shouted as she lunged at him only to meet the ground as her head met with a power punch.

"Ugh, let's see all that's left is unico....wow!" he thought as he stopped suddenly.He had reached a cliff and the only way back was past the unicorn, who of course had just caught up.

"Oh, what such a shame I enjoy a good chase." she said as she stopped edging towards him as he looked down.

"What, you won't jump." she said in a "matter of factly" tone

A smile appeard on his face There's an old Earth saying, unicron, a phrase of great power and wisdom and consolation to the soul in times of need."

"What's that then?"

"ALLONS-Y!" he shouted as he backflipped off the cliff leaving a shocked unicorn.

"Wait a second, I JUST JUMPED OFF A CLIFF!" he shouted as he plumeted towards the ground.

"God, Buddha, Jesus, heck even Celestia or Luna SAVE ME!" he thought as he was only fifty meters away from the ground.

"....and....teleport." said a voice from nowhere as Brice dissapered.

"Never speak of this." said Brice as he exited the royal bed chambers.

"Next time, I'll knock her out three times." he thought as he rubbed his knuckle.

Author's note: Sorry about not updating guys I've been trying to get some art work done for Killjoy and I've started some for Pheonix fire. Also I know this was suppose to make more sense so just don't count this a proper chapter rather just something to past the time....Also the next chapter is based on Purple Blaze, Blue breeze, Zephyr and Dark.

Chapter 2:Why me?

NEXT chapter is Dark, Zephy etc I COULDN'T PASS THIS UP.

".....and that makes......five hundred bits." thought Brice as he tallied up what he would have at the end of next week if he worked both weekends. Recently he had been studying more and working less after school since they began to give him more "appropite" work for his level, which was the equivelant of advanced chemistray and it was IMPOSSIBLE!.

"Ugh, at least it's the weeken*Smash* JESUS CHRIST!" shouted Brice as something smashed straight through the roof of the library.

"Where are we?." came a deep and intimadting voice.

"Great, I get a demon ruining my weekend now." thought Brice as he took a combat stance.

"Dunno, it's your fault for trusting crackshot though." said a slightly sweeter voice.

"Lets just work where we are ok.....what the hell is that?" said the now visible figure as it pointed a hoof at Brice.

"......I'm tempted to let Twilight kill you." said Brice eyeing up the pony in front of him.

"Why would Twilight kill m.....oh." said the pony just noticing the hole it had left in the roof.

"Nice work there." said the darker voice again.

"I think we should focus on that." said the nicer voice.

"Okay, what the hell is with those voice changes......and did I just curse properly?"

"You can here them?"

"Well, you are speaking out loud man."

"I think he's taking the mick."

"Try me." said Brice as he tapped his chin which in turn recived an uppercut....hoof?

"Bitch, your DEAD!" shouted Brice as he began to unleash a barrage of punches on the pony who at first took the beating well but eventualy started to get knocked down.

"Why do I get the feeling your about to turn ten times more powerful?" said Brice catching his breath.

"IT.IS.ON." shouted the three separate voices as the seemed to merge into one as a new figure formed and began to speed towards Brice.*SMASH* Brice and the figure went straight through the library wall.

"If this guy dosen't kill me Twilight will." thought Brice as he tried to keep up with the punches the figure was deleviering. The creature was on the offensive hammering into Brice while all he could do was move back and try and block anything thrown at him but then the creature suddenly stopped.

"Out of breath?" said Brice hopefully.

"Nope." it said as wings sprouted from it's back.

"...Okay still a peags..WOW!" shouted Brice as he was lifted into the air by the peagsus who was going full speed.

"Have you ever seen a Sonic Rainboom?" said the peagsus as they where way up in the sky.

"Bitch, I've been on the reciving end of one." said Brice as he struggled to break out the stallions grip.

"Well, this should hurt a million times more." he said with an evil grin as he began to fly down. A cone began to form in font of the duo as they picked up speed. The dome thinned out and they picked up speed flames slowly starting to appear around them.

"AAAAAARRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHH!" shouted Brice as he managed to break out the hold and clamber onto the peagsues back.

"Your not that smart are you?" he said as his entire body began to burn. After a few moments of silince the world began to slow down. The peagsesus body curled up slightly but stretched back out like a spring sending them both shooting into the air with a stream of black and red behind them.

"FFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU..." shouted Brice he began to feel burning sensation. He could barely keep his eyes open but he only needed to the flames for a second to notice he was on fire.

"THE FUUUUUUUUUUUCK!" he shouted as he lost his grip and began to fall like a burning comet towards the earth.

"Heh, so this is how it ends?" he thought as he closed his eyes ready to embrace the sweet release of death.

"HHHHHHEEEEEEELLLLLLLPPPPPPPP..oof." said something as it crashed into Brice sending him downwards.

"What the.....HOLY SHIT ANOTHER HUMAN!" shouted Brice as the pain was momentearly replaced with shock.

"DUDE, WHAT'S GOING ON!" shouted the new guy.

"WELL, I JUST GOT MY ASS KICKED, PUT ON FIRE AAANNNDDD SENT SPIRLANING TOWARDS THE GROUND!"

"BUT THAT'S A LAK..*Splash*" the duo quickly scrambled to the surface catching their breath.

"What do you know their is a god." said Brice.

"What'd you mean?"

"If you hadn't crashed into me I'd have hit the ground and either have burnt to death or snap my neck." he said with most of his body submerged in the water.

"So, where is here?"

"Heh, you might not beleive it but......welcome to Equestria."

Ten minutes later, back at the library.

"Let me get this straight, YOU are from an alternate Equestria where your all in school and YOU are from a really complicated Equestria."

"Yes." said the peagsus[Now known as Graze] and the human[Now known as Drew] had just explained where they where from.

"Okay, how did you get here." they all shared a "Seriously?" face before they all said.

"Twilight." which managed to get them laughing a bit.

"Well, despite what's happened I reckon todays gonna be pret..."SMASH"

"GRAZE, YOU BROKE A PINKIE PROMISE!" shouted Pinkie as she smashed the library door open.

"RUN!" shouted Brice he threw Graze through the hole in the wall but he was quickly followed by a red eyed pinkie pie.

Author's Note: Hey guys, sorry about the lack of updates but I've kinda lost my motivation and you know GRAND CHASE IS AWESOME.

Chapter 3:And they called me violent

"...and then you got teleported by this "Light" guy." said Brice as he and Drew helped Graze back to the library.

"Yheah but how did this Pinkie know abo.."

"It's Pinkie." said Drew as the walked through the hole and stopped to see the most terrfing site known to pony, angry Twilight.

"BRICE, WHAT DID YOU DO!" she screamed at him. He usual blonde mane and tail had been replaced by fire and her lavender coat was now white.

"IT'S A RAPIDASH!" shouted Drew.

"A WHat....another.....human?" said Twilight she turned back to normal.

"How did he get he..."

"Limmie explain this quickly first off this is Graze and this is Drew they are bo.."

"Hi guys!"

"Pinkie....what the hell are you doing on my dashboard?"

"I got bored so I thought "Hey, why not see what Brice is doing."

"Pinkie I'm trying to type this story."

"Can I help?"

"Um, LOOK IT'S ICE!"

"*Gasp* WHERE!"

"Now that's taken care of BACK TO THE STORY!"

"Ah, well from what I can tell......your stuck here." said Twilight after hearing both Drew and Graze's stories of how they got here.

"WHAT!" the both shouted.

"Well, earlier on today somepony created a massive explosion and from what I could sense it disrupted any openings in this reality."

"....oops." said Graze getting a confused look from Twilight and Drew.

"He used shis "Necroflareboom" which is ten times more powerful than the Sonic Rainboom and it sets passengers on fire."

"So, I'm stuck here....BECAUSE OF YOU!" screamed Drew as he lunged at Graze.

"Wow, easy there big guy." said Brice as he grabbed Drew stopping him from attacking Graze.

"I...I.." Graze broke down tears flowing from his eyes and Drew was quick to follow as Brice put him down.

Ponyville Square

"HEY, PUT THAT BACK!"

"No chance pops." *Slash*

Five minutes later

"Okay, so let me get this straight, you take his food then you attack him?" said Brice to a robbed figure.

"Pretty much." replied the figure.

"You do realise I'm going to have to kick your ass right?" he said with a slight smirk.

"Heh, try me dweeb."

"You know most people would be scared when a 6ft human threatens them."

"Ah, so this is what a human looks like....I thought you'd be taller."

"I'M SIX FOOT HOW IS THAT NOT TALL?" he roared but realised by what the figure meant when they stood at their full height.

"Wow, your nearly as tall as me." he commented.

"And twice as intimadating." the figure threw off their cloak to reveal a bidr like body.

"HOLY SHIT, YOUR A GRIFFEN!"

"Scared?"

"GRIFFENS ARE AWESOME!" he started jumping around the figure at Pinkie Pie speeds.

"Wha...what?"

"OHMYGODYOUHAVETOTELLMEALLABOUTYOURSELFANDWHATYOUDOANDWHEREYOULIVEANDWHYYOULOOKLIKETHATANDYOURHISTROYANDWHATYOULIKEANDWHATYOUDON'TANDHOWYOUFLYAND...."

"SHUT UP!" the griffen snapped slamming a fist into Brice's gut.

"Heh, was that suppose to hurt?"

"How did yo.." they where cut off as Brice unleashed a barrage of punches. He grabbed the griffons head a smashed it against his knee making a resounding Crack.

"MY BEAK!" screamed the griffen.

"Heh, it's your own fall man."

"I'M A GIRL!" she screached at him causing him to cover his ears due the noise and pitch.

".........Shit." thought Brice,

"Ugh, WHY WOULD YOU HIT A GIRL."

".......WHAT THE HELL YOU CUT A GUY AND YOU COMPLAIN ABOUT GETTING PUNCHED A COUPLE OF TIMES!"

"Heh, fair enough." she said as she got to her feet....claws?

"So, are you going to try this time?"

"Why not, it's been a while since I've killed." she set off like a rocket towards Brice.

"Oh shi." he was cut off as she used he claw to slash his face.

"ARGH, MY EYE." he screamed out in pain.

"Not so tough now?"

"I WILL KILL YOU!" he shouted as lunged at the griffen but was stopped as he felt something grab him from behind.

"Dude, don't do this." it was Graze.

"Better listen to your friend if you know whats good for you."

"......GRAZE LET ME GO BEFORE I KILL BOTH OF YOU!"

"Calm down man your just angr."

"NO SHIT SHERLOCK."

"Ugh, you forced this Brice." a few seconds passed before Brice felt a sharp pain on his right shoulder and passed out.

"Ugh my head." thought Brice as he woke up.

"Hey dude hows it going?"

"I've been better Drew."

"Yheah, I know what you mean."

"Aye, so where's everypony?"

"The castle."

"Your heree because?"

"I already spoke to the princess and this is the guestroom in the palace."

"......Have we done this before?"

"Then she said I've to tell you to meet with her."

"Oh my god this is happening again."

"Okay, what?"

"....Really not getting the Tfs joke?

"Wha?"

"UGH!"

Author's Note: Feeling under the weather and I didn't want to delay this so here you go.

Chapter 4: Fashion

"So, Drew tell me about yourself." said Brice as they walked down a hallway which was a contrast of Light and Day.

"Well, there's not much to tell really."

"Okay, tell me about your time in your Equestria."

"Well, I got there by making a portal."

".....Are you Artemis Fowl?"

"Heh, no but anyways when I arrived I was interagated by the mane 6 an.."

"I'm sorry who?"

"You know Twilight, Rarity, Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie and Applejack."

"Okay, go on."

"Then, I got turned into a pony."

"Why?" Drew began to blush slightly

"Well, I....uh.....you see..."

"Never mind we're here." said Brice as they reached a large door. It was a red with a golden picture of Luna and Celestia raising the sun and moon.

"Amazing, even in their own castle they need to feed their own ego's." thought Brice as the massive doors opened themselves.

"Ah, you've arrived."

Meanwhile

"Blue....I...*Gasp*....really....Celestia.......needs....you........*gasp*OOOOOHHHHH."

"HOLY SHIT!" shouted Brice.

"Brice, whatch you language." said Twilight.

"Ugh, we've just been told we have to fight a fifty foot dragon and you expect me to be calm?"

"What, she said her friend Dagon the Dragon is visiting him and his son want to meet you....how did you get fight from that?" she asked.

"PINKIE STOP MESSING WITH THE STORY!"

"Aw, but I like typing *Gasp* doyouthinkIshouldwritemyownstoryaboutthehumanworldandshowittoallmyfriendsormabyeIshouldmakemylittlehumanwhatdoyouthink?"

"I think you should go back into the story."

"Aw, but I wann..."

"NOW!"

"Fine."

"Oof." said Pinkie as she appeared in a ball of light and landed on the ground.

"Ms.Pie I've asked you many times not to break the wall." said Celestia.

"Oh, okay."

"How did you..." began Brice

"It's Pinkie Pie." said Rainbow Dash.

"Princess, when will they arrive?" asked Rarity.

"In around an hour."

"And we're here." said Brice.

"Yes."

"Why?"

"So that your here on time."

"But can't you just teleport us when the time comes?"

"Yes but that would be seem undignafied."

"Ho..."

"Brice, stop showing such disrespect to the Princess and do what your told."

"...Fine.....do we have to wear anything "formal"." he asked.

"Why of course I've had the royal dress suiters make something for all of you."

"Ugh, I can work with th..."

"And you'll need a haircut." interrupet Rarity looking at his hair.

"Rarity......I will murder you if you touch my hair."

"We both know you wouldn't do that."

"He would." said Zephyr.

"Hey, Zephyr long time no see."

"Yheah, a lot of people have left the weather team so I'm having to work a lot more."

"Shame, we should get together with Blue Breeze sometime....speaking of which where is h..." a lot *thud* came from the far end of the throne room.

"Hey, sorry I'm late I was uh....doing..."

"Luna, AGAIN!" shouted Zephyr.

"Dude, this isn't healthy."

"But I.."

"Ahem." said Celestia getting everybody's attention.

"I suggest you all get ready and talk about this after you've met Dagon and his son." Brice was about to protest but stopped when he felt a famaliar glow surround him and the others.

"No....no....N.." the group vanished leaving Celestia chuckling to herself.

"I hate teleporting." thought Brice as the rest of the group picked themselves up.

"I know what you mean." said Graze.

"Graze....read my thoughts again and I'm going to murder you."

"You couldn't hit me."

".....Smug pri....Talos be dammed." said Brice as he looked ahead to see a fifty story builiding with the royal insignia on the door.

"*Gasp* It's ther royal dress makers, I've always wanted to go inside, mabye even work at it or even be th..." Rarity continued her rant all the way to the front desk. The lobby was a sort of lime colour and the walls where adorned with pictures of suits, dresses and socks lots and lots of socks.

"Can I help?" asked the pony at the front desk she had a silver coat and her mane matched but had a streak of gold in it.

"Yheah, Celestia sent us to pick some clothing up."

"We get that a lot, do have any proof?" she said obviously not caring.

"Um, not really."

"Uh-huh, well come back when you do."

"Let me handle this, hi I'm Twilight Sparkle an.."

"As if, Twilight Sparkle is an alicorn and the most beautiful beings on the planet...I really don't think your he.." she was cut off as Dark grabbed her by the throat.

"Look, you *edited out otherwise this story would be mature* locked away for a thousand years, eating nothing but your own shit to eat, DO YOU UNDERSTAND ME?" shouted Dark getting shocked looks from everypony except Zephyr, Brice, Drew and Graze who just chuckled at the scene before them.

"Y..yes sir."

"GOOD, now can we please see our clothes?"

"Yes sir."

"Dark your an idiot." said Twilight as she tried to fix his suit.

"What, it's not my fault Drew threw me at the wal....twice."

"You said I looked like a Diamond Dog."

"A what now?" asked Brice.

"Dude, your in the my little pony universe and you don't what these things are?"

"What the hell is my little pony?"

"....We'll talk later."

"THIS IS THE WORST.POSSIBLE.THING!" screamed Rarity.

"What is it........not gonna laugh." said Graze as he saw Raritys bright pink dress.

"What's wrong this ti, AHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA, OW!" said Brice rubbing the spot Rarity had hit him with a brush.

"Serves you right and besisdes at least you don't have to wear pink." she said her voice showing disgust when she mentioned the colour.

"Nope, I get these." said Brice as he showed off the colthing.

"What is that horrid thing?" asked Rarity getting a death glare off Brice.

"THESE, are the clothes of goku the greatest fighter to live." he said proudly slipping them on over his shirt and trousers.

"Wait, why did Celestia give you that and us suits?" asked Blue.

"I asked them to make me it and traded my suit in for it."

"That's......GENIUS!" all the guys shouted as they as they dissapered.

"Where are we?" asked Applejack.

"I think this door leads to the throne room....guess we're suppose to be here."

"Brice, she can't see that you traded in your su*slam*" the door to the throne room opened, at the far end of the throne room Celestia's eye twitched.

Author's notes: Must do next chapter before valentines day. Also I'm sort of getting back into the writing mood and this was basiclay a filler chapter before Graze gets violent.

Chapter 5: The tournament

"It's....human formal wear?" said Brice trying to convince Celestia to let him off the hook with his new "suit".

"I've seen earth, I know for a fact that is not formal we.."

"Celestia, calm down he is young besides I think it suits him with that odd hair." came an elderly voice.

"I suppose so....mabye he should brush it." said Celestia with a slight Troll face.

".....Urge to blow up world....rising." said Brice through gritted teeth.

"Hah, I like this young one full of spunk and looks like he can back it up." said the voice again.

"Okay, who is that?" said Brice with a hint of annoyance in his voice.

"That would be young one." said the voice as from the corner of the room a twenty foot dragon swooped down and landed in front of the group.

"I don't think I'll be giving him a P.I.T.F. now." whispered Blaze to Blue.

"So you must be Dagon?" said Zephyr.

"Indeed I am youngling and you thirteen are the reason I'm here." [The mane six, Brice, Blaze, Dark, Blue, Zephyr, Drew and Graze]
"Why am I not suprised?" asked Blue.

"Hah, I require youtr assistance in deafeting a great evil that comes every year."

"Can't your kind do it?"

"Usualy my family's eldest's son would fight however mines has...passed on."

"...So...is this like a tournament?" asked Brice excitment think in voice.

"Yes, you would all fight to decide who will fight to defended our race."

"...I'M IN!" shouted Brice.

"Wait a moment, Brice you don't know if this is safe." said Twilight grabbing him and whispering into his ear.

"Dagon, is killing agaisnt the rules?" said Brice pulling himself out of Twilight's grip.

"Yes."

"See."

"We're not going."

"I can't beleive we're going!" squelled Brice while they where on Dagon's back.

"I can't beleive Graze knocked out Dark when he compared the stupidty of the idea to derp...I mean Ditzy." said Blue holding onto Dark so he didn't fall off.

"She was my marefriend I'm not letting anypony mock her." sasid Graze looking over the edge every now and then.

"DAGON, HOW LONG TILL WE LAND!" shouted Rainbow Dash.

"We're almost there young won."

"You okay Drew your looking a little green." said Blaze looking at him.

"I'm fine just a little...." he was cut off as he began to vomit on Blaze.

"Juuuussssttttt great." said Blaze throwing his hoofs in the air.

One hour later

"Hey Dagon, what do you call this ancient evil?" asked Brice as they began to descend.

"He has many names but we have given him one."

"Being?"

"The Slendermen."

".............."

"Something wrong....what the?" he turned his to see everypony trying to hold down Brice.

"BRICE, YOU CAN'T SWIM THAT FAR!" shouted Twilight.

"I DON'T CARE IT'S BETTER THAN FIGHTING SLENDERMEN!" everypony except Graze shared confused glances but Graze told them to back off.

"Brice, I understand you might be worried but he's not re.." began Blue.

"He is." interjected Graze.

"How do you know that?" asked Rainbow Dash in a confused voice.

"Well,...." [Go read three of me vs School Society]

"....Wow...I like the sound of this Ice guy." said Brice.

"Yheah, he's pretty "cool"." responded Hraze getting a laugh from everybody.

"We have arrived." called Dagon.

"Wow, this ring is massive."

"It's almost as big as the one Cell used." said Pinkie getting a confused look from everyone.

"How do you know about Cell?" asked Brice.

"I watched his tournament on the t.v. duh."

".....Sure...anways Dagon said we should sign in." the group headed away from the ring and towards a large desk which had a small line of dragons, ponies and dog like creatures.

"Wow, didn't know other ponies would be competing." said Dark.

"Yheah and Diamond Dogs." said Drew.

"So that's a Diamon Dog." thought Brice, the group stood in line for about twenty minutes before Twilight finally got to the desk.

"Name?" asked a small purple and green dragon.

"Twilight Sparkle."

"Hometown?"

"Ponyville."

"Age?"

"19."

"Ah, you must be THE Twilight Sparkle and I assume these twelve are with you?"

"Yes."

"Good, Dagon already put your information in, the tournament starts tommorow at midday."

"Well now that that's taken care off let's get someplace to stay the night." said Twilight as she and the group walked away.

"WE FORGOT RARITY!" shoute Blaze as he ran back towards the stadium.

"Poor guy, having to put up with "Divinty itself" said Blue getting a laugh from everybody as they waited.

Author's Note: Okay short chapter but you know. Also sorry but no Valentimes chapter and the matches are in my blog so give it a look to see who's fighting who.

Tournament Saga:Preliminary round fight 1: Dark vs the Power Twins

"The rules are simple: To win you opponent must Give up, be knocked out, be knocked down for the count of ten or be knocked out of the ring, There is no be no use of weapons and killing your opponet will have you disqualafied." said the judge as hundreds of ponies, dragons, diamond dogs and two humans where in the arena area.

"Please goto the sidelines unless your number is called."

"Ugh, I swear if I'm put up against a dragon I'm going to murder that guy." said Dark as the group sat on a bench.

"Ah don't worry you'll end up fighting a diamond dog of some sorts." said Rainbow as the announcer stood in the middle of the stadium.

"WELCOME, EVERYBODY TO THE VERY FIRST DRACORY TOURNAMENT!"

"I thought this was to decide the who fights Slendermen." said Brice.

"THE WINNER OF THE TOURNAMENT WILL BE CROWNED CHAMPION AND WILL FIGHT TO SAVE OUR CLAN AGAINST THE SLENDERMEN!" this was followed by a loud round of cheering and clapping.

"LET'S GET ONTO OUR FIRST FIGHT, OUR FIRST COMBATANT IS *Pulls slip of paper out of a box* DARK LIGHTNING!"

"Hah, now I know your second name."

"So?"

"THE SECOND COMBABTANT IS *Grabs another slip of paper*..........COMBATANTS ARE THE POWER TWINS!"

"WHAT!" shouted Dark.

"WILL THE THREE CONTESTANTS PLEASE ENTER THE RING!" Dark slowly walked towards the ring looking around, trying to see the twins.

"So, what are the odds he wins?" asks Blue.

"Fifty to one." they look up to see Rainbow Dash counting out bits."

"Ten on Dark."

"Six."

"Fity."

"One hundred."

"I'll wait untill I see the twins."

"CAN THE POWER TWINS PLASE COME TO THE ARENA!" the entire arena is quiet for a few moments then *Slam* a cloud of smoke rose from the behemoths feet.

"....HOLY SHIT IT'S A TWO HEADED DRAGON!" shouted somebody from crowd.

"Betting is closed to take backs."

"I....uh....." whimpered Dark

"DARK!" shouted Brice.

"WHAT?"

"HIT THE ONE ON THE LEFT!"

"WHY?"

"IT SEEMS LIKE A GOOD IDEA!"

"BUCK YOU MAN!"

"I DON'T GO THAT WAY AND BESIDES YOU HAVE A MAREFRIEND!"

"S...SHUT UP!"

"K."

"Ahem, COMBATANTS READY?" the two headed behemoth roared it's approval.

"...I guess so."

"THEN BEGIN!" shouted the announcer as he ran off the arena.

Fight[Kind of an overview]

Dark unfurled his wings and sped forwards towards the dragon but had to fly up to avoid it's tail. The dragon's left head followed him while the right head began to breath[stay with me on this] ice all over the arena floor. The right head began to try and burn Dark to a crisp forcing Dark to pull of some fancy flying manouvers but was topped when the behemoth slammed him to the ground with a right hook. He began to slide towards the edge of the ring until he managed to get up just in time.

"This thing is strong and smart.....just my luck." thought Dark he tried to keep steady.

"DARK LOOK OUT!" shouted Brice as Dark managed to look up in time to see two fists smash into him. The attack smashed through the ice and the ring's floor however the dragon hadn't finished yet it let out a burst if flames melting most of the ice and enveloping the hole.

"Please, Celestia....no..." Twilight fell off the bench and began to cry on the ground as the others tried to comfort her.

"......HE'S ALIVE!" shouted somebody from the crowd as his black figure arose from the flames.

"YO, DRAGON THERE'S A REASON I'M CALLED DARK LIGHTNING." in his hoofs he had what looked like a ball of energy and sent it flying towards the melted ice.

"YOU SHOULDN'T HAVE TRIED TO BURN ME ASSHOLE!" the whole ring began to light up as the orb hit it eletrfying the ater which covered it. He flew behind the dragon and with all his force rammed into causing it to topple onto the electrified water.

"RRRRRRRRRRROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" the beast screamed in pain as it's body began to shut down. After a few moments of the deafining roar it's head slammed on to the ground.....it was out cold.

"1, 2, 3, 4 ,5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, WE HAVE A WINNER FOLKS SHOW YOUR RESPECT FOR DARK LIGHTINING!" the crowd screamed in approval some of them even held up banners saying marry me.

"....Pay up Dash." said Blue holding out his hoof.

"Look, how about I pay you after the next match....double or nothing?" she said moving slowly away from the six who had betted.

"Fine."

"Sweet."

"Hey guys."

"DARK, you crazy son of a bitch how'd you do that?" asked Brice.

"Heh, you jealous?"

"Neh, Twilight's gonna kill you though."

"I THOUGHT YOU WHERE DEAD!" she screamed at him.

"Twilight, it's okay I'm here now."

"*Sniff* I'm *hic* sorry *hicc* just don't do it again okay*sniff"

"I promise...now let's see who's next."

"ATTENTION FOLKS THE CLEANUP CREW HAVE FINISHED TIME FOR THE NEXT MATCH!"

"OUR FIRST COMBATANT IS....BLUE BREEZE!" The group all turned to look at Blue but to their suprise he was already in the ring

"AND THE SECOND CONTESTANT IS.........ZEPHYR!" a collective gasp was heard from the group and by the look on Zepyhr and Blue's faces...this was going to be good.

Author's notes: What it's the first fight it wasn't gonna be the epic and long. Also a universal disturbance coming up.

Tournament Saga:Preliminary round fight 2 and 3: Blue vs Zephyr/ Drew vs Hack

Okay I made a mistake in the blog but what you gonna do?

"50 to 1 Blue wins." whispered Rainbow Dash to Graze.

"Pretty confident....or is that because Zephyr's your colt friend?." responded Gaze with a smug grin.

"Anybody?"

"Neh."

"Brice?"

"....50 on a draw."

"Pfft, your bits man." she said taking the bits out of his hands.

"Hey, can we sit here?" the group looked up to see a Navy blue stallion and a dark green mare.

"ICE, VINE!" shouted Graze looking like he had seen a ghost.

"....Do we know you?" they both said simaltinously.

"...I'll explain later....wait are you two....."

"Going out?" asked Vine.

"Yheah." the pair just looked at each other and began laughing.

"No way man."

"Riiiiggggghhhhhhttt, anyways sure you can sit here."

"So did we miss anything we where a bit late." said Vine.

"Well, I took out a two headed dragon." said Dark smugly.

"...As if." said Ice.

"You want me to prove it?"

"Try me." Dark lunged at Ice but was stopped midair by something.

"What the hay?" he looked down to a sort of ice fist holding him in place.

"There's a reason I'm called Ice." he said removing the fist.

"How'd you do that?"

"Well, it's complicated bu..."

"Shut up they started fighting over a minute ago." said Brice locking eyes with Ice for just a moment but a surge of energy went through both of them.

".....Fine." he said sitting back and looking at the ring.

Fight

Zephyr dodged another one of Blue's tornados he had created serveral to surrounded himself and everytime Zephyr had gottten close he would send a gust of wind to push one of them forward.

"DUDE, FIGHT LIKE A MAN!" shouted Zephyr trying to get in close.

"You mad bro?"

"IMMENSLEY!" responded Zephyr as he dive bombed into the center of the tornadoes.

"Oh bu.." Zephyr slammed into Blue sending him spiralling across the ring's floor. He lunged at him but was sent flying back when Blue turned and bucked him right in the jaw. Zephyr was sent flying backwards but managed to recover by spreading his wings and flying forwards towards Blue. Blue spread his wings and flew forward for a collision course with Zephyr, the two where meters away from each then Zephyr did a barrel roll going under Blue turning and heading towards him. Blue was at the edge of the ring turning round just in time to have slam full force into his gut sending him to the ground.

"ZEPHYR WINS BY A RING OUT!" shouted the announcer with the crowd cheering.

"Ugh, my stomach." groaned Blue.

"Heh, come on man let's go see the others." said Zephyr offering a hoof to Blue.

"Right."

"GOD DAM IT!" shouted Brice.

"Heh, problem?" asked Rainbow Dash.

"J..just shut up."

"ZEPHYR!" shouted Rainbow Dash rushing over to her colt.

"Hey baby." he said hugging her.

"Get a room!" shouted Brice and Ice simaltinously, causing everbody to look them and each other.

"Oh haha."
"Oh haha."

"Stop that."
"Stop that."

"Not funny."
"Not funny."

"I will kic.."
"I will kic.."

"SHUT UP!" shouted Rainbow Dash causing everybody to flinch.

"Jeez what's your problem?"
"Jeez what's your problem?"

"....I will murder both of yo..."

"TIME FOR THE NEXT MATCH, OUR FIRST COMBATANT IS.......DREW!" Drew got up and jogged to the stage verybody staying silent as they saw he was human and unlike Pony history human's had been heard of and the stories weren't pretty.

"OUR NEXT COMBATANT IS........HACK!" the crowd roared Hack was a respected wrestler around the world.

"FIGHTERS READY?"

"YHEAH!" roared Hack slamming his fists into the ground.

"Eeyup."

"THEN BEGIN!" as soon as the announcer finished his sentence Hack dissapered and reppeared off stage.

"I....uh...." the announcer looked at Drew who had a dark aura radiating around him.

"DREW WINS BY RING OUT!" the entire crowd was silent even the group just sat in shock at what they had just seen.

"...Care to explain?" asked Brice as Drew sat down.

"Embodiment of darkness.....it's pretty awesome."

"But...how did you telepo.."

"Mini black hole."

"Isn't a black hole suppose to destroy whatever goes in it?"

"Fine a very, very miny wormhole."

"....I can buy it."

"WHAT!" the group shouted looking at him.

"Wait until my fight you'll see what I mean.

What does Brice mean by this, who will be fighting next, will Blaze ever get more than a sentence a paragraph now? Find out on the next excting episode of Dragon bal.....Wrong series man.
Author's Note's: It's short I'm tired and sad good night folks Vine's up next the Mane 6 fight won't be recorded because I'm lazy like that....unless there is a high demand for them.

Tournament Saga:Preliminary round final fights:Vine vs Ice

"DAM IT ICE!" shouted Graze ash chucked Brice over his shoulder and made a dash for the hospital.

"I...I..."

"CACTUS SMASH!" screamed Vine as she pulled a cactus from god knows where smashing it into his face sending him flying across the ring.

"WHAT THE HAY VINNNNNNEEEEEEEEEE!" he looked up just in time to recive another hit to the face.

"AUGH, MY EYE I'LL BUCKING KILL YOU!"

"CATCTIKEN!"

"Cacti wha*Smash*" Ice recived a body blow forcing him onto his knees.

"Want me to stop?" she said taunting him.

"*cough*I....*cough*...give." Ice fell on the ground

"Aw, I wanted to have some more fun....HEY BLAZE GET DOWN HERE!"

"NO WAY I GIVE!" shouted back Blaze.

"Um, are you done because the match ended when the human was knocked of the ring." said the announcer.

"I know." said Vine wearing a grin that would put Pinkie to shame.

"THE MATCH IS OVER, WE HAVE OUR FOUR WINNERS, ALL COMPETITORS MAY LEAVE THE RING RETURN TOMMOROW AT THE SAME TIME FOR THE SECOUND ROUNDS!"

"Getting rushed to hospital, can't move body and I can feel all the pain of the wound.......at least it can't get any worse."

"HHHHIIII!"

"AAAAAAAAAAAAAUUUUUUUUUUUUUUGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHH!" Brice 's body began to jerk[I swear if I see one joke] around franticlay.

"Augh, HOLD HIM STILL!" shouted a doctor as serveral nurses struggled to keep him down.

"GET OFF OF ME!" the whole room filled with light as the nurses and doctor where sent flying out of the room.

"Ow, my head.....why is there three holes in that wall?" thought Brice as he rubbed his head.

"Hey, Brice." he turned to see Vine following a couple of nurses who had Ice on a stretcher putting him in the bed beside him.

"...Did I hit him or did you?"

"Me."

"Ugh, wanna get some coffee?" Vines eyes lit up.

"I'llberightback."

".....Um, what?"

"Ugh, where am I?" said Ice getting up.

"In hell."

"...Please don't hurt me." whimpered Ice.

"Ahh, don't worry I'm alive so we're "cool."

"I swear if I hear one more ice releated joke."

"Hah, Vine's getting coffee...so what'd she do to you?"

"Cactus."

"Heh, I'm suprised she didn't shove it up your a..."

"BRICE!" Brice was suddenly glomped by 6 figures

"Ow, ribs."

"Heh, sorry."

"Where's Ice I'll show him a thing or two..." said Rainbow Dash starting the usual rant

"He's right there." he said pointing behind them.

"YOU HAVE SOME NERVE BEING IN THE SAME ROOM AS HIM PAL, WHY I OUTTA.."

"RAINBOW DASH!" shouted Brice causing the entire hospital to shake.

"How did you do that?" said Twilight wide eyed

"I dunno."

"But, your human you should know about everything you do like that blonde hair thing."

"I'm sorry what?"

"You know, your hair turned blonde and a sort of yellow aura was around you."

"...One second." Brice started to get out of the bed felt himself being pushed down.

"No, your staying in that bed until you recover." said Twilight sounding like a stern mother.

"Oh, come on."

"Brice."

"...Fine."

"Hey I'm back....looks like basiclay everboydys he...oof." she fell over as Dark knocked into here.

"Opps, sorry Vine...um Vine?" everybody was looking at Vine steam was literally coming from her ears....you.made.me.lose.my.COFFEE!"

"Dark...RUN!" shouted Brice.

"GET BACK HERE!" screamed Vine as they both bolted it out of the hospital.

"He's going to die isn't he?" asked Brice.

"You have no idea." said everybody.

5 hours later

"Well, their gone now.....let's see if I can do this." Brice slowly crept out of his bed and slowly through the hospital. He was about a meter away from the door when somebody shouted at him.

"HEY, YOUR SUPPOSE TO BE IN BED!"

"Crap, gotta bolt!" he thought as he rushed out of the door and into the forest.

Pov Ice First person

"What was that, I thought as I looked around the room it took me a moment but I realised Brice was gone. Crud, if the others find out that he's gone I'll probably get the blame. I decided it'd be best to look for him, I made a rope out of bedsheets and slowly climbed down and off into the night. It was late so only a couple of ponies and diamond dogs where out, I ended up asking a couple of them but not a single one seemed to know where he was.....well until the earth began to shake. Iooked around franticlay trying to find the source of it. Dam it where could he be it not like it's hard to hide when your the cause of a good dam earthquake, then it was only for a few seconds but a massive light appeared at what looked like a park. I swear to god if he blows anything up I'm going get Vine to murder him.

Pov Brice First Person

This power, it's incredible I've never felt anything even close to it. I'm probably the strongest thing alive right now but even that I can't prove it because I got taken out of that dammed tournament, wait.....I don't need the tournament to prove I'm stronger than everybody.....I'll just kill everybody.....yes.kill.them.all..AAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

And back to good old third

Screams could be heard through the streets as everything began to fall apart. The earth was shaking, the ground was rising and people where being killed instantly.

"WHAT THE HAY IS GOING ON!" shouted Applejack.

"I don't know but we have to get the princ....princess?" said Twilight stepping back from the royal figure.

"Yes but time is short take the elements and stop who is doing this."

"But who is doing it?" said Rainbow Dash looking around as the destruction seemed to get closer and closer.

"I feel it's best you find on your ooAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" she screamed as boy seemed to burn as she slowly beganm to turn to ash.

"PRINCESS!" they all cried.

"Don't morn, you'll be joining her soon enough." came a malicous voice from behind them. They all turned but what they saw caused them an amount of pain only matched by when Discord turned them against one another.

"Brice......BRICE!" screamed Twilight

"Suprised?"

"W...why would you do this?"

"If you want to find out.....fight me."

"...GIRLS!" she shouted taking her tiara from the chest Celestia had.

"T..Twilight I don't think we shou.."

"YOU DON'T HAVE A CHOICE!" shouted Brice sending an energy beam into the middle of them. Suddenly a famliar glow enveloped the six as power of harmony began to swirl through them.

"THIS IS WHAT I WAS WAITING FOR!" he shouted as a massive rainbow shot from them.

"KKKKKKKKKKKKKAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!" the rainbow was only a couple of meters away from him as it picked up speed.

"HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!" he thrust his hands forward sending a massive blue beam from them coliding with the rainbow. The two energys causing the area around to become even more deystroyed.

"Give in to harmony." the six said in synche.

"MAKE ME!" the glow around him increased in size and his beam slowly began to overpower the rainbow.

"NO!" shouted a voice as a severe pain struck Brice in the back causing his beam to lose all power.

"NNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" he screamed as it surrounded him slowly forcing him back to normal.

"I.WILL.NOT.LOSE!" he shouted forcing it to redouble its efforts.

"Brice, just give in." said a calm voice, he looked around but nobody was around.

"There is nothing wrong with losing."

"Why won't you let us help?"

"Why are you being like this?"

"Who are you?" the question began to flood his mind as the rainbow fully enveloped him.

Pov Brice First person

What are these voices, what have I done, What have I become......I'm a monster. The light slowly began to dissaper from around me as I could finally move. I looked around everything was recked and there was a sense of death.

"WHAT'S WRONG WITH YOU!" shouted Rainbow Dash getting right up in my face.

"I...I..."

"DON'T GIVE ME THAT, WHAT CAUSED YOU TO DO THAT?"

"I...I..." for the very first time in my life I did something I use to never even consider running away.

"HEY, GET BACK HERE!" shouted Rainbow as she began to chase me, she was a lot faster there was no way I could out run her. I'm an idiot why would I do that, why would I let the power control me.....I just don't know. I began to run into allies to get away from her, I was tired but she was obviously near breaking down, I could see a forest so with the last of my energy I pushed myself and went as fast as I could, I could hear her faintly calling my name she must have stopped chasing me. After a while of runnning through the forest I came to a cave....my new home, except for some lizards it was empty it would take a while to adjust but it'd be for everybody's best if I just stayed away from them.

Third person

"THAT IDIOT!" shouted Ice headbutting a wall.

"Ice, what do you mean?" asked Twilight.

"He made the same bucking mistake I did."

"Which was."

"Well..."

Author's notes: Sorry for being late but I had to redo this twice so it would fit, no more Brice for a while and I will be typing Ice's story AND every OC will be getting their own chapter in the near future.

Story idea:The blanks

Chapter is being done but I thought of this for a future

"RUN!" screamed mares and stallions. Panic and fear was thick throughout the town as strange creatures from the Everfree forest attacked.

"GIVE US APPLEBLOOM!" was the only thing they would say as the sluaghterd their victims.

"HEY ASSWIPES!" shouted Drew as he began to unleash blasts of darkness at them covering the area in dust.

"Heh, think I got them.....what the?" Drew took a couple of steps back as the creatures walked through the dust and straight towards them.

"How....did...you..."

"KAAAAAMMMMMEEEEEEHHHHHAAAAAAAMMMMEEEEHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!" Drew looked to his side to see Brice in his "super sayian" form launching a kamehameha.

"Heh, I think that did it." he said powering down

"HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!" came a dark voice

"There.....there's no way!" said Brice as the figures continued to proceed towards them but stopped as one of them took point.

"Give, us Applebloom and we will leave."

"...Who are you?" asked Brice, going back into his super sayian form.

"Hah, it's a long story but to sum it up we live in Everfree forest and once a year somepony recives "The Mark" forcing us to banish them but two years ago Applebloom came to our villiage and escaped.....she must return."

"AND WHAT MAKES YOU THINK WE'LL LET YOU!" shouted Drew.

"You can't hurt us, so their is not point in resisting."

"...What's your name?" asked Brice getting a confused look.

"Greyhoof."

"Drew, do you anything about a Greyhoof?" Brice turned to Drew to see he had a look of terror on his face.

"Dude, are you okay?"

"We...can't win......."

"Drew, who is this?"

"Their, from a story called Tale of the blanks.......we should give them Applebloom."

"....ARE YOU INSANE!"

"No, he is correct we will keep her safe, forever."

"If you try to take her I will kill you."

"Why do you care for the filly?"

"She saved my life.....I owe her it to her."

"HAH, you'd give up your life for her?"

"Who says I'm dying?" he vanished for a second a reappered behind Grey Hoof.

"NOW, TAKE THIS!" Brice slammed both of his fists full force into him.

"Was that suppose to hurt?"

"OKAY, HOW THE HELL ARE YOU NOT DEAD!"

"Hah, I doubt you could harm me never mind wwwwwoooooooooowwwwww!" he shouted as a giant vine grabbed him and began to slam him against the ground.

"VINE!" shouted Brice sounding happier than he had ever before.

"What, you thought we'd let you fight alone?"

"We?" said Drew as Ice, Blaze, Graze, Dark and Amy all stepped out from behind her.

"Heh, thought as much....but you have to leave."

"What, why?" asked Graze.

"I hit these things with a maxed out kamehameha.....they didn't even flinch." the group looked shocked.

"Brice..."

"No, Vine put him done before he does something."

"I.....can't....move." everybody looked at Grey Hoof to see the vine was completley black.

"It seems we have a bargning chip." said Grey Hoof laughing.

Author's notes: Okay, this isn't tonights chapter[for those to lazy to read the announcment at the top....*cough*Dark*cough*] just tell me if you think I should put this in, in the future or not.[This isn't the complete chapter]

Nightmares are real

At the castle

"HE WHAT!" screamed Luna as a messanger told her of Celestia's death.

"I...I'm...j..j..just...a...messanger...please." she said cowering for her life.

"I...uh......just go."

"HE WHAT!" shouted Blue as Ice told him about what happened.

"Worst part is he almost did what I did."

"What'd that be?"

"Well, when I was younger I had no control whatsoever over my powers, on a good day I could mabye make something freeze on a bad day I'd end up hurting somebody...but one day....I just snapped all the abuse, struggles and pain just came rushing and they sort of....well the best way to put it is exploded but in reality it's a you lot worse...have you ever heard of the frozen land?"

"Well, duh who hasn't?"

"To a lot of ponies it's a place of wonder, mystery and sometimes terror....for me it's a reminder of the lives I took."

"Do you mean?"

"Yheah, I'm the "Blue storm"

"...But.....how.....why......I don't understand why I'm not angry." said Twilight getting agreed mummers.

"Mabye, just mabye it's because you took it out on Brice."

*Ping* a scroll appeared in front of Twilight bearing the royal sisters embelm.

Dear Twilight Sparkle,

I have just recived news of my sisters death and I am immediately summoning you all back to Canterlot, Brice included.

Yours sincerely,

Princess Luna.

"SHE'S WHA*Ping*

Brice Pov

I swear next time I get access to god like strength I'm not touching it with a fifty mile pole, I thought as I stopped to catch a breath who knew running from something used up so much energy.....now that I think about this may be why people decide to tackle their problems head on. But I suppose the only real problem I have right now IS I KILLED CELESTIA!, I'm willing to bet hundreds have tried it and I fuffilled their god dam wish because I was to god dam weak to control my pathetic excuse for power an*Ping*

"GUARDS PREPARE YOURSELVES!" shouted Luna as serveral forms began to shape with a dark outline. The guards formed a circle around them each one tense but slowly as the forms became more obvious they began to relax.

"Ah, I thought the human would have been with yo..." she stopped as a large thud was heard from the end of the throne room.

"I HATE TELEPORTATION!" shouted a famaliat voice.

"GUARDS, CAPTURE SEQUENCE 565A!" shouted Luna as the guards all charged towards Brice.

"One, two skip a few.......EIGHT THOUSAND!" shouted Brice as some of the pegasi bolted forwards.

"A LEFT, C RIGHT!" shouted one as the group split in half trying to take him from both sides...[so many dirty thoughts]

"NO YA DON'T!" shouted Brice as he pointed both his hands at each group unleashing a huge [insert approite term here] sending all the guards flying into two walls.

"I DON'T WANT TO FIGHT!" he shouted as the unicorns stepped forward.

"UFA CHE TOWADGE!" they all shouted summoning magical bonds restraning Brice.

"AAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" he screamed as the bonds began to glow.

"WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO HIM!" shouted Ice.

"Their taking away his power and since he dosen't seem to be using magic the process is extremley painful."

"THAT'S CRUEL!"

"HE KILLED MY SISTER!"

"I FUCKING KNOW THAT!" shouted Brice as a golden light surrounded him destroying the bonds and causing him to turn into his golden form.

"I'LL GIVE ONE LAST WARNING BACK OFF!" he shouted as the earth ponies began to walk away from him.

"BRICE, YOU NEED TO CALM DOWN!" shouted Zephyr.

"Zephyr, I am calm....I lost control and caused pain, death and destruction.....I guess you could say I use that as a lever to stop me from losing control."

"YOU SAY IT LIKE YOU DESERVE MERCY!" shouted Luna.

"I don't deserve mercy...but I sure as hell don't deserve this and nor do these ponies." he said pointing waving his hands to show the knocked out pegasi and the unicorns who had taken damage from the disrupture of their spell.

"..IT seems that we shall need to use more drastic measures." her horn began to glow a dark red that matched the colour matching Brice.

"Have fun."

"I WILL END YOU LUNAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!" he screamed as his body became warped, smaller and eventualy dissapering all toghether

Brice Pov

I swear to god, I am going to mur.....cause Luna a great amount of pain when I get back to Earth.....or Equestria....now lets see if the...wait....I'M ON THE MOON. Okay, I'm not dead.....then again I did hear Twilight mention that ponies would get banished here for up to thrity years for high treason......crapbaskets....well better try to get back, I never got the chance to test this so now is as good as time as any.

"NOW YOU FOALS BOW BEFORE YOUR NEW QUEEN!" [Yheah, this is really happening but don't worry something orginal is about to happen]

"N...never." coughed Rainbow Dash as she tried to get to her feet.

"Ah, the element of loyalty....such a shame you won't be loyal to me."

"YOUR DAM RIGHT I WONWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOW!" she began to scream as a dark trendil burst from the ground and began to wrap itself around her. The room usualy an amazing work of architecture was now completley deystroyed, covered in blood and had transformed from white to black. The royal earth guards had tried to help them but they where all met with a gruesome end.

"So, tell me how does dying feel?" she cooed bringing Rainbow Dash closer to her.

"I.....I..."

"PUT HER DOWN!" roared zephyr as he rammed into Nightmare breaking her concentration for a slip second causing the tendrils to dissaper.

"Z..Zephy..."

"It's okay, we'll be fiiAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" he screamed as a trendil flung him into the air.

"YOU HAVE WINGS YOU KNOW!" shouted a voice from somewhere as Zephyr used his wings to stop midair.

"Who might you be?"

"The names Blaze and your in for a world of hurt." as Blaze finished speaking a dark energy begant os wril around him.

Back on the moon

Okay, I'm read to try this....wait...is that Blaze........no......it can't be......he told me about it but.....wait......

"NO YOU IDIOT!" I screamed into the bleakness of space.

What is this myterious event happening to Blaze, why is Brice so scared of it, will we ever see Straight Shot from Why me? again? Find out in the next installment of Dragon bal...WRONG SHOW AGAIN!

Author's notes: Intresting fact the one problem I had with this chapter was working out what to do when Nightmare grabbed Dash so I deicded to give Zephyr some screen time.

Nightmare vs Darkness

Let me be the first to say "Took long enough."

"HAH, you think a foal like you can defeat the great Nightmare Moon?" said Nightmare keeping a smug grin.

"I'm not going to defeat you......I'M GOING TO KILL YOU!" roared Blaze as his entire body began to pulse.

"SHIT, I have to get back down now." thought Brice as he proppeled his body to the planet below."

"Intresting, you possess a darker power, this should be amusing." said Nightmare as Blaze's body began change. His wings began to expand, his muscles grew and a dark aura sepped from him. He took a single step forward and suddenley expanded his wings and shot forward headbutting Nightmare causing her to stumble back a few steps.

(Annnndddddd play)

"YOU FO-" she was cut off as rammed into her sending her into the air, he flew up passing her and smashed his hooves into the back her head and finished by tackling her into the ground.

"I...shall....no.." she stopped as Blaze began smashing her head into the floor. The floor began to crack and parts of it began to float around the two. After a few moments blood began to appear on the floor as Blaze slowed down his attack, he grabbed Nightmare by the throat and turned her over so she was looking him in the eye.

"I....will*Smack*" she was again cut off as Blaze began to pummel Nightmare with his hooves.

"BLAZE THAT'S ENOUGH!" shouted a blood covered Rarity. Blaze just glaced at her a returned to his assualt.

"I SAID THAT'S ENOUGH!" she said galloping(running?) towards him with tears in her eyes.

"Blaze....plea-" she was sent flying as Blaze punched her in the muzzle. He stopped his assualt and strarted to walk towards the crying Rarity. Rarity coughed twice before her lungs felt like they had been ripped apart, ohwever to her dispear she looked down to see a huge hole in her chest....her lungs had been ripped apart.

"Bl...Blaz...BLAZE!" roared a new voice from the room. He turned to see an anger fulled powered up Brice charging towards.

"I'M GOING TO KICK YOUR ASS!" he shouted as the two both landed a punch square on each others jaw.

(Play)
"LETS DO THIS!" shouted Brice as the two began to trade a barrage of blows. Blaze ducked one of Brice's punches and delivered a power punch to his gut. Brice quickly spun around and deleivered a power kick firmly between Blaze's lungs and colin, Blaze smashed his back hooves into Brice's chest causing him to fall to the ground.

"Why Blaze, why are you doing this?" said Brice as Blaze stepped over him ready to deliver the killer blow. He raised his hoof and brung it down only to be stopped halfway.

(Play)

"I'm not done yet asshole." said Brice as he reared his feet back and smashed them both into into Blaze's face knocking him backwards.

"This is bad, he's clearly stonger than me and he wants to kill me.....should I ask them to help me even after they've been beat down.....I should be asking if I have a choice." thought Brice as he got to his feet.

"HEY, WHO'S CONCIOUS?" he shouted.

"Me." called Twilight

"Me." Mumbeled Dark

"Me." Coughed Graze

"Present sir." chuckeld Blue.

"Shut up smartass, we don't have time for jokes right now, Blaze has unleashed his dark form and were going to need to work together to take him out."

"Why should we trust you?" asked Twilight.

"Excuse me?"

"You killed the princess, the royal guard AND NOW YOU WANT TO KILL BLAZE!"

"I DO NOT WANT TO KILL HIM!"

"THEN WHY DON'T YOU TRY TALKING!"

"HAVE YOU BEEN PAYING ATTENTION HE KILLED RARITY!"

"H...he what..?"

"....I'm sorry but he's turned into a monster and we need to do something about it."

"I....she...." Twilight broke down and began sobbing on the ground.

"Crap, Dark stay with her Graze go Killjoy we're taking this asshole down."

"Fine but we sho*Slam*" Blaze rammed into him and heatbutted Brice with unmatched speed with nobody able to keep up with him.

"YOU TWO OKAY?" shouted Dark.

"WE JUST GOT DECKED BY THE GUY WHO PRACTICLAY MURDERED NIGHTMARE DO YOU THINK WE'RE OKAY!" screamed Brice holding his nose.

"Your fine."

"I WOULD KILL YOU IF I WASN'T GETTING MY ASS KICKED!"

"GET UP AND FIGHT!" shouted Graze as sent Blaze flying with a power kick. Brice got to his feet and the two speed towards their target only to both be knocked down when he flew towards them with his arms streched to the side.

"Crap, why is he so dam strong?" thought Brice.

"Mabye you should be more defensive." came a voice from his head.

"Great, I'm about to die and I'm hearing voices."

"Your not hearing things, I'm speaking to you telepathicly."

".....Celestia?"

"Yes, you cannot truly kill an alicorn mereley destroy their body for some time."

"How long is some time?"

"About a day."

"Seems like a sweet deal however we're kind of getting beat here."

"Ugh, mabye you should train more."

"Mabye I should destroy you more."

".....That was uncalled for."

"Your a troll you know that right?"

"HEALING!" she shouted as everybody began to glow a magnifecent white.

"Unreal.....my gosh,THIS IS AMAZING, I FEEL INCREDIBLE, YES. YES YES YES, I CAN WIN, I FEEL GREAT I CAN DO THIS, I CA-"

"What are you doing?" said Celestia cutting him off.

"Uh, nothing."

"Were you chanting to yourself?"

"No."

"Ugh, with your all your bodies restored you should be able to beat him."

"Huh?"

"Let me put in a way you'll understand, YOU FEEL GREAT, YOU CAN DO THIS!"

"OH, HA HA!"

Next time

"Vine, I need you to grab him so Twilight can hit him with a sleep spell can you do it?"

"Of course."

"Okay as long as this works we should be fine....were's Drew?"

"LLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRROOOOOOOOOOOOOYYYYYYYYYYY JJJJJJJJJEEEEEEEENNNNNNNNNNNKKKKKKKKKKIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNSSSSSS!" shouted Drew running past the group

"....FUCK!" shouted Brice.

How many punches does it take to knock a guy out?

Sorry guys meant to post this last night but I fell asleep. Also went paintballing yesterday....nutshot.

(Note this is roughly five minutes after the whole healing thing.)

"BLUE, WATCH OUT HE'S BEHIND YOU!" screamed Twilight as Blue tried to out maneuver Blaze. So far thanks to Celestia the group had been fully healed (Including Rarity) however even with their combined strength the group had slowly began to fall apart with Blaze taking every hit like it was child's play. Rainbow Dash was the first to fall with her brash attitude and irratianol thinking making her think she stood a chance alone against Blaze. Rarity and Pinkie Pie laster supringnly long due to Pinkie's random attack techniques combined with Rarity's eye for detail allowing them to pick up one what move he was going to make however even with that a good eye and suprise are hardly a match for something that overpowers a god. Graze and Dark tried their hand with Dark unleashing his lightning powers and Graze using a combonation of strength and speed however nither of them were up to his level.

"Crap, it's just us three." said Brice to Vine and Twilight

"What about Fluttershy and Applejack?" asked Twilight

"Well, Fluttershy fainted and Applejack got knocked out when Graze was sent flying into her.

"What about me?" called Blue as he ducked down at the last moment before crashing into a wall causing Blaze to go straight through.

"Well, I don't plan on being the one who tells Luna her husband was killed fighting.....so your gonna go get some backup."

"Who could possibly help us?"

"You'll have fly fast but their's a blacksmith called Ironcraft, tell him Blade called he'll understand, NOW GO!"

"Jezz, fine I'll go." he said as he began to fly.

"NOBODY LEAVES!" shouted Blaze as he made another hole in the wall and flew straight at Blue.

"OH, SO NOW YOU TALK ASSHOLE!" shouted Brice as he colided with Blaze head on.

"BLUE GO NOW, I'LL HOLD HIM OFF FOR AS LONG AS I CAN!"

"ARE YOU INSANE HE'LL KILL YOU!" shouted Blue, Twilight and Vine.

"WHO SAYS I'M FIGHTING ALONE?"

"Wha."

"DREW NOW!" shouted Brice as a dark portal appeared behind Blaze.

"HERE I GO!" shouted Drew as he came out of the portal and hit Blaze with two dark glowing orbs.

"What the hay was that?" thought Blue.

"...BLUE WHY THE HELL ARE YOU STILL HERE GET GOING!" screamed Twilight matching the royal Canterlot voice.

"Okay, I'm gone." he said flying off.

"NOBODY LEAVES!" shouted Blaze as he got up.

"Not a fan of down time are you?" said Drew as he hit him with an uppercut.

"Who is?" replied Brice as he caught Blaze and began to spin him around by his legs.

"Hey Drew, batter up." said Brice as he threw Blaze towards Drew.

"Here I go!" he said as he put on a baseball cap and pulled a metal bat from nowhere.

"My god it's a human Pinkie Pie." thought Brice as Blaze was within Drew's range.

"Pathetic." muttered Blaze as he dissapered.

"SON OF A BI-" yelled the duo before they were both sent flying towards each other.

"Ow, wait how did he hit us both?" coughed Brice as he and Drew helped each other up.

"Mabye he's just fast?"

"If that's the case we're screwed."

"Hey, you two okay?" said Twilight and Vine.

"We're not dead if that counts." said Drew as the walked up to them.

"Okay, we need a pla.....hey has anybody seen Ice?"

".....Now that you mention it where is he?"

And to Blue

"Shop, spa, stalls.....AHA blacksmiths." thought Blue as he dived down to the entrance of the store.

"Welcome how can I hel....oh Prince Blue Breeze it's an honour." said a voice from behind a door

"Yheah, yheah no time I've got a message from Blade."

"Oh, so Blaze went into his Dark form then?" said the mare as she stepped into the room. (I'm a lazy mother ***** so have a picture)

"Your Ironcraft?"

"Well, I was but I changed my name Steel Force."

"Huh, well have you got something for him?"

"Who Brice, no."

"Then why did he...."

*Flashback*

"Well, I don't plan on being the one to tell Luna her husbnd died fighting."

"He....just wanted me out of the way?"

"Yup and it's my job to keep you here." said Steel force as she knocked out with a swing of a hammer.

"Heh, now I know why he likes to fight." she thought as she used her magic to pick Blue up and place him on a workbench.

"So if we hold him for long enough you can charge up the spell right?" asked Brice to Twilight.

"Yes but wouldn't holding have the same effect?"

"No, knocking him out is key

"Alright so everybody knows the plan?"

"Vine, I need you to grab him so Twilight can hit him with a sleep spell can you do it?"

"Of course."

"Okay as long as this works we should be fine....were's Drew?"

"LLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRROOOOOOOOOOOOOYYYYYYYYYYY JJJJJJJJJEEEEEEEENNNNNNNNNNNKKKKKKKKKKIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNSSSSSS!" shouted Drew running past the group.

"....FUCK!" shouted Brice as Drew ran past them and towards Blaze. Brice jumped up and started to sprint after Drew getting close him fast.

"DREW STOP!" he shouted as he lunged forward to grab him.

"NO CHANCE!" he shouted back, summoning a black portal and jumping into it just before Brice got him. *SMASH*

"Why is my head on the ground and not Drew's back?" Brice looked up to see Drew teleporting around and hitting Blaze as he flew around trying to catch him.

"Twilight, now's your chance charge up the spell." whispered Vine to her.

"Oh, sure right." she thought as her horn slowly began to build up power.

Author's notes: Also I know it's like 1pm but I have a very valid excuse......Castle Crashers. So what's everybody up to if like Scotland you've got two weeks off.

I call hacks

Last time on Dra*Thump* Why us[Redone] our heros bravely fought against.....who am I kidding their getting their asses handed to them.

Brice POV

Crap, we had a plan and now Drew decides to go Leroy Jenkins and mess it all up.....then again he is buying us sometime so I'll give him that but.....I wonder how long this little tactic of his will work before Blaze loses his patience?

"DREW, STOP HITTING HIM AND JUST GET OUT OF THE WAY!" I shouted hoping that he'd listen for once. Unfortuantly he didn't

"NO CHANCE, I CN WIN LIKE THI-" I saw his eyes open wide in fear as Blaze appeared in front of him with a manianical grin.

"OS SHA BON!" he shouted as a dark mist began to swirl above the two. I watched out of curiosity and fear, one side of my brain was telling me to see what happens since Celestia and the other side was screaming at me to do something. I continued watching the events to see what Blaze would do but I quickly regreted it. My eyes windened in fear Blaze had summoned a sword ONE BIG ASS SWORD!

"I...I...GUH!" Drew's body slumped over as the blade penetrated just above his heart, a fatal blow,

"DREW!" I shouted hoping he'd teleport or even move. I felt myself crying as his body slowly rose up from the blade.

"F...fu.....ck...yo..yoARGH!" he body jerked up as the blade sliced straight through his chest and his head.

Third person

Time slowed down as the trio watched Drew's body fell to the ground blood surrounding his body. aEBrice and ranforward but was sent flying backward as Blaze heabutted him full force, sending crashing into a wall and covering him with rubble.

"BRICE!" screamed Twilight.

"Don't worry you'll be joining him soon." came a dark, cold voice,

"LIKE HAY!" shouted Vine as serveral thorned vines wrapped themselves around Blaze.

"Intresting, several of you can control elements, however your elements are no match for me." he tensed his musells and all the vines holding him snapped.

"I...it's no possible." thought Vine backing away.

"Now, it is time for you to di.."

"HEY BLAZE!" shouted Brice as he slammed into Blaze causing him to stumble. He grabbed him by the muzzle and started to repetadly headbut him.

"HERE WE GO!" roared Brice as he tossed Blaze into the air.

"KA!" he thrust his banehind them and held them together as a blue shining light began to form.

"ME!" he opened his hands slightly as an orb began to form.

"HA!" the orb began to glow even brither light penetrating any gaps in his fingers.

"ME!" he crouched down as his entire body began to tense.

"HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!" he thrust both his hands forward as a humongous blue beam blasted out his hands enveloping Blaze.

"AAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHH!" Blaze sxcreamed out in pain as the blast seemed to tear him apart, the walls began to fall as rubble and smoke covered the ground. Twilight and Vine just stood shocked.

"Now, I think it's time we get the serious stuff, ready Blaze?" Brice's voice was deeper, his eyes were pure white, the golden aura around him seemed to darken and his voice sounded like a madmans. The smoke began to clear and Blaze's shadow could clearly be seen.

"If you insist, I'll end your life quickARGH!" his entire body began to shake as he recived a power punch to the gut. Brice grabbed him and threw over his shoulder and into a nearby pilliar causing it to shatter.

"What, you thought I'd give you time to recover?" said Brice as he rushed towards the rubble.

"Not at all." said Blaze as he blasted forward meeting head on with Brice. The two superpowers meet with a tremendous bang as the two began their struggle to be the last man standing.

Steel Force's shop

"Ugh my hea.....why am I strapped down to a table?" though Blue as he woke up from his "nap".

"Heh, I guess your use to a good sleep after taking it "hard"." giggles Steel Force as she sat acroos from Blue.

"...Just how do you know Brice?" asked Blue trying to get his head up.

"Oh right sorry force of habit." apologised while she unstrapped him.

"How is strapping somepony down a force of ha...." he looked to see Steel Force blushing furiously realizing what she just said.

"Oh,...OH!" thought Blue blushing slightly.

"So, how do you know Brice?" asked Blue able to sit properley.

"Long story short he fell from the sky and a few days later he fell from Canterlot and landed somewhere in Everfree." she said while tinkering with a small metal ball.

"Wait....he told us he just got the.....THAT LYING BUCKER!" thought Blue as he slammed his hooves on the ground.

"Wow, whats got into?"

"Lets just say Brice has a lot to answer for."

Ice and Zephyr

"Zephyr, why are we doing this again?" asked Ice as the duo ran down a long corrider.

"In the royal armory there's some battle stuff that could help us out."

"Like?"

"Well, in the deepest part of it which is usualy guarded by two elite guards, there is two sets of Kazopituo equipment."

"KAZOPITUO, THAT STUFF IS UNBREAKABLE!"

"Exactly, if we can get their in time we'll be able to help them."

"If it's unbreakable armor I could've made some and it'd have been faster than coming all this way

"Like ho...WOW!" Ice's body was enveloped in a blue mist as ice began to form on him slowly making a thing layer of armor then repeating it serveral times.

"So what do you think?" said Ice raising an eyebrow. His body was coated in a thick layer of Ice, while around him a sort of mist was floating around.

"Well, you've covered yourself in ice, I don't think that's going to do much to stop Blaze." said Zephyr as walked on.

"That's the thing if it does break grows back."

"It grows back?"

"Yheah, watch hit m..." Ice was cut as Zephyr slammed him into the wall full force.

"Okay it's cracked in fifty places how is it.....wow it is fixing itself."

"Told ya but it takes a lot of energy so I think we should take the armor."

"LETS GO!" shouted Zephyr as the two ran off."

Summary

Okay so summary won so this isn't a chapter but it explains what had happened if you guys had to choose for me to type the all of them up.

So we leave off from where Brice and Blaze began their battle in the castle. The two wended up smashing their way through everything eventually landing in Canterlot with Blaze holding his sword at Brice's neck. However thanks to our resident wind elemental Blaze is sent flying thus continuing the battle on the streets with the occasional snob of a unicorn trying to be smart and break it but having their horn snapped off. As the battle continues Twilight and Vine do their best to contain the destruction but end are constantly stopped by complaning unicorns on why the element of magic can't stop them, she then explains the control for power theory in which people who can transform liek Brice and Blaze can give up control of their bodies but gain extreme power boosts however after a certian point their is no going back and they are left with only the need to fight or cause destruction. As the battle heats Blaze uses his sword to send him and Brice to the moon but Celestia warns Brice that if one of them dies there then she can't do anything and since Luna still has 23 hours left to recover that's it dead.

After a one sided battle in Blaze is winning Brice gives up all his control so that he can end the fight quickly however after Blaze quickly realizes he's goign to lose does the same so the two contine their fight almost destroying the moon in the process. Blaze manges to send Bice flying back down to earth but sends th moon flying after him, in his anamalistic state he sees the only rational option to blow the moon up with his Kamehamheha however Celestia and all others manage to convince him even in his state that destroying the moon would kill every unicorn and the two princesses due the fact they all get their magic from the moon at birth so it's basiclay like a bigass life line. Brice sends the moon flying with some assitance from Vine and Twilight but to their suprise still does his Kamehameha but curves it slightly so goes towards Blaze but he flies past it with his sword ready to strike Brice but Brice had curved the blast even further so it ended up hitting both of them knocking them both out cold.

Okay so to explain, Celestia freezes time, repairs the damage done to the dragon island, ressurects all who died and wiped their memories of what Brice and Blaze did also Brice and Blaze both lose their insanse powers, Brice becomes as strong as the average pony due the fact he got his powers from going through dimensions and he used so much of it up against Blaze that he has no special powers just normal now....among ponies. Blaze is normal no Dark form and Luna has no Nightmare form. Also Blue confronts Brice about what Steel Force said but the two just laugh at him as Brice explains that Steel is Iron's daughter and she's a bit of a joker at times but dosen't realize when she says something completley wrong.

Tournament summary.

Okay so to explain, Celestia freezes time, repairs the damage done to the dragon island, ressurects all who died and wiped their memories of what Brice and Blaze did also Brice and Blaze both lose their insanse powers, Brice becomes as strong as the average pony due the fact he got his powers from going through dimensions and he used so much of it up against Blaze that he has no special powers just normal now....among ponies. Blaze is normal no Dark form and Luna has no Nightmare form. Also

So the final fight between Graze, Ice and Vine ended in a tie with the cool pony being out first but the other two knocking each other out(Seems like a running theme). With their combined powers managed to deafeat slendermen well I say easy, they didn't die to narrow it down, then they spent another week around the island, Vine gets a girlfriend who is a dragon who speaks english(whatever) and for some reason only revealed her name to Vine and constantly gets into fights with Brice and Ice(Not physiclay) since they are the same being and stick up for one another(Celstia explains) but Vine just smacks them up side the head and ends it.

Author's notes: Well now we can get back to the good old story.

Chapter 7: I'm sorry who?

This is around two weeks after the tournament which is three days after Blaze and Brice fight.

"NO, NO NO NONONONONONONONONO BLAZE HELP ME!" screamed Brice as Rarity used her magic to drag him into the changing room of the botique.

"......Sucks to be him." thought Blaze as he continued to fidget in his tuxido as screams of rage, pain and crying lots of crying could be heard in the next room.

"Hey Blaze." said Ice as he walked in.

"Oh, hey man what you doing here?"

"What, can I not visit a friend?"

"Ice, we both know you wouldn't come here of you own free will."

"Fine, I'm just here for the show." he said while taking a seat enxt to Blaze.

"Sho.."

"RARITY IF YOU EVEN THINK ABOUT I WILL TEAR OFF YOUR HEAD AND PISS DOWN YOUR THROAT!!" roared Brice from the next room.

"HOW DARE YOU TALK TO A LADY LIKE THAT!"

"HOW DARE YOU TRY AND SHAVE MY GOTTEE!"

"MY WEDDING IS IN JUST UNDER A WEEK AND YOU WILL NOT SHOW UP WITH THAAAAAHHH!" everybody had a look of suprise on their face as a Rarity sized hole appeared in the wall.

"NEVER THREATEN A MAN'S GOTTEE.....OR HAT!" shouted Brice getting nods of agreement from Blaze and Ice.

"He's right Rarity you just don't." commented Ice while stroaking his own gottee.

"DUDE!" shouted Blaze hitting hjim in the back of the head.

"Ow, what gives?" whined Ice rubbing the back of his head.

"That's my fiance."

"Fair pl.......um hi." said Ice as he waved to the customer who had just entered the store.

"We have a score to settle." said the pony, he had a slightly lighter coat than Ice and looked the same but his hair was longer and he seemed older.

"Wow, what's problem?" said Brice walking towards the newcomer.

"Get out of my way my fight is with him."

"Yheah, well you better have a reason." said Brice making a fist.

"Heh, freeze sucker." he chuckled as Brice's eyes opened in shock as the lower half of his body began to freeze over.

".....OH HAY NO!" shouted as he rammed the pony sending him back a few feet.

"Ice, who is this guy?"

"I dunno but elementals of the same type can't fight one another."

"That may be true but that rule is bypassed by one fact." chuckled the newcomer stepping forward

"But that'd mean.....it's not p...p...oss....ible." stuttered Ice stepping back.

"OH YES ICE, YOUR BIG BROTHER IS BACK!" shouted the pony as he lunged pinning Ice down.

"It's funny, I thought the colt who killed our parents, our friends OUR ENTIRE SPECIS would put up a fight." saidthe brother.

"WHAT DO YOU MEAN SPECIES THERE IS NO SUCH THING AS AN ELEMENTAL SPECIES!" shouted Ice shoveing him off and putting an ice wall between them.

"Ice, unfreeze my legs." whispered Brice

"I already tried but my brother's control is better than mine when it comes his elements."

"....Elements?"

".....DUCK!" shouted Brice as the ice wall was cut in half and something skiffed Brice's face forming a cut.

"........Blue would be pissed." thought Brice.

"Augh, dam it Brice you've got to watch it." said Ice rubbing his cheek.

"Sorry, forgot about the connection thing."

"Oh and what would that be?"

"BUCKER, YOU ARE NOT IN THE POISTION TO ASK QUESTIONS!" everybody turned to see a very pissed group of elementals.

"Hah, you think you can take me?"

"Heh, Ice isn't the only elemental." said Dark walking forward with charged hooves.

"I should have guess my brother would surround himself with bodyguards." chuckled the pony.

"You guys leave this is between us three." said Brice as Graze melted the ice around his legs.

"He's right it's two versus on life yet if he takes one out we both lose." chuckled Ice.

"We're not leaving." said Doa(Vine's dragon(mare)friend since we don't know her name)

"Okay, you do not get a say in the matter." said Ice and Brice both pointing at her.

"ENOUGH TALKING!" shouted Ice's brother sending out a blast of wind sending everybody back.

"YOU DON'T STEAL MY THING!" shouted Blue as he rushed forward.

(And play)

"DOUBLE HOOF UPPERCUT!" shouted Blue knocking Ice's brother out in a single blow.

"......WELL THAT LASTED LONG!" shouted Brice and Ice together.

* * *

Ponyville hospital

"Wow, you did a number on this guy." Said Nurse Redheart looking at Ice's brother.

"Well, I do try." said Blue smugly.

"Smartass." thought Brice as he listened in to a nurse outside

"Ice, what's your brother's name?" he whispered to him.

Ice had to think for a moment before he got the name "Frost."

"Any other realatives?"

"No, just me and him.....but I don't get it he said speceis but you don't get an elemental race just the occasional pony being born as one."

"Hmm, well to stick with gaming we've almost got every element here, lightning, ice, fire, earth, wind, dark, heck you could have called me the light one but....that's gone now."

"Hey Ice." whispered Blue Breeze.

"Yheah?"

"How come your brother has two elements?"

"Well, really it's just the ice one but he's so good at manpulating the air around him to freeze anything at anytime I suppose he eventualy found a way to move them."

"Yheah but it just dosen't make sense."

"Blue, you've got two humans, the elements of harmony and a bunch of elementals living as neigbours, I don't think sense is on the menu." said Dark.

"Meh, worst case scenario you boop Vine." said Graze getting nods from everypony and just leaving a confused Brice.

"Despite that, what are we gonna with this gu.....where'd he go?" said Brice as Frost had dissapered and only a note was left.

Dear all,

Don't worry about Frost he shall be taken care of and Ice, I know own this may pain you but for your own sake I must remove you from his memory. I hope you're all okay and haven't been harmed in any way.

Yours sincerley,

Princess Celestia.

"..........I.....will............I......so.............I have no family." sobbed Ice as feel to the ground.

"Ice, it's oka.."

"DON'T YOU LECTURE ME, WHAT HAVE YOU LOST HUH!" shouted Ice through tears at Brice.

"What have I lost, WHAT HAVE I FUCKING LOST, I LOST ALL MY FRIENDS, MY FAMILY AND TO TOP IT ALL OFF EXCEPT FOR DREW MY ENTIRE FUCKING SPECIES!" roared back Brice the two staring each other down.

"HEY, you two need to ca..." Rainbow Dash slowly backed away receving a death glare form Brice and Ice.

"Everybody leave." the two said simultaneously.

"If you two try anything we're going to have to put you out of it." said Doa standing in the corner.

"......Try us." the said as the both threw a punch each only Brice's landing due to his longer reach.

"And time." thought Twilight as a green aura covered the two as the slowly fell aslep.

"Wow, these two get hurt when the other takes damage and yet they were willing to fight?" said Applejack. The entire room was quite, two of their friends seemed to have it out for one another and yet it would end with them both being hurt, what will happen in the future, why have I only done 1 episode releated chapter? Find it all out next time on Why us[Redone].

Chapter 8: Good memories and bad ideas

Ponyville Library

Twilight looked around the library, it was peaceful but not for long her sleep spell would ware off and Brice would probably go on a hunt for Ice or vice versa. She took a book of her personal shelf, it had a red and blue cover and the spine had golden waves on it. It lacked a title but anybody could tell it wasn't worth anything to collector's but the memories were priceless.

She turned a couple of pages until she saw a picture of all of them having a picnic. They had just managed to convice Brice to stop wearing an eye patch to cover up the scar that Spike had gave him, she went through the pages smiling as the memories refreshed themselves in her mind each experince being relived. She turned to the last page her smile dropped as she started at the image. Brice had his arm around Ice, and he had his leg around him as the two were dancing around at one of Pinkie's parties. She sighed as she closed the book, putting it back its place, she just couldn't get how to ponies could be so close and then be at each others throats the next.

She turned as the door opened, she saw Dark walk in with a small saddlebag. He gave her a small smile as he walked upstairs without saying a word leaving Twilight slightly worried as she followed behind him, she walked into their room and jumped back in shock to what she saw, Dark was kneeling with a small black box in his mouth and inside the box was a golden engament ring. She lept forward tears of joy in her eyes as she hugged Dark.

"I'll take that as a yes." chuckled Dark, as he slipped the ring onto Twilight's horn.

"Sorry about the bad timing but I'd been planning it for a while."

"I don't care, I'm just so happy." sobbed Twilight.

"Jeeze, I never thought you'd be crying when your this happy." said Dark.

"Magical being don't need to explain anything." she chuckled.

Brice looked through a crack in the door with a smile, he didn't walk in it was their moment and not his to ruin. He quitley walked back into his room and picked up a nearby quill and paper.

Ice, Vine and Doa's place.

"Come on Vine, let me go I'm not going to try and kill him." pleaded Ice as Vine had him restrained against a wall.

"Sorry, can't take that chance." she said with a slight troll grin.

"Hey Vine, you know how I said a dragon can only mate with somebody if a male is present?" said Doa with a suggestive smile.

"....Don't you dare." said Ice(When dragons mate.......it's not pretty)

"Challange accepted." they both said as vines forced Ice's eyes open and directed them towards the show.

Outside

"......Knowing Vine she's putting Ice through some sort of extreme mental and physical torture........probably tentacle rape." thought Brice as he ran towards the screams.

Inside

"WHAT ARE YO...OH CELESTIA WHY!" Ice continued his screams(With my mind it really is bad it has nothing to do with age)

"VINE, VINE, VINE!" shouted Doa.

"OH YES GIVE ME MORE..."

"FALCON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Evrybody turned to see Brice through the door and launch himself toward Vine and Doa ready to strike. Flames seemed to erupt from him as he got closer, about a second before he hit them he stopped.

"Boop." chuckled Brice with his finger outstretched.

"ARE YOU SUICIDAL!" shouted Ice.

"Mabye.....Vine what's with the look?" said Brice worry think in his voice as steam seemed to come out of Vine's ear.

"Ten seconds." she growled.

"ICE SWORD!" shouted Brice as a blade quickly came from the ground.

"FOUR!"

"RUNNING!" shouted Brice as he grabbed the hilt of the sword.

"TWO!" shouted Vine raising a hoof into the air.

"ONE!" she shouted slamming the hoof down sending a barrage of thorn covered vines towards Brice.

Back at the library

Twilight began to panic as she dropped the note Brice had, Dark walked in and froze as he looked at the note and what the final line said.

knowing that we're cool but anyways I plan to boop Vine well see you guys later.

".......Celestia have mercy on his soul." muttered Dark. The two quickly ran downstairs and stopped with Dark looking worried and Twilight looking pissed. The entire bottom floor of thr library had been wrecked with vines and right in the middle were Brice and Vine.

"So, ever seen henthoof?" asked Vine as serveral vines began to sorround Brice.

"Ever seen two mares one cup?" responded Brice smirking slightly.

".....Do you think this is a game?"

"I'd go with 20 questions."

".....I'm going to go with routine and do the tentacle rape now." thought Vine as a small root that had been going up Brice's leg whipped the sword from his hand.

"Shit."

Twenty minutes later.

"Sometimes I wonder, there was a perfetly good chance for you two to stop it........and now we have an uncouncious Vine who'll probably be coming for my head when she wakes up." groaned Brice as he, Spike and Dark salvaged what book s they could that hadn't been destroyed.

"Wow, what happend here?" asked Zephyr walking through the hall in the wall.

"Brice booped Vine." replied Dark and Spike.

"ARE YOU CRAZY?"

"Yup."

"...Wait, shouldn't you be.......why is she.....I hate to say it but she is going to kill you."

"Meh, if I'm lucky she'll forgive and forget or I'll just go and buy her a ton of coffee." he looked around getting nods from the rest.

"...What I miss?" everybody turned to see Drew standing at the door.

"Use the hole we have one for a reason." muttered Twilight as she walked past them.

"....Booped Vine?" asked Drew

"Booped Vine." they all replied chuckling.

Author's Notes: Sorry Vine but you can't win them all because underage sex/rape is against the law.

Chapter 9: Wedding wows part 1

Two months later

"Ugh, you need to out and meet somepony." groaned Twilight as she walked past Brice and Ice playing Blackjack.

"No I don't, twist." replied Brice as Ice placed down a jack.

"....Bust." said Brice as Ice reshuffled the cards.

"Oh, and why not?" she asked narrowing her eyes, this had become a common situation after Ice and Vinyl got married.

"Because, I like to keep my options open." replied Brice as he grinned at his hand.

"You say that every time, BUT WHAT DOES IT MEAN!" shouted Twilight as Ice put a card down.

"Ugh, fine it means there is a lack of guys and I like both colts and mares." said Brice as he showed his hand, a jack and an ace.

"Five card trick." chuckled Ice as he showed his hand.

"...Your cheating somehow." said Brice as he handed Ice his guards.

"Nope, just skill." laughed Ice.

"Twi, is he cheati....Twi?" Brice looked around failing to notice Ice reshuffle the cards as he looked at them.

"She'll be away on the picnic with the girls." said Ice as he dealt the hands.

"Ah, well back to the game." as he slammed his head on the table when he looked at his hand.

*Two hours later*

"Hey Twili..ght." Brice looked up from his book to see a ticked off Twilight.

"Guess what I just found out?" growled Twilight as she walked in a circle round the room.

"Your brother is getting married." he replied as he put his book down.

"No, my brothers getting marrie...how did you know?" she said turning towards him looking like she would charge at him any second.

"Spike told me around ten seconds ago." he said as Spike came running down the stairs with two suitcases.

"And there's Spike, when do we leave?" said Brice grinning.

"...Just go get the other guys." glared Twilight as she up the stairs.

"Wait, your taking a bunch of elementals, two ex possibly still wanted criminals and creature from another universe to your brother's wedding, plus he is the captain of the royal guard and you think this is a good idea?" Said Brice with a questioning look.

"So you don't want to come?"

"Oh, by all means I intend to see how long it takes for one of us to, A mess things up or B discover an evil plot some kind." he chuckled before running off leaving the door open behind him.

"...Twilight?" called Spike in a slightly worried voice.

"Yes Spike?"

"You know he's right about that."

"Yes Spike, yes I do." she thought worryingly.
* * *

"So how'd you think he'll take the news?" asked Dark out loud as he sat with Blue, Zephyr and Ice.

"Not well." thought Ice.

"He might get depressed but nothing to serious, I mean we've had worse things happen." chuckled Zephyr getting a slight smile from everybody. Thee group sat in silence for a few moments before somebody shouting caught their attention.

"Whats up with happy gang today?" called Brice chuckling. Blue held his hoof with a note in it gesturing for him to take it.

Guys,

After some work I have managed to find a way for me and Graze to return to our own worlds, I understand this may come as a shock that we said nothing however when I opened the portal we had little to no time to enter so all I can leave is this note. I hope that you still consider us friends despite us leaving like this but I think you can understand that it's better for us and whatever is holding the universes together sake that we went back. We had some good times which I know none us will forget and I hope we can meet again, as friends.

Sincerely

Drew

"....Wow, just wow." muttered Brice as he looked over the letter again.

"You okay?" asked Ice cautiously.

"Look, I'm not happy about this but at the same time they had people waiting for them in their own universes and it wouldn't be fair on them or those two if we tried to keep them here, and as their friends we should be happy that their happy." said Brice as ripped up the letter with a slight smile.

" ...You do realize Celestia wanted that note right?" said Blue.

"Your point being?" chuckled Dark.

"....Celestia doesn't approve of you Luna does she?" said Zephyr with a slight troll grin.

"Well, you see...she...uh...it's not that she doesn't approve....it's that I may have.....lost her pet..." Whispered Blue as the rest of the group failed to contain their laughter. The trio continued laughing up until they reached the train station.

"Hahaha, seriously though how do you lose a phoenix?" asked Zephyr wiping a tear from his eye.

"I don't want to talk about it." growled Blue as they boarded the train.

"Somebody's grumpy I see." came a voice from behind them. The four turned to see Twilight, Applejack, Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash, Vine, Doa and Vinyl all smirking.

"Oh yeah, we forgot about you guys." said Dark earning him a glare from everybody. Before anybody could reply however they quickly forced onto the train by other passengers trying to board. After a brief struggle and the lose of two bags the group manged to finally get to their carriage.

"Okay I want to set some ground rules for this wedding, rule one." said Twilight to which everybody responded by either groaning or booing.

"No, elemental powers or breathing fire." Each elemental and Doa looked hurt while Zephyr and Brice just laughed at their reactions

"Rule two, No fighting, flying or insulting the nobles ." she looked up and glared and the guys who tried their best to look hurt or insulted.

"Rule three, Brice and Dark, you two are not allowed to talk to my brother." before either of them could argue the logic quickly sank in and they nodded in agreement.

"Besides that, I want you all to promise you'll be on your best behavior, understand?"

"We promise."responded the group before they all broke off into their couples except for Blue and Brice.

"Looks like it's you and me buddy." said Brice punching Blue on the arm...leg?

"Yheeaah, about that." said Blue before disappearing in a flash of light.

"....Ugh, well this ought to be a fun ride." thought Brice as the train set off.

* * * *

Next Time on Why us

"Look, I don't care what the chances are , I'm not backing down." Brice glared at the others as the tension in the room grew.

Blue slowly reached forwards and flipped a card of the top of the deck.

".....TWENTY ONE!" shouted Brice jumping in the air.

Author's notes:Okay, quick notice I'm looking for two human Oc's for an upcoming event and you be wondering what happened to Rarity and Blaze, they left early.

Chapter 9 Wedding wows: Part 2

"Ugh." groaned Zephyr as he sat next to Brice.

"So, how's it going with you an Dash"? asked Brice.

"..We broke up a month ago, I told you this." replied Zephyr giving Brice a worried look.

"Oh yeah, I guess I'm just getting old." he chuckled.

"You're younger than all of us." replied the rest of the group simultaneously.

"Ugh, I'm going for a walk." grumbled Brice as he slammed the cabin door behind him. He took a quick glance at the other cart doors to make sure he hadn't disturbed anybody and set off failing to notice the lime green horn poking out of one of the doors.

* * *

"I DON'T KNOW HOW BUT YOU'RE CHEATING!" shouted dark as he threw the deck of cards he and Ice had been playing with.

"I don't cheat, its skill." smirked Ice.

"Alright then, everybody come join us!" called Dark as Ice's smug grin quickly changed to a worried smile as the rest of group sat in a circle around the table.

"What's the problem, your not losing your "cool" are you?" chuckled Dark as glared at him while dealing everypony a pair of cards. The group now consisted of several smug looking mares, two worried looking colts and the rest hadn't even shifted their facial expressions.

Ice grinned as everybody else put down their cards, Applejack true to being the element of honesty had indeed a good hand with an ace and ten, Twilight had double nine, Rarity had busted by taking a chance on eighteen and getting a seven, Rainbow Dash had said the game was boring and walked away, Fluttershy had managed to get a five card trick, Pinkie Pie...Pinkie Pie had three of a kind totaling twenty one and the colts...they all busted.

"...I take it back, your just lucky." groaned Dark.

"Nope." said Ice as he flipped the table to reveal an extra pack of cards on the mares side of the table.

"...Now before you say anything, we found it beside Ice." Said Doa quickly pointing a claw accusingly at Ice.

"..Nobody is going to fall for thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.." Ice was interrupted as Dark put an electrically charged on one of his horns.

"I love having the powers." sighed Dark.

* * *

"Whats your poison?" asked the barkeep as Brice went up to the bar in the train.

"Strongest thing you've got." said Brice as looked over the selection of "alcohol".

"Here you go, a pineapple bomber, it'll have you out in a second.

"You wish." smirked Brice as he chugged down the entire drink down in one gulp.

"........Why are you looking at me like that?" grinned Brice as the Barkeep slowly took the glass.

"...That's the strongest drink in Equestria, how are you still standing?" asked the barkeeper eyeing Brice up.

"That, my friend would pass as Fresh pineapple juice with a pinch a sugar back on earth." chuckled Brice as he turned to come face to horn with a lime green unicorn.

"H-hi." she squeaked.

"You're standing on a chair aren't you?" asked Brice still looking directly at the horn as he lowered himself to eye level with the strange unicorn.

"Why are you looking at my horn?" she asked blushing slightly.

"Why did you almost poke my eye out?" lowering his eyes to her forehead noticing her hair matched her her horn and skin color perfectly excluding a streak of white going through the middle.

"The taller chairs had been taken already." she said looking at the floor almost cutting Brice's nose. An awkward silence surrounded them until Brice started laughing uncontrollably at the statement.

"I like you, what's your name?" he managed to finally to get out between laughs.

"Uh, my names Lyra, Lyra Heartstrings." she looked up smiling.

"Ah, so your talent must be musical then?" asked Brice as they walked down the hall.

"Poor bastard doesn't know what he's let himself in for." thought the bar keeper as he began making a round of drinks for the one of the family's sitting at one of the tables near the foor.

"Daddy." said the filly sitting with her mother and father.

"Yes precious?"

"I want that two legged pet."

* * *

"And if touch his horn like this." said Vinyl as she touched the base of Ice's left horn causing him to run in circles while he was still unconscious.

"That's twenty so far, any more?" asked Twilight as she wrote down notes.

"No, that's pretty much everything...unless you want to see what happens when I touch his "other" horn." chuckled Vinyl getting a mix of "Eews" and "No's."

"...Why are you crowding around an unconscious pony?" asked Lyra as she and Brice walked into the room.

"Oh my Celestia, LYRA!" screamed Vinyl as she and Lyra jumped towards each other breaking into one of those conversations that you can't pull woman out of. Brice gestured to the unconscious body as Pinkie Pie quickly filled him in on what had happened and the twenty locations on his horns that trigger a reaction.

"Hmm, you missed one," Said Brice walking up to Ice and flicking just under the tip of each horn at the same time waking him up.

"...How did you.."

"I thought you learnt not to ask questions when it comes to me Twilight." chuckled Brice as he helped Ice get up.

"So who's up for Blackjack?" asked Brice as he grabbed the deck of cards.

* * *

"Okay, these are my cards so my rules, rule one, you lose, you have to choose to take punishment from one of the elementals here." grinned Brice.

"Rule two, you don't get out of the game unless you leave now or are put out by having the lowest hand or busting." the group nodded finding the second rule better than the first.

"Rule three, the last two players both have get twenty one or the lower scoring one takes punishment from all the elementals." Next to everybody excluding Brice, Ice, Dark and Blue backed out.

"Alright lets begin."

The game went quickly as Ice and Dark where subjected to each others torture, leaving Blue and Brice.

"Nineteen." said Brice as Blue put down the third card. Brice began to sweat slightly, he needed to get a two or it was....pretty much anything you can imagine involving rape, impalement, electrocution and being cut by razor sharp wind.

"...Twist." said Brice staring at the deck.

"Brice, you can run you know." whispered Blue.

"Look, I don't care what the chances are, I'm not backing down." Brice glared at the others as the tension in the room grew.

Blue slowly reached forwards and flipped a card of the top of the deck.

".....TWENTY ONE!" shouted Brice jumping in the air. His celebrations were interrupted as somepony began to knock on the cabin door.

"What do you want?" asked Brice looking at an older stallion and beside him a young filly.

"Yes, I've come to buy you."

Next time

"What was I thinking, there's no way I should have let Dark claim to be my master so he could sell me to some rich bloke." thought Brice as he dodged another of the guards kicks.

"Then again, the only real threat is if this guard hits me and it's so easy to predict." he chuckled as he felt something hard behind his back.

"...I hate walls."

Author's notes: Wow, shortest time between chapter releases I believe. Also how did I become a brony? This video explains everything.

Prologue:Branching Paths

"I don't know Brice,I mean your story seems okay but you made a lot of spelling and grammar errors." said Twilight.She had read the first draft of Brice's "murder" novel.

"Yeah, I know but I do it for fun, so what can I say?" he chuckled.

"You don't take writing seriously, do you?" she sai raising an eyebrow

"I do,it's just that I have a very odd sense of what is funny, scary, weird, sad, happy and what a Mary Sue is."

"A Mary Sue?" she said confused.

"Human thing." he said thinking it was best just to avoid the subject rather than make a huge deal out of something so small.

"Ah, so got any plans for today?" she asked as she grabbed a book from a shelf.

"Yheah, Blue Breeze, Zephyr and Rainbow Dash want to go a Wonderbolts show...whatever that is."

"Their a group of peagsus that do stunts Rainbow Dash has been trying to get into them for years."

"Wow, they must be good if they don't let somepony who can do a Sonic Rainboom in." he said looking a bit suprised.

"Yheah but really I think it's just to do with her age."

"Ah, so do you know where they preform?" he asked as he finished packing his bag.

"Cloudsdale."

"......I assume it's in the clouds?"

"Yheah."

"How the hay am I suppose to get up the.." he stopped mid sentence as the sweatband on his wrist began to glow.

"What just happened?" he said looking at the now blue sweatband.

"I enchancted it so that you could fly and walk on clouds."

"Sweet, what's the catch?" he said eyeing Twilight suspicouly.

"Well, it may be the first time I've casted the enchantment so something might go wrong." she said with a sheepish grin.

"Well might as well try it out." he said as he ran outside to find somewhere worth testing it leaving a stunned Twilight.

Later outside the stadium

"WE'RE GONNA BE LATE!" shouted Rainbow Dash at Zephyr and Blue.

"Calm down I'm sure Twilight will cast a spell or something that'll let him walk on clouds." said Zephyr wipping his face from a few bits of slaiva.

"I.DON'T.WANT.TO.BE.LATE, SO GO FIND HIM!" screamed Rainbow Dash causing Zephyr to fall flat on his flank.

"Heh, good thing I didn't make you guys miss the show then." said Brice as he landed in front of them.

"See, I told you he'd be on time." said Blue Breeze.

"WHERE WERE YOU, WE COULD HAVE BEEN LATE!" shouted Rainbow Dash right in Brice's face forcing him to take a couple of steps backwards.

"Wow, Rainbow Dash calm down I'm here now let's just go in." he said using his hands to show her to calm down.

"Fine." she said walking away in a huff.

"Man, I'd be glad to come out of that alive." said Blue Breeze

"Y....yheah,anyways we gonna see this show?" he said pointing towards the entrance.

"Yheah, we should by the way how were you flying?" asked Zephyr as they began to run to catch up with Rainbow Dash.

"Well, Twilight enhanced my sweatband but from experience I reckon it'll have worn off by tommorow." he said dodging past a couple of pegasi.

"Huh, well at least you get to see the show." said Blue Breeze had taken the smart choice and was flying over everypony else. After a good couple of minutes the trio finally caught up to Rainbow Dash.

"You've*Pant* to *Pant* stop *pant running *pant* off." Said Brice as he put his hands on his knees and bent over to catch his breath, Zephyr and Blue were use to Rainbow Dash running off so they had gotten use to it.

"Amatuers c'mon." she said waving them in as they went on the epic quest TO FIND SOMEWHERE TO SIT!

Ten minutes later

"Whew, finally we found some seats." thought Zephyr as all four of them sat down.

"Ugh, why don't you ponies just stand?" muttered Brice.

"SSSSSSHHHHHH!" said Rainbow Dash as the stadium lights dimmed.

"HELLO FILLIES AND GENTLE COLTS, ARE YOU READY!" the crowd roared their approval.

"THEN HHHHHHHHEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEESSSSSSSSSS THE WONDERBOLTS!" a flash of lightning filled the stadium then six pegasi came from behind the announcer with smoke trailing behind them.

"Heh, it's an airshow go figure." thought Brice as the crowd "oow" and "aad" at the stunts. Brice just chuckled the stunts looked really easy if you payed attention to them rather than the fliers. One of the tricks involved three of them making a tornado while the other three flew inside of it causing it to explode in a bunch of diffrent colors which seemed like magic. However if you looked you would the see that three of them had small wires connecting to each other creating a magnetic field which they then would disconnect canceling it out causing it to disrupt and explode.

"WOW, that was the best show yet, OH MY GOSH, their singing atuographs I'llberightbackbye." said Rainbow Dash as she zoomed off.

"......Anypony know what just happened?" said Zephyr as Blue and Brice just shook their heads and watched as Rainbow dashed off.

Author's note:Yheah I think one makes a lot more sense. I really thought about it I mean come on what are the chances the words "Mary Sue" is going to cause that much to happen. Also tell me what you think guys I'm always open to criticism.....except for spelling....for I shall not forgive you Crown8...c'mon you know I'm kidding

Tournament Saga:Preliminary round final fight:Graze vs Avat vs Blaze vs Tore vs Brice vs Ice vs Vine

The rest of the tournament was pretty intresting a lot of the fighters had some intresting moves like one Diamond Dog who created serveral copies of himself and won by ring out. Almost off the dragons could breath fire and ice bit one of them had such power she just shouted and it sent her foe flying into a wall.....in prance.

"IT'S TIME FOR THE FINAL THREE MATCHUPS FOR THE TOURNAMENT PRELIMERNARY FIRST ROUND FIGHTS, WILL THE REMANING CONTESTANTS PLEASE COME ONTO THE RING!" Brice, Graze, Blaze, Ice, Vine, two dragons, a pony and a Diamond Dog all went onto the ring.

"COMBATANTS READY!" shouted the announcer everbody just looked at him like he was crazy.

"THEN BEGIN!"

"WAIT WHAT ARE THE RULES!" shouted Vine as he stopped.

"THE LAST FOUR BEATEN PROGRESS, WE NEEDED TO SPEED THINGS UP A BIT!"

"WHAT THE PURPOSE OF THA..." Brice was cut of as Diamond dog punched him.

"...BIG MISTAKE!" the fighting broke out all over the ring with the diamond dog and one of the dragons going out almost instantly. The dragon let out a huge blast of flames enveloping the ring, after around a minute it stopped dumbfounded to see a giant ice wall had stopped it. The dragon let out a massive of roar but stopped when the ground began to shake, Vine had been hitting her hoofs off the floor at extreme speeds and was stopping something was comming.

"What is she doing?" asked Brice who had decided to try and take out Graze who was in his Killjoy form.

".....Rosebud." he stopped and flew way into the sky.

"What did he mean by tha..""RRRRRAAAAAARRRRRGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHGGGGGG!" everybody stopped to see a massive plant emerge from the center of the arena. It sporuted around fifty tentacles and grabbed onto the dragon with them.

"I've seen enough hentai to know where this is going." thought Brice as the plant lifted the dragon above it's head.

"OKAY ROSEBUD CHUCK HIM OUT!" shouted Vine as "Rosebud" threw the dragon from the arena and into the mountain which was about a mile from it.

"Hey Vine nothing personal!" shouted Ice as he stompped his hoof agaisnt the ground a giant ice pilliar impaled the plant.

"ROSEBUD!" screamed Vine as she saw her "plant" turn from its green colour,to a very dark grey and finnaly to ash.

"Ice.......I'M TO KILL YOU!" she screamed as she bolted forward wings unfurled.

"SSSSSSHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAARRRRRRRRROOOOOOOOOUUUUUUUUKKKKKKEEEEEEENNNNNNN!" shouted Brice as intercepted Vine with a massive uppercut sending her flying into the air.

"Vine and other peagsus you might want to stick to the skies for a couple of minutes." said Brice facing towards Ice.

".....Fine but kick his ass." said Vine as she and the other peagasus flew upwards.

Fight

Brice and Ice looked eyes again but this time it wasn't for a moment so the same energy from before had a much better chance to really build up. Sparks began to come off the two, the planet began to shake and the rubble from the arena began to float around them.

"You ready?" asked Brice cracking his knuckles.

"Born." said Ice as the two disappeared for a few moments but suddenly reappeared in the middle both throwing a punch, hoof and fist connecting. Ice was standing on his hind legs and was roughly the same height as Brice, the two drew back their fists[not saying and hoof every sentence]. The duo began to exchange blows each one making contact with the others fist, it looked like a battle to anybody not involved but really it was universally synced.

"Something's wrong here." said Graze to the other two pegasi.

"What'd you mean?" said Vine.

"Well, when me and Brice fought he was nowhere near as strong or fast as he is right now....I get the feeling this goes deeper than just natural strength and speed."

"Heh, mabye Brice is the human version of Ice." said Vine chuckling.

"You know......you might just me right about tha...WOW!" all three pegasi where sent flying as Brice and Ice began to dissaper and reapper all over the arena.

"Are they teleporting?" asked Twilight trying to keep up with the action.

"No, it's speed pure unrivaled speed." said Rainbow Dash along with Graze being the only able to keep up with the action. The whole group jumped back as they barley avoided Brice and Ice jumping off the wall exchanging blows. The two connected with another power punch in the middle of the ring before backing off from each other.

"Well, it's been fun but it ends here." said Ice as he stompped his hooves against the ground summoning ice pilliars forcing Brice to move backwards to avoid them.

"If this keeps up I'll be out of the ring." thought Brice barley able to keep up with the pilliars getting a couple of cuts from them. He was righ at the edge of the ring.

"Your move Brice." said Ice as he walked forward.

"Well, it seems the only thing I can do is THI..." he began to lunge forward but was stopped as a pilliar went straight trough him. Screams could be heard from the crowd as Ice rushed forward to help him.

"BRICE!" shouted Graze as he dived to help him. Brice looked up at then at his chest he was bledding and badly, he was going to be out if he got help.

"I''m.............not.............finished.................YET!" he suddenly got to his feet and the energy which had been keeping him and Ice at the level they where fighting at had just spiked. He could his body changing becoming more powerful as he began to scream in pain. A few moments past until an almightly light exploded from where Brice had been standing, his hair was spiked up and blonde, his muscles had increased in size, he had a glowing aura surrounding him. He turned to face Ice.

"Fight me, if your ready to die." he was about bolt forward but was sent falling backwards as Graze crashed into him sending him off stage.

"GRAZE, YOU ARE DEAD!" shouted Brice as he got up but his newley aquired powers faded as his injury took it's toll and he blacked out.

Author's notes: Well due to me accidentley publishing this chapter before I meant to it was live streamed....sort of....sorry for the anticlimatic fight but trust me the round is still on.