Renewing Chaos

by Disalign

Prologue

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Hello, my name is David. David Thunderhead, but i just go by David. I am 20 years old and I have a light brown short hair that's made up into a bowl cut. I have dark blue eyes and pale white skin. I was never one for the normal, always choosing the most chaotic options when it came down to it. Because of this, i always acted very random, loving to make other people laugh. I was very impulsive, doing things that came to my mind almost as soon as they came to me. This built up a surprisingly positive reputation of  me, mostly because of my way of not letting harmful things get to me and laughing it off quickly, seeming to not be bothered and instead being happier in the outcome.

I was always told by my parents that i had some kind of psychic ability, them saying that they notice things happening around me because of me. This included things i needed floating to me when i need them, and having a very high intelligence at a very young age, apparently being able to understand complex things at the age of 3. Of course, i didn't believe this, because all parents try to make their kid feel special. That is, until i saw my power myself.

I was in 8th grade, and i was about to get into a fight with one of the people who kept bullying me all throughout school, even in kindergarten. This was the first fight i had been in, although i was strangely experienced as the fight started. He started the fight by running at me as fast as he could, which was actually pretty fast. It went by very slowly for me though, and i saw what would have happened. I was surprised at the prediction at first, but decided to go with it since it gave me an advantage. I quickly sidestepped him, and took his confusion to uppercut him in his jaw. I saw that he was starting to go for a low sweep with he leg, and quickly jumped in the air and kicked him in the face, knocking him out. That's when it happened. I used my telekinesis to pick him up and throw him away at a nearby tree. I was very confused at what just happened, and so were his friends. They all quickly ran to their homes in fright, and i just walked home, trying to do what i did again.

I never actually told my parents they were right, i didn't focus on it much. All i did focus on was trying to perfect and increase my psychic ability.

The lucky thing is, this fight happened at the end of the school year, so i had all summer to practice, and that's all i did. My parents would catch me doing something with my ability, but never really connected the dots. When i wanted to use the power, my hands would glow a bright white, and have black sparks coming off of them, and whatever object i wanted to affect would have the same effect on them.

During that summer I decided to practice scanning and telekinesis mostly, while learning small things like shields, transformation, offensive beams, teleportation, and other things that i can't remember at this time.

One time near the end of the summer though, my parents caught me in the act of practicing. I was getting really good at keeping my focus on many things at once, and tried to create a small whirlwind with all the objects. This created a ton of noise, and my dad came to check on me. Once he opened the door, the noise was to loud for me to hear the creak. He gasped as loud as he could, which caused me to loose my concentration. He called mom over, silently shaking in his shoes while looking at me in fear and awe. Mom quickly came over and looked at my father strangely, wondering what the problem was. "Yes? what is it that you need me to see?", she said in a happy go-lucky voice.

My dad then motioned his hands at me, signaling me to go on."Are you sure?" I asked in a worried tone. He nodded and waited patiently.

"What's going on?" my mom asked, somewhat irritated, "Sure about what??"

I just silenced her by saying this, "Just watch." My dad nodded again, and started to get exited about what he was just about to witness.

I started to focus, putting the power of my mind to my hands. I usually don't have to focus, but i decided to try something big to show them. I created four things from the glowing power from my hands. The first thing i made was a ball of vigorous flames, which burned from what seemed to be nothing, and made no smoke. The second thing was a ball of pure darkness and shadow, which then combined with the fire to make a swirl of power that had perfect harmony, starting to symbolize the sun and the moon respectively.

The third thing i made was a representation of my own power, which i will now dub magic. I didn't intend for it to be like that, it just happened. I originally tried to create a form of chaos. The white ball of black sparkles bulged, and wanted to go near the perfect harmony of the sun and moon, wanting to become one. Chaos and harmony, yin and yang. I let it do so, pushing it strait into the circle. What happened next amazed me.

The orb i newly created started to push out and eventually explode, my parents watching it like a magic show. The explosion pushed out the harmony, creating a large oval that was about 7 feet tall. The chaos within it made a portal, going to the place were i had unknowingly demonstrated.

It started to suck me through. I thought i would die, and i tried all i could to stop it, but to no avail. I tried to use everything, and i mean everything. I accidentally used a transformation spell to try to make myself bigger, but the powers in the portal jumped out at me, changing my body to what THEY wanted. I became a light brown pegasus, with red eyes and a bright yellow iris. I got a bright white mane that looked a little shaggy, and felt a lot of power flow through me, enhancing my powers a lot more than it should be. This included my magic. The tentacles that latched onto me decided they had enough apparently, and threw me into the portal and closed it behind me.

I appeared in the sky, almost blacking out from exhaustion, i used what power i had left to activate a temporary feather falling spell so i wouldn't die from impact in the ground. As i hit it though, my last power kicked in, sensory and scanning. I took in all my surroundings before blacking out. I landed near a small cottage and a large and strangely spooky forest. I noticed a town ahead, a river near me, and a bright yellow pegasus mare with a pink mane. All i heard before passing out was a very frightened, "Eep!"

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