Travels Within the Mind

by Somepony

First published January 1st, 1970 00:00

A accident leaves Twilight Sparkle in a comatose state, which forces her to travel within the confines of her mind, searching for the key to escape from within the prison of her own consciousness.

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My first fic, CONSTRUCTIVE criticism welcomed. Feel free to make any comments about it, as long as they're not just trying to insult me.

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Travels Within the Mind

Prologue

The clock stuck eleven, and Twilight Sparkle woke up.

Several weeks earlier...

Celestia’s sun was shining, as Twilight Sparkle trotted down Ponyville’s main road. Suddenly, Pinkie came running up to her with a manic expression on her face.

“Oh hi Pinkie,” Twilight said, “What’s up?”

“MY PINKIE SENSE IS TINGLING!” She yelled.

“What is it this time!?” Twilight grunted, still annoyed at the face that she STILL could not figure out what triggered the famed “Pinkie Sense”.

“MY TAIL TWITCHED! SOMETHIG BIIIIIG IS GOING TO FALL!” Pinkie yelled.

“Oh Pinkie, I’m sure it won’t be as bad as last time.” Twilight tried to calmly say, while visualizing what had happened to her head the last time Pinkie’s tail had twitched (she still had a small scar from that).

“ALRIGHT, SUIT YOURSELF. IMA GO FIND SOME COVER NOW!” Pinkie then ran off, yelling and hollering onto the page.

“Hmm... I wonder what that was all about?” Twilight pondered aloud, as a mysterious blue “police box” materialized in the alley to her left, without her ever noticing.

Soon, she returned to the library, in order to complete the checklist of tasks she needed to complete. As she entered, she realized that the entire library was in serious need of some tidying-up. And, so, being Twilight Sparkle, she immediately set to work.

Several hours and multiple checklists later, the library was all cleaned up.

“Well, that looks nice now!” She said as she surveyed her library.

Suddenly, a very loud “look out!” could be heard outside. Rainbow Dash, the source of the voice, crashed into the library, knocking over several full-to-the-brim bookcases.

Which landed right on top of Twilight.