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Prisoner

by Hearts n Hooves
Unable to live for himself, Archaic Smile lives to hide, unknowingly suffering his irrational phobias of society. When a mare from Manehattan moves to Ponyville, he suddenly finds himself caught up in an uncontrollable, life-changing relationship.

Yo, don't read this, it sucks.

Note to readers: this is a very premature version of this story, and I am currently in the process of heavy revision. I suggest adding it to your read later/favorites lists and keeping an eye out for the updated version.

"I can't keep hiding... You’ve s-shown me that what life has to offer is invaluable. You showed me joy... and l-love. I can't go back to knowing only fear. I need your help, Glory... Help me to live." - Archaic Smile

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Archaic Smile, a pegasus pony residing in the outskirts of Ponyville, knew only fear. Terrified of everypony and how they might judge him, he kept to himself, only visiting the town for necessities. Loneliness was all there ever was and would be for poor Archaic Smile, until a mare from Manehattan arrived in Ponyville. One fateful errand-run to her flower shop was all it took to put Archaic Smile on a new path towards realizing his potential and, most importantly, his desires.

Teen
On Hiatus
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Romance
Slice of Life
Dark
Sad
 
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14196 words: Estimated about 1 hour to read

11 Chapters:

  1. Prologue 2013-12-13 23:33:00 UTC
    448
  2. Spring Season 2013-03-10 10:07:25 UTC
    652
  3. Heart's Desire 2013-03-10 10:10:29 UTC
    1193
  4. You've Got Mail 2013-03-10 10:13:13 UTC
    1494
  5. Third Time's The Chram 2013-03-10 10:13:57 UTC
    877
  6. Preparations 2013-03-10 10:14:58 UTC
    1766
  7. A Walk to Remember 2013-03-10 18:32:36 UTC
    1591
  8. Aloft 2013-03-10 18:45:48 UTC
    1448
  9. Suggestions 2013-03-10 19:00:42 UTC
    1551
  10. Shindig 2013-03-13 01:37:29 UTC
    1844
  11. Committed 2013-12-04 13:22:12 UTC
    1332