The Discovery

by alleyoop7

Rating: teen
Tags: Romance, Adventure, Comedy
Length: 1258

In this story, Rarity tells the girls about what Noteworthy helped her with, and some of the gurls take a liking to him, and some girls don't approve.

In this story, Rarity tells the girls about what Noteworthy helped her with, and some of the gurls take a liking to him, and some girls don't approve.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-04-01 18:37:39 UTC

The Introduction

~Fluttershy~

I wake up to the beautiful sounds of Marabelle, one of the birds. She flew in to my window and started singing, so I sang back. Bird songs are beautiful, I can't imagine anyone not liking it! "What's that? Rarity is telling a story! Oh, I love stories! Including Rarity's fashion ones, it makes her so happy." I get out of bed, and feed all the animals, do what they need me to do and head out. I fly with Marabelle, to where she tells me to go. I find myself flying to Rarity's where all the girls are. When I get there, she is telling a lovely story. "... And the dress turned out to be simply MARVELOUS! Oh, good morning dear Fluttershy." She says as I fly in. "Oh and one of my dear friends helped me out yesterday, and he WAS a big help." "Who was he?" Askes Twilight. "It was dear Noteworthy, of course." She responds. "Noteworthy? Who in tarnations is Noteworthy?" A.J. askes. "Oh, there he is now! Hello Noteworthy!" She yells as she points and a stallion. He had blue mane and blue skin, and was very handsome. But, anyone else could have him, it would be alright with me.

~AppleJack~

"....Oh, there he is now!" Says Rarity as she points to a stallion, and WOOWEE! He is quite the looker! I'd hate to have my heart broken by such a pony! I just hope no other girl likes him, CUZ HE'S MINE!

~Rainbow Dash~

Ehh, I guess he's alright. I mean, he's not the best looking. And he's OBVIOUSLY not the AWESOMEST! But by the look of some of the girls, he better stay away from us because one particular girl will NOT, I repeat NOT, fall for him. Not on my watch.

~Noteworthy~

I hear someone call my name, so I spin around to see Rarity and her pony friends. I walk over to them and, as always, Rarity is playing with her mane, not caring about anyone else. But she soon starts to talk. "This is Fluttershy-" as she says that, 'Fluttershy' hides behind her hair. "Twilight-" and 'Twilight' waves at me. "Pinkypie-" who bounces and the sound of her name, "And-"  "HOWDY! I'm Applejack, but you can call me A.J.!" She interupts as she shakes my hand violently. "You may already know PinkyPie." "Yes I do actually." I say forcing a smile, I would hate to make her sad. Anyways, while they were talking I notice something that I particularily like about a certain pony. She is beautiful. Her mane, her smile, her self. I think I fell in love, HARD.

Face the truth (Part 1)

~Rainbow~

I wake up the next morning, extra tired. I was staying up all night last night thinking of a strategy to prevent Applejack from falling in love with Noteworthy. Yes, you heard me, Applejack.  I loved her from the first day I laid eyes on her. When I decided to visit Ponyville to see Fluttershy once she moved there, she was talking (shyly as always) to a beautiful and sexy filly. i introduced myself and fell in love instanly. Going home that night I realized that I missed seeing her so much the next morning, I decided to get my own cloud near Cloudsdale and just above Ponyville. I had all those competitions just for her affection, I thought beating her would make her fall in love with me. I sigh. Nevermind about me. I'm going to have an extra long nap today, right after I go talk to AJ.

I head over to Sweet Apple Acres, where I see Apple jack, doing her usual round of bucking the trees. Off in the distance, I see Big Mac Bucking trees in the south field, where he can't here us. "Hey AJ!" I shout and trot towards her. "Hey sugarcube!" She says as she flicks back her musclular, sexy legs. "Apple Bloom is sick and Granny Smith is caring for 'er." She says, knowing what I'm about to say. We are far away from them where the also can't here us. This is the only oppertunity to tell her. BUT, lets just chat for a bit.

"Sooooo, need any help?" I say. She stops in her tracks, just about to buck a tree, and looks at me like I just told her one of Pinkie's parties weren't wild. "What?" I ask. She starts laughing her heart out, rolling around on the ground. I smirk, her laugh is so sexy. "Y-y'all?..... D-do w-work?" She manages to stammer out as she keeps on laughing. "Oh come on! I do work!" I insist. "Yea, kickin' around some clouds! Y'all ain't skilled enough ta buck all these trees here." She says back at me and folds her arms. "Oh yea? I'll show you!" I say and run over to the nearest tree. I lift my hind legs up and buck the tree but my left legs tucks in and I fall face first. I look up to see AJ with her hand over her mouth trying to hold in a laug while looking at me, and just to make things worse, all the apples from the tree fall down on top of me. Underneath the pile of apples, I can here AJ's muffled laugh coming from above. She helps me up and we start talking.

~AJ~

After Rainbow's 'incident', we start working again. Well, Ah am but Rainbow was hanging around, keeping me company. It's kinda nice havin' some filly next ta ya, talking with ya while ya working. The sun seems ta be settin, but just a little bit. "Well, Ah gotta hit ta hay Rainbow, see ya tomorrow!" I say as Ah head to the house. "Wait!" I hear her call from behind me. I turn and she runs to me. "AJ, do you have a coltfriend?" She askes. That's a awkward question. Why would she ask that? I don't know. It's a weird question, but I guess I should answer it. "No." "A........ Marefriend?" She asks again. I stop dead in my tracks. "NO! Now why are you gettin' all up in ma buisness? Is something wrong, sugarcube?" I say to her. "Sorry, just curious." She says, lieing. I can tell when people is lieing, even though I never do. "Uhh huhh..." I say. What is she hiding? Why's she keeping it from me? I mean, I thought she was ma friend..... "So... You never answered my question." She says. I snap out of my train of thought. "Oh! Right, uhh no." I say quickly. She stops me in my tracks and turns to face me. What in the hay stacks is goin on? "AppleJack," she begins. "I have loved you since the day I laid eyes on you. And I will forever more. Will you love me back?" She asks all teary- eyed. My eyes are wide and I'm sweating rain. What do I say? I don't feel the same way about her, I-I'm just not sure... I can't do this right now! Too much emotional drama! Like, seriously author? *Well, Sooooorry! I thought people would like it!* Well I don't! *Just get back to the story!* Fine. "I.. Uhh.. Huhh.." I stammer as I run into the hosue and slam the door behind me and lock it. I lean against the door, nervous sweat breaking down my skin. Maybe if I sleep on it everything will be back to normal and we could just be friends, I hope.