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A Damaged Sister

by RF and AG
Less than a month after Luna’s redemption all seems to be back to normal but Luna and Celestia are no longer the close siblings they used to be. Their relationship deteriorates while Luna tries to reconcile with her emotions.

Two weeks Luna has been in Canterlot since her redemption. Two weeks and many ponies have come to think all is back to normal even with the relatively new Princess. This is far from the truth as not all is back to normal. Back before Luna had been claimed by the Nightmare, she and Celestia had been close sisters but now they are as separated as ever. The thousand years on the moon has caused Luna to drift away and become even farther introverted than before.

With Luna trying to deal with her unstable emotions as well as trying to fit back into society and Celestia trying to make up a thousand years with Luna, can the sisters repair what has been damaged between them? Not all hardships can be overcome as easily as Celestia has believed in the past, for Luna is a mare that is more damaged than either of them realize.




This is not my first story written but it is my first MLP:FiM story so I would love to see criticism on the story but like anyone would ask, be civil.

Sad tag for future chapters when I learn how to write such scenes...

Obvious copyrights are obvious.

Teen
On Hiatus
Slice of Life
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Sad
 
PPO

9789 words: Estimated about 1 hour to read

3 Chapters:

  1. Two Weeks 2013-03-29 04:36:04 UTC
    6581
  2. A Sister's Concern 2013-04-17 15:09:20 UTC
    3086
  3. On Hiatus at the Moment 2013-07-23 23:09:07 UTC
    122