The two ponies walked into ponyville the pegause Caramel Swirls was fly over top of her pony friend Comet Simmer the unicorn. The two ponies were sent to Pony Ville by princess celestia because they didnt have the cutie marks and couldnt find there special talent by them selfs. As they arived to ponyville every pony looked at them and there blank flanks. Caramel flew down to be with her friend. '' come on Comet cheer up you'll find the girls the Princess was telling us about'' said Caramel who had an accent like apple jack's'' well i dont know Caramel i moved to pony ville to get away from every pony in the city looking at me but there doing just that!`` said Comet.
The first pony they said hi to was pinkie pie hi i`m Caramel and this is my friend Comet where new to town an- Caramel was interupted by pinkie shaking her hoove really fast hi i`m pinkie pie nice to meet u!. After pinkie pie stop shaking her hoove Caramel contunedyes nice to meet u to and where looking for Twilight sparkle and Raindow dash oh that should be easy said pinkiepie followed by a gigglei`m friends with them follow mEEEEEE! pinkie pie started hopping. Comet and Caramel were following her till they got to twilight tree house.
this is twilight`s house said pinkie who knocked on the door. Spike opened up the door oh hi Pinkie pie said Spike ``HI SPIKE is twilight home?'' said pinkiepie ''spike whos at the do- oh hi pinkie what are u doing here'' said twilight ''hi twilight! there are some new ponies in town and mr and mrs cakes are waiting for me can u show them around please!!!'' said pinkie '' yea sure i guess s-'' twilight started ''do u pinkie proumise?!'' said pinkie ''yes i pinkie proumise'' said twilight. PinkiePie had left and Twilight was showing Caramel and Comet Applejack's farm. ''this is Sweet Apple Achers home to the best apples EVER!'' said twilight
''i worked on a farm like this!'' said Caramel. Apple jack was walking over to greet the new ponies ''hello there i'm apple jack! nice to meet u!'' she said ''hi 'm Caramel and this is my friend comet!'' said Caramel ''yea...hi'' said Comet ''i worked on a farm just like this but it was a peach farm!'' said caramel with a smile on her face ''well if u want we could use an extra hoof around the farm we dont mind if u come and help us!'' said Apple jack. ''ok so the next place on are tour is Fluttershy's home'' said twilight after a while of walking they got to fluttershy's cottage
.''Fluttershy! i would like u to meet two new ponies'' said twilight knocking on the door Fluttershy slowly opened up the door ''oh hi i'm fluttersh...'' fluttershy said very quitely ''Hi i'm Caramel swirls and this is my friend Comet'' said caramel. just then Angel walked out ''aww a little bunny!'' said Comet as she went to pet Angel ''i love animals'' said Comet ''well looks like we have something in commen whoo hoo!'' saiid Fluttershy. '' so the next stop in suger cude coner!'' said twilight as they were walking twilight and comet were talking about magic ''i dont know many spells i only know how to levatate stuff thats it'' Said Comet
''really? thats all well i dont mean to brag but i'm princess Clesetia's Student u know lots of spells and i read lots of books'' said twilight soon they arrived at suger cude coner where they were greeted by Mr adn Mrs Cakes'' oh hi twilight who are your new friends?'' said Mrs cakes ''this is Comet Simmer and Caramel Swirls there new to pony ville i was wondering if they could have a little taste of some of your sweets'' said Twilight ''sure thing'' said Mr Cakes handing them some samples.
''yum this is my favourite place'' said Comet. after suger cude coner they went to Rarity's shop ''oh darlings your mane and coats are needing in a little fixing up'' said Rarity who was puting dresses on them ''yea i think i'll be going now thank u for the tour twilight um bye!'' said Caramel who dashed out the door leaving the dress behide.''um sorry Rarity she doesnt like dresses and stuff'' said Comet '' she was wanting to meet rainbow dash for a long time she could of went out to find her''.
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Another day came Caramel was working on the Apple farm she was bucking apples this time with Applejack.Caramel was having a great time she loved being with the apple's they were all so nice when it was lunch time AppleJack, AppleBloom and Caramel where haveing sandwitches outside under an appple tree ''your really good Caramel we got more apples then ever '' said Applebloom ''thanks'' said Caramel who took a bite of her sandwitch ''your so good it was like you worked here all your life'' said Applejack who was lying down in the shade of the apple tree ''yea...i guess i that good'' said Caramel. when they got back to work Applejack was Watching Caramel on how she bucked trees when Caramel pulled her hine legs back Applejack noticed something on her flank ''wait Caramel'' said Applejack ''what?'' Said Caramel who was standing on all fours again '' Caramel look at your flank'' said Applejack. Caramel looked at her flank there was a cuite mark there! her cutie mark was a peach and a apple togther ''my cutie mark!'' said Caramel she was jumping around. After a day of working in the apple farm Caramel was about to start heading to Suger Cube Corner but she stopped at Rarity Shop. ''Hi Rarity'' Said Caramel walking in ''Hello dear what do you need?'' said Rarity ''well..I just got my Cuite mark and-'' Started Caramel ''your Cutie Mark!? Congrates dear'' said Rarity ''yea but if Coment finds out i have a cuite mark before her she might get upset'' Said Caramel ''and i need something that will cover it up'' ''Well i have lots of saddles and skirts for you'' Said Rarity. There were lots of saddles to choose from but Caramel picked out a gold and brown saddle that covered her cutie mark. As she was looking in the mirror Rarity walked up behide her '' Well that saddle just matchs your coat and mane'' Said Rarity ''ok so how many bits?'' said Caramel ''no darling you dont need to pay anything for a friend'' said Rarity ''well i better get going'' said Caramel who was walking toward the door ''ok see you later'' said Rarity. At Suger Cube Corner Comet was waiting for Caramel ''where in all of ponyville is she?'' said Comet.When Caramel walked in Comet looked at her '' Where have u been?'' said Comet ''oh i got this new saddle at Rarity's shop'' said Caramel. As Caramel walked towards the chair she tripped over and her saddle fell of showing her cutiemark. '' Caramel did u...'' started Comet ''Comet i'm sorry but i found out what my talent is'' said Caramel getting up off the floor. Comet walked out the door upset and sad.
It was 2 days later after Caramel got her cutie mark it been a full month there were only staying for a month a good bye party was taking place no pony looked sad that there new friends where leaving every pony was there,even Derpy Hooves, everypony but Comet she was slowly finshing her packing she was sad she was now the only one of her friends with out a cutie mark and she nevers completed her assment on getting it. There was a knock at the door Comet opened it ,it was Princess Luna and Twilight, ''Twilight Princess luna its so nice to see you before i leave at tomrrow's sun rise'' Said Comet Twilight and Luna walked in '' we heared about your cutie mark and how Caramel got it before u'' said Twilight ''yea its true'' said Comet she lowered her head she was so sad to leave ponyville without completing the assment. princess luna walked over to her. she smiled she took her hoof and raised Comet's head. ''its ok Comet where here to help find your cutie mark i was the last of my pony friends to get there cutie mark'' said luna in a calm voise. They where talking for a while '' so a cutie mark is about finding your talent that tell you why you belong in this world'' said Twilight ''yes Twilight my cutie mark was to raise to moon every night but i never knew it was a talent'' said Luna. Luna looked at Comet ''Comet what is the best thing you can do?'' asked Luna. Comet was thinking she didnt really know what was the best thing she could do. After a while of thinking she finally said something ''the best thing i can do is...paint!'' said Comet ''paint?'' said Luna and Twilight togther ''yep painting i have an eistal in my room i paint all the time'' said Comet she walked into her room. She took a few paintings she made and showed them her paintings '' wow thats the best painting i ever seen in a thousand years!'' said Princess Luna. Comet blushed ''aww thanks'' said Comet she put her paintings away. Twilight was thinking for a while ''hmmmmmm'' Twilight whispered something to princess luna '' but twilight thats the worse plain i ever heared in a thousand years'' said Luna '' Come on Luna....'' said Twilight. Princess Luna walked over to Comet '' I have a friend whos birthday is coming up and i would like to give her a painting could you please paint a picture of the conterlot castle?'' said Princess Luna. Comet's eyes lit up '' it would be an honer'' said Comet. Luna gave Comet a picture of the castle. '' Luna you better get back to the castle so your ready to lower the moon '' said Twilight ''oh my thank you Twilight Sparkle and make sure to send me her painting when she's done'' said Luna '' Bye princess Luna'' Said Comet she got right onto the painting. Houurs went by Twilight was staning by her watching her paint. When Comet was finshed it was morning. ''wow Comet thats really good it reiminds me of Princess Celestia and Princess Luna'' Said Twilight. '' Yea its the best painting i ever made...'' said Comet.
