I ain't doing nothing right.

by shiningmacloveress2

Rating: teen
Tags: Sad, Romance
Length: 1831

BigMac x Applebloom APPLECEST Applebloom is sad after a day of school and accidently runs into BigMac at the barn, her big brother knows how to comfort her.

I ain’t doing nothing right.

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Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-03-25 15:42:20 UTC

I ain't doing nothing right.

I ain’t doing nothing right.

DON’T LIKE APPLECEST, DON’T READ.

Applebloom sighed deeply after she walked into the barn, she closed her eyes and flopped down onto the hay, muttering softly. “Ah ain’t doing anything right….” At least she thought she was. Instead of landing on the hay she landed onto her big brother’s muscled body.  She squeeled softly and jumped back up. Her hooves clicked to the ground as she landed. Big Macintosh looked at her. “Ya alright?” He asked, his voice was, low, deep and full of love and care for his sad looking little sister.

The little fillies ears dropped low. “Sorry Big Mac… Ah ain’t doing nothing right the past days… Ah can’t watch befor’ ah lay mahself down…”

A low chuckle sounded through the barn and the sound of wood on wood filled the room as Big Mac put his yoke down. He gently pulled his little sister close into a tight, but not too tight family hug.

“Why don’tcha tell ya brother what’s goin’ on in ya small filly life lately?” He asked gently.

After like 15 minutes of talking Applebloom looked up at her brother with big teary eyes. The big muscular farmer pony didn’t laugh about her (to her) big problems. He simply nodded and gave her the comfort she needed at the moment, with his big hoof he stroked her red mane.

“Ah see whatcha dealin’ with there.” He replied.

She blinked a few times, her brother, the big farmer pony everypony thought of a nice and friendly pony understood her problems of not being able to discover her special talent and being picked on at school for not having one?  “H-how?” The little filly asked as she snuggled up in between his frontlegs.

Big Mac chewed on his straw a few times, thinking about the lines he would be saying to his little sister. “Ya know, back at mah schooldays ah wasn’t the smartest pony in class and ah was the very last to get mah cutiemark. Ah was upset ‘bout it too when it just wouldn’t appear on mah flank. And if that wasn’t bad enough itself, ponies started pickin’ on me. But ya know what, ah kept mah head up and thought to mahself:  Once mah cutiemark appears it’ll be bigger and better than anyponies. And ah was right. Ah got mah cutiemark after ah told mahself to believe in mahself and had fun with doing things ah was good in, ah was strong enough to pull a plow, ah was applebucking like crazy and ah was making the best out of it.” He told her proudly.

She looked up at him, a bit surprised, this was the largest amount of words she ever heard from her brothers mouth at once. Though she felt a bit more confident now, but there was another problem she needed to talk to someone about, she pulled her biology book out of her saddlebags and nosed it open at the right page. “Big Mac? Can you help me with this?” She asked.

Big Macintosh looked down at the book, he blushed deeply, luckily it didn’t really show because of his red fur. “Umm…” he muttered. Right in front of him were pages with pictures of the pony autonomy, the private parts. “Ah am not really sure… Whatcha wanna know?” He asked softly.

“Well ah read about this… The maidenhood? What’s that?” Applebloom asked him and looked up at him.

“The maidenhood is something inside your marehood that kinda rips as ya have sex for the first time…” The big red pony told her.

“Sex?” She asked.

“Ya didn’t talk to miss Cheerilee ‘bout that?” BigMac asked, not really sure if he should talk about that with his sister.

“Well no, ah read a bit forward…” She said and smiled up at him.

BigMac nodded and started explaining the best he could.

After ten minutes Applebloom nodded. “Can ya show me? Ah really wanna know what it feels like, it sounds all so special!”

BigMac lifted his head and blinked. “Show ya? Ah dunno Applebloom. Ya know… Siblings ain’t supposed to do that things together, it’s wrong.”

The little filly didn’t let him tell her off so quickly. “But BigMac… Ah won’t tell anyone, promise! It might even be mah special talent! Making stallions feel good!”

BigMac’s eyes widened. “Oh no that won’t be ya special talent at all!” He said quickly and sighed slightly. “Look Applebloom, ah dunno if we should… But ah’ll do it if that keeps ya off the streets and from stallion that’ll take advantage of ya. Promise me ya’ll always come to me with this kind of… Intimate things.” He said softly. “Whatcha wanna know first?”

“Well, ah didn’t even had mah first kiss though…” Applebloom said and rubbed her head against his leg.

He smiled down at her. “Come here ya little miss.” He said and licked at her nose. “Ya brother will show ya.”

Applebloom smiled and looked at her brother, then the stallions lips pressed softly against hers.

She was surprised, his lips felt soft but strong. She trusted her brother completely.

He deepened the kiss, later licking her lips. Applebloom slightly parted her lips, the stallion wrapped his frontlegs around her and pulled her up against him as he sat up.

Big Mac softly slid his tongue into her mouth, licking around, at her tongue, the roof of her mouth and then softly pulled back.

“Hows that lil’ sis?” He asked.

“Can we do it again?” She said, getting excited.

BigMac nodded and kissed her again, he rubbed her back with his hoof and then trailed it down towards her tail.

Applebloom knew he wouldn’t do anything she didn’t want, though his hoof that near her private area excited her even more, she felt a bit funny and felt herself getting a bit wet in between her hindlegs. She pulled back, their lips parted with a pop.

“BigMac? I feel funny in between my hindlegs… What’s that?” she asked.

“Well, ya are turned on a bit.” He said and sniffed the air, the scent of an excited filly filled his nose. He put her on the ground and told her to get up on fours, he nosed her tail to the side to reveal her femslit, filly sized so a bit small. Though the delicious scent that came from it was enough to make him feel aroused, his stallionhood started to show up. But first he had his sister to focus on.

He pushed his snout against her labia softly and the looked at it, it was glinstering a bit in the dim barn lights. He licked over it, lapping a little bit of the liquid off. It tasted sweet, a soft sweet taste, with a slight taste of apple.

Applebloom moaned, the licks her big brother gave her over her femslit excited her even more making her feel so very good.

Then BigMac pushed his tongue in and started to lick around, he licked at her walls, his tongue reached deeply inside of her, he lapped up her sweet liquids and searched for her clit.

As he found the clit he gently licked over it, making the filly almost jump in pleasure.

Applebloom felt like a electric shock ran through her body, but it felt so very good, her brothers warm tongue felt good inside of her.

BigMac continued working on the clit, he took it in between his lips, nibbled on it, took it in between his teeth and softly massaged it, sometimes pulling it a little very softly.

Applebloom felt the pleasure building up inside of her body. “Oooh BigMac! That feels so good!” She called out, she almost couldn’t take it anymore, she thought she’d go crazy from this great feeling.

Big Mac decided to finish and gave a soft tug on her clit, this little move was enough to give the filly her very first orgasm, that he, her big brother had given her.

Appleblooms body just seemed to spasm as the overwhelming pleasure tickled her nerves all over her body, her fluids just seemed to splash onto BigMacs face and muzzle.

The big stallion didn’t mind at all and softly pulled back, then licked her clean a bit.

Applebloom panted slightly and looked at him, then she noticed the big piece of stallionmeat hanging in between her brothers hindlegs, twenty inches of hard and big flesh. The impressive organ twitched with every move BigMac made.

“Ya ready for the real work? It might hurt a little but ah’ll be as gentle as ah can.” Big Macintosh reassured his youngest sister. She nodded and smiled as Big Mac sat up again and pulled her into his chest, facing him. He kissed her as her rubbed his stallionhood against her virgin marehood to lubricate it.

Applebloom moaned and looked her brother into his eyes, his big green beautiful eyes.

She nuzzled his chest lovingly and awaited what was going to happen next.

After a minute BigMac was done with the lubricating activity. He pulled her up with his frontlegs and positioned his horsecock in a straight line with her marehood.

He kissed her gently as he softly lowered her, with some pressure his big tip went into her tight, wet mare cavern. Applebloom moaned into the kiss and looked down, as BigMac lowered her some more she saw the inches slowly disappearing inside of her, he filled her.

Then she felt a painful pressure and a snap. She let out a painful whinny.

BigMac kissed her snout. “It’ll go over.” He whispered in her ear and lowered her again.

For a filly, he noticed she was pretty deep. He was probably about 7 inches in when he reached her end. He then pulled her back up to lower her again, he repeated the motion until his frontlegs got tired. He put her back on her hooves gently and re-entered her.

Her brothers thrusts went over her clit every time, he filled her up and as he pulled back out she felt empty, wanting him right back in. He granted her wish every time he thrusted back in, going as fast and hard as she could take.

Applebloom groaned loudly and spasmed, her tight marehood contracted her brother, squeezing his shaft and covered it with her juices. Another orgasm washed over her like a tidal wave.

Big Mac made sure his little sister could surf her orgasm as long as it lasted.

He didn’t came, he didn’t want to cum into his sister, not that he wasn’t very pleased with the sex but he had a very good control of himself.

He gently kissed her neck as he pulled out. “Oh Applebloom, ya were great.” He said. “Ya a big mare now.”

She smiled up at her brother and hugged him, he made her feel so good and so comfortable. “Thank ya BigMac. “I am finally doin’ something right.”