Peace Keeper

by partiallygayguy

Rating: teen
Tags: Sad, Adventure
Length: 1309

What happens when an alicorn falls from the sky? Find out in Peace keeper

There lived 2 great races. The Mechanis and the Magi. The Mechanis are skilled inventors. The magi are skillful and knowledgeable in dark and light magic. When the races were removed from existence the great I AM left a gift for the whole universe to ensure that life will continue to exist. This is my first fanfic by the way so please minimize the trolling if you want me to continue this story.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2012-02-07 14:13:42 UTC

Wake up.

Somewhere in space

   The end of the universe was a dark and grey place. This is where souls were placed when they are denied from heaven and hell. This is a place where souls look for themselves, their true purpose. This is the place where the evil that nearly consumed the universe was sealed. And at the entrance of this god-forsaken place there stood an alicorn, the alicorns mane was silver and had blue streaks in it, its coat was as white as the snow. And his wings were long, slender and soft. He was one of the unfortunate to come here and check this place if there was any signs of cracks or dents in the building. The building that the evil was sealed in looked new. No rust (no smell of rust either), and you couldn't feel the presence of evil. "Okay the faster I do this, the faster I get out of this place." he said confidently.

The check-up felt like an eternity for the young alicorn though it was only 30 minutes. "There I'm done. Now to get out of this place!" Said the young alicorn. He Galloped to the gate at full speed, closer, closer, closer. Then the gate suddenly closed. "WHAT THE HELL!?"Leaving so soon? said a disembodied voice I was enjoying your company "NO! WAIT! STAND BACK! IM WAR-" before the young alicorn could finish he felt a sharp pain in his behind, he was then devoured most unfortunately (why do you think they call these ponies 'unfortunate') OH IT HAS BEEN SO LONG SINCE I HAD A MEAL! the disembodied voice said gleefully. After a few seconds of eating the poor lads soul he has become of the evil.Now rise my soldier and serve your master! The young alicorn was now the slave to the evil. His big, round eyes were fiery red, the feathers of his wings were gone and replaced by a dark aura, His coat was no longer snow white, but instead pitch black. Now walk with me. said the disembodied voice.

I will rule the universe! And the PEACE KEEPER cannot stop me! He said laughing maniacally flying to the young alicorns home planet ready to consume everything in its wake.

Equestria's orbit

  "MASTER! MASTER! MAAASASSSTSTETERRRR!!"

   "AGHHHHHH! WHAT DO YOU WANT COM!?"

    Com was Knidus personal AI assistant, he was round like a core, small, about the height of a soccer ball. His eyes were round and its color was green. The color of his paint was silver. He also likes to annoy the hell out of my OC character.

    "Master! Your internal clock says its been 500 billion years since you woke up from hyper sleep." Com said while looking at a screen.

     *yawn* " Com this had better be important!" Knidus said angrily. ( He really hates it when he wakes up after hyper sleep. He gets grumpy.)

     "Sir it has been 500 billion years since you last spoke to me, you're powers are drained and also a shower! Go get cleaned up!"

      *sigh* "Fine, but only because you said so."  He slowly got up from his pod and walked to the comfort rooms. As he walked to the halls of his prison everything still looked new. As if nopony has ever touched the ship. " The Magi really are skilled in magic for the spell they made and the Mechanis for designing this ship, just amazing." He said out loud.

When he got to the comfort room the first thing he did was look at the mirror " After 500 billion years I still look young, I guess alicorns can live forever. I hate it" His mane was white and had streaks of blue in it. His coat was white, just like his mane. The length of his wings were medium and his cutie mark was a white kite shield with 2 curved swords in front of it forming an 'x' the symbol for a guardian. He levitated his toothbrush and started brushing vigorously, after brushing his teeth he then stepped on the shower mat and suddenly a jet of hot water rushed to the stallion.

      After a few minutes of cleaning himself com blasted the door to the comfort room open. "GAH! WHAT THE HELL COM!? YOU FORGOT HOW TO KNOCK!?"

     "I'm sorry about that master but I have good news and bad news."

      "Its just news com nothing is good or bad." said knidus

      "Okay good news first, our ship hasn't been spotted yet by the ponies of the planet"

       " okay, carry on."

       "The bad news is we have run out of fuel and we are gonna crash into the planet sir."

       "What about power?"

        "Were running low on power."

        "Okay, that is bad news."

An untold prophecy

Before the great explosion (known today as the Big Bang) there were 2 races:

The Mechanis and the Magi

The Mechanis were superb and excellent inventors and builders they made the most sophisticated machinery and contraptions that made life for the both races easier. Or as the Mechanis refer to themselves as “The gods of machines”

The Magi skilled and knowledgeable in dark and light magic raised the sun and placed the moon. They also made spells that made life also easy for both races.

Then one day, the Mechanis and the Magi were arguing. The Mechanis, stubborn and arrogant believed that everything would be better if everything is replaced with technology. The Magi, wise yet proud didn’t agree to this, they also believed that everything is better without technology and that magic was better. Since both races couldn’t put aside their differences they left their home planet.

Centuries later a great evil plagued the universe. The Mechanis couldn’t keep the evil at bay even with the most sophisticated and advanced form of technology. The Magi weren’t fairing any better even with the skills and vast knowledge of the Magi they couldn’t keep it at bay.

When all hope seemed lost, a SPIRIT sent by the great I AM was there to reunite the 2 races.  The great I AM made SPIRIT stronger so Even the most hard-headed of the Magi and the Mechanis couldn’t refuse the awesome power of the SPIRIT. So the both races reunited because they feared the SPIRIT. The SPIRIT then combined the power of the Mechanis and the Magi and the power of the SPIRIT himself sealed the great evil that nearly consumed the whole universe sealed it off to the farthest edge of the universe. The Magi and the Mechanis celebrated and named the SPRIT “Knidus”  ‘Kni’ in Mechanis which means PEACE and ‘dus’ in Magi which means keeper the spirit was known as Knidus. Gift of the great I AM. *Peace keeper*.

Centuries later Knidus returned to the 2 races. And tell them that their great race will be destroyed and a new race of sentient and non-sentient beings will replace them. He told them to seal Knidus. And that only 6 friends with friendship strong will unseal him. Since Knidus was the will of the great I AM they did not question him.

The Magi and the mechanis toiled while fulfilling the request of Knidus and the great I AM. After centuries of toiling the Mechanis and Magi finally sealed Knidus.

As a millennium passes ... The Mechanis and the Magi were starting to think that Knidus was wrong. Then suddenly and unexpectedly a great explosion appeared from the north and  destroyed everything except 3 great forces:

The great I AM. The Peace keeper. And the Evil.

Partiallygayguy presents

a non-canon story

PEACE KEEPER.

Authors note:

Feedback is appreciated guys. Don’t stop being awesome my fellow bronies.

This is my first fic btw. So please minimize the trolling if you want this story to continue.