Subspace Emissary(Caroline to proofread)

"As Rainbow Dash woke up and ended up in a place with only grass, loop holes and waterfalls." Where am i? What is this place? This isn't Ponyville. "as she looked around the place and noticed a trophy to be Princess Luna" As she freed her. What happened to me? "asked Princess Luna." You got sent here like i did said Rainbow Dash. Oh. What is this place through? "asked Princess Luna." Not sure said Rainbow dash. At least you tried. Anyway let's look around said Princess Luna. Okay said Rainbow Dash as she followed her.

As they were walking, they were fighting robot like creatures. Who made these robots? They just keep coming said Rainbow Dash. I know. I wonder where they are coming said Princess Luna. "as they walked more and noticed a boy with black hair and a boy with gray hair with keyblades fighting Primids." We got to help them! Their surrounded! "Shouted Rainbow Dash." We will help them said Princes Luna. Good said Rainbow Dash as they ran to help them.

They just keep coming. This is getting me tired and weak said Riku. I know. Me too. But we can't give up to these things said Terra. As RIku used Dark firaga on a group. Terra used meteor. "as they were getting tired." As a big Primid punched the both of them and send them to the groud tired. Great their getting bigger said Terra weakly. This is not good said Riku. "as the big Primid was about to throw another punch, Rainbow Dash used her hoof kicks and took it out."

Thank you said Terra. No problem Terra said Rainbow Dash as Princess Luna healed them with her magic. Thank you said the both as they got up. Anyway i guess we have to move quickly or more will come said Riku. You got it said Princess Luna. After all we need more help, if we going to get out of this place said Rainbow Dash. Well alright then. Then let's get going! Shouted Riku. Okay said the three as they went on the place.

Where do you think we are in? I never been a place like this said Terra. We're not sure ourselves Terra said Rainbow Dash. Just hope we can get out in time said Riku. We will said Princess Luna. "as they were running Wargoyle(kh ddd) stopped them in their tracks and used a spinning attack on them, but missed." Wargoyle! Shouted Riku. You know this thing? "asked Princess Luna." I do. I faced it while i was on my mark of mastery exam said Riku. Oh. But what is it doing here then? "asked Princess Luna." Not sure. But we must fight the thing said Riku. Bring it on said Terra. We won't lose said Rainbow Dash.

"As the Wargoyle threw meteors at them but missed them by luck." Well that was unexpected said Rainbow Dash. Sure was said Terra. "as Princess Luna used her magic and froze it as Rainbow Dash did hoof kicks on it, and Riku and Terra used their keyblades weaken it. That was powerful said Riku. "as Wargoyle threw punches on the ground and caused a mini earthquake and made Sonic and Knuckles hear this."

What was that? "asked Knuckles." Not sure but we got to hurry and find out fast said Sonic. Your right said Knuckles as they left to see what's going on. I still hope Tails is alright said Sonic. I hope so too said Knuckles.

This monster is going down quickly said Princess Luna. It is said Riku, as he used Dark Aura on it making it weaker. We'll winning! "Shouted Rainbow Dash."

You heard that Knuckles? "asked Sonic. Yeah. Sounds like a girl cheering over victory said Knuckles. Then we'll getting closer said Sonic as they went faster to them.

Don't give up yet. It's still getting up said Princess Luna. Dang it. It won't stay down said Terra as he used Ars solum on it. It's wings are off now said rainbow Dash. Now to take care of it for good said Riku.

We'll getting closer said Sonic. Almost there said Knuckles. We must stop what's causing that earthquake said Sonic. We will stop said Knuckles as they kept going.

He's almost done said Riku as he used Dark slicer on it freezing it and attacking it. "as his Tail fell off." We can win this said Rainbow Dash as she used her hoof kicks, but Wargoyle grabbed her and threw her at the three." That was unexpected said Riku. That was said Terra.

We'll there Knuckles and their trouble said Sonic. We better hurry said Knuckles. Right said Sonic as he got into a ball and Knuckles glided them.

"as Wargoyle was about to hit them again Sonic used his Spin dash on Wargoyle making fall to the ground, as Knuckles used his claws taking off it's arms." Thanks said Rainbow Dash. No problem said Knuckles. Now to take care of this thing said Sonic as he attacked Wargoyle at high speeds. Nice try you monster. You can't catch up with me said Sonic Mockingly. "as everyone got up and attacked Wargoyle killing it.

We beat it! Cheered Rainbow Dash. We sure did said Sonic. hey Knuckles now what? "asked Sonic." I'm guessing we team up with this group said Knuckles. Yeah i guess. And besides more help has more chances to make them through places said Sonic. You will you let us two join you four? "asked Knuckles." Sure. We will need more help after all said Rainbow Dash. I agree said Riku, Terra and Princess Luna. Okay then. Then we'll in a team Knuckles said Sonic. Okay said Knuckles. We should get going now said Rainbow Dash. Your right said Sonic as they all left.

So your the fastest thing alive huh? "asked Rainbow Dash." Well yeah. I can move at the speed of sound said Sonic. Oh really now? Then how about a race? "asked Rainbow Dash." Sure said Sonic. But not now said Princess Luna. But why? "asked Rainbow Dash." We have to find the others first, even my sister said Princess Luna. Fine said Rainbow Dash. "as they saw a bomb."

Another bomb! "Shouted Princess Luna" We have to stop it, before it takes Green Hill over said Sonic. You got said Knuckles. "as they made it to the bomb." Let me try said Terra as he used Meteor, but didn't do a thing. That's bad said Terra. I even tried my magic but it didn't do a thing as well said Princess Luna. Then what? "asked Riku." We have to escape before it starts said Rainbow Dash. What you mean? "asked Sonic." Well in my world the same bomb took over ponyville covering it in a dark ball said Rainbow Dash. Me and Knuckles didn't get that said Sonic. But still we have to get out of here fast! Shouted Rainbow Dash.Okay said Sonic. It's already counting down! Shouted Princess Luna. We have to hurry then said Rainbow Dash. "as they left to escape."

"As they were about to leave to the door, a giant cannon ball hit Knuckles and sent him flying." Knuckles! "Shouted Sonic."We have to get him! Shouted Princess Luna. Too late! The dark ball is about to take place over! Shouted Terra. But we can't leave without Knuckles said Sonic. I'm sure someone will find him as the dark ball is getting closer closer said Riku. We have to move now! Shouted Rainbow dash. I hope your right said Sonic as they went inside and were in a city.

"As Twilight, Sweetie Belle, Big Mac, Applejack, Trixie, Applebloom, and Scootaloo woke up."  Where are we? "as Sweetie Belle." Not sure. but looks like we're in a town said Twilight as they looked around. Looks like a peaceful place through said Applejack. Should we look around now? "asked Applebloom." Sure said Twilight. Just stay close to us Sweetie Belle, Applebloom and Scootalo said Applejack. Okay said the three fillies.

"As they looked around, they noticed a broken wall and decided to go inside and saw a mansion." Look everypony there's some trophy's in the ground. Let's free them said Twilight. Okay said everypony as they to free them. Mewtwo, Ventus, Sora, Marceline,Krystal,Knuckles and spike were free.

What happened to all of us? "asked Spike." We found you here said Twilight. I'm back said Knuckles. I'm guess you got by another place? "guessed Applejack." Well yeah. I got sent here then after getting hit by a cannon ball, while me, sonic and his friends were going to a door to escape said Knuckles. We're just glad we found you then said Applejack. I'm glad too said Knuckles.

What is this place anyway? " all of them asked." This is Twilight Town said Sora. Oh said everyone. Should we go inside? "asked Trixie." I guess said Sora before the mansion got destroyed by Cerberus. I guess not now said Big Mac. I'm guessing it wants to fight us doesn't it? "asked Twilight." I guess it does said sora. You little Fillies stay back said Applejack. Aww. We wanted to help as well said the three fillies. Not this thing through. Now hide from here said Applejack. Fine said the three fillies as they hid.

"As Cerberus threw fireballs at them but missed." That didn't go well for him said Trixie. "as Trixie used her magic and froze it, as everyone attacked it." As he did stomps on them but they barely missed. It's been a long time since i was awake said Ventus. "as he used Faith on Cerberus weakening it. "as Cerberus threw darkness on the ground, and sent to the others." Everyone avoid the power he's doesn't! Shouted Sora. Okay said everyone.

As they avoided it, they damaged Cerberus again. This dog is going now quickly said Applejack. "as Cerberus tried to bite, but they were too fast for him." Nice try said Sora. "as Sora and Ventus used Trinity Limit on Him." That was a strong attack said Krystal. "as Krystal used her weapon and threw fire and blizzard at it." Macelline used her Guitar and caused shock waves on Cerberus. Not so tough are we? said Macelline mockingly. "Spike used his fire while Mewtwo made it stronger by adding his own burning Cerberus.

"As Cerberus was getting weaker by the minute." He can't keep up with us anymore said Twilight. She's right said Sora. Let's take out quickly before it recover it's energy said Ventus. Okay said everyone as they took out Cerberus. We win! Shouted Applejack. Anyway should we get going? "asked Sora." But where through? "asked Applebloom as the three fillies got out of the hiding spot." To find the way out of here said Sora. Well okay said Twilight. Let's head back to town if we can find anything said Sora. Okay said everyone as they headed back to town.

As they checked town and were fighting some nobodies and Primids. Well they just keep coming and coming said Twlight. They never give up said Sora. I could of figured said Twilight. "as they checked the struggle tournament." Nothing here said Macelline. Next place then  said Sora. "as they checked the back ally. Nothing here either said Applejack. "as they checked the subways." Nothing here as well said Ventus. Figures said Sora. "As they saw a door." Let's go there said Twilight. Okay said Sora.

As they about to enter they saw a bomb. Another one! Shouted Twilight. We have to stop it, if we can said Twilight. We will try to stop said Sora. "as they were to try to stop the bomb, Scourge stopped them." Who are you? "asked Applebloom. I'm Scourge the hedgehog. And i'm here to stop you in your tracks said Scourge. Oh really? It's 14 against 1 said Mewtwo. You really think i came alone did you? Nope i have backup with me he laughing. Come on out boys said Scourge as Metal Sonic, a army of Goomba's and ice bro's and  nobody Dragoons surrounded them. Well this isn't going to be easy said Mewtwo. Have fun my minors said Scourge as he joined the fight. Time to fight again i see said Twilight. Yeah said Sora.

"As they were fighting." The goombas and ice bro's are easy to beat said Knuckles. Sure said everyone. "as everyone took out the nobodies no problem." That wasn't too tough said Applejack. But we got a robot and green hedgehog to deal with said Twilight. The robot doesn't look easy said Krystal. He isn't said Knuckles. Well these two can be a challenge said Spike. " as they noticed the bomb." There's another one said Twilight. And worst we only got 15 minutes, and we got these two to deal with said Trixie. Then we will beat them in time. Now's lets get them said Knuckles. Right said everyone as they changed to battle them.

As Metal and Scourge was able to dodge them easy. This is pathetic really. You can't even touch us said Scourge. "as Mewtwo used his Psychic powers and stop them in place." Now attack them, while i hold them said Mewtwo. Okay said everyone as they hit them multiple times. That really hurts said Scourge weakly. "as the metal sonic oil's was falling. We almost done said Knuckles. "as Metal sonic was beaten to the multiple hit's he took." As Scourge broke out and turned into his dark form. Now let's battle. I'll beat you all like bugs laughed Scourged. Like we will go down that easy said Krystal. And worst you only have nine minutes now said Scourge.

As they tried to hit scourge, but he was too fast, slowly beating every last one of them. "as Mewtwo tried his Psychic, but didn't last very last and kicked Mewtwo to the ground and punching him multiple times and weaken him. You guys are pathetic. Now you can't touch me laughed Scourge. We're not giving up said Twilight weakly. Oh really? "asked Scourge as he picked up Twilight and threw her a wall weaken." Who's next? "Laughed Scourge." As he noticed the three Fillies turned into Trophy's. I got my prize for winning said Scourge as he took Applebloom, Sweetie Belle and Scootalo and left.

No Applebloom! Sceamed Big Mac and Applejack weakly. We got to save them said Knuckles. But how? He's gone already said Applejack crying. We will get them back somehow said Big Mac also sad. "As Twilight and Mewtwo got up and healed everyone." Thank you mewtwo and Twilight said everyone. No problem said the both. We only got five minutes now said Knuckles. That's not good said Applejack. What was that form he had? "asked Twilight." That was his Dark form. Strong as his super form. One you turn super or dark, your power increases and you become faster said Knuckles. so that's why he was able to beat easy said Twilight.

Do you have one Knuckles? "asked Sora." I do,but it requires chaos emeralds said Knuckles. Oh said everyone. Anyway let's get out here said Knuckles. But what about the three fillies? "asked Applejack." He's not here anymore. I doubt he be here with the bomb here said Knuckles. Maybe someone will save them said Twilight. I hope so too said Applejack and Big Mac. Let's get going now! The bomb is on and is 30 seconds said Knuckles. Okay said Applejack as they all left in time. "as Twilight town got covered in a dark ball." We will save them somehow said Big Mac. Don't worry we will said Knuckles.

Hey Wario! "Shouted Scourge." What is it? "asked Wario." I got three more trophy's with me said Scourge. Nice. now put them on my vehicle said Wario. Okay said Scourge as he put on them. Anyways why are you dark? "asked Wario." This? This is my dark form. Strong as my super form said Scourge. Okay said Wario. Anyway let's get going said Scourge. Fine said Wario as they left.