The Story of Neon Strike

by Metallicolt94

Rating: everyone
Tags: Romance, Tragedy, Slice of Life, Sad
Length: 417

A dramatic story of a grey-eyed Pegasus named Neon Strike who encounters the hardships of life & how he's dealt with it.

One day in Equestria,there was a pegasus that was birthed named Neon Strike. As Neon grows,he experiences the hardships in life.
He will experience pain,pleasure,happiness,misery,suicide & fulfillment.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-03-25 18:52:45 UTC

The Birth of Neon

One day in the Equestrian Hospital,there were over 100's of mares about to give birth to their foals with their husbands beside them.

But there was one couple that wasn't expecting their new-born to be so...different.

"AAAAAAGH!" "It's okay,sugarcube. Just hold my hoof." Newlyweds Bright Sunlight (Colt father) & Midnight Glow (Mare Mother) were in a room while doctors were helping Midnight give birth.

"AAAAGGGH,HELP ME,SWEET CELESTIA!" Midnight shouted out.

"It's okay,Ma'am. Just a few more pushes,"said Nurse Dew.

"C'mon,honey. Just keep pushing." said Sunlight.

Midnight lets out agonizing screams with every attempt to push her baby out of her marehood.

She sweats from the exhaustion of giving birth.

"I see the head!" says one of the doctors.

"Okay,great."another doctor says."Okay,Mrs. Glow. Just one more big push,you understand?" Midnight nods her head.

'Alright,when you're ready." Says the doctor. Midnight holds on to Sunlight's hoof,takes a deep breath,and emits another agonizing howl of pain as she pushes the foal out of her marehood. Her scream can be heard throughout the entire hospital from the 6th floor to the entrance.

Midnight felt her baby being slowly exerted from her blood & climax-covered marehood.

"You did good,honey."Sunlight tells Midnight as he gently holds her head & kisses her on the cheek.

Midnight lets out a small,but visible smile at Sunlight.

A doctor enters the room & asked,"Mr. Sunlight,may I see you for a moment...outside?" Sunlight,with curious eyes,says "Umm,sure." Sunlight follows the doctor outside the room.

A unicorn nurse comes in levitating a small body wrapped in a blanket with her saying,"Congratulations,Mrs. Glow. It's a baby colt. But..." The nurse's ears perk down as Midnight's eyes start to widen with worry. "What is it?" Midnight asks. She starts to think all the possibilities of what might have happened to her baby foal.

"Your son,his..." The nurse tries to speak out as Midnight's heart starts to pump fast.

"Just tell me,please." Midnight says with such worry. "Your son...has a defect. His eyes...are pure,entirely grey. It's a..." The nurse was interrupted by Sun light & the doctor entering the room. "May I see my baby?" Sunlight asks. The nurse slowly levitates the baby from mid-air to the hooves of Midnight. Midnight slowly unravels the warm cloth covering her baby. Once she unravels the blanket,the baby slowly opens his eyes. His eyes are truly grey,but Midnight starts to cry tears of joy.

"Oh,Sunlight. Our baby is beautiful." She says with a cracking voice. "Yes,he is,sweetie." Sunlight gently picks up