
Chaos Controlled
Twilight Sparkle is a mare who just completed her training with Celestia. Eagerly awaiting the arrival of her next teacher, a strange pony named Makavar, she does yet to know the adventure that his arrival would bring to her. Or the evils...
Years have passed since Twilight first became an Alicorn. In this time she has grown into a powerful asset to both Celestia and Luna. In this time, Celestia mentioned her teacher, named Makavar, with whom would be arriving in Equestria, to continue Twilight's training. Though this starts the second part of her life, she has a long way to go before she can be accepted in the eyes of Makavar. For little does she know, that with Makavar's arrival, an adventure starting way back before Equestria's founding is brought to her. All along with the evils that should have been defeated at those times.
(Please read my newer fiction, A New Equestria)





19794 words: Estimated about 2 hours to read
9 Chapters:
- Prologue 2013-03-14 18:25:00 UTC4517
- Canterlot's Fall 2013-03-16 20:35:55 UTC3396
- Into Abraighai 2013-03-17 14:23:33 UTC1694
- Fifteen and One 2013-03-22 01:58:57 UTC1419
- Makavar's Journal - Entry 1 2013-04-01 12:02:44 UTC683
- With time, it ends. 2013-04-14 05:38:53 UTC1188
- A place called Time 2013-04-27 06:41:15 UTC3678
- With regret 2013-05-16 05:53:00 UTC2768
- Epilogue - Makavar's Letter 2013-05-16 06:15:17 UTC451