Chapters (This is my first fanfic! ill put the first two chapters here.... Hope you enjoy it!!)
Chapter 1
Hurricane Tune was walking in the streets of Canterlot with his best friends Steel Sword and Sapphire Blizz.
Hurricane Tune was a cream-colored Pegasus stallion with light blue mane and tail,
his cutie mark was a Music tone with a pair of wings.
Steel Sword was a light brown Earth pony stallion with blond mane and tail, his cutie mark is a Shield and a Sword.
And Sapphire Blizz was a white Unicorn with a purple slightly curly mane and tail, his cutie mark is a Sapphire heart.
They trotted towards a restaurant.
“Oh how dazzling the restaurant is…” Sapphire said in his Mid-Atlantic English accent.
“It sure is...” Steel said looking at the sign of the restaurant.
The three of them trotted inside.
Sapphire and Steel were in their seat already while Hurricane wasn’t yet.
Hurricane wasn’t looking where he was going he suddenly bumped into something…or someone. He fell backwards.
“Ow…oh i-im sorry” he said still closing his eyes trying to stand up.
“O-oh u-m…” the pony said in a timid quiet voice.
“Hey Fluttershy! Are you okay?!?” I heard somepony said in a worried tone.
He opened his eyes, his sight was kind of blurry he closed it again and opened. He saw 6 female ponies.
There were two Unicorns, two Pegasus, and two Earth Ponies. He stood up and said
“I’m very sorry…” then he started to walk towards his friends.
“Hey dude, you okay?” Steel said.
“I-im fine…just need my glasses though” Hurricane said as he sat down.
“My, my, looks like you’ve bumped into a mare, Tune” He said looking at the 6 female ponies walking towards them.
“Can we help you?” Steel said looking at the purple mare.
“Uh…your friend here bumped into our friend….” a rainbow mare spoke infront of the purple mare.
“U-um girls, i-I don’t mind…i-it’s okay he said-“ the timid and shy cream-colored mare was interrupted by an orange mare “and he didn’t even looked her in the eye when he said sorry…”.
Steel and Sapphire looked at Hurricane with their You-didn’t-look-her-in-the-eye?!? Look.
Hurricane looked at the cream-colored mare in the eye and said
“Im very sorry, miss, for bumping into you awhile ago…” he bowed down
“im very sorry…”. I heard whispers from the other mares.
I was starting to get annoyed.
“U-um i-it’s okay….y-you d-didn’t mean it…” Her voice was like an angel’s voice.
Wait… he thought to himself. Angel’s Voice? Timid and Shy? ohmyCelestia it’s her! he thought to himself again.
He faced her, shocked. She was in wide shocked too….well both of us were shocked.
“H-hurricane? Is that you?” the cream-colored mare said. I was speechless.
Chapter 2
“H-hurricane? Is that you?” the cream-colored mare said. I was speechless. The others were wide-eyed.
"Ah...so he's an ol' friend of yers, Fluttershy?" the orange mare said.
Fluttershy looked at her friend "W-why yes Applejack..." she said timidly
"Hello..." Hurricane spoke to the other mares, they respond hi.
"This heres my two bestfriends, Steel Sword..." he pointed to Steel "and Sapphire Blizz..." then he pointed to Sapphire.
"Heyo.." Steel said
"Nice to be your acquaintance..." Sapphire said with a smile on his face.
Then the waiter interrupted "what may be your order?" he handed out the menu,
"We'll get 3 hayburgers and 3 glasses of water..." Steel said to the waiter
"anything else?"
Steel looked at the six mares "what food do you all want?"
"Its okay were done eating..." they all said
"Well we better get going now..." the lavander mare said
"Oh yes, i needed to finish some dresses..." the white unicorn slowly walking towards the exit
"Oh well, bye.." the three stallions said
"Bye..." the six mares said while walking to the exit
Steel and Sapphire looked at Hurricane smiling, Hurricane looked confused at them.
"What?"
"Dude, you two look perfect with each other" Steel said happily
"You two would simply look dazzling in formal attire!" Sapphire added
"W-what? n-no we're just old friends, nothing new.." he said nervously at what they said
"Really?" both of them said it together
"Yeah.."
"We'll see about that..." they both chuckle
"Hmph, yeah yeah.." then the waiter came with their food and placed it in their table and walked away
"Yummy!!" Steel said before he ate like a wild animal
Sapphire looked at Steel "urh, eat properly would you, your ruining the cloth table..."
"Oh sorry.." he said nervously before eating again, properly
the three stallions ate in silence.........
"Well Sapphire, you and the white unicorn are also perfect together and also you Steel Sword and the pink mare are perfect for each other too...." Hurricane said happily and let out a chuckle
"What?!" the two stallions said in wide shocked
Hurricane let out a small chuckle again, then they calmed down
"Well, the white mare is beautiful..." Sapphire said honestly
"*sigh* well the pink mare has a bouncy and happy personality.." Steel said as he looked away while blushing
"Of course i wont tell them, silly" Hurricane said as he finished his food.
"Well, the white mare is beautiful.." Sapphire said
"*sigh* the pink mare is kinda...well...cute" Steel said looking away blushing
"Of course i wont tell them, silly" Hurricane said as he finished eating.
Then the two also finished their food and exited the restaurant.
(tune in to the next chapter :)!!)
Chapter 2
Its was nighttime. Hurricane and his best friends were going home.
"*Yawn* Im tired already..." Steel said walking while closing his eyes.
"Yeah..." Sapphire said.
Hurricane walked in silence while the other two where chatting on their way home.
Fluttershy...i missed you Hurricane thought to himself,
Steel opened their apartment door.
"Finally, a good night sleep!" Steel shouted as he jumped and layed down the couch.
"Goodnight you guys..." Sapphire yawned walking to his room.
Hurricane just stood there and looked at Steel who was also looking at him.
"What, dude?" Steel said,
"Are you gonna sleep there or in your room?" Hurricane said as he walked towards his room's door.
"....." Steel did not respond, he was still thinking.
Then suddenly zoomed to his room.
Hurricane chuckled and went inside his room.
He scanned his room, looking for something.
He sighed, wanting to see his old friend again.
Maybe tomorrow...im tired... he yawned and layed down in his bed.
Morning came....
Hurricane woke up and yawned....
"Another great morning..." He did his morning stretch.
There was a knock on his door.
Knock Knock Knock...
"Cane, WAKE UP! Breakfast if ready!" Steel shouted.
Hurricane groaned and started to stand up. He rubbed his eyes then yawned.
They ate their breakfast.
Sapphire curiously looked at Hurricane.
"Hurricane, you okay?" Sapphire said in curiosity.
"Im...okay" Hurricane said as he ate.
Sapphire nodded slowly. Until they were all done eating breakfast.
Hurricane was going to his room until he thought of something.
He walked towards Sapphire, who was sorting all his custom made ties.
"Sapphire...have a minute?" He asked...
Sapphire was still sorting his ties.
"Yes? What do you want to ask?" Sapphire said.
"Um...Im gonna go to the Canterlot Garden....you wanna come?" He asked....
"Oh um...im sorry Tune but-a....i have alot of things to do...so i cant" Sapphire said as he looked at Tune.
"Its okay....well im gonna go now..." Tune said as he headed towards the door.
"Bye bye..." Sapphire said still sorting his custom made ties.
As Hurricane was walking in the streets towards the Canterlot Garden...he thought to himself
Why dont i ask Princess Celestia...she might know them... .
He trotted to the Canterlot Castle.
As he was gonna enter inside two royal guards greeted him and he went on.
He trotted to the door leading to Celestia's Throne Room, where she was.
He knocked then a voice spoke...
"Come in..."
Hurricane came inside, bowed to her and said..
"Um excuse me Princess Celestia..." he said looking at her, smiling
"Oh! Well Hello there Hurricane..." Princess Celestia greeted him and smiled.
"Um Princess...can i ask you something?" He asked
"Why of course, what is it you want to ask me?" Princess Celestia said
"Um...do you know a mare named Fluttershy? just asking..." he asked, his head down.
"Fluttershy? Why yes, I know her....shes one of my favorite student's best friend and one of the Elements Of Harmony..."
Hurricane looked at her smiling... "She's in Ponyville, right?"
"Yes.." she smiled
"Thanks Princess...." He trotted towards the door but suddenly stopped and said
"Say Hello to Princess Luna for me...bye" He trotted out of the room.
Princess Celestia smiled as he trotted out of the room.
Hurricane galloped to his apartment.
He opened the door.
"Welcome Back.." Sapphire greeted him
"Sapphire, do you want to go to Ponyville?" He asked smiling at him
Steel suddenly busted out of his room
"PONYVILLE?!" Steel asked happily....
"Yeah...you want to come?"
"Yeah yeah yeah!" Steel said as he galloped to his room to pack his things.
Hurricane then looked at Sapphire who was looking at him
"So, you want to come?" Tune asked him
"Im not sure...."
"You know the six mares we met yesterday? Their living there..."
Sapphire was shocked
"Then we must go!!" He galloped to his room and started to pack ALOT of things.
(Tune in to the next chapter :))
Chapter 4
They all packed their things and went to the Train Station and rode to Ponyville.
"I cant WAIT to see her again..." Sapphire said as he fixed his purple-ish mane.
Steel looked at Sapphire's Luggage....it was filled with ALOT of stuff.
"Uh...Blizz, yah brought ALOT of stuff with you...you know we're only staying there for a few weeks."
Steel said as he watch Sapphire fix his mane.
"Ive always come everywhere prepared, you know"
Steel rolled his eyes and then looked at Hurricane who was extremely happy.
"You seem extremely happy, Tune" Steel smiled
"I've always wanted to see her...she's so kind and sweet and nice...." Hurricane told him
"You've got a crush on her dont yah?"
"Of co- Well you can see that.." Hurricane said as he looked away.
Steel chuckled.
After a minute, Ponyville was seen...
Steel and Sapphire was amazed at the sight of Ponyville...
"I've been to Ponyville before..." Hurricane said as he looked at the sight of Ponyville.
Steel and Sapphire looked at him.
"Really? What's it like there?" Sapphire ask curiously.
"Tell us, tell us, dude tell us please..." Steel said fastly.
"Hmm...well its nice, comfortable, has friendly residents, and has fresh air."
"I CANT wait to go there!" Steel shouted
Hurricane chuckled.
They arrived at the Ponyville Train Station.
"FINALLY WE'RE HERE!" Steel jumped around Hurricane.
Sapphire was levitating his luggages.
"I like it...." Sapphire said with a big smile on his face.
"Good to be ba-" Hurricane said
"OH GOODY THERE HERE!" a pink mare interrupted him...
The three stallions looked at the pink mare who was bouncing up and down.
Five mares walked towards them.
Steel was looking at the pink bouncing mare.
Sapphire was admiring the white mare's mane.
While Hurricane was talking to the five mares.
"Hello..." the lavander mare greeted and smiled at him.
"Hey.." the rainbow mare said,
"Howdy pardner" the orange mare greeted,
"Hello there..." the white mare said in an accent similar to Sapphires,
"Hello Hurricane" the cream-colored mare said and smiled at him
"HELLO NEW GUY'S FROM BEFORE" the pink mare said as she bounced to her friends.
"Hello" the three stallion's said together.
"What are you doing here?" Hurricane asked
"Princess Celestia said that you were visiting Ponyville, she said that we are going to give you a wonderful tour"
the lavander mare said in delight.
The three stallions smiled.
"OH THIS CALLS FOR A PARTY!" the pink mare shouted happily
"Um...OH! Where are our manners girls....Im Twilight Sparkle, star student of Princess Celestia, you can call me Twilight" Twilight said proudly.
"Im the future Wonderbolt and the fastest flyer in Equestria, Rainbow Dash" Rainbow said proudly too,
"Im Rarity, the shining fasionista of Ponyville" Rarity introduced
"Im Pinkie Pie!" Pinkie Pie was still bouncing,
"Howdy, My name's Applejack" Applejack said as she shaked my hoof.
"Im Fluttershy" Fluttershy lowered her voice until we couldn't hear her.
Hurricane knew Fluttershy was really shy around new ponies except the ponies she knew already.
"We're glad to meet you" Hurricane responded with a smile then looked at Steel and Sapphire who we're
talking to each other.
Steel then looked at Hurricane with a confused look on his face.
"What?" he asked Hurricane who had an angry look on his face.
Hurricane sighed then turned back to the six mares.
"Im terribly sorry about those two..." Hurricane apologized
"Yeah its okay.." Twilight said.
"By the way, where are you three gonna stay?" Twilight asked
"Um...I guess in a hotel or we're gonna buy a house.." Hurricane put a hoof to his chin.
(sorry short chapter...tune in for the next chapter :))
