Fantasy is Magic

Well its time to come back to this. But before I start I got some things to say. PLEASE READ THIS!

Now when I posted this on FimFiction it got a lot of dislikes. I read over time and time again. I noticed a lot of grammar mistakes. It was a little to close to the orginial episode. That and maybe it sounded rush as I did more than half in one day. I’m going to post a few more chapters of this and we will see what happens. I want you guys to tell me what I’m doing wrong and tell me what I can do to improve.

I think I'm becoming a brony, oh well.

That is all and enjoy the chapter. And think about what I said please.

Flashback

“I’m disappointed in you sister”, a woman with colorful hair and white and yellow mage like robes said panting slightly as she looked at the young blue-haired woman in on her knees in front of her. The area around them looked like a war just took place as the two woman both had scratches, burn marks, and blood on their bodies. She had a disappointed look on her while the younger girl sneer at her.

“You think your so high and mighty don’t you sister! ?” the blue haired woman said as she glared at her older sister. The light mage shook her head at the dark mage.

“Luna why would you try and upset the balance?” the light mage asked her sister. Luna growled.

“Why do you think Celestia? ! People always get to enjoy your daylight! They play in it, bath in it, and enjoy it!” Luna yelled at her older sister. “But when the sun goes down what do they do? ! They go to sleep, get drunk, or commit crimes!” Luna yelled as she spat out her true feelings.

“Luna I’m sorry, but not everyone does bad things at night”, Celestia tried to reason with her younger sister.

“You can say that so easily because you’ve never seen the things I have!” Luna yelled as she attempted to get up but her wounds stop her from doing that.

“Luna still there’s no reason to try and enshroud the world with night,” Celestia said as she smiled with a pleading look on her face, “please sister think about what your doing! Think about the people whose crops won’t grow with sunlight! Think about the normal street thugs that will be around everyday! Please sister!” Luna gave an evil laugh.

“You won’t change my mind sister. This world will be enshrouded by darkness and night will rule forever!” Luna laughed as Celestia smile dropped and her disappointed look returned as she shook her head.

“I see... So that’s your answer Luna, then you leave me no choice,” Celestia said as she grabbed she put her hands in front of her that begin to glow a bright light. Luna looked fearful she knew that spell.

“Sister! What are you-! ?” Luna said as she attemped to crawl away, but once again her injuries prevented her as Celestia looked at her with a cold look.

“You’ve left me no choice! Princess Luna! For your crimes of attempting to disrupt the balance and shroud the world in night, you will now spend 1000 years on the moon with no civilization and while banished will be stripped of your powers!” Celestia announced as the light grew even brighter and Luna paled.

“Please Sister! Forgive me!” Luna pleaded, but Celestia would have none of it.

“I’m sorry sister, but you had your chance. It pains me to do this greatly,but I must protect my people!” Celestia said as she shot the orb towards Princess Luna as it enshrouded the dark mage and the formed a pillar of light.

“You’ll regret this Celestia! I’ll be back and not only will I cover the land in darkness, not only will I crushed your head with my boot, I’ll enslave everyone of these damn rats!” Luna screamed as the light flashed brightly causing Celestia to cover her eyes. When Celestia opened her eyes, Luna was gone. Celestia fell to her knees in exhaustion and had a look of disbelief and sadness on her face. She had just banished her own sister. Celestia would do something she had never done before in her life as she put her hands in her face.

Princess Celestia cried.

Flashback end

Nightmare Moon was at the top of the world now. Who could blame her?

She had these pathetic insects exactly where she wanted them. Celestia was gone so without the sun so nothing could stand in her way. Night would forever rule this pathetic world as she would get her revenge on her years of imprisonment.

Being on that cold, isolated, and distant moon was hell. No one but her as she cried every day before snapping and plotting her move. She was going to make them all pay. She would handle this town first then the next until she reached Canderlot. She would make Celestia death very slow and extremely painful. She laughed scaring the young children in the room. They hid behind their parents and under tables confused and scared.

Chrome grunted as he felt the power of the evil sorceresses in front of him. It was full of malice and hatred ran deep in it. He never in his fighting years had felt such a evil malice. He looked to the side of him to see a scared looking Twilight who held Spike as he was hugging her tightly. Chrome grew angry as this witch seemed to enjoy scaring other people especially those younger as he snapped as soon as he heard some start to cry.

“Ain’t got no honor huh? ! Scaring little kids like that, make me sick!” Chrome yelled in fury as everyone stared at him in shock as Twilight looked at him in amazement still holding a scared Spike. Nightmare Moon looked down at the young death knight with a smirk.

“Someone’s brave, you must have a death wish child”, Nightmare Moon said as Chrome just glared at her pulling his sword of his back. Everyone watched with held breath as they watched the exchange. Twilight was confused on what to do she definitely wanted to avoid a fight with Nightmare Moon but at the same time she didn’t want to see Chrome get killed.

“I’m not scared of bullies nor witches”, Chrome said as he got into a stance as Nightmare Moon laughed at him.

“You interest me child, I am bored maybe I’ll have some fun with you before I turn you into dust!” Nightmare cackled as she held her hands out forming as darkness begin to spin around them before they form into black as night chakrams. The two locked eyes as they waited for someone to make a move.

“Seize her!” the Mayor yelled as three soldiers with swords held high rushed towards Nightmare. Nightmare simply grinned as she teleported into a dark wisp and appeared behind one of the soldiers. She spun behind him as the chakrams slashed him in the back right through his armor as he cried out in pain falling to the floor, blood pouring from his back. The other two soldiers looked scared seeing their captain be cut down so easily. Nightmare looked at a angry Chrome as she simply grinned at him. Suddenly, a rainbow haired pegasi appeared behind her twin daggers held high as she slashed at the neck. Nightmare ducked and sent a slash at her own towards Dash aimed towards the torso, but Dash used her wings to send a gust of air towards the ground as she propelled backwards. Chrome dashed toward Nightmare aiming to send a quick slash towards her. Nightmare blocked it much to his surprise as she attempted to cut him with her other chakram. However, Chrome managed to jump back and did a backflip as he stop and got into his stance.

“Oh, not bad”, Nightmare praised as she mockingly clapped for Dash and Chrome as a healer attempted to heal the wounded captain. “You are definitely more than I expected, death knight”, Nightmare said as Chrome’s eyes widened. “You have that stance and presence of one that’s how I could tell”, Nightmare explained to him, “this rouge isn’t so bad either.” Rainbow Dash simply growled.

“Are you done yet?” Chrome said pointing his sword towards the sorceresses as Nightmare laughed.

“Hmph! Well I got things to do so I’ll kill you later, until then goodbye!” Nightmare said as mist begin to form around her.

“Wait you! Death Coil!” Chrome yelled as he sent a green skull towards the woman, but she had already vanished  as the skull hit a wall and vanished in green smoke. Chrome cursed out loud as he looked at Twilight who stared at him in amazement. “Sparky, you and me got some research to do!” Chrome said as Twilight nodded still holding Spike as they ran out of the building leaving a shocked crowd behind them.

“You found anything yet Chrome?” asked Twilight as she went form book to book looking for the book she had on the Elements of Harmony. Chrome shook his head.

“No and I don’t know where it could be”, Chrome said as he continue to look through all sorts of books, “whoa Sparky you didn’t tell me you had the full collection of Soul Eater in here!”

“Focus Chrome! We need to find the book on the Elements of Harmony!” Twilight scolded as Chrome sighed and Spike looked on.

“And just what are the Elements of Harmony huh? !” a female voice yelled as Chrome and Twilight whipped around to see Dash with her arms crossed and a suspicious look on her face. She got up in Twilight’s face as the woman begin to take steps back.

“Wait Dash..”, Chrome tried to say.

“How do we know if we can trust her Chrome? She knows a bit too much about Nightmare Moon!” Dash said as she grabbed Twilights collar and lifted her up slightly, “Maybe she’s a spy- Whoa!” As someone grabbed Dash’s shirt pulling her down as Twilight fell on her butt and Chrome helped her up. The two looked to see Applejack giving Rainbow Dash a disapproving glare. Pinkie Pie, Fluttershy, and Rarity walked in as they looked at the scene in front of them

“Who do ya think ya are Rainbow Dash? Lifting other people up by their collars and harassing them”, Applejack scolded the pegasi as Dash huffed and crossed her arms looking the other way.

“She does have a point however, Twilight and Chrome do know something”, Rarity said as she crossed her arms as Twilight and Chrome looked at each other before sighing.

Big Macintosh usually was a calm person.

He was a man of few words only speaking when he needed too. Other than that he usually said “Eeyup” or “Nnope” like a horse. Something you would expect from someone who grew up on a farm surrounded by animals despite it being an apple farm. He was also very popular with the female population, making life hard for him being part of the 40% males in Ponyville. Either way, he was a calm person and a loving brother.

That was not the case right now.

The warrior was absolutely livid right now. The Nightmare Moon had come along and scared every single child in Ponyville including his little sis, Applebloom. He had carried her home like you would carry a baby, as she was silently leaking tears. She had never seen a battle before, so it was understandable to see her so traumatized after seeing all that blood from the solider. Big Mac and Applejack had been in battles before with bandits, so it really didn’t affect either one of them. Big Mac clenched his hands so tight they turned white as he walked the dark roads of Ponyville. Doors were closed as people hid in fear of the witch. Seeing his little sister, who hasn’t even discovered her calling, so traumatized absolutely angered him. He had punched a tree in half after leaving her to his cousins and grandma. He was looking for Applejack, who had left with some other people after that-that bitch had vanished. He wanted to know where that witch went. If he saw her again, he would do things he never thought he was capable of to her. His giant hammer hung tight on his back as he ran his head through his long blond hair. He came across a tree that had lights in it.

“This must be the library that Twilight girl had move into”, Big Mac thought aloud as he turned to continue his search before hearing a famailar voice.

“So this Nightmare Moon is related to Princess Celestia?” a voice he reconized as Applejack. Big Mac eyes narrowed at that name as he crouched next to a window to eavesdropped on the conversation. Getting AJ home could wait, he wanted to kill that woman first.

“That about covers it”, a male voice sounded. Big Mac tried to think of what that could be.

‘Must be that Chrome fellow’, He thought as he continued his eavesdropping.

Inside the hut

“So what do you two plan to do?” Dash asked crossing her arms.

“The plan is to find these Elements of Harmony, find Nightmare Moon, and end her right than and there”, Chrome responded as Twilight sighed.

“That’s not as easy as it sounds Chrome. We have no idea where either of the two are”, Twilight said as she looked over the book once again. Chrome simply gave her a look.

“Sparky, where would a evil sorceresses hide in little old Ponyville?” Chrome said as Twilight growled at him.

“How am I suppose to know! ? I just moved here, you idiot!” Twilight yelled as the other occupants and Big Mac sweatdropped. Applejack raised her hand.

“He might mean Everfree forest, they got some old castle over there from what I heard” She said as Chrome nodded.

“Yeah, one of my friends had been there and he told me the exact same thing”, Chrome said, “Its been around a long time and they may have some clues on how to defeat Nightmare Moon as a matter of fact. Sparky, what does that book say about the Elements of Harmony?”

“Stop calling me that Chrome!” Twilight growled a tick mark appearing above her head as Chrome just brushed her off, “Okay it looks like you were right about Everfree forest Applejack. There are six Elements of Harmony: Kindness, Generosity, Laughter, Honesty, and Loyalty. The sixth element is apparently unknown. That old castle is the ancient castle of the the royal sisters.”

“Weee! Field trip!” Pinkie Pie yelled bouncing up and down. Twilight shook her head.

“This is no field trip, and I’m going alone”, Twilight said as Chrome looked at her like she was crazy.

“Sparky are you out of your already insane mind? There’s bandits, trolls, dwarves, and all other creatures that lurk in that forest. Also, who knows what nightmare Moon has in there. A mage going in their alone is suicide”, Chrome said as Twilight rolled her eyes.

“I’m perfectly find dealing with a few bandits and monsters”, Twilight said, “I may not look like it, but I’m actually one of the best mage’s in my age group when it comes to close combat and rank the highest in the class in sorcery.”

“Yeah cause mage’s are excellent in close combat”, Dash said sarcastically.

‘Says the girl who has a 3-13 record against me in sparring’, Fluttershy thought inwardly rolling her eyes at her childhood friend.

“Shut up! I’ll be find on my own alright!” Twilight snapped as Applejack sighed.

“Well then I’ll just follow ya”, Applejack said as Twilight glared at her.

“With you on that AJ!” Chrome said.

“I’m coming to, can’t let Chrome and Applejack have all the fun!” Dash declared.

“Oh! Oh! Sounds like a party, count me in!” Pinkie Pie said as she jumped up and down.

“I guess I’ll come so none of you get into any trouble”, Rarity sighed as she went to Twilight’s room, “I need to change into something more battle-suited.” She closed the door as Twilight sighed.

“I-I-I guess I’ll come if Rainbow Dash is going”, Fluttershy said as Twilight groaned.

“I’m coming to!” a voice said as everyone turned to see Big Macintosh standing in the doorsill.

“Big Mac what are you doing here? ! Shouldn’t you be at home with Applebloom?” Applejack asked walking up to her older brother.

“Applebloom is with Granny Smith and the rest of the family, and I came looking for you to bring you back home. However, now that I know where that woman ran off to. I’m going after her with or without your consent”, Big Mac said eyes showing no room for argument.

“More the safer!” Chrome said walking up to the farmer, “Nice to know I won’t be the only male around not that I’m complaining, welcome aboard!” Chrome held his hand out to the giant who took it and they had a firm handshake.

“Thank you Chrome, just stop checking out my sister”, Big Mac said as Applejack blushed and Chrome scratched the back of his head.

“Sorry about that, but she’s a looker!” Chrome said as he winked at Applejack who blushed even further. Twilight for some reason felt angry that Chrome was checking out other girls besides her.

“Are we ready to go?” Rarity asked as she stepped out of Twilight’s room showing a different attire. She was wearing similar mage robes like Twilight, except the sleeves were shorter, it hung closer on her body, and it was white and blue. She also now had a weird necklace on showing off some gems dangling. She had on brown boots and a staff hung on her back similar to Twilights as the tip was similar to a unicorn’s. Chrome whistled as Rarity did a twirl.

“Well let’s get a move on”, Twilight said bumping shoulders with Chrome on purpose. Everyone else besides Spike who locked up the doors and went to sleep followed.

Unknown to them however, a black wisp was outside and left going to the same destination.

“Rarity to your left!” Chrome shouted as he cut down another wooden dwarf in half. Rarity looked to her left and dodged just in time from a troll’s club. She summoned a ice totem to freeze its legs in place.

“Troll Swing!” Big Mac yelled as his giant hammer was infused with energy as he swung it to the side of the troll knocking it back through trees before it died from internal bleeding. Twilight fought off one of the dwarfs as sword and staff collided before Twilight hit a palm strike full of magic energy directly in its chest sending it into a group.

“Flame Storm!” Twilight yelled as a tunnel of fire hit the group as they burned in seconds. She jumped back as Fluttershy cast a healing spell on her.

“Damn wood dwarves stay still!” Applejack cursed as she shot arrow after arrow at the wood dwarves who continued to dodge much to her frustration. “I could use a hand here!” Applejack complained as she jumped back to keep her distance as they closed in.

“Little busy here!” Rainbow Dash responded as she dodged yet another thrust from one of the dwarves. She countered stabbing her dagger in its heart and then kicking it to one of its friends. She flew up in the air two bombs in her hands.

“Rain-Bomb!” Dash yelled as she spun around in a tornado. The bombs flew out twirling at high speeds looking like rainbows before one landed in one group exploding and incinerating them. The other landed in the group closing in on Applejack and did the same.

“Good job Dash! Their retreating!” Chrome said as he saw the rest of them run off. Dash flexed as she boasted.

“I’d run too if I was fighting me!” Dash bragged as Applejack rolled her eyes at her friend.

“Stop ya bragging for once Rainbow Dash! I gotta a feeling we haven’t seen the last of them”, Applejack said looking out for danger.

“Then they can bring it on! Nothing stopping the Rainbow!” Rainbow Dash said as Chrome sighed.

“Whatever we need to get moving”, Chrome said and was beginning to walk forward before Applejack held out a arm in front of him. “See something AJ?” Chrome said aas he looked around.

“I smell smoke and burning wood”, Applejack said as the group looked around.

“We did use a bunch of fire skills”, Dash spoke up as AJ shook her head.

“This is from a good distance away....Shit!” Applejack cursed as she pointed towards a group of evil looking pegasi who were holding something that looked like a cannon.

“Everyone take cover!” Chrome yelled as the cannon fired and exploded on the grround the group was on the ridge of a hill. The ground shook knocking everyone off their feet as the ground slide. Rainbow Dash grabbed Fluttershy as they flew in the air. Chrome slid down as he jumped off the ground. Big Macintosh grabbed Rarity and Pinkie Pie as he did the same. Twilight slid down and missed her chance to jump as she almost fell only to be saved by Applejack who grabbed her hand in time.

“Applejack, what should I do! ?” Twilight asked desperately as she looked at the freckled face farm girl. Applejack pondered for a moment before looking at the mage.

“Let go”, Applejack said plainly.

“Are you crazy? !” Twilight screamed looking at the ranger like she had grown another head.

“Trust me Twilight! You’ll be fine, all you need to do is let go!” Applejack said she let go of Twilights hand as the woman screamed. Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash were suppose to catch her and drift her to safety. They flew to the screaming mage as they aimed to catch her.

They missed.

The three women’s eyes widened in horror as Twilight begin to drop to her death. Chrome gasped as he looked as he saw the mage fall. He instantly sprinted towards the destination. Twilight refused to look down as she awaited her death. Applejack, Fluttershy, and Rainbow Dash looked away expecting to hear a sickening splat.

It never came.

Instead, they opened their eyes to see Twilight in the arms of Chrome. Twilight eyes opened as she looked around her and then at Chrome. Chrome sighed.

“Dang, almost thought I wasn’t going to make it!” Chrome said as he saw the girl still in his arms hands around his neck. “You can let go now, Sparky”, Chrome joked as Twilight face turned red as she jumped out of his arms and glared at Applejack who held an apologetic look in her eyes as she was let down by Dash and Fluttershy.

“I’m mighty sorry Twilight! I should’ve warned you! You could have died, I very might sorry!” Applejack apologized. Twilight sighed as she ran her hand through her hair.

“Its alright Applejack. Just make sure you warn me next time”, Twilight said as Applejack smiled, “Lets just get going.” The group left on their way deeper into the forest.

Nightmare Moon was displeased.

One could tell from the three heads on the stone ground and horrified looks on them.

She gave them one simple task. Kill those brats, but they couldn’t even do that! Nightmare Moon growled as she kicked one of the heads into a stone wall. She then calmed down as her evil grin return. They just got lucky that’s all.

‘Calm yourself woman, those brats won’t last much longer’, Nightmare Moon thought as a even sicker grin came to her face. “Maybe I can use that Death Knight for some purposes”, Nightmare Moon said before looking over her shoulder to see a blue orb that held an unconscious woman with pink and blue hair and wearing priest like clothes, “wouldn’t you think so sister? !” Hearing no response but maybe a groan, Nightmare Moon cackled as lighting struck.

Twilight wiped sweat from her forehead as she pulled her staff out of a wood dwarves chest. She watched as flames flickered from her and Rarity’s combined flame spell. Applejack was right on not seeing the last of them, they brought reinforcements.

A hell lot of reinforcements.

Twilight begin to think at her earlier decision to come here alone.

Would she have survived if she did?

Doubtful.

She would have been easily overwhelmed and killed. Especially if it was bandits that decided to make her their “prize” for the night and took her back to their camp. Strangely, they hadn’t encountered a single bandit tonight. But back to the point, was Chrome right? She fought much easier with Pinkie’s support songs, Fluttershy’s healing spells and nature skills, Dash’s rouge abilities, Applejack’s arrows provided nice cover, Big Mac and Chrome’s skills in close combat, but mostly Rarity to combine spells with. Footsteps broke her out of her thoughts as she saw Applejack walk up to her.

“These creatures here are mighty wild huh, Twilight?” Applejack said as she looked in her bag for any potions before finding a ether(magic potion guys) and giving it to Twilight. Twilight drank the blue potion heartily as she felt some of her energy return.

“Thank you Applejack”, Twilight said smiling as Applejack grinned, “you have a good point the monsters are quite wild, maybe because of Nightmare Moon influence.” Applejack’s expression darkened at that name.

“I heard from Big Macintosh how she traumatized Applebloom”, Applejack said as she glared at the sky and clenched her fists, “that witch is going to pay.” Twilight nodded a serious expression on her face as well.

“Yes she scared Spike as well, but Spike has already seen death before from some of my assignments. So it really didn’t effect him”, Twilight said as she looked at Chrome who was talking with Big Mac holding a map and Rainbow Dash who was scaring Fluttershy, “Chrome says he didn’t take well to hearing children cry and Rainbow Dash says she scared someone who she thought of as a little sister was in there as well.” Applejack nodded as she begin to scratch the back of her head nervously.

“Hey Twilight, about what happen with the fall earlier”, Applejack began as Twilight cut her off.

“Applejack its all right. I know you were being honest that you didn’t mean for me to fall to my death like that”, Twilight said smiling at the ranger who grinned.

“Thanks Twi!” Applejack said running off to join her brother and Chrome as Twilight felt herself smile even more.

Maybe having friends wasn’t too bad.

Or not...

Twilight growled as Pinkie Pie talked nonsense the entire path of the forest. This girl was so annoying! If only she wasn’t an ally she swear to all that was holy!

“Pinkie, you mind being quiet for a bit?” Chrome asked the bard as he tried to read the map. Pinkie Pie smiled.

“Okie Doki Loki!” Pinkie Pie said as she ran an imaginary zipper across her mouth. Twilight gaped at Chrome ability to shut Pinkie up. Her eyebrow twitched in annoyance as she stared at Chrome.

“Yo, Sparky”

“Huh? !” Twilight snapped out of her trance to see ice-blue eyes staring at her. Chrome chuckled as he walked up to the mage map in hand.

“We’re going to stop for awhile and take a break, also I need to call someone about the situation. You don’t mind do you?”, Chrome asked. Twilight felt conflicted about it. She wanted to find the Elements and Nightmare Moon as soon as possible, but she was feeling slightly tired.

“Just be quick about it”, Twilight said as she took the map, “I’ll go over the map again to make sure we didn’t go the wrong way”. Chrome grinned.

“You wound me Sparky! Don’t trust my map-reading! ?” Chrome said as he faked getting stabbed in the chest. Twilight couldn’t help but giggle at Chrome’s humor. She looked to everyone staring at them. She blushed and pushed Chrome away as he walked off laughing.

“50 bits those two will end up going out in a year!” Pinkie Pie whispered to Rainbow Dash. Dash grinned as she shook Pinkie’s hand.

“Deal!” Dash yelled.

Chrome walked in a clearing and checked out the area before pulling out his phone. He dialed a number as the phone rang for awhile before he got an answer.

“Hello?”, a male voice came on the other line.

“Giro, its Chrome. How’s the situation in Ponyville?” Chrome asked the person on the other line. Giro sighed.

“Could be better, there’s been some serpents and a few evil pegasi attacking the village, I’ve taken care of them with the help of the soldiers, but we’ve had a few...civilian casualties.” Giro sid. Chrome cursed under his throat.

“How many?” Chrome asked.

“Around six, four males and two females. One of the females was raped and had been dead long before we got there. Fucking bastards!” Giro said his voice getting angry and staring to sound beastly. Chrome was silently fuming in rage. Raping was one of the worst crimes someone could whether a male or female was the victim. The only thing he consider worst the rape was slaughtering children. However, he needed to keep his cool and Giro needed to as well.

“Giro calm down. You need to keep your cool for the rest of the night”, Chrome said as Giro took deep breaths as he sighed.

“Your right Chrome, sorry. You guys far from Nightmare Moon?” Giro asked as Chrome sighed.

“Yeah we still got ways to go, but we’re making it”, Chrome said.

“We’ll give her a good asskicking for those she’s killed. I gotta go. Later”, Giro said hanging up. Chrome put his phone and his pocket and walked back to rest of the group.

He did not expect to see laughing trees and Pinkie Pie.

“I don’t even want to know”, Chrome said grabbing the map and walking ahead as the group follow him

A beast-human like figure stepped out of the shadows. It was about 5”9 and had a medium build. It had orange fur that covered its entire body except you know down there. It’s yellow slittled eyes gleamed in the moonlight along with its sharp two top fangs. It had brown hair and it nose resembled a canines muzzle slightly. A medium tail fell behind it as it walked to a balcony. Its clothing had on long black shorts that covered its knees and were slightly ripped.  It had no shirt exposing it furry but muscular torso. It was however wearing small boots. It had two big cuff like bracelets on its wrists. The werewolf sighed as it walked to the balcony stands, looking at a distant forest.

“Chrome, you better be right”, the creatures said exposing itself as Giro, “people here are counting on you”. Giro then jumped off the balcony and landed on the ground. He sniffed around for any enemies before picking up a trail. He found one to the right and starting running after it.

Chrome was at a lost at the current events.

He and the rest of the group was walking through the forest on their way to the castle. Then a manticore came out of no where and attack them. It was one of the prideful types that thought everything was below it. What was a bunch of humans and pegasi’s to it?

It didn’t even stand a chance.

HELL IT GOT ITS ASS KICKED!

After the unholy beating it received, Chrome walked towards it to finish it off.

At least until he heard “STOP!”

Fluttershy had stopped him and said the creature was hurt. She walked towards the injured beast and lifted its paw to show....

A thorn

....Yeah you heard right. A thorn.

After carefully removing the thorn, the thing had practicually fell in love with the pegasi. It licked Fluttershy affectingly as it hug hercausing the young woman to giggle. Twilight and Chrome couldn’t help but gape at what they were seeing. Everyone else hadsimilar expressions on their face, except for Rainbow Dash who face palmed at her friend’s antics.

The craziness didn’t stop there either.

They came to a large gap which was impossible to cross.

Well for normal humans, but Rainbow Dash was no normal human.

The pegasi flew over there to let up the bridge. However, some evil pegasi came over offering Dash in their ranks and to even become their leader. When Dash who sent them, they told her Nightmare Moon.

Apparently they didn’t know Rainbow Dash hated Nightmare Moon. They probably learned after she refused their offer, stabbed them in the chest, and threw them off the cliff.

Next they had to cross a river, but since the stream was too rough it was impossible without possible drowning.

Long story short, a water serpent with weird looking hair refused to let them past, because he felt ugly or something. Rarity offered him some cloth which he gladly accepted and actually lifted them across.

They were now in front of a ancient castle. Chrome sighed as they finally reached their destination. Twilight ran over to some orbs that were on the ground. Chrome looked to his right to see Big Mac looking for something.

“Wait a second there only five!” Twilight yelled as Chrome’s eyes widened and so did everyone else.

“There suppose to be six right? !” Dash asked flying around as if trying to locate the sixth orb.

“Doesn’t the book say that when all five gathered a spark appears showing the sixth?” Rarity asked walking up with her arms crossed.

“Yeah thats right! Everyone stand back!” Twilight yelled as everyone took a step back as Twilight closed her eyes and focused as she focused a beam on the orbs.

They didn’t notice a blue wisp sneak its way over to the the orbs.

Chrome’s eyes widened as the blue wisp gathered around the orbs and tried to swallowed them.

‘NO!’ the Death knight panicked as he jumped after the orbs into the vortex.

“CHROME!” Twilight screamed jumping after him. Big Mac saw his chance right then and there to go after the witch. Without a second thought, he jumped in after the two as the vortex disappeared.

“Where did they go? !” Applejack yelled as the others looked around.

“Big Mac!”

“Chrome!”

“Twi!”

Suddenly a door opened and the group dashed in to look for their friends.

Twilight groaned as she got up on her feet. She looked around to see Chrome and Big Mac doing the same.

“Is everyone alright? !” Chrome asked as Twilight ran over and slapped him. Chrome cursed as he rubbed his check in pain.

“Are you a idiot! ?” Twilight scolded, “imagine what would have happen if you been teleported to...oh no”. Chrome and Big Mac looked behind them to see to speak of the devil Nightmare Moon. She grinned wickedly as everyone readied their weapons and got into their stances.

“Hello guests”, Nightamare mockingly greeted, “and welcome to your demise!”

I hope that chapter was better than the last one as I was being lazy last time. Maybe a little rushed at the end but I took my time.. Had to finish this to focus on finishing my senior project and writing Failure Squad.

I wanted Nightmare Moon seem truly evil in this story. Which is why she gets a thrill out of harming other people mentally or physically . This is a Mature story so I wanted her to be truly evil and very powerful on how easily she fended off the soldiers, Rainbow Dash, and Chrome.

Trust me Chrome is no Mary Sue he has weaknesses which will be exposed next chapter and while its plainly obvious that I’m pairing him and Twilight together. Their relationship has some bumps to go through, but expect some comedy out of it.

Next expect Big Mac, Twilight, and Chrome vs Nightmare Moon! I’ll also go more into Giro.

Going to have to work on my battle scene writing skills so I can do my best. Also if I offended anyone by saying stop the Rule 34 crap, sorry. I actually won’t mind it too much if its humanized.