Caramel and Comet

by PrincessLuna124

Rating: everyone
Tags: Random, Adventure
Length: 3685

Two best friends Simmer Comet and Caramel Swirl are blank flank ponies and are looking for there cutie marks Comet is a unicorn looking for twilight and Caramel is a pegause and is looking for rainbow

Caramel: a pegause who thinks her talent is racing who has a southern accent like applejacks she worked on a peach farm but never like working there
Comet: A big city unicorn she lived in the city manehaten she thinks her talent has something to do with magic she never fit in with the city so she and her best pony friend Caramel set out to pony ville to find there cutie marks

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-03-29 15:56:46 UTC

Arival To PonyVille

The two ponies walked into ponyville the pegause Caramel Swirls was fly over top of her pony friend Comet Simmer the unicorn. The two ponies were sent to Pony Ville by princess celestia because they didnt have the cutie marks and couldnt find there special talent by them selfs. As they arived to ponyville every pony looked at them and there blank flanks. Caramel flew down to be with her friend. '' come on Comet cheer up you'll find the girls the Princess was telling us about'' said Caramel who had an accent like apple jack's'' well i dont know Caramel i moved to pony ville to get away from every pony in the city looking at me but there doing just that!`` said Comet.

The first pony they said hi to was pinkie pie hi i`m Caramel and this is my friend Comet where new to town an- Caramel was interupted by pinkie shaking her hoove really fast hi i`m pinkie pie nice to meet u!. After pinkie pie stop shaking her hoove Caramel contunedyes nice to meet u to and where looking for Twilight sparkle and Raindow dash oh that should be easy said pinkiepie followed by a gigglei`m friends with them follow mEEEEEE! pinkie pie started hopping. Comet and Caramel were following her till they got to twilight tree house.

this is twilight`s house said pinkie who knocked on the door. Spike opened up the door oh hi Pinkie pie said Spike ``HI SPIKE is twilight home?'' said pinkiepie ''spike whos at the do- oh hi pinkie what are u doing here'' said twilight ''hi twilight! there are some new ponies in town and mr and mrs cakes are waiting for me can u show them around please!!!'' said pinkie '' yea sure i guess s-'' twilight started ''do u pinkie proumise?!'' said pinkie ''yes i pinkie proumise'' said twilight. PinkiePie had left and Twilight was showing Caramel and Comet Applejack's farm. ''this is Sweet Apple Achers home to the best apples EVER!'' said twilight

''i worked on a farm like this!'' said Caramel. Apple jack was walking over to greet the new ponies ''hello there i'm apple jack! nice to meet u!'' she said ''hi 'm Caramel and this is my friend comet!'' said Caramel ''yea...hi'' said Comet ''i worked on a farm just like this but it was a peach farm!'' said caramel with a smile on her face ''well if u want we could use an extra hoof around the farm we dont mind if u come and help us!'' said Apple jack. ''ok so the next place on are tour is Fluttershy's home'' said twilight after a while of walking they got to fluttershy's cottage

.''Fluttershy! i would like u to meet two new ponies'' said twilight knocking on the door Fluttershy slowly opened up the door ''oh hi i'm fluttersh...'' fluttershy said very quitely ''Hi i'm Caramel swirls and this is my friend Comet'' said caramel. just then Angel walked out ''aww a little bunny!'' said Comet as she went to pet Angel ''i love animals'' said Comet ''well looks like we have something in commen whoo hoo!'' saiid Fluttershy. '' so the next stop in suger cude coner!'' said twilight as they were walking twilight and comet were talking about magic ''i dont know many spells i only know how to levatate stuff thats it'' Said Comet

''really? thats all well i dont mean to brag but i'm princess Clesetia's Student u know lots of spells and i read lots of books'' said twilight soon they arrived at suger cude coner where they were greeted by Mr adn Mrs Cakes'' oh hi twilight who are your new friends?'' said Mrs cakes ''this is Comet Simmer and Caramel Swirls there new to pony ville i was wondering if they could have a little taste of some of your sweets'' said Twilight ''sure thing'' said Mr Cakes handing them some samples.

''yum this is my favourite place'' said Comet. after suger cude coner they went to Rarity's shop ''oh darlings your mane and coats are needing in a little fixing up'' said Rarity who was puting dresses on them ''yea i think i'll be going now thank u for the tour twilight um bye!'' said Caramel who dashed out the door leaving the dress behide.''um sorry Rarity she doesnt like dresses and stuff'' said Comet '' she was wanting to meet rainbow dash for a long time she could of went out to find her''.

The CMC's

After Caramel got out of bed and brushed her mane and tail Comet and Caramel were eatting peach pancakes when there was a knock on the door. ''i got it'' said Comet at the door was Apple jack Sweeite belle Apple bloom and scootaloo. ''howdy Comet and you too Caramel'' said Applejack with a big smile on her face ''hi Apple jack!'' said Caramel who was at the door as well. '' these fillies wanted to meet you guys there the cuite mark crusaders'' said Applejack'' This is my sister AppleBloom and her friends Scootaloo and Sweetie belle'' ''HI!'' said Sweetie belle. Comet Giggled ''Hi i'm Comet Simmer and this is my best friend Caramel swirls'' Comet said '' we are the Cuite mark Crusaders were a group to help ponies with blank flanks to find there cuite marks!'' Applebloom said then the three fillies showed there blank flanks ''well we dont have are Cuite marks either thats why where here in pony ville to try and find them'' said Caramel ''wow you guys never found your cutie marks'' said Scootaloo ''well Applebloom i have to get back to the farm dont bother these ponies to long and hey Caramel why dont your stop on by she could use some more hooves'' said Apple jack ''yea sure!'' said Caramel ''ok see your all later'' said Apple jack running back to the apple farm. ''would you Filles like to come in'' said Comet ''SURE!!!'' they said at once. Inside the CMC's were sitting down they were happy to see some new ponies with out there cutie marks ''were the only ponies in are class with out are cutie marks'' said sweeitebelle ''oh i remmber in my class every pony made fun of me and Caramel cause of are blank flanks we used to cover are flanks with table cloths and stuff there was this nasty filly always picking on us'' said Comet ''now what was her name?'' ''i think her name was Sour Sweets'' said Caramel ''a green little filly blond hair got her cutie mark before anyone else in the class agh she was nasty'' '' sounds like Diamond taria and Sliver Spoon the always call us Blank Flanks'' said Apple Bloom ''hey cheer up soon you'll get your cutie marks and then they cant make fun of you'' said Caramel. just then there was a knock on the door ''i got it'' said Comet she opened the door it was Babs Seed''umm Apple Bloom Granny Smith wants you back at the farm now'' said Babs ''hey babs meet Caramel and Comet they dont have there cutie marks!'' said Sweetie belle ''oh um hi i'm Babs Seed as you see i dont have a cutie mark either'' said Babs ''i should go home soon also Rarity wanted me to try on a new dress she made'' said sweetie belle ''i must go too'' said Scootaloo as the three filles were walking out the door way Caramel said'' ok it was nice meeting you'' ''thanks you too!'' said Apple Bloom. Comet closed the door '' those filles are nice'' said Comet who was packing her saddle bags ''were are you going?'' said Caramel ''oh Twilight wanted me to help her with a few spells and i want to bring a few things too'' said Comet. At Twilights house Comet was helping Twilight and Caramel was at Sweet Apple Ackers helping Apple jack and Applebloom harvest Apples ''gee thanks for your help Caramel '' said AppleJack Caramel's job was to get any left over Apples off the branches after Applejack Bucked them. ''Hey no problume'' Said Caramel. Caramel Dissied to trying bucking a tree for once just to try. Caramel pulled back her hine legs and then pushed them forward hitting the tree with a good blow letting all the apples fall into bins. ''wow good job Caramel you got every apple of that tree your dooing good did you work on a apple farm before?'' said AppleJack as they were loading the bins onto a cart pulled by big mac '' no i worked on a peach farm where i have to do the same thing every day so i guess i did have some pratince'' said Caramel. At twilight's house Comet was having a hard time trying to learn new spells ''i guess i'm not gonna get a magic cutie mark thats for sure'' said Comet who was packing her things. Comet dropped a dark blue book with a star on the cover ''hey whats this book about?'' asked twilight ''oh this is my story i made its about a dragon who was dystroying a town till many pegause's fought back and saved the town'' said Comet who put the book back in her saddle bag ''well i have to go i told Caramel to meet me at Suger Cude Coner bye'' said Comet who was walking out the door. At Suger Cube Coner Caramel and Comet where eatting cupcakes and talking '' on the farm my job was to get and apples in the trees that didnt get knocked down by Applejacks buck so before we were done i wanted to try bucking so i pulled back my hine legs and then i hit the tree and knocked all the fruit down so how was your day'' Said Caramel '' not so well i couldnt do a lot of spells twilight wanted to help me with i guess i'm not getting a cutie mark in magic'' said Comet who then put a cupcake in her mouth ''do you like the cupcakes!?'' said PinkiePie who poped out behide the counter. pinkiepie scared Caramel out of her chair ''whoopies sorry Caramel!'' said Pinkiepie ''its ok Pinkie'' said Caramel who got back on her chair ''and the cupcakes are awesome'' said Comet ''so did you guys get your cutie marks yet?'' said pinkie pie ''no not yet...'' said Comet. Back at Caramel and Comet's home they were having Dinner. it was very quite there wasnt anything to talk about Caramel could tell soethign was up with Comet '' is something wrong?'' said Caramel ''um no i'm just not that hungry i think i'll go to bed'' said Comet who walked into her room.

1 Cutiemark 1 blank flank

Another day came Caramel was working on the Apple farm she was bucking apples this time with Applejack.Caramel was having a great time she loved being with the apple's they were all so nice when it was lunch time AppleJack, AppleBloom and Caramel where haveing sandwitches outside under an appple tree ''your really good Caramel we got more apples then ever '' said Applebloom ''thanks'' said Caramel who took a bite of her sandwitch ''your so good it was like you worked here all your life'' said Applejack who was lying down in the shade of the apple tree ''yea...i guess i that good'' said  Caramel. when they got back to work Applejack was Watching Caramel on how she bucked trees when Caramel pulled her hine legs back Applejack noticed something on her flank ''wait Caramel'' said Applejack ''what?'' Said Caramel who was standing on all fours again '' Caramel look at your flank'' said Applejack. Caramel looked at her flank there was a cuite mark there! her cutie mark was a peach and a apple togther ''my cutie mark!'' said Caramel she was jumping around. After a day of working in the apple farm Caramel was about to start heading to Suger Cube Corner but she stopped at Rarity Shop. ''Hi Rarity'' Said Caramel walking in ''Hello dear what do you need?'' said Rarity ''well..I just got my Cuite mark and-'' Started Caramel ''your Cutie Mark!? Congrates dear'' said Rarity ''yea but if Coment finds out i have a cuite mark before her she might get upset'' Said Caramel ''and i need something that will cover it up'' ''Well i have lots of saddles and skirts for you'' Said Rarity. There were lots of saddles to choose from but Caramel  picked out a gold and brown saddle that covered her cutie mark. As she was looking in the mirror Rarity walked up behide her '' Well that saddle just matchs your coat and mane'' Said Rarity ''ok so how many bits?'' said Caramel ''no darling you dont need to pay anything for a friend'' said Rarity ''well i better get going'' said Caramel who was walking toward the door ''ok see you later'' said Rarity. At Suger Cube Corner Comet was waiting for Caramel ''where in all of ponyville is she?'' said Comet.When Caramel walked in Comet looked at her '' Where have u been?'' said Comet  ''oh i got this new saddle at Rarity's shop'' said Caramel. As Caramel walked towards the chair she tripped over and her saddle fell of showing her cutiemark. '' Caramel did u...'' started Comet ''Comet i'm sorry but i found out what my talent is'' said Caramel getting up off the floor. Comet walked out the door upset and sad.

Saved By The Night

It was 2 days later after Caramel got her cutie mark it been a full month there were only staying for a month a good bye party was taking place no pony looked sad that there new friends where leaving every pony was there,even Derpy Hooves, everypony but Comet she was slowly finshing her packing she was sad she was now the only one of her friends with out a cutie mark and she nevers completed her assment on getting it. There was a knock at the door Comet opened it ,it was Princess Luna and Twilight, ''Twilight Princess luna its so nice to see you before i leave at tomrrow's sun rise'' Said Comet Twilight and Luna walked in '' we heared about your cutie mark and how Caramel got it before u'' said Twilight ''yea its true'' said Comet she lowered her head she was so sad to leave ponyville without completing the assment. princess luna walked over to her. she smiled she took her hoof and raised Comet's head. ''its ok Comet where here to help find your cutie mark i was the last of my pony friends to get there cutie mark'' said luna in a calm voise. They where talking for a while '' so a cutie mark is about finding your talent that tell you why you belong in this world'' said Twilight ''yes Twilight my cutie mark was to raise to moon every night but i never knew it was a talent'' said Luna. Luna looked at Comet ''Comet what is the best thing you can do?'' asked Luna. Comet was thinking she didnt really know what was the best thing she could do. After a while of thinking she finally said something ''the best thing i can do is...paint!'' said Comet ''paint?'' said Luna and Twilight togther ''yep painting i have an eistal  in my room i paint all the time'' said Comet she walked into her room. She took a few paintings she made and showed them her paintings '' wow thats the best painting i ever seen in a thousand years!'' said Princess Luna. Comet blushed ''aww thanks'' said Comet she put her paintings away. Twilight was thinking for a while ''hmmmmmm'' Twilight whispered something to princess luna '' but twilight thats the worse plain i ever heared in a thousand years'' said Luna '' Come on Luna....'' said Twilight. Princess Luna walked over to Comet '' I have a friend whos birthday is coming up and i would like to give her a painting could you please paint a picture of the conterlot castle?'' said Princess Luna. Comet's eyes lit up '' it would be an honer'' said Comet. Luna gave Comet a picture of the castle. '' Luna you better get back to the castle so your ready to lower the moon '' said Twilight ''oh my thank you Twilight Sparkle and make sure to send me her painting when she's done'' said Luna '' Bye princess Luna'' Said Comet she got right onto the painting. Houurs went by Twilight was staning by her watching her paint. When Comet was finshed it was morning. ''wow Comet thats really good it reiminds me of Princess Celestia and Princess Luna'' Said Twilight. '' Yea its the best painting i ever made...'' said Comet.

Fitting In

Caramel was flying around looking for the rainbow mane light blue pony rainbow dashwhile leaving twilight and her friend comet in rarity's shop.While she was looking she bumped into another pegasue sending them both falling down. They landed on a pile of hay unhurt. ''oh i'm so sorry i was just loooking for a pony and'' started Caramel ''its ok i'm fine!'' said the pegasue Caramel bumped into '' i'm Cloud Dancer'' she said holding her hoof out ''oh hi i'm Caramel swirls i'm new in town with my friend comet where both blank flanks and we where sent to ponyville to find are cutie marks'' said Caramel '' i'm sure you'll get them evey pony does in time'' said Cloud dancer. the sun was setting it was getting late ''oh look its getting late see you later Caramel gotta fly!'' said Cloud dancer flying off.That night Caramel and Comet where getting ready for bed there were in a house Princess Celestia rented for them and house with two rooms for them. ''well i'm going to bed its been a long day night caramel'' said Comet who was walking into her room''night comet!'' said Caramel. Caramel looked outside a few ponies where still outside talking with an alicorn Caramel couldnt help wondering who that pony was. Caramel  ran outside to meet the pony ''hi Princess Luna!'' said one of the ponies who where talking to her. just them Luna flew up into the air and flew down to Caramel '' so i see theres a new pony in town hello there i'm the princess of the night Luna!'' she said ''oh hi i'm Caramel Swirls! oh your highness'' said Caramel bowing down. Luna smiled ''you may rise'' she said. Luna started flying up ''i must go you must go to bed its getting late good bye ponies of ponyville i'll be back tomrrow night'' said Luna in her ROALY CANTERLOT VOISE! When Caramel got home she went right to bed it was late and she was more tired than she ever been in all her life. The next morning Comet was the first one up she walked into Caramel's bedroom to find she was asleep normaly Caramel would be bouncing on Comet telling her to get her flank out of bed. Comet went over to Caramel's bed a shook her alll Caramel did was push her away. ''ok u wanna do this the hard way we'll do this the hard way!'' said Comet who ran and got two frying pans and banged them togther. Caramel awoke rubbing her eyes she said ''why the hay would u do that i was sleeping so good'' '' your the one who keeps telling me to get my flank out of bed so get YOUR flank out of bed i made us breakfast we have a long day ahead of us now scoot your boot'' said Comet who was walking out of the room many ponies were already outside Caramel got out of her bed '' its gonna be hard to fit it with a blank flank'' Caramel said to her self

The Sun Rise Good Bye

In Comet's Room Twilight and Comet where packing Comet's things it was The-Sun-Rise-Good-Bye celabratien Caramel and Comet where leaving pony ville back to there homes they had one month to try and find there cutie marks Caramel got her cutie mark but comet never got her's so she has to go back to her home where she might enver find her cutie mark. ''are you sure it will get to princess luna?'' said Comet '' it will i promise your really good'' said Twilight. '' yea i guess I am good'' Comet was looking at her painting. it was time to go Comet grabed her bags Twilight and Comet where walking out of Comet's home Caramel was there at the town hall Princess Clesetia and Princess Luna where also there. Comet just made it she went and standed beside Caramel ''we are here today to celebrate two lucky ponies who came to Ponyville to find there cutie marks but where sad to say only one pony got her cutie mark Caramel got her Cutie mark 2 days ago but Comet never got her cutie mark'' said Princess Celestia ''and today is the day where they go back to their homes'' Caramel and Comet showed there flanks Comet saw Twilight smileing. Comet looked at her flank a cutie mark was there it was a paint brush and a heart. ''well look at that Comet did get her cutie mark!'' said Luna. Comet cheered along with Caramel. '' now if you all put your hooves togther for Caramel and Comet'' said Celestia. Luna and Celestia set off fire works many fire lit off then two fire works blew up and showed there cutie marks. every pony cheered every one was so happy as Comet and Caramel walked into the hot air balloon as it set off they waved Caramel steped out fo the balloon she flew around it she was having fun ''good bye every pony!'' said Comet and Caramel as the balloon flew out of sight

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