The Newest Cutie Mark crusader

by Flutterfan30

Rating: everyone
Tags: Comedy, Cutie Mark Crusaders, Dinky Hooves, Random, Adventure, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Length: 962

The Cutie Mark Crusaders try to recruit dinky on their adventures

Will Dinky ever join the three on their epic adventures? This is a story about the Cutie mark Crusaders trying to recruit Dinky,will they succeed? Will they get the cutie marks? But the real question is what crazy adventure will they go on? Find out dear Reader in this story,if you wish for these answers all you need to do is read the story

Published 2013-03-05 17:50:02 UTC
Last updated 2013-03-05 17:50:02 UTC

Well this isn't going to go too well...

The three little fillies were gathered in their clubhouse having a meeting.The one at the front was Apple bloom,a small yellow filly earth pony.She had a crimson red mane,a large pink bow adorned the top of her head.
"So crusaders an idea came to me" she said.
"Whaaaat?!" screamed the others
"Apple bloom you've been muttering on for ages!" shouted the orange Pegasus filly with a purple mane "If only Rainbow Dash had started tutoring you,you are so slow!" Apple Bloom began muttering,realized she was being watched and spoke
"Shh Scootaloo alright I'll inform y'all then"
"Hey!" the unicorn interrupted "have you been learning those fancy words from rarity?"
"Hey how come sweetie belle can interrupt?" Scootaloo asked

"She can't,now both of you shh" Apple Bloom responded "We should get a new member because if there are more ponies m there are more ideas for how to get our cutie marks
"But Apple Bloom,we already have your cousin Babs Seed!" Scootaloo shouted
Apple Bloom said quietly to Scootaloo "Yes but shes all the way in Manehattan"
"I agree" sweetie belle spoke up her pink mane all over the place,if her sister rarity saw her,she was in for a long night.
"So its agreed" said Scootaloo
"CUTIE MARK CRUSADER RECRUITERS!" they shouted in unison causing a startled Applejack outside to fall over dropping all the apples she had bucked.
" Apple bloom!" she shouted.Applejack burst into the clubhouse "Now I told y'all to quieten down when me an Mac are working the farm"

A few hours later.....

"Well that killed a lot of time" said Scootaloo.
"Yeah ah get it Scoots" Apple Bloom said in a dull voice.
"Hey look, there's another pony without her cutie mark!" Scootaloo said ignoring Apple Bloom,pointing a small filly by the name of Dinky.
"Hey you!" said Scootaloo.Dinky jumped back startled, her short yellow mane bouncing up and down.
"Y-yes?" Dinky stammered.
"We want y'all to join our club!" Apple Bloom yelled.
"I-is it the cutie mark crusaders?" Dinky asked.
"YEAH!" They shouted in unison."CUTIE MARK CRUSADERS RECRUITERS!" Dinky gulped at this response,she had never quite been so excitable and always preferred relaxing with her being the laid-back type.She began to speak softly
"Oh well ummmm" Scootaloo rolled her eyes and whispered to Apple Bloom
"Wow,has she been taking shyness lessons from Fluttershy?"
"I know right" whispered Apple Bloom.Sweetie Belle looked at them in shock.
"I think its sweet" she spoke up.Scootaloo looked at her.
"Seriously Sweetie Belle,I mean wouldn't it be much better if she was awesome and fast like Rainbow Dash!" In the midst of this conversation Dinky quietly slipped away.Apple Bloom noticed quickly and turned her head to see Dinky running off
"Come on y'all catch her! shouted Apple Bloom.Scootaloo responded immediately as she took off and darted towards Dinky.Unfortunately for little Scoots Dinky was almost as good as Twilight when she was a filly with magic and instantly teleported a few feet away from Scootaloo.Scootaloo however had become great at flying from lessons with Rainbow Dash and instantly took a sharp turn tackling Dinky.Dinky grunted as she got back to her hooves,she sighed
"Fine I will try your club just for a day and we will see how it goes" Dinky thought immediately "I am going to regret this
"Yay!" the other three ponies shouted happily.

"So what should we do first?" asked Apple Bloom excitedly.
"Well can we do something that doesn't get us covered in some sticky substances?" asked Sweetie Belle
"I swear you're becoming more like a dictionary everyday" said Scootaloo.Apple Bloom responded by saying
"Yeah and you're even more like a chicken!" Sweetie laughed and Dinky reluctantly joined in.Scootaloo replied
"Yeah and Fluttershy is a tree"
"Did Dashie not understand that she is not a tree? Oh what a silly filly your flying tutor is Scoots" said Apple Bloom
"Hey! Dashie is awesome!" shouted Scootaloo

"Can we please just decide what to do?" spoke up Dinky.
"Sure! Apple Bloom replied
"How about Ski jumping?" said Scootaloo. Everypony immediately responded
"No!" they burst out laughing.
"Playing music? Sweetie Belle asked
"Nah" said Scootaloo and Apple Bloom
"Oh I know! Mountain Climbing! shouted Scootaloo
"Yeah,CUTIE MARK CRUSADER MOUNTAIN CLIMBERS!" Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle shouted.
"A-are you sure?" asked Dinky.Apple Bloom smiled and said
"It will be fine"
Dinky gulped knowing this was a bad idea
"O-okay"
"Lets get going then girls" said Scootaloo eagerly.
"I-if we are really going to do this shouldn't we prepare for all the possible dangers on a huge mountain?" asked Dinky
"Yeah shes right" said Sweetie Belle
"Okay we will meet back here in two hours then" said Scootaloo

"No you can't climb a huge dangerous dirty mountain" said Sweetie Belle's sister Rarity.
"Awwww come on sis I could bring you diamonds" pleaded Sweetie Belle.Rarity paused,deep in thought.Sweetie
Belle saw her chance and sped out as fast as she could.

Unfortunately for them the others were not having so much luck,well except for Dinky.
"Mommy these nice fillies are taking me on an adventure" said Dinky
"That's very nice of them Dinky" replied Derpy.Doctor Whooves who had been listening interjected with
"Are you sure its a good idea Dinky?"
"Of course it is!" Dinky started to back away.
"It is not a good idea!" shouted the Doctor "Catch her!" Derpy flew in a strange zigzag pattern after Dinky as she went out.
After hitting the wall with a lisp in her voice Derpy said "I just don't know what went wrong!"

Author's Note

This is my first fan-fiction and hopefully the next chapters should be longer but anyway could I please have some constructive criticism? I would love to improve from following your advice