The Start of a bloody adventure

by RainBowChaser

Rating: teen
Tags: Dark, Comedy, Adventure
Length: 1656

What Happens when ponies start to dissappear

You would think in this world everyone is happy which sometimes they are but what happens when that happyness gets taken. Golden Note is soon to find out…
Mystery mix

Short Story so not many words per chapter but may still advance to more soon…

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Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-03-04 20:30:01 UTC

Awake

Chapter One: Awake

I woke up this morning feeling as good as usual it was the same old thing every day, get up, wash, breakfast, work, home it was like I was stuck in a infinite loop of boredom...but...today...was stranger than usual a good strange but still strange once I had left for work, I noticed while I was walking there was a... a something following me around I didn't look back because I was scared... I was shitting myself then once I had turned down the alley I go to work... it.... it vanished I turned back and my heart was ripping out of my chest but about a couple of minutes later I calmed down and just before I continued walking everything went black and all I could hear was someone or something talking under it's breath "It's fine, you're fine, don't worry" then I faded away.

This time... when I awoke... it was different my head hurt like fuck all and I was chained up I screamed for help but no one answered then everything came out of the blue and that strange figure that followed me was there and then said "So you're awake... good this will make this experience a lot more fun to do... I really hope my 'CHAINSAW is wor.." I quickly interrupted " WHO ARE YOU...... WHAT DO WANT FROM ME!!!!!!!" it said nothing all it did was turn on the light... I couldn't see at first my eyes were still adjusting, then I saw it not an it anymore it was a she but not just any she it....it was a cyan colored P..Pony then I remember it was Rainbow Dash, I tried to blink time after time but it was still her "Why would you do this rainbow dash" I asked her very scared she responded with "BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHA You should see the look on your face you were scared to hell I would never kill a fellow pony"  She unchained me and gave me some medicine to help my headache. "Sorry about that goldie really didn't mean to hurt you that bad let's go and meet up with Twilight" she said with a certain smirk on her face...

Savior

"WAKE UP, WAKE UP" my head was sore and was bleeding plus i had a fucking headache again "come on golden note, you gotta get up" this mysterious pony said i didn't have much strength left in me but i just about got my eyes open "oh thank celestia you're awake, i thought i was gonna lose you" once i fully opened my eyes and looked up i saw a aquamarine colored pony then i remember the only pony i know who is aquamarine is Lyra Heartstrings "l-lyra what are you doing here, how did you find me, i thought i was a goner" I struggled to say i was really hoping that she would just pick me up and run away to safety but she answered my question with "I came in here to find all this blood, and then i saw you and it looked liked you were still breathing so i quickly tried to revive you and here we are now... are you able to walk"

I didn't respond just tried to stand up and with doing that i succeeded and i started to walk well lets say limp with Lyra's help but still, then i heard that voice again "sooo you're awake, didn't see that coming, i hit you pretty hard twice, hmm never mind you still won't escape an-" before it could finish Lyra quickly shouted "SHUT UP" then chucks me over her back and starts running.

I was still a bit woozy but i could still understand whats happening... and thank god we made it outside and everypony outside the town hall at that time saw me pouring and covered in blood and Lyra's hooves covered in blood. It looked bad at first but once Lyra had explained I only just being able to agree everypony came over and helped me... then it came to me there was also blood at twilight's but no carcasses, something strange is going on in ponyville and i really need to find out and now i have a work friend Lyra she hopefully will be great help. But... why did she go into the town hall in the first place and yet came straight to me these questions i most defiantly need to find answers to.

Disappearance's

After Me and Rainbow dash have a quick chat about never to scare the living daylights out of me again we reached Twilights house and I knocked on the door and shouted  "Twilight  its me Golden Note and Rainbow Dash we need to talk to you... Twilight"  Nopony answered me and rainbow looked at each other in a confused way then rainbow dash said "I wonder where Twi is she always is in there being an 'egghead' and all she always reading books. I'll go fly up to a window and see if she is in there because maybe shes to busy 'studying'" Me being a earth pony i can't really do much but just stand there bewildered at why she wasn't in... maybe she just popped to the shops.. or she could be hanging out with applejack or some pony else. I shout up to Rainbow Dash " Hey rainbow can you see her in there"  She looked down on me with the most worried face i have seen since the parasprite attack. She then muttered out a few words that i could just understand "Blood.....Books.....Everywhere" disappearance's

Then i went pale so pale if you saw me you would think i was a ghost... "are you sure maybe spike is just making something and the ketchup spilled" once i said that... i knew how stupid i sounded... Rainbow just slowly moved away and came back to ground level then i noticed she was very pale almost the same as me but a lot more paler... Then quietly behind us we heard the humming of twilight, Me and rainbow just looked around and each other trying to find some place to hide...

Rainbow being so 'loyal' left me and flew off back to cloudsdale and before i could hide... twilight saw me and shouted over to me "Oh hey Golden Note i see you have been waiting for me" I just stood there in shock i had no idea what to say apart from "no... i was just...just standing outside your door by accident and was looking at what a terrible job Rainbow dash was doing with the clouds" Luckily the sky was packed with clouds because of rainbows 'Little' prank earlier... Thankfully and somewhat strangely twilight believed me "Oh yes, I see... OH almost forgot if you see rainbow dash tell her she needs to she me..."  and with that she carefully opened her door and then shut it just so she made sure i didn't see inside.

I kept trying to forget what RD said she saw and what seemed to be true but i just couldn't it was stuck there and if i didn't do something about it... would always be stuck there i walked on into town and i met Lyra heartstrings on the way there nice pony but weird she is obsessed with these things called 'humans' whatever they are anyway i arrived into town and there was nopony to be seen... not even pinkie pie bouncing around singing any song that sprung to her mind... then i heard it... what i believed was a scream... it sounded like i was coming from the town hall i ran there has fast as i could and when i got there... what was seen could never been unseen...

Bloodly Carnage

Once I got to the town hall, i was scared to hell i had no clue what was going on in there...but...i was about to find out. I carefully opened the door trying not to make a sound...CREAK... "shit..stupid fucking door" but out of my luck no one heard and if they did which they properly did are just hiding waiting to sneak on me... i slowly walk in... my heart ripping away then i heard the most shit scare voice in the whole world... and this is just stepping in "Hello goldie, have you come to play"

I was shitting myself twice as much now that i lay on the floor and crawl to the door leading to the middle of the town hall, when i got to the door the voice said something again "come and play with me, open the door and you will see" my mind had ran off as for some shit insane reason i opened the door "Holy shit... what the fuck is that smell" I open my eyes to see that there was no uncovered walls of the town hall it was smothered in blood and on the floor were as a guess the carcasses of ponies... i recognized one just about... it...it was Mayor mare at this time i want to flee from this area, tell the pony police and they could sort it out, but before i could turn to run out the door, i heard it shut...and lock "Better if the doors closed, isn't that right goldie"

At this time all i could say was "who are you, w-why have you done this to all these ponies... and now why me" it didn't reply, but by my surprise it just looked and turned away, i tried to look at what it was but all I saw was a black mysterious figure who had a very deep voice and as soon as i decided to stand up SMACK everything went blurry and then all i heard was "Have a nice sleep... you might not be waking up for a while" SMACK all was just darkness after that.