I would like to apologise, but I've had to remove this story for the time being.
See, I originally wrote this as a humanised piece for my A-Level English coursework. I got an A which is obviously great (yay ponies) but also means that my work has been sent off as an exemplar. Which made me realise what a truly stupid idea it was to upload this to the net before moderation was over, in case I am accused (unfairly) of plagiarism. However, when the college year is over I shall re-upload this chapter as well as the next one, 'Grey is not a Colour of the Rainbow'.
So, sorry about the long message but the summery is; I am a complete idiot.
