Discord's Final Mistake

by Phoenix Blade

Rating: mature
Tags: Romance, Princess Luna, Original Character, Comedy, Princess Celestia, Sex, Tragedy, Main 6, Discord, Gore, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Alternate Universe
Length: 1330

The adventures of the last known white Wolf in all of Equestria in his quest for revenge

After 1000 years, Wolf has almost no memory, no family, and almost no desire, accept vengeance. Discord cursed his family 1000 years ago, and it will be his final mistake. However, with society so drastically changed, his quest will be more difficult than he could possibly imagine.

Published 2013-08-09 02:50:02 UTC
Last updated 2013-08-09 02:50:02 UTC

New Friends for an Old Wolf

Chapter 1

new friends for a old wolf.

Hello my name is Wolf and this is my story. long ago I was cursed by discord to roam equestria for all Eternity. All because I won a game...the “prize” for me was that he raze me and my family to greatness for all Eternity. I guess all he heard was “me” and not family so after I kicked his ass in a foot race he gave me the power of immortality and I went home, but my family isn't the greatest in the land we had come upon some money some time later but thats it.As the years move on I notice I’ve not aged a single day but every one else has. All I could do was sit and watch my family crumble and die...and thats when I vowed revenge on Discord.

1023 years of searching for him. I’d get close to finding him and he’d simply disappear. My last leed is that he’s in a town called Ponyville so thats my next target.For 2 days I watched the town. all most got caught by a butter color pony with pink mane. So after 2 days I determined it was safe to enter the town. So I flew into the town square with my hood up and clock on. So naturally the ponies were afraid at first up until a pony with purple mane with a pink highlight and a star mark on her flank waked up to me and demanded my name and why I was there. In which I replied “my name is Wolf and as to why I’m here...I’m here to find and kill Discord so if...”the pony frowned and told me that her and her friends had beaten him and turned him to stone.

I in disbelief that someone had taken my pray or maybe the years of pent up rage I lost my shit. I jumped in the air and pushed a gust of wind down on the pony and proceeded destroy everything in sight. the few guards in the town tried to stop me. The first one thrusted his spear at me so I bit it by the shaft and broke it in half and with the top half I jammed it in his eye. The other guard threw his spear and cut my face so I dive bombed on him clawing his face and eye’s. I’d slashed the straps on the neck armor and as it fell I bit his throat the warm blood flowing down the back of my throat..... and a smile appeared on my face for a moment.Up till I heard a carriage landing behind me I drew back my fangs for the dead guards neck. I thought “new pray?” “well, let us hope that this one can fight.” Out steps a white alicorn a surprised look on her face quickly replaced by one of anger.

“Spike!” A little dragon boy popped out from behind a tree and ran to her. “ sign a letter to luna to bring reinforcements now!” she said and the boy ran off. “Why have you done this?”
to which I replied with a blood curdling howl and charged at her.

\In everfree forest\

A butter colored pegasus Is picking herbs when she hears a howl come from town but to her, the howl was not menacing but sad. She races off to the town to see if she can help.

\back in town\

An hour passed of combat and blood and the reinforcements arrive to see their princess fallen and me about strike the last blow when a black alicorn stops my paw with her horn and then thread and bucked me in the face. I stumbled back. The guards take a u shape around the two princess’s as I regain my footing. I scream “I WILL CUT YOU ALL DOWN FOR TAKING MY PRAY FROM ME!!!!” and I charged the line but I was blindsided by more guards. Now I’m surrounded and outnumbered 120-1. Up and out is my last option so jump and fly up just to land outside the ring of ponies. The army of ponies started at me when the white alicorn stands weakly up and tells them “you all are no match him stand down!” the guards listened to their princess.

A butter golor pony wakes up behind me. I turned around to face her but as I looked into her eye’s I found myself unable to move as she gave me this stare. “lay down!” she demanded. my legs give out but my eyes and hers never parted waysI went from blind rage to cowering under this one pony. thin I felt the force of a hoof hit the base of my skull.I couldn't help but pass out.

\hours later in a cell in the canterlot dungeon\

I woke chained to the floor and wall....like a beast. I feel as if I have I've failed someone important to me but I can’t remember. Has he the 1000 years taken from my memory of my family? of my wife!? No matter how hard I try to remember I can’t see her face. I can’t remember her name...or my name for that matter. all I remember is my hatred for discord. I guess that's all that's left in this old wolf is rage for that thing called discord.“Oh you hate me that much?” Discord’s voice rang in my head “and I thought we were friends Snow how cruel of you and I gave your gift.” Discord said in a sarachik tone and finally pissing me off “ A GIFT THAT WAS TO BE GIVEN TOO ALL OF MY FAMILY!!!”I yelled to the nothingness. For a moment there was nothing and then the door opened on the other side of the cell barsFor a moment there was nothing and then the door opened on the other side of the cell bars and in walks the black alcorn a spear at her side held by magic and a look in her eye’s.....a look to kill. She walks to my cell mumbling something all I can make out is “ die you pathetic whelp!”. She opens the door to the cell and walks in.... she stops just in front of me and puts the spear to my throat...her eyes meet mine then she drove it into my neck all the way to the wall.

Blood dripping down the shaft as it hangs in the air and the hole in my neck visible to the moon light. The spear drops to the floor the black alcorn stunned at what she has done. She lay there crying until she heard a voice come from over her “ Its not proper for a princess to cry.” she looked up at me in disbelief “ I’m sorry But I can’t die not just yet.” The princess jumped up putting her for hoofs around me neck.“White Snow you're alright!” she practically squealed in excitement and then backs away blushing. “Princess I’m sorry but I have no memory of you or for that matter myself. All I remember is MY RAGE FOR DISCORD!!!” I rowd....there was a moment of silents but was broken by the sound of my tears hitting the floor “And now I can never have my revenge!”

A guard runs in out of breath saying “the diamond dogs have taken ponyville and have captured all of the ponies in the town!” he collapsed

I look at the Princess and tell her that “ I’m the best canch you have to get to git the ponies out unharmed.” she looks at me and asks me “how can you guarantee that?”

“Because dogs always run from a wolf.” I growled

to be continued

Author's Note

Note: this is my first fanfic plz be nice. And as for the main protagonist he is a white wolf with wings. A hybrid