New Land, New Customs, New Life....New Love?
The Seventh Member
Previous ChapterI walked along the road through ponyville. Yesterday, I had met a mare by the name of Ditzy Doo, or Derpy. I had to admit, meeting her, it was like meeting an angel. It was the same feeling I've gotten with all the mares in my herd. And hopefully I could see her again.
I kept walking, looking around and up in the sky for the grey and blonde mare, but I couldn't find her anywhere. That is until I talked to Dash. I found her snoozing on her usual cloud. It's her favorite spot when she's not at home or in bed with me.
I chuckled silently at that thought.
"Hey Dash!" I yelled.
"Mmmh...huh...what?" She said as she rolled of said cloud, and plummeted.
"Whoah!" She yelled, opening her wings and slowing herself before she could slam into the ground.
"Jeeze Alan! What the hell!" she said.
"Sorry to wake you love, but uh, you ever heard of a mare by the name of Ditzy Doo, or Derpy?" I asked.
"Uh, yeah, I know her. Why?"
"I met her yesterday and I was curious as to where I could find her."
"Why, hoping to get a little more action? Are we not good enough for you?" She said, a tone of what sounded like anger entering her voice.
"No! Nothing like that, I could never ever love anypony over another. You do know I love you all equally right?" I replied.
She immediately smiled. "I know, I was messing with ya. It's about time somepony decided to show her some love. She likes to hang out at the edge of town, usually by the creek that runs by there."
"Ok, thanks. I'll see you guys tonight, Love you!" I said as I walked toward the entrance to the village.
When I got there, I found myself remembering when I first got here, and how disoriented I was, stumbling into town. A town I hadn't known was filled with such kind and understanding ponies. Not to mention all the beautiful mares I was now with. I continued walking down the path and my own memory lane. I just happened to not be paying attention and had run right smack into Derpy.
I snapped out of it and looked down. She had been knocked over and the muffin she was holding was now lying in the dirt.
If I ever felt more like a dick, it had to be now.
"Oh sweet Celestia, I'm so sorry!" I said, as I helped her back up. I bent back down and picked up her muffin, sweeping off any dirt I saw on it.
"Here, I'm sorry for running into you, I guess you could say we're even now." I chuckled.
"Hi Alan! And it's okay. So what are you doing out here?" She asked.
"I was uh, actually coming to see you." I replied.
She looked up at me, a slight blush on her face.
"W-why would you want t-to see me? Nopony ever wants to see me. They all think I'm an idiot. A Klutz." She replied, looking down at her hooves, a look of sadness on her face.
"Hey, hey, none of that okay. I don't want to see such a pretty mare so sad." I said, and as soon as the word pretty left my mouth, she looked up, looking confused.
"Y-you said I'm pretty."
"W-well yeah. It's true." I replied.
"Why?"
"Because, you are nice, generous and you have the most adorable eyes." I said, smiling sincerely.
"Don't say that, my eyes are ugly. They're the reason everypony thinks I'm stupid. They don't think I can be like anypony else."
"Well they're wrong. You are beautiful and intelligent, and To be honest, I was wondering if you want to go to lunch with me." I asked.
"A-are you asking me out?"
"I guess I am. What do you say? Shall we call it a date?"
"Um, okay." she replied, blushing. I smiled and placed my arm around her as we walked back into town, her muffin now finished.
We walked for a bit before I found a nice little cafe that Rarity and I like to go. It's a nice place to go when you don't want something too fancy, but you still want good food. We walked in and found a nice table outside. I pulled out her chair and pushed it back in once she was seated. She looked at me, still blushing like crazy.
I was about to call for a waiter when a mare, whom I had seen around town, came up to us.
"Well, well, well, what do we have here. It looks like the town freak decided to spend some time with the town klutz." She said smirking.
"Wow, think you could be any more rude?" I said angrily. I did not take kindly to being called a freak.
"Oh what's the matter, you gonna cry mr. human? Or will I have the pleasure of making the retard cry." She laughed. Everypony in the cafe turned and looked at her, glares of annoyance and hatred etched on their faces. Apparently I had made quite the reputation for myself. Because the manager came up to her and using his magic, proceeded to toss her out.
"I'm sorry but we will not tolerate any kind of rudeness or violence in this cafe. I'm so sorry sir, I hope she did not upset you." he said.
"It's okay, Derpy are you- where'd she go?" I said, noticing that she was no longer sitting in front of me.
"I'm sorry sir, but Miss Doo left a few seconds ago, she looked like she was heading home." The manager said.
"Thank you sir, I'm sorry we couldn't stay to eat." I replied.
"No matter, you and anypony else you're with are welcome here any time." He said.
I smiled, got up and ran after Derpy. I could see her running now, toward and into a small house. I followed her up to the door and knocked.
No answer.
I knocked again, but this time, the door opened slowly. I walked in and found Derpy standing there, tears falling freely down her face. I pulled her forward into a hug. And as soon as I did, She began sobbing into my shoulder. I placed my hand on her back and slid it up and down, hoping to comfort her. When she was able to calm down enough, I began to talk.
"Why did you run?" I asked.
"Because, I'm ugly and im stupid and I'm a klutz." She cried.
"No, your not. Your a beautiful mare, beautiful enough to rival Celestia." I said.
"Please don't say that. It's not true, I'll never be pretty." She said, crying even more.
"You know what, I'm going to prove that you are beautiful." I said.
"How are y-you going t-to do tha-mmmph!" She tried to say before my lips pressed against hers in a deep kiss.
I could tell she was shocked by it, so I pressed myself in closer to her and thrusted my tongue into her mouth, deepening the kiss. I soon felt her tongue caress mine as she began kissing me back. We stayed like that for a few moments before breath was needed. We pulled apart, and I smiled as I heard her pant slightly.
"Do you believe me now?" I asked.
"T-that, was a-amazing." She replied.
"Derpy, I'd like to ask you if you'd like to join my herd."
"W-what?! A-are you serious?" She said as a wide smile lit up her face.
"Yes, and you should know, that means you can come live with me." I said smiling.
She smiled back and hugged me tightly.
"A-alan, I think I love you."
Author's Note
Surprise! haha. You all wanted me to add derpy so here you go. I think It's time to end this fic here and start the sequel after basic training, and yes, there will be a sequel, and yes, there will be clop, lots of clop. So I hope you all enjoyed reading this. I have to admit, I never thought that this fic would become so popular. I'm honestly surprised. haha, especially with that surprisingly flawed beginning it had.
But I want to thank you all for staying with me through this, and I would especially like to thank Twilight Best Pony, Lightingace, Camlio and Juanpablobro2point0 for being such awesome readers and giving me such honest opinions throughout ever chapter.
Thank you all!
Stormhoof out!
Sequel will be up around mid August.
