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Protect Her Golden Eyes!

by Dhuradhan
A personal guard was ordered to protect the Mail Mare... but what happens, when the danger is no more and he sees this mare still in trouble? (OC pony x Derpy Hooves/ Ditzy Doo)

Read the whole description, to avoid wasting your time! If you find the informations below unentertaining, boring or simply wrong for you, then please leave! Thank you!
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Ditzy Doo is a mare with problems. The ponies are mocking her, her job is hard and she has to take care of Dinky, her little daughter. The ''nickname'' she has, Derpy, actually became her real name and every pony addresses her like that. But she got used to it, since she learned to ignore those mean words from the citizens of Ponyville.
One day, when she was delivering the mail, a group of thieves ambushed her, hurt her and took away her mails, along with important reports to Canterlot. Instead of showing sympathy and helping her, the ponies became angry at her, for losing their mails.

And poor Derpy remained the same mare in their eyes... clumsy, a disgrace and a failure...

Due to the lost reports and stolen informations, Celestia ordered a personal guard for the Mail Mare. Troubling events like that must be prevented!
The only order he got... was: ''Protect the Golden Eyes!''

Follow Bronze Sight, as he guards the Ditzy Doo turned Derpy, hears the mean calls from the ponies and keeps an eye out for those rogue ponies.
Meanwhile... getting to know the pegasus mare even better...
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Why you ACTUALLY came here will be a bit later. First, they have to meet with each other! So don't expect this story to get to the romance immediately!
The story contains short, small violence. But do not worry, this is completely about romance!
Romance Tag for obvious reasons...
Why no Sad Tag? Because the story is mostly about romance, not sadness. There will be moments, yeah, but overall: This is not a sad story...

SFG rating: Cheeky (Only in later chapters! As I said, don't expect the story to jump right into their relationship! They have to meet with each other first, then work up their way to LOOOOOVE~!)

The story mostly focuses on:
- The two's slowly blooming relationship.
- The feeling of being left alone and feeling worthless.
- The feeling of being responsible and protective.
- The feeling of feeling that feeling which you feel when you feel... falling in love...
Aside from these, the story CAN change. These small details above are the main goals now and I only add or remove one of these ''goals'', when I feel like it would be fine. This depends on how am I going to approach this story. The main happenings are in my mind, but along the way of writing this, I'll most definitely get new ideas and put them into the story, as bonus details or for fun.
But for now, the story stays like this and I'd like to keep it like that...

Warnings:
- More commas than it should have. They say I use them too much, so giving me advice in the comments would be nice about this topic.
- Hungarian as mother language. Still learning English, but that doesn't mean this will be 'ununderstandable' (<-- made up word...). If yes, then it's due to my laziness/careless and unaware eyes/ tiredness/ insomnia... and due to my mood...
But I can assure you, I'll try my best and take my time to do this.

Cover art: Made by the lovely lady, Faux Synder! A million thanks for making that beautiful picture! Also, check out her Tumblr. She's an artist, who needs support!

Final Note And The Most Important Thing!

Derpy The Watcher inspired me to make this. Her work on this site is honorable and I want to thank her, for inspiring me. I love you and I'm sending this to you, to show how I feel about you! Million thanks to you, my lady!

Teen
Incomplete
Romance
 
ODOD

9333 words: Estimated about 1 hour to read

2 Chapters:

  1. The Stormy Day 2013-03-27 01:23:31 UTC
    2155
  2. First Sight 2013-04-05 18:56:59 UTC
    7178