Twilight Sparkles only mistake
Thanks to my editor, who found many mistakes and mixed up my vocabulary, I don't know what I would do without his amazing skills(He edited this sentence too :O)!
A new day had came by the time Dark Wing woke up. Everypony was already awake and watching him. The colt looked around to find he was captured by the other ponies. Dark wing tried to fly away, but his wings were chained to his back and there was no way he could move, not one bit.
"Hahaha, so this is how it is?" he asked not sure what respond he could get.
Spitfire walked up to him and said, "Yep this is how it is. All us ponies decided to imprison you. One thing, you will be watched at all moments for the rest of your time here Prince Doofus."
Dark wing was hurt by that comment, but he had heard worse.
"So all right, what pony is taking him in to their care, so he is being watched?" asked Fluttershy. Everypony just looked around.
Twilight Sparkle eventually spoke up, "I will take him"
Everypony just looked at her with a confused expression. Twilight walked up to him and grabbed the chain. She pulled, making Dark Wing stand up.
He spoke with sarcasm, "Just because I'm a prince, doesn't mean you have to treat me like one..." All he could do was laugh at his own stupid joke and everyone smiled, trying not to laugh.
They had arrived at Twilight Sparkles house quickly. She had taken off all the chains before they got inside, not smart. Dark Wing flew up as fast as he could. He flashed a look around to see where he could go. SMACK! Soarin crashed into Darkwing, making him spin to the ground.
"Where do you think your going?" soarin giggled like a school filly, a big grin on his face.
"Any where but here!" Dark wing laughed. He quickly walked into Twilights house and sat down by a book case where Spike stood waiting for him. Spike did not speak.
Twilight walked up to him and said, "Now, I have work to do, so don't get into trouble" she giggled and walked away with Spike. Dark Wing sat there and decided to grab a book and start reading it.
In the middle of reading he started to laugh, "This book is hilarious! A real knee slapper!" he chuckled uncontrollably. Twilight popped down to look at the cover. The book was titled How to: Reading for Dummies. Twilight started to laugh at him. Dark Wing knew what she was doing so he laughed with her.
"Ugh, OH MY GOSH!!" Dark wing launched off his bed and looked at the clock, it was 1 in the morning. Looking around, he saw that nobody was up. Dark Wing got up and walked up to Twilight's fridge He started to dig threw it. Dark Wing had made himself a peanut butter and jelly sandwich. After the first bite, the kitchen light turned on and there stood Twilight.
Midnight snack?" she said giggling, "Umm.. I got hungry" he said worried.
"It's ok, thats what I came down for" she said with a smile.
They had finished there sandwichs and then started to head back to bed.
"Umm Twilight, th-thanks for the sandwich and the bed and stuff. Good night." he smiled and she smiled back.
"No problem, and good night too you too." With that, they both went back to bed.
Dark Wing had a very rude awaking by the Wonderbolts very own Spitfire.
"HEY! GET UP NOW!!!" He got up and stared at her, "Hurry up! You're coming with me!" she yelled with a devilish grin on her face. They both walked out of twilights house and Twilight waved goodbye.
"See you later Dark wing!"
Spitfire and Dark Wing dashed up to Spitfires house, were she asked him some questions.
"So I heard you had sex with my marefriend" Spitfire asked while giving him an odd look.
"Look, I'm sorry. I was drunk and I really like Rainbow Dash. But I will never get in bed with her again, ok?" he responded to her.
Spitfire giggled and gave him a horny look, "How about good ol' me?"
All Dark Wing could think was "Is she coming on to me?". He smiled and looked her right in the eye, saying "Look, I'm not going around town to sleep with every mare I see. If that's what you think." he said with a frown and it made her frown.
"You're no fun!"
Later that day Spitfire and Dark Wing met up with Rainbow Dash and Twilight Sparkle.
"Umm Twilight.. Me and Spitfire can handle him tonight, ok?" Rainbow Dash said with a little hope in her voice.
"Sure, why not." Twilight replied.
"Well were going to head home now." Rainbow said.
"Ok, bye guys!" Dark wing started to wave bye while flying towards Rainbow's house. When they got there Rainbow went for her favorite chair, but Spitfire got there first. Rainbow just sat on her lap and Dark wing sat on the couch.
"So... What now?" Dark wing asked.
"Well, we watch a movie" replied Spitfire. And that is just what happened. The movie was no good, it was a crappy romance movie and the whole time Spitfire and Rainbow Dash's lips were locked. Completely listless, Dark Wing fell into a deep sleep.
The next day he woke to the smell of sex and breakfast.
Rainbow Dash greeted him, "Hey there sleepy head! Want some waffles?"
Dark Wings face light up. "Yes please!!"
"He can eat a lot of waffles. What is that, his tenth one??" Spitfire said laughing.
"Nope, my seventeenth." Dark wing mumbled with a mouthful of food. When he was finished he washed his plate and put it away.
"I don't think l've ever ate more than that!" he said, plopping down on Rainbow's couch.
Dark Wing turned on the news and it clearly stated "A small cottage set on fire!! Theres some one stuck inside!!"
'Shink Shink Shink', A pony was climbing the wall of the palace, where Princess Celestia slept.
"Hehehe, almost there," the pony said with an evil grin on his face.
The pony had made his way up to a window and sliced it open with his horn, letting the pieces of glass fall in.He climbed in, looked around and found out there was only two guards. The pony dug into his satchel and pulled out two knifes, which he set on the ground. He quickly used his magic to shoot the knifes into their necks and watched them drop dead. He sneaked in and walked up to Princess Celestia, who was sleeping. He smiled as he backed up, then he charged into Princess Celestia, who now had his horn stuck in her chest. She woke up in pain and looked him straight in the eye
"Moondust!! I thought you were dead!!" she yelled.
"Well you were wrong" he smiled.
He lifted Princess celestia up and charged up to a window smashing threw it. She was trying to get off his horn and then she realized that if she fell off, she would die from the fall.
"Any last words princess?" Moondust said with a smile.
"My trusty student Twilight Sparkle and her friends Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie, Applejack, Spitfire, Fluttershy, and their new friend Dark Wing will take you down" she smiled at him while saying that.
"Dark Wing....HA!! He would never make friends with those pity ponys" he smiled back.
"What do you mean?!?!" the princess said with worry in her voice.
"He's here for the same thing I am... Death and the world!" Moondust said with a evil laugh.
"What do you mean?!?!" Celestia was now scared.
"When you were a little girl did you ever hear about the two shadows?" he asked her
"Yes, why?!?!!?!" the princess looked at him, right in the eye.
"Well now you have met both. Dark Wing is the first shadow, and I'm the second" he smiled.
"Well I guess you'll see what the first shadow has become" the princess said.
The palace door flew open and the group of friends ran in. Moondust kicked Princess Celestia off his horn. She fell and hit the ground hard and had a very quick death."Princess!!!" Twilight cried.
"Ohh you wanted to see her?" Moondust asked well smiling.
Moondust looked around at all the ponies and smiled. "The only one who could kill me is The First Shadow of the Forbidden City" he said.
Everypony looked around not sure what to say or what he meant, but Dark wing did. Ohh he knew alright.
He walked up to the front "You killed my auntie...NOW YOU WILL DIE" Dark wing shouted.
At the side of Spitfires eye she notices Dark wings cutie mark. It was a cloud. The cloud opened and there was something crawling out of it. They were demons crawling up Dark Wings body, all over him. When they reached his eyes, that was it, he was out of control and there was no way to stop him.
" Umm dark wing" Rainbow Dash said.
"Shut up fool!!" Dark Wing replied.
Dark Wing walked over to Moondust and stood beside him.
"Hehehe... I have awoken the first shadow of the forbidden city. Death! Hehehe!" Moondust said with a evil laugh.
"What have you done to him?" the other ponies said.
"I brought back the real Prince Dark Wing" Moondust said.
"What do you mean!!" Twilight Sparkle said, with sadness in her voice.
"Your people's ancestors Captain Hurricane, Princess Platinum and Chancellor Puddinghead locked us up, because of our parents. So we decided we would get revenge on their descendants in the future and now's our chance." Moondust said.
"Dark Wing snap out of it!!" Applejack said angrily.
"Moondust, let's show them the powers we used to kill nations!!" Dark wing said while raising his hand.
"Glad to Dark Wing" Moondust replied while touching hooves with Dark Wing.
The demons on Dark Wing traveled onto Moondust and the two fused together into a dark pony. This pony was diffrent then anypony present had ever seen. The horns were shaped as a demons and it was solid black with pure red eyes. It's wings span was 20ft wide, and it had two heads. Twilight's eyes grew as she rememberd the stories of this pony. It's name was a legend that nobody knew, so everypony called it the demon shadow. The Demon Shadow took to the air and flew out of the castle. Rainbow Dash and Spitfire flew after it. They tried everything, knocking it out of the air, to pounding the crap out of it. Nothing worked.
"How do we beat this thing!!" Applejack said with fright.
The Demon Shadow flew back into the castle, crashing into Twilight Sparkle.They both went tumbling on the ground rolling into Applejack. Applejack quickly turned around and kicked Demon Shadow as hard as she could, making them fly apart. Dark Wing went to the right and Moondust to the left.
Moondust stood up and said "I'll be back," and hopped out of the castle.
That was it for Dark Wing. He was now considered evil, and the guards came and locked him up. For every night that Dark Wing was in prison, Twilight would go visit him telling him how all the other ponies are doing. By the third day the princess' decided a death sentence for Dark Wing.
It was now time. Everypony in Ponyville was there to watch Dark Wing die. Twilight Sparkle, Applejack, Fluttershy, Rainbow Dash and Spitfire were all there to watch there friends death, and they cried there face's off.
"Everypony, it's ok. He will have a good life in heaven" Applejack said with a weak voice.
Dark wing was chained up to a huge pole, so he could not move as they set the pole on fire. The fire roared as it went upwards towards Dark Wing. He just waited for death so it was done and over with.
"You girls were great friends to me and don't ever forget that... Or me..." Dark wing said with a tear rolling down his face. There was nothing else he could say. In his mind, he deserved his punishment every bit.
Twilight called out "Dark Wing... We will all miss you. Every one of us... And..." she was choking up, this would be a difficult goodbye. " I always... Always will love you." Twilight finished, before falling to the ground. Her face soaked in tears. Tears that made it evident Twilight was breaking down.
The fire reached Dark Wing and he yelled in pain as the flames burnt at his flesh, causing him to have a slow, painful death. The words "I love you too..." could be heard from the flames during Dark Wing's final moments. The guards put out the fire and shoved the stick over. Dark Wing was now dead. Twilight and her friends were left to sob in remembrance.
"Get me Dark Wing now!!" Moondust screeched at his servants.
Moondust didn't know that Dark Wing was dead. When his guard told him, he freaked out. He shouted many of curse words, not caring that his servants were scared. After he was done he looked around and remember all the times he had with Dark Wing. But if he went to see Dark Wing he would have to share the same fate. He didn't care, he walked to the arena were his friend lau dead. When he got there all the poniess were gone but the few friends Dark Wing had made in the short time he had in Ponyville. He walked up to all the crying ponies and looked at Twilight, who was sitting there with a picture of him and her.
"He was important to you, I'm guessing?" Moondust said with a sad tone in his voice.
All the pony's looked up to him and got a nasty look on there faces.
"What do you want?" Rainbow Dash said with a nasty tone in her voice.
All the pony's jumped Moondust and started pounding him to a pulp.
"Stop it...." A mystery pony said.
They looked over to see an odd looking mare.
Rainbow Dash looked up and gave the pony a dirty look. "Stop it? The guy who got our friend killed should not be beat?" Rainbow Dash snarled.
The mystery pony looked over towards Dark Wing and walked over. She kicked him a few times and she quickly grew her horn out. She used her magic to pick him up. She gave nothing but dirty looks before tossing him across the arena. Dark Wing smashed into the wall with a heavy amount of force. Twillight looked over at the mystery pony. She walked up to her looked at her with tons of anger in her eyes almost like they were turning red.
"What are you going to to?" the mystery pony said, but was interupted by a forcful punch and a mouth full of blood.
The mystery pony pony clashed with the ground coughing up all the blood in her mouth. All the ponys looked at Twilight and they saw the rage in her eyes, like she was ready to kill. Twilight used her magic and wrapped something around her hoof and struck again on the mystery pony chest. She quickly coughed up more blood then took a stand.
The mystery pony's wings grew large. The mystery pony started to swing at Twilight with her wings, not missing once, and sending her flying off to the left.
"You dare hit a princess? Fool! Meet the power of the Wing family!" the mystery pony said with a smile.
The mystery pony flew at Dark Wing as Applejack asked for her name. She replied with the name of Golden Wing. She crashed into Dark wing at high speeds never before seen. She was twice as fast as Rainbow Dash her self. Dark wing coughed up some blood.
"So sister..." More coughing. "It took you so long to find me.." Dark wing said with a weak voice.
"Come on brother we have some fools to take out!" Golden wing said as she flew fast towards Twilight and the rest of the gang.
As she got closer she noticed that Dark Wing was standing in the way, with his wings spread out and ready to fight if needed.
"Brother what are you doing?!?!" Golden wing said, puzzled as to what Dark wing was doing.
"I can't let you hurt my friends... Sister." Dark Wing said.
Golden Wing flew off, then quickly Dark Wing ran into the palace and dug threw Princess Celestia's stuff.
"Here it is!" Dark wing said triumphantly as he yanked on a hilt to a sword.
Twilight eyes widend with the sight of the sword. "You can't have that!!" Twilight said.
"Can't take my fathers sword?" Dark wing asked.
Twilight didn't reply, but ran out the door, then headed for her house. Dark wing strapped on the sword and ran after her quickly, the rest of the gang followed. They all met in town and took there ways. They all headed home but Dark wing didn't because he had no home. He digged in his bag and grabbed an apple and ate it. Dark wing started walking, not knowing where he was going, but kept walking.
Suddenly, there was a bright light in the middle the town. It sent it's rays shining throughout the night. Dark Wing squinted, to protect his eyes from the light's luminescence.
"IT WORKED! My time travel spell! It worked! In you're face mother! Windgust has created a time travel spell! Third person is required for my brilliance!" Screeched an ecstatic alicorn, "Behold me Equestria! For! I! Am! Windgust Wing! Now just to find that old father of mine."
"Kid? You're a Wing? You look pathetic." said Dark Wing.
"Well... I might hurt you.." Windgust threatened, his face grimacing in anger, as he drops his backpack to the ground.
"What's in the bag? A shark or something?"
"The Falling Blood sword. Which I just stole from your bag in a fraction of a second." Windgust replied, "Come at me bro."
With a roaring battle cry, Dark Wing charged forwards. He went for a right hook. As Dark Wing punched, Windgust stepped to the side with mind-boggling speed. Momentum carried Dark Wing forwards, and Windgust's hand guided him to the ground.
Windgust went to do his time travel spell. This particular time in the universe was getting boring.
"You're staying here! Step away from the time travel device-"
"Spell"
"Step away from the time travel spell?!" Dark Wing yelled, slightly confused.
"There's an old saying Dark.." Windgust began, "Words of great power and wisdom, and a conservation of soul, in times of need."
"What's that then?"
"ALLONS-Y!"
Then Windgust danced. A catchy tune began to reverberate throughout Ponyville. He began with a slow shuffle. Shimmying was next in his arsenal of dances. When the song increased in tempo, Wingust began to rave. When the first song ended, Ponyville found out that Windgust had an entire playlist. A different song started playing, it was in the Punk genre. Windgust began rioting. He smashed windows, stole from stores, flipped wagons, and lit buildings aflame.
This went on for a few minutes, and the author could go into detail about how many ponies he robbed, or how much he's going to get fined. But Golden Wing decided to show up. And she wanted to dance. She wanted to dance hard.
" I challenge you! To a dance off."
After a long fought dance off Windgust had beat Golden Wing in a dance off by far.
"H-H-How?!?!" Golden Wing said as she fell to her knees.
By then Dark Wing had ran away. He was just about to reach the end of Ponyville, until he was rudely interrupted by five female pony's.
Applejack had pinned Dark Wing to the ground not allowing him to move. "We can't let you leave with that sword Dark Wing" Said Twilight, as she walked up with her own family sword.
Dark wing bucked Applejack off of him and looked at Windgust who still had their family sword. Windgust saw the look Dark Wing gave him and he threw him the Falling Blood sword. The sword made by the Wing family.
They all drew their swords out of the hilt and charged. Dark wing stood there waiting for the right moment. Then quickly he tugged on the handle of his sword. It quickly came out of it's hilt.
Dark wing gave it a spin before yelling "This is my sword I'll do what I want with it".
Twilight was the first to reach Dark Wing. She slashed down just missing Dark Wings face. He jumped to the side and swung down cutting a chip off Twilight's horn. She spun around trying to nail Dark Wing, but he blocked it and forced her back, then began to swing rapidly at her. She blocked most of it but not all.
As some of Twilight's blood dripped off the sword he said "You might die here you know" he smiled after saying it. "Now you will see the power of the Falling Blood" Dark Wing said, as he stabbed the sword into his arm.
