Cutie Mark Crusaders United!

by Princess Cadenza

Rating: everyone
Tags: Original Character, King Sombra, Cutie Mark Crusaders, Adventure, Princess Celestia, Main 6, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Length: 9182

The Cutie Mark Crusaders unite and try to stop the evil Electric Aspect from destroying Ponyville. But how?

The Cutie Mark Crusaders have always been pony friends forever, while crusading for their Cutie Marks together. But today, something weird happens. A villain named Electric Aspect comes to Ponyville to earn the ponies as servants, quite similar to the evil that King Sombra had done to the Crystal Empire. Electric Aspect, King Sombra's pegasus brother, must be defeated. But Princess Celestia and the Elements of Harmony have been imprisoned in a different dimension by Aspect's doing, and it's up to the Cutie Mark Crusaders to stop him. The question is: How?

Published 2013-04-04 12:50:01 UTC
Last updated 2013-04-18 06:40:48 UTC

Electric Aspect

Cutie Mark Crusaders United! Chapter One: Electric Aspect

by Princess Amazing Pony

It was a shining day in Ponyville. Sunlight shimmers from the afternoon sun reflected across the quaint, peaceful village. All of the pony villagers were out in the bright outside, going about their usual business as they did everyday. Twilight Sparkle was outside on her balcony, reading a good book. Or Rainbow Dash would be zooming through the sky, trying to attempt some moves to impress the Wonderbolts with. Pinkie Pie, of course, would be having fun making everypony's day.

Everyday seemed to be the same with Ponyville. Especially with the Cutie Mark Crusaders. They were a three-pony group of small fillies, about seven years old, and they crusaded to discover their Cutie Marks, a mark of their destinies and talents. Everyday it was the same, they kept crusading for their Cutie Marks. They always thought it was gonna stay that way.

They sometimes stopped and thought about it. If they did get their Cutie Marks, they worried they would end up getting stuck up like their school bullies, Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon. They had never gotten close to getting their Cutie Marks. Every morning, when they woke up, they always thought the same thing: I am definitely not gonna get my Cutie Mark today. What's the chance?

Today, they hoped they would earn their Cutie Marks. They did not want it to be like this: They try to crusade. They fail. They give up and decide not to be a Cutie Mark Crusader anymore. They never see each other again and they never earn their Cutie Marks.

Well, there was a small chance of that happening. The Crusaders were loyal, and they never gave up. They knew giving up was not gonna help at all. If they gave up, well, they would never get their Cutie Marks. But they knew everypony got them eventually, but they wanted their Cutie Marks N-O-W. Now. To avoid getting bullied by those stuck ups in school *cough*Diamond Tiara*cough*, they had to get their Cutie Marks no matter what.

"The official daily meeting of the Cutie Mark Crusaders shall come to order!" Scootaloo said while the three Cutie Mark Crusaders entered the Crusaders' clubhouse. Scootaloo opened a drawer and took out three red capes with their Crusaders special patch sewn on the end. The three put them on while Scootaloo ran to the front of the room.

"We should really get some new capes," said Sweetie Belle as she and Apple Bloom held up their capes. They were all torn up and scratched and were covered in dirt, dust, and other filth. Scootaloo looked at her own cape and nodded in agreement.

"So, Crusaders," Scootaloo started, "what crusades should we try today?" The three tossed their capes into the garbage can across the room.

"Snorkeling!" Sweetie started.

"Juggling!" Apple Bloom added.

"Parachuters!" Sweetie continued.

"Snow boarding!"

"Um, I was thinking more of... Well, fun things," Scootaloo replied. Sweetie and Apple Bloom exchanged looks and then back at Scootaloo. "I mean, something we like to do."

"Parachuting is fun," Sweetie Belle said. "Snorkeling is fun, too."

"Juggling and snow boarding are also fun," Apple Bloom added. "What kind of fun things were you thinking we should do?" Scootaloo thought for what seemed like an eternity to Apple Bloom and Sweetie. Scootaloo put her hoof to her chin and then grinned with a, "I just got an idea" face.

"Parachuting?" Sweetie Belle asked hopefully.

"Snow boarding?" Apple Bloom asked, also hopefully.

"No," answered Scootaloo. "How about we do both at the same time?" Sweetie Belle and Apple Bloom grinned wide. "If you like the idea, let's go!"

"CUTIE MARK CRUSADER SNOW-CHUTES, YAY!" the three cheered loudly. Applejack and Big Mac happened to be near and they heard the Crusaders' racket. Applejack and Big Mac exchanged looks.

"Ah'll go check on them, Big Mac," Applejack said. "Go tend to the corn." Applejack ran up the Crusader's clubhouse stairs and appeared at the open window.

"Oh, hello, sis!" said Apple Bloom. "What brings you here?" Applejack sighed.

"Well, me and Big Macintosh heard you guys yell, "CUTIE MARK CRUSADERS SNOW-CHUTES, YAY!" and Ah decided to ask what you guys are doin'. Ya' know Granny Smith is taking her morning nap, and me and Big Mac are trying to work. We can't work with all that noise. What was that all about?"

"Oh, us the Crusaders were planning our next crusade. We finally came up with an idea, and we got a bit too excited. Sorry about that, Applejack," explained Scootaloo.

"Yeah, sorry," Sweetie added.

"Oh, it's alright," AJ said. "Just... Next time, don't make a loud racket 'bout it. So, what is your next crusade, anyway?"

"Oh! Well, I suggested we should go snowboarding," Apple Bloom answered. Sweetie broke in.

"And then I suggested we should go parachuting!" Sweetie Belle added. Applejack winced at that idea. Apple Bloom then looked at Scootaloo.

"And I decided we should do both at the same time!" Scootaloo finished. "This is the plan: We borrow some snowboards from Mr. Boardsmith, that colt in town who sells every snowboard in Ponyville. We'll borrow some from him, then we arrive at Ms. Parachute's shop next door to Mr. Boardsmith's shop. We borrow some parachutes from Ms. Parachute's, then we head over to Snowboarding Heaven Hill to go snowboarding. We snowboard down the cliff, jump off, and activate the parachute. Then we see if we get our Cutie Marks."

"Well, Ah don't know," Applejack said unsure. "Ah mean, that sounds a bit might dangerous, don't ya' think?"

"Well, she has a point," Apple Bloom said to Scootaloo. "Snowboarding off a giant hill and then activating a parachute doesn't sound safe at all. We've never been snowboarding or parachuting. Doing both will probably break a few bones."

"Hmm, you're right," Scootaloo replied. "But I have been snowboarding before. It's awesome! It's fast..." Apple Bloom and Sweetie shivered. "It's fearsome..." Apple Bloom and Sweetie's pupils grew small. "It's scary..." Apple Bloom and Sweetie moved closer to each other, as close as they could. "I don't know anything about parachuting, but if we just give it a chance--"

"Alright," Applejack broke in. "Well, Ah'm gonna get back to work. You three just go on with your crusades. But, if you get hurt, don't blame me, got it?"

"Mm hmm," said the three crusaders.

Applejack waved goodbye and then trotted down the stairs. She walked over to Big Mac. The Crusaders shrugged and zoomed over to a chest at a corner of the room. They opened it and rummaged through it looking for spare money to rent the snowboards and parachutes with. Random things from the chest flew across the room. A football, a framed picture of Rainbow Dash, an old scrapbook of Apple Bloom at the age of two...

"Aw, horseapples. I thought I threw that away!" Apple Bloom protested. "Well, I doubt Granny Smith would let me." More things flew across the room. Teddy bear, music disk, an old chocolate bar...

"OOH, ooh, mine mine mine!!" Scootaloo said, running after the chocolate bar. Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle watched as Scootaloo hungrily bit into the chocolate bar. The orange pegasus filly made a face and spit out the chocolate. "Ugghh, so bitter!"

"No wonder!" Apple Bloom said, half laughing. "Scoots, do you know how old that chocolate bar is?!"

"Um, really old?" Scootaloo replied as she ran to get a cup of Gatorade. "Ugh, do you know how awful that aftertaste is?"

"Oh, come on, it can't be that bad," Sweetie said. She bit off the other end of the chocolate bar and made a face. She spit it out. She, too, ran for a glass of Gatorade. "Oh, oh! That... That was rotten!"

"Told you it was awful," said Scootaloo.

Apple Bloom shrugged, and rummaged through the chest more. More things came flying across the room. Another old chocolate bar (seriously?), a toy microphone, a book about herbalism, and a book about magic. Then, at the very bottom of the chest, there was a box. A small, wooden box. Apple Bloom blew the dust off it while Sweetie and Scootaloo came over to see. Bloom opened it, and there, right in that small box, was 50 bits.

"JACKPOT!" the three cheered.

"Yes! We have the money to rent snowboards and parachutes," said Apple Bloom. "Now Scoots, you have the map to the shops and Snowboarding Heaven Hill, right?"

"Sure do!" Scootaloo pulled a map from her saddle bag she had just put on. She tossed it to Bloom. Apple Bloom looked at it.

"It looks like a pretty short walk from here to the stores, but seems like miles away from Snowboarding Heaven Hill. We should hitch a ride after renting our gear."

"Well, do we have any money left over for a taxi?" Sweetie asked. "We have fifty bits. I think after we spend the bits renting our things, we'll have about two bits left. Should be enough for a ride 5 miles."

"Alright," Scootaloo said. "Apple Bloom, you carry the map in your saddle bag. I'll take the box of bits and keep it in my saddle bag. Sweetie, you go get the wagon to carry our things in after we rent them." The three nodded and packed up. Sweetie went into the next room and came out with a black and red wagon.

"Well, come on, guys!" Apple Bloom urged. "Let's go. It's noon already, if we want to get going on our crusades, we should start now."

"Can't we eat lunch first?" asked Sweetie Belle as she felt her stomach growl. Scootaloo nodded in agreement. Apple Bloom shook her head.

"Nope. We don't have any extra bits, remember?"

"Can't we just beg Applejack to feed us something?" Scootaloo asked. "I mean, you guys are practically rich with apples! And corn and things."

"Well, okay. But do you know what I would give for a banana or an orange once in a while? All my family seems to eat these days are apples and corn. Occasionally, beans."

Scootaloo and Sweetie exchanged looks. "You mean all you eat are apples and corn?"

"Yes."

"Ooh-kay. Well, let's go see if we can get some lunch before we go," Scootalo said, calmly exiting the clubhouse, followed out by Sweetie Belle and Apple Bloom.

The sun crawled up to the middle of the sky above the three as they ate lunch of apple fritters, apple fries, apples, apple salad (what the heck?!), apple pie, and apple cider. Scootaloo commented, "Wow, you were right. You really do have a lot of apples." She then whispered, "And you've proven that this really is all you eat."

"How come you always eat apples, anyway?" Sweetie asked as she bit into an apple fritter. "And corn and beans."

"Well," Apple Bloom started. "It's actually a story back. You see, when my Granny Smith was a filly, her family was poor and starving. After she discovered the zap apples for the very first time in the history of Equestria... Well, you know that story. Anyway, after she discovered the zap apples, her family fed on them for about three months after. Then they discovered that regular apple trees had grown nearby."

"Go on," Scootaloo said, waving her hoof in the air about two inches above the table. "This is getting interesting... Sorta." Apple Bloom and Sweetie giggled.

"So anyway, they had discovered regular apple trees had grown nearby. They went to go see them, and maybe take an apple from it to get the seeds and grow their very own trees. They took an apple from the tree and cut it open, and carefully took the seeds out. They planted them in their small yard where the zap apple trees used to be before they grew dead." Apple Bloom took a bite of apple salad. "So they waited awhile, hoping the apple trees would grow in time before they starved.

"Eventually, the apple trees grew, which sprung joy into the whole family. They bucked all the apple trees, one by one, buckets to the fifties piled up around their small house. They had soon found corn and decided to grow corn themselves. They did. Beans, well, the beans are from the Everfree forest. That's why we only have them once in a while." Scootaloo and Sweetie shivered. "But then they could not grow any more food besides those. And they could not buy any other foods, either, because they were very very low on bits and could not afford buying food for the whole family.

"To today, we still eat nothing but apples and corn. We can afford other foods once in a while, but Applejack and Big Mac say that, quote, 'we don't need to waste our bits for food if we have the largest supply of apples and corn than the whole rest of Equestria.', unquote. I totally hate this rule, but it's there."

"Wow!" Scootaloo said.

"Next time we can have lunch at my place, if you want, Bloom," Sweetie offered. "We don't just eat apples and corn. We have awesome food like lasagne, real salad..." Apple Bloom poked at her apple salad. "Pizza..."

"PIZZA!" yelled Scootaloo. Sweetie shot the pegasus filly a glare. Scootaloo smiled sheepishly. "Heh, sorry."

"What is this, 'pizza'?" Bloom asked. The other two fillies stared blankly at her. "What? I've never had pizza before, and probably never will."

"I'll show you maybe tomorrow, if you want," offered Sweetie. "Well, if I can convince Rarity to let my two bestest friends have lunch with me."

"Sounds fine to me," said Scootaloo. "Now, come on! We don't want to be late for our crusade, do we?"

"Of course not!" Bloom said.

"Well, come on!"

The three exited the apple farm. Walking out of the entrance, Scootaloo hopped out instead, singing "Pizza! Pizza! Pizza!" over and over again. Sweetie Belle and Apple Bloom sighed.

"What is so great about this 'pizza', anyway?" asked Apple Bloom. "'Cause Scoot's sure making it sound so good."

"Oh, well, pizza IS good!" Sweetie answered, while Scootaloo kept chanting, "Pizza! Pizza! Pizza!" Sweetie shot Scootaloo another glare. Scootaloo stopped and frowned, then smiled again while Sweetie continued. "Anyway, pizza is better than you think it is. It's cheesy, crispy, mouth-watering..."

"She's right," Scootaloo said when Sweetie finished. "Pizza is the best thing you'll ever eat by FAR! Rarity's is the BEST!"

"Ha, I have to agree with Scootaloo," Sweetie continued. "Pizza is our favorite food, and I'm sure you'll like it. Especially Rarity's."

"Uh huh," replied Apple Bloom. "Hey Scootaloo, you did bring your scooter to the clubhouse, didn't you?" Scootaloo nodded and ran over to her shiny new red scooter parked in front of the Crusaders' clubhouse. "Ya didn't tell us ya got a new scooter!"

"Oh, well... I, uh, just got it yesterday."

"Sure... Anyway, Sweetie, help me attach the item wagon to the scooter. Then go get the other wagon and help me attach that to this wagon."

"On it!" Sweetie replied. She and Apple Bloom jiggled a chain and attached it to Scootaloo's scooter. They pulled it so that it held onto the scooter tightly. They asked Scootaloo to drive her scooter to see if it worked. It did, so then Sweetie was asked to get the other wagon.

"Sweetie, go get the other wagon please!" Apple Bloom said. Sweetie nodded and ran into the clubhouse. She rummaged through a big closet and found a wagon that looked just like the other one, so she pulled it out of the clubhouse and brought it over to Bloom. They attached it to the other wagon, and asked Scootaloo to drive the scooter the wagons were holding on to. Then Scootaloo was asked to drive it again with Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle in it, to their surprise the scooter was not held back and she drove around the farm for a minute before arriving back at the clubhouse.

"This scooter cost 80 bits," said Scootaloo. "My whole allowance. Would be a shame if anything happened to it."

"Why did it cost so much?" asked Sweetie.

"This scooter is not the average scooter you see in Equestria. This is the Scooter Deluxe Extra-Horsepower. It is more faster than any other scooter you have seen in your seven year old life, even though there are more powerful scooters. This can also pull heavier objects and more things than the average scooter would. Plus, it will never rust! Or break down that easily. It's my most prized possession, and I would hate if anything happened to it."

"No wonder it pulled the wagons that easily!" Apple Bloom said. "No scooter I know besides yours could pull two or three wagons with objects or ponies in them."

"Actually, two or three is just the tip or the iceberg. It can pull an average of forty wagons with items or ponies in each. The best scooter in Ponyville!"

"Wow!" exclaimed Sweetie Belle and Bloom.

"Now come on, we gotta go, right?" Sweetie said. "Everypony got their things?"

"Yup!"

"Let's get going on the road!"

At Snowboarding Heaven Hill...

"Wow, I never realized it costs so much to rent three snowboards and parachutes," Apple Bloom said as they climbed up the steep hill.

"Yeah!" Scootaloo agreed. "We only have one bit left. Cost forty-nine bits total for the three parachutes, three snowboards, and the five-mile taxi ride."

"Good thing they actually let you take your scooter into the taxi," Sweetie commented. "I mean, Mr. Taxihood said he's let ponies take worse things onto the taxi. Like, um, giant boxes in the twenties, and some priceless things like ancient paintings and things that were probably gonna get stolen."

"Well, come ON, guys! We ain't got all day!" Scootaloo urged and readied her snowboard as she reached the top of the hill, and then readied the parachute. Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle did the same. "One... Two... Three... GO!!!"

The three raced down, going at about 3 miles per hour, wind blowing in their face. It had felt good, the adrenaline kicking in as they went faster. Once they saw the ground near, they let go of the snowboards and activated the parachutes. But the thing is, they didn't know HOW to use parachutes. So they ended up crashing straight into the snow on the ground, face first. The three moaned in pain, but instantly forgot about it when they remembered why they were here. They shook the snow off of themselves, and they eagerly checked their flanks.

BLANK. BLANK. BLANK.

The three groaned as if to tell the world they had just struck out on the opportunity to get their Cutie Marks. Not again! The Cutie Mark Crusaders were SURE this was gonna get their Cutie Marks, but it didn't. They had struck out again. they felt like... Like...

Like the Striking Out Crusaders. They always seemed to be striking out on every Crusade they had tried for their Cutie Marks. It never, ever worked. Never.

At Carousel Boutique the following day...

"Why, of course you can ask your friends over for lunch!" said Rarity after Sweetie had asked her if the Crusaders could come over.

"YAY!" Sweetie shouted. She ran outside where Apple Bloom and Scootaloo were waiting. "She said yes, guys!"

"HOORAY!" shouted the three. They ran inside.

"Sis?" Sweetie asked. "Can we have pizza for lunch today?"

"Um, why pizza?" Rarity responded, very baffled.

"Because Apple Bloom here is only allowed to eat apples and corn. Occasionally other things, but rare. So we could show her some of the things us ponies like to eat that aren't fruits and vegetables. Er... You do have pizza, do you?"

"Well, I don't think so. I probably have some pizza dough in the refrigerator that I can bake into pizza." Rarity walked over to the refrigerator and levitated the door open. She let out an, "Aha!" which sprung hope into the Crusaders. Rarity levitated a plastic box full of pizza dough. "We can have pizza, if you'd let me make it for thirty minutes."

"Okay!" said the three. All of a sudden, Twilight Sparkle came bursting through the door. "Twilight?"

"Twilight?" Rarity said. "Whatever are you here for? Carousel Boutique is not open for another--"

"Never mind that, Rarity," Twilight replied. "Princess Celestia needs our help. She sent me a letter, saying she needs us in Canterlot Castle for an important emergency." Pinkie Pie, Applejack, Rainbow Dash, and Fluttershy were right behind Twilight.

"Ohh, well, sorry Crusaders. Lunch cannot be here today," Rarity told the Crusaders. The three "aww"ed and climbed back into the wagon while Scootaloo drove away. The Mane Six watched as they drove away in the distance.

"We need to get to Canterlot," Twilight said strongly. "Come on, girls."

They ran over to the train station to catch the Canterlot Express. They caught the train and quickly got on it. Twilight quaked in fear as she thought of the possibilities Princess Celestia wanted the Elements of Harmony there for. Had old foes come back? Had the vamponies taken over Equestria? (Yeah, right.) Had the Flame Ponies returned? Twilight knew SOMETHING had returned.

Twilight sighed and looked out the window at the mountains. Rainbow Dash happened to see Twilight in gloom, so she stopped by and asked, "What's wrong, Twi?"

"Oh..." Twilight started. "Well, suppose some other villains have taken over Equestria again. I mean, it sounds weird, though, because we deafeated all those. If old foes like Discord or Nightmare Moon came back, well, that actually wouldn't be possible. Discord walks free, reformed, using his magic for the good instead of the evil. Nightmare Moon has transformed into a nicer being as well, the Princess of the Night. Princess Luna. Maybe the vamponies have come to haunt Equestria. Not possible, but if it was, Princess Luna would command them to stop. And the Flame Ponies certainly aren't back. If they were, Fireflight would be able to take care of that herself. What would be wrong now?"

"Hmm..."

The train arrived in Canterlot. The ponies got off, Twilight still in fear, stomach getting all excited. She calmly walked up to the Canterlot Castle entrance, followed by her friends. They got past the guards and made their way through the halls and into Princess Celestia's stained glass room. The Princess looked at them with a worried look on her face.

"You said you wanted us here, Princess?" Twilight asked with a worried look on her face, too.

"Yes," said Princess Celestia. "And it's very important. A foe has returned."

"I knew it..." Twilight said.

"Not a foe any of you know, I'm sure. As you know, Nightmare Moon has transformed into a nicer being, my sister, Princess Luna. Also, Discord is free, reformed. Ready to use his magic for good of the ponies instead of evil. The Changelings and their Queen have been blasted FAR, far, from Equestria. And, or course, King Sombra is shadowed and banished to the Arctic after trying to rule the Crystal Empire. But this is a new foe."

"A... Another one?" Twilight mumbled. The ponies listened.

"A pegasus named Electric Aspect. You see, he is King Sombra's brother. A thousand years ago, when King Sombra was banished to the Arctic, he cast a spell on the Crystal Empire that vanished it for a thousand years. Electric Aspect earned the ponies of the rest of Equestria as servants. It was a dark time. He even banished me and Luna to another dimension with no way out. We were trapped! Of course, an Alicorn filly named Princess Silver Wings created a new spell to get us out."

"What happened next?"

"She cast it to see if it worked. It teleported me and Luna back to home, and not only that, but turned Aspect to lightning and thunder and banished him to the Arctic along with Sombra. The spell has been lost for a very long time, we can't seem to find it in the Canterlot Archives. To today, Aspect is named as "King Aspect", for that was what the ponies of Equestria had had to call him while he ruled Equestria."

"Wait, so... So he has... Returned?" Twilight gulped.

"Yes."

Princess Celestia gasped and rushed to the window. Out there she saw yellow and blackish skies, brown and ugly grass, strong wind blowing all sorts of things across the landscape, and lightning and thunder.

Uh oh.

The Elements of Harmony came over to see what was wrong. They had realized that Celestia knew what was happening, and now in the lightning, they could see the face of a male pegasus that looked a lot like a twin of Sombra. Ohh no...

"This is a surprise," said the face of the lightning pony. "So we meet again, Celestia."

"Electric Aspect," Princess Celestia growled back. "You know you won't gain Equestria as yours again, right? This Equestria is not the Equestria you remember, it has changed. We have more powerful ponies that could banish you back to the Arctic whenever they wanted to. A lot. Don't even think--"

"I know!" said Aspect. A bolt of lightning shot through a stained glass picture of Princess Silver Wings defeating Electric Aspect. The stained glass bits flew all over the floor. The ponies gasped. The burnt area where the bolt had hit last fogged up into storm cloud, and grew into a bright light. The light grew dead, revealing a pegasus that looked just like King Sombra, except wings instead of a horn, and also metalic green and steel silver than red, black, and gray. Small bolts of electricity always seemed to dance around his legs, hooves, and shadowy hair.

"I definately know you have more powerful ponies than when I was here last," Aspect continued. "I understand that. But you see, Sombra's job and my job is to rule Equestria. And we won't stop until we do. So of course, we have to. No way any measly tiny pack of ponies are gonna stop big-time kings!"

"And just how are you gonna do that?!" Celestia snapped back.

"Well, I have to banish you from Equestria first. And that means off into the dimension of nothing!"

Green magic engulfed all seven ponies, with touches of red joining in. That must be Sombra's magic kicking in, too! Symbols of the ponies' elements appeared above them, along with a picture of the sun, and they fell to pieces as the light grew brighter around the ponies. The light exploded into the ground. Sparks fell onto the floor.

"Job well done," Aspect muttered to himself as he grinned. Sombra appeared in the spot the ponies had vanished in, also grinning. They ran out of the Canterlot Castle to start ruling Equestria.

No way this is gonna fail! thought Aspect and Sombra. No way.

Back in Ponyville...

"Hey, wait a minute! Why is the sky so dark like that?!" Apple Bloom exclaimed.

"Yeah, that is weird!" Scootaloo joined in. "It's not supposed to storm until Friday."

"We need to figure this out!" Sweetie Belle chimed it. "Maybe this will get us our Cutie Marks! Problem solving!"

"CUTIE MARK CRUSADERS UNITED!"

Sooner is Better

Cutie Mark Crusaders United! Chapter Two: Sooner is Better

by Princess Amazing Pony

Roseluck proudly and happily watered her roses, sprinkles of water dropping onto the red flowers. She did not only sell roses; she sold daisies and forget-me-nots, but the roses were her most popular. As the last rose was watered, Roseluck noticed a change in the sky. It turned very dark.

"Wait, huh?!" exclaimed Roseluck. "How-- It's not supposed to storm until Friday!"

Raindrops by the thousands poured onto the village, lightning and loud thunder shortly after. Roseluck watched as the ponies walking down the streets ran everywhere for shelter, confused and cold as they were. Roseluck sighed and switched her "OPEN" sign to "CLOSED" and ran to find shelter, too. She ran for the nearest building, Sugar Cube Corner, to find Mr. and Mrs. Cake inside making hot cocoa.

"Hello, Mr. and Mrs. Cake," said Roseluck. "How are you?"

"Hello, Roseluck," said Mr. Cake. "We were on our way to the markets on Mane Street until it started pouring rain unexpectedly. I heard it was not supposed to rain until Friday, two days from now."

"I know," Roseluck replied. "Why isn't Rainbow Dash handling this?!"

"Well, she and the rest of the Elements of Harmony have been called to a meeting in Canterlot with Princess Celestia," Mrs. Cake answered. "But they should have been back about half an hour ago. Pinkie Pie, being an Element of Harmony, had to be there too. She should have been back thirty minutes ago when we opened the bakery. It's been a mess without her helping, so we had to close it."

"We were getting worried," added Mr. Cake. "We tried to write to her, but she doesn't appear to have seen it yet. Normally, she would have written back by now. I would went to Canterlot myself, but it appears the next Canterlot Express is not for about three or four hours, but by then she should be back."

"Wow," Roseluck said. "How much chaos is around Ponyville when the Elements of Harmony are gone? I can name quite a few bits."

"Well, until the storm clears up, you can stay with us if you like," Mrs. Cake offered. Roseluck smiled and nodded. "You're welcome to some cocoa."

Cheerilee finished lesson planning for Ponyville Elementary for the following day. She lay out textbooks of The Pony Body and Fancy Mathematics for Mules on each desk. She walked out the school house and shut the door. She realized it was pouring rain, totally unexpectedly.

Lightning hit the school house, causing it to flame and then burn to a crisp as Cheerilee watched in horror, jaw practically hitting the ground. Thunder boomed and echoed in the distance as Cheerilee sighed and looked at the remains of the school house, some was left, but most of the school house burned, singed, burnt to a crisp, caught flame from the powerful lightning bolt.

Thunder struck again. Cheerilee sighed again and swore, "Aw, fiddlesticks." She now had to rebuild the school house, which wasn't gonna be easy. Cheerilee wasn't totally ticked at the fact the school house was 76% burned, because the items, books and everything survived the flame.

She thought, Forget the school house, I need to find safe shelter before I get burnt to a crisp, too!

Cheerilee saw the strong wind was picking up, blowing rain and cold air into the pony's face. The leaves on every tree had fallen off from the wind, from Cheerilee's view Ponyville was in a poor state. Things were burnt, destroyed, vanished. Ponies scrambled and scurried around from all over to find safe shelter from the storm.

Ponyville...

Lyra and Bon Bon exited their small house in Ponyville, only to find that a storm was brewing, strong wind picked up, striking cold into the ponies. They shivered as they watched lightning strike nearby plants and trees, causing them to flame. Thunder roared as the lightning hit again, to a nearby house, causing it to flame too.

Vinyl Scratch and Octavia scurried out of the flaming house in a hurry, surprised how their house had caught on fire when being struck by a simple lightning bolt. The ran over to Lyra and Bon Bon. Vinyl said, "Run for your lives! You're not safe anywhere!"

Lyra and Bon Bon exchanged looks. Then, unexpectedly, the flame from the house spread, coming toward the four ponies. They all yelped and ran as far as their four hooves could carry them. They ran to the only place they could: Away from Ponyville. They stopped at the "Welcome to Ponyville! Population: 50" sign. The flame did not come this far, but the wind picked up and the rain seemed to pour harder.

Flame from the village was still visible from the eyes of the ponies, but faint as the flame died out a little bit. Just a LITTLE bit.

The whole town was doomed. Its fate was in question. Nopony was brave enough to stop this chaos, nopony. Twilight Sparkle and the Elements of Harmony were in Canterlot. Princess Celestia certainly couldn't visit Ponyville. Nopony could stop the whole town from burning down.

Without the Elements of Harmony, nothing seemed possible.

The Cutie Mark Crusaders, wet and cold, continued their investigation on why the whole town was doomed. What was going on? The Cutie Mark Crusaders wanted to find out what everypony had not known. Nothing, absolutely nothing, was gonna stop them from figuring this out.

The Crusaders walked around, heads held down so that they didn't get too wet. They walked through puddles, watching as lightning struck again and made buildings catch on fire. They watched as the wind blew all the leaves off of trees and bushes.

"Who is that?!" Scootaloo exclaimed. Before them stood Electric Aspect, turned away from them. His wings lit up a yellow and red, and more lightning hit Ponyville. He turned around.

"Um, hello...?" Apple Bloom said. King Aspect looked at them suspiciously and then shrugged.

"Some more baby fillies," said Aspect. "Just leave them, Aspect. Just leave them." He flew off into the distance, wings still lighting up that same aura, making it rain harder, wind more stronger.

"HEY! YOU DON'T CALL US BABIES!" Scootaloo called out to Aspect.

"I bet he's the one behind all this!" said Sweetie Belle.

"We should stop him!" Apple Bloom said.

"Yeah!" Scootaloo agreed.

"Well, sooner is better!" Sweetie said. "Let's plan on stopping him!"

"CUTIE MARK CRUSADER VILLAIN STOPPERS, YAY!"

Princess Celestia got up on her four legs, dizzy and unsure what had just happened. She found herself laying on the ground, got up, and recognized where she was; she knew this place, a place she had found being trapped in a long time ago...

King Aspect's prison for the Elements of Harmony.

This wasn't a jail of some sort, it was another dimension. Far, far away from Equestria. This dimension seemed to be nothing, really, except a giant space with no gravity. It looked just like space; it was all dark, there were stars everywhere, no gravity... Whatever the ponies seemed to walk on was nothing.

The other Elements got up and looked around confused and baffled. Twilight Sparkle rubbed her eyes to make sure she was not dreaming. She found out she wasn't.

"Where are we, Princess?" Applejack asked as the princess looked around.

"Yeah, I don't remember this place," Rainbow added.

"This isn't Canterlot Castle, is it?" Twilight said.

"This is the prison I was telling you about," said Celestia. "The dimension Electric Aspect had imprisoned my sister and I in. He doesn't want us to mess everything up back in Equestria,  so he sent us here."

"Mess everything up?" Rarity asked. "We'd never mess anything up, would we?"

"He knows if we were there," Princess Celestia answered. "we'd mess up his plan to take over Equestria. For what I know, there's a high chance he's going for Ponyville first."

Fluttershy shuffled her hooves, while floating in the air. She was extra nervous when she was around the Princess.

"Then how do we get out?" asked Fluttershy.

"I don't think it's possible," said the Princess. "Not unless somepony back in Equestria knows where we are and casts a spell to get us back. But what kind of pony would be able to to that?"

"Princess Luna?" Pinkie Pie asked. "Or Princess Cadence? Somepony must know we're gone, or--" Pinkie's eyes teared up for a bit. "Everypony must be having fun without us!" Pinkie calmed down for a bit.

"I don't think Luna is awake yet," Princess Celestia replied. "She doesn't wake up until midnight. And as for Cadence..." Celestia paused for a moment before speaking again. "Well, Aspect may have freed King Sombra again, which is very bad for the Crystal Empire. I don't think Cadence even has time to free us, and even if she did, she wouldn't even know we're gone."

"But what about Ponyville?" said Twilight. "What might the ponies be going through there?"

Back at Sugar Cube Corner...

Roseluck sipped her cocoa as she read the weekly magazine, Horseshoes. Mr. and Mrs. Cake frantically checked their mailbox outside, waiting for a letter from Pinkie Pie and the Elements of Harmony. No luck was found, and they'd been waiting by the mailbox for almost twenty minutes.

Mr. and Mrs. Cake went inside Sugar Cube Corner, sopping wet, shivering like madness. Roseluck tried not to laugh, but she could barely stop herself. The Cakes shook all the water off, Roseluck griped a little as some water droplets splashed onto her face.

That's what you get for laughing at them, Roseluck, Roseluck thought.

"Oops," Mr. Cake said, half smiling. He thought the same thing: That's what you get for laughing at us!

"Uh huh," said Roseluck, frowning.

"No, really."

"Sure..."

At Ponyville Elementary...

Cheerilee looked from the next door house at the remains of Ponyville Elementary and frowned. That was thousands of bits that had been put into that one school house, and it was all gone. Another thousand bits to go. The leaves from the trees had turn brown and red, and they littered all over the yard of the school house.

The rain poured even harder, if it even seemed possible. The lightning continued striking things and setting them on fire, with the "boom" that sounded from the thunder. There were occasional times when the pouring softened a little.

Cheerilee didn't know how this storm had lasting so long, and how it kept pouring rain hard without running out of rain. And she didn't know how lightning could be as powerful as this.

But Cheerilee didn't know who was behind it and what was gonna happen next. Nopony knew besides the Cutie Mark Crusaders.

Around the borders of Ponyville...

Lyra, Bon Bon, Vinyl Scratch, and Octavia were still standing at the "Welcome to Ponyville" sign, getting rained on hard. Lightning still struck, but not near them. The safest course of action would be to stay where they were and run if any fire or dangerous things came near them.

What had happened to Ponyville, they did not know. Not even in the history of Equestria had there been a storm this big, something strange was going on, and they wanted to know.

"I bet Discord or or someone has been messing with Ponyville again," Lyra said.

"Nuh uh!" argued Vinyl. "I bet that that griffon with anger issues named Gilda is trying to get her revenge on us. Rainbow Dash said Gilda usually spends most of her time in the sky, arranging weather patterns like Dash herself does."

"I bet it's Trixie Lulamoon!" Bon Bon argued. "Remember what happened last time? All of Ponyville was destroyed and discorded because Trixie had some sort of powerful amulet on her neck!"

"I bet it's King Sombra, that king who tried to take over the Crystal Empire Twilight told us about!" Octavia joined in. "I mean, first he tried to take over the Crystal Empire and lost. I bet he's came back to get Ponyville instead!"

The ponies argued and argued, which made Lyra feel bad inside.

Oh, Celestia, please! thought Lyra. Please, help us! This is tearing everypony apart...

At the Cutie Mark Crusaders' clubhouse...

"Okay, so we know that that weird pegasus is causing all this chaos," Apple Bloom started. "and we need to stop him. Soo... any plans?"

"Uh, no," Scootaloo said.

"No, not really..." Sweetie Belle said. "Ooh, wait, I have an idea! How about we get the Elements of Harmony to defeat him?"

"Actually, they're in Canterlot," replied Scootaloo.

"And if THEY defeated him, we would never get our Cutie Marks!" said Apple Bloom.

"Oh, yeah..." Sweetie said. "But HOW are we gonna drive off that pegasus? We have no Elements of Harmony or anything like that. And how can we even have any at all if we don't have our Cutie Marks?"

"Hmm, yeah, you have a point there..." Apple Bloom replied.

"Why can't we just activate the Elements of Harmony ourselves?" Scootaloo asked.

"Well, we don't even know where the Elements of Harmony are," Sweetie replied. "And even if we did, we wouldn't be able to activate them anyway."

"Why not?" asked Scootaloo.

"Only Twilight Sparkle and her friends can activate them. If we even could activate them, how would we know HOW to activate the Elements?"

"We could ask Princess Celestia," Apple Bloom said.

"No, we couldn't. First of, we can't bother the Princess. You might have to book for months before you can see her. Second, well, she probably wouldn't tell us or let us since it's only Twilight Sparkle's job to activate the Elements."

"Well, can't we just ask Twilight or her friends if they could ask Princess Celestia to help us?" Scootaloo asked.

The three exchanged looks. This might be a good idea.

"CUTIE MARK CRUSADER VILLAIN STOPPERS A-GO!"

Princess Celestia paced back and forth, thinking of a plan on how to get out. The others, on the other hand, were playing a relaxing game of Ponopoly that Pinkie Pie had, for some reason, brought in her saddle bag. Twilight was not.

"Come on, Princess, there's got to be a way," Twilight urged Princess Celestia.

"I'm sure of that, Twilight," said Princess Celestia. "But it seems there isn't. The last time I was here, nopony even knew I was gone until Princess Silver Wings noticed and spent days making a spell to get us out."

"But Princess Silver Wings isn't around anymore."

"Exactly. This time, we may be staying here for all eternity." Oh, no.

Electric Aspect chuckled as he forced lightning to hit another house and set it on fire. The flame spread around the area, also spreading through Aspect as well. He was immune to fire, being a powerful being. Aspect flew off and landed on a tree which had lost all its leaves from the strong wind.

King Aspect watched as King Sombra teleported to atop of the tree and next to him.

"I'm gonna go... See if the Crystal Empire is near," said Sombra, grinning.

"Fine with me," Aspect replied. "In the meantime, I'm gonna be making a few more changes to my new village. I really have been practicing my pegasus magic."

"See ya," Sombra said and waved good-bye. He teleported off of the tree and onto the ground.

Sombra imagined the Crystal Empire's crystalline streets, ponies sparkling from head to hooves, cobbled paths, the Crystal Castle, and... Princess Cadence. He felt his magic working, that familiar tingle in his horn, the aura engulfing his body, and the light growing brighter around him. In a flash, he appeared at the Crystal Empire's entrance.

This is gonna be awesome! thought Sombra. He felt his magic working as black, sharp crystals sprouted and formed across the crystalline land, the black crystal spreading throughout the whole empire. Everything did not even seem crystalline now, thanks to Sombra's magic.

Princess Cadence, in the Crystal Castle, glanced outside and her heart just about stopped when she saw who was at the entrance of the Empire.

The Cutie Mark Crusaders, still at their clubhouse meeting, have just came up with an idea.

"Scootaloo, you go see Rainbow Dash and tell her about the plan!" said Apple Bloom. "Sweetie, you go tell Rarity about our plan, and I'll go tell Applejack about it. Go!"

Apple Bloom ran over to the barn where Applejack was supposed to be. Apple Bloom walked through the whole barn, calling out Applejack's name, but the orange mare seemed to be nowhere in sight. Apple Bloom was certain Applejack would be back from her meeting by now, but she wasn't.

Apple Bloom, concerned, ran around the farm to find Big Mac harvesting corn for supper. Big Mac turned around to see Apple Bloom with a concerned face.

"Big brother," said Apple Bloom, "Applejack isn't here. She should have been back here by now, but apparently she isn't."

"Ee-yup," replied Big Mac.

"And I was becoming concerned," Apple Bloom continued. "So maybe you have a clue to where she is?"

"Ee-nope," answered Big Mac.

"Oh, okay. Thanks for helping, anyway." Apple Bloom glanced at the cluds above. "Why are you harvesting corn in the rain, anyway?"

"The corn gets washed off in the rain, so I thought it would be good to harvest them while they got washed off."

"Mhm. Well, see ya!"

"Rarity?" Sweetie Belle called out as she entered Carousel Boutique. "Rarity? Rarity!" Sweetie walked around Carousel Boutique, looking for her sister. The strong wind entered the Boutique, forcing paper, dress designs, thread, and a ton of Rarity's things around the floor. Sweetie shut the door and found the floor was wet.

She told herself she would mop it up later and she continued looking for her sister. She opened every door in the Boutique, but Rarity was not in sight. Rarity, of course, did not leave her Boutique when it was stormy out, for she worried her hair would get messed up.

Sweetie assured herself she would find Rarity, and when she did, she would tell her about the Crusaders' plan. But Rarity was not found anywhere in the house.

Carousel Boutique was never empty anymore, Rarity had let Sweetie move in with her a few months ago. When Rarity was gone, Sweetie was usually there. When Sweetie was gone, well, Rarity was there most of the time.

"Something isn't right," said Sweetie as she knocked on the bathroom door. Nopony was in there. Sweetie Belle sighed and exited the Boutique and walked back over to the Cutie Mark Crusaders' clubhouse.

Scootaloo spead her wings to try and fly up to Rainbow Dash's cloud house. Scootaloo's flying had gotten better ever since the Cutie Mark Crusaders had met. Scootaloo made it to Dash's house and knocked on her door.

"Rainbow Dash?" Scootaloo said. "You in there?" No answer. "Huh."

Scootaloo opened the door to see if Rainbow was home, and she wasn't. Scootaloo looked around the house, all over, in the kitchen, bedroom, guest room, storage room, all of Rainbow's rooms. Dash was not there.

"Rainbow Dash? Where'd you go?"

Scootaloo had no luck in finding Rainbow Dash, so she exited the cloud house and hopped on down to the ground, getting rained on even harder. She ran towards the Crusaders' clubhouse in the distance.

Twilight Sparkle looked at Princess Celestia. She looked back at Twilight.

"Princess," said Twilight. "What do we do now? What can we do while we're gone?"

"I'm not sure," said Princess Celestia. "Last time I was trapped here, Luna and I just-- Well, we didn't do anything, really. We just kind of... Sat here, catching up with our thoughts."

"So you mean you didn't really do anything while you were here last?"

"Not really. Mostly we either sat here to catch up with our thoughts or rest. We, of course, are in the dimension of nothing. We can't do anything, we can do nothing."

"Well, if it weren't for Pinkie--" Twilight pointed to Pinkie Pie, still playing Ponopoly with the rest of the gang-- "If it weren't for Pinkie, we would be bored out of our minds. She brought all sorts of fun stuff."

"Like ONE board game."

"Ponopoly's fun! And we're lucky we have anything entertaining to do, if it wasn't for her we would probably just be sitting here for all eternity."

"Twilight, we have other things to worry about other than Ponopoly. First of, we have no clue what's going on back in Equestria. We cannot be there to save them, so we must hope that somepony back in Equestria knows we're gone and get us back somehow."

"Well, you have a point. Eventually somepony's gonna notice that we're gone, and news will spread around Equestria and everypony will pitch in to help."

Electric Aspect's wings lit up that same aura, resulting in more rain, lightning and thunder. He chuckled as he forced lightning to hit right next to all the ponies scrambling all over, trying to find shelter. Ponyville was in a very poor state.

He flew around, trying to find more pieces of Ponyville to invade before trying to earn the ponies as servants, as his own, just the way Sombra had corrupted the Crystal Empire a while back. He grinned wide as the ponies tripped and scurried to their homes, or other shelter if theirs had been burnt or destroyed in any way.

Sombra, at the Crystal Empire, entered the Empire and was soon met by Princess Cadence.

"What do you think you're doing here, Sombra?" Cadance asked in a tone of displeasement. "I thought you were gone. Even if you have a logical reason... No use in trying to corrupt the Empire." Cadance looked around at the dark crystals forming on the ground and at the yellow sky. "I see you already have."

"I must get my revenge," said Sombra. Cadance's horn lit up, ready to blast at Sombra. "for that corrupting the Empire is my job. Besides, even your measly little "Crystal Heart" (blaggh) is not even gonna stop me! I have back ups."

"Oh yeah?" Cadance's horn aura faded. "What kind of back ups?"

"My brother," said Sombra, grinning. Cadance's face turned from a defensive face to a baffled one.

"You have a brother?"

"Only the most powerful ever. He's basically an Alicorn. He can fly and do magic at the same time!" Cadance stared blankly at Sombra. "No use in trying to defeat me! If you at least try to, he'll know and back up me."

"Oh... Ah..." Cadance, at first, thought there really was no use. But maybe Sombra was kidding. Maybe he just said that so Cadance really wouldn't try to defeat him and victory would be his. Cadance's horn lit up blue aura and blasted at Sombra hard. Sombra laughed as electric sparks blasted out of his own body and threw away the aura Cadance blasted at him.

"I told you." Cadance stared, mouth wide. "I told you!"

But what was the use in giving up there? Cadance flew quickly over to the Crystal Heart as Sombra watched and grinned evilly. The Crystal Heart lit up Cadance's aura and spun around quickly, blasting a rainbow aura across the Empire. The blast was strong enough to blast away all of the black crystals and turn the yellow sky back to robin's egg blue.

But this time, Sombra was immune to the Crystal Heart.

"But... But... That's not even POSSIBLE!" Cadance shouted. "The Crystal Heart worked last time, but not THIS time! What the heck! Holy Celestia! That's not even..." Cadance paced back and forth, thinking of something that would get Sombra out of the Crystal Empire for good.

"Ha ha ha! I told you it wouldn't work!" Sombra boasted, grinning wide and evilly. "I really AM armed this time! Nothing can stop me!!!!!"

Gulp.

The Cutie Mark Crusaders gathered around the clubhouse table, discussing what happened.

"When I went to the barn, Applejack wasn't there!" Apple Bloom started, only to be looked at by Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle.

"And when I went to Carousel Boutique, Rarity wasn't there!" Sweetie Belle added. "What a funny coincidence! Almost too weird. I thought the Elements of Harmony bearers would be back home by now from the meeting. It's been hours, and some weird pegasus with freaky magic is ruining Ponyville!"

"You know, it's such a crazy coincidence," said Scootaloo, "because the same thing happened to me. I was checking every cloud, even Rainbow Dash's house, and I couldn't find Rainbow Dash herself! I called out her name all over the place, and somehow I couldn't find her. What happened?"

The Cutie Mark Crusaders shrugged. Apple Bloom stared out the window at the rain pouring heavily down on the village, followed by the "enchanted" lightning and thunder. "I don't think anything bad's happened to them, though. The train's probably late. Let's just cope with this storm until the Element bearers get back," said Apple Bloom.

"Yeah, 'cause it's a crime to be messing with weather patterns and such," Scootaloo said. "Plus, he's using weird lightning to burn down houses and trees and things. That's two crimes. Two Ponyville laws broken."

"I bet that the storm is just the tip of the iceberg," Sweetie added to the conversation. "I bet he's trying to invade Ponyville, so he's keeping us indoors and letting us have no fun and panic and such so that we would warm us up for some really evil thing he's trying to do."

"Yeah, that kind of makes sense," Scootaloo said. "I mean, it's clever but dirty. He probably has something to do with the Element bearers being gone." Sweetie and Apple Bloom exchanged looks.

"That makes sense, Scoots," Apple Bloom said. "I mean, it's not normal for the Canterlot Express being late. And it's unusual for the Element bearers being gone for almost six hours in a row. Something odd or evil must have happened to them."

"Yeah, nothing like that has happened before," said Sweetie. "I've never even seen that pegasus in Ponyville before in all my life, and here he's just ruining it. He randomly comes into Ponyville and decides to shatter it into pieces."

"Can't the Mayor do something?" asked Scootaloo.

"The Mayor is too *cough cough* scared to even do anything about it," Apple Bloom answered. "I saw her shut the door to Town Hall and hide in there with a worried look on her face. I don't know why she even bothered, since that pegasus could burn it down in a jiffy if he wanted to."

"But who is that pegasus, anyway?" Scootaloo asked. "I doubt anypony knows."

"I don't know, but he's really powerful," said Sweetie Belle. "He's not your average pegasus, I'm guessing. I mean, we saw him do magic and such. I've never seen a pegasus be able to do magic. Except Alicorns, but Alicorns are not pegasi. Pegasi do not have horns, they have only wings."

"Um, ahem, we know that already," said Scootaloo. She flapped her wings.

"Well, can't we do something about it without using the Elements of Harmony?" Apple Bloom said.

"No way!" Sweetie replied. "I mean, there is no defeat in history without involving the Elements of Harmony. Except that Crystal Empire story, where they used some crystal heart to defeat an evil king.

"Again, sooner is better!" Scootaloo said. "Come on, we've got to find a way to do this. If not, Ponyville is gonna burn to a crisp, maybe its ponies. The Elements are gone. We've got to prove that things can be possible without the Elements of Harmony."

"Cutie Mark Crusaders UNITED!"