Let Loose the Griffons of War

by TheCamel

Chapter 9

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Princess Celestia was exhausted. It had been days since she had gotten a full night’s rest, and there was no end of the mountain of tasks that continued to pile up as each day passed. Ever since Luna’s actions had come to light Celestia had no choice but to restrict her sister’s responsibilities to almost nothing. Luna’s daily tasks were now limited to raising and lowering the moon as well as decorating the night sky, but ever since she realized her grave error her skies have been void of the brilliant stars that she usually spread across the darkness.

Celestia wished dearly she had time to help raise her sister’s morale, but a new urgent message had arrived from Twilight. A griffon had been welcomed into Ponyville and was now being housed in Fluttershy’s cottage. Even though it was confirmed that this griffon had helped rescue the missing Fleur Dis Lee, Celestia still didn’t feel comfortable about the situation. The princess knew she had to send someone she trusted to go and interrogate this griffon, but her soldiers were already stretched too thin, and there was absolutely no chance that she was willing to send Discord.

The sound of the throne room door opening caught Celestia’s attention. Looking up, she was surprised to see a pegasus she did not expect…

“Spitfire, I thought you were still in Cloudsdale overseeing the repairs to the weather station.” the princess said.

“The weather ponies are all working around the clock to get the rain machines back up as quickly as they can, but it’s going to take another week or two before they can even test to see if they’re working.” Spitfire said, stepping up to Celestia’s throne and bowing. “I can’t, um, well, I’m not really able to help fix the machines, so I figured I’d report to you in person.”

Celestia nodded, somewhat relieved that she found the perfect pony to take on her task. “I’m actually glad you came. I have a task of the utmost importance for you to do.”

Spitfire’s ears perked up at the news. “Anything, my princess.” she said gleefully.

Celestia explained to her the news of the griffon now sheltered in Ponyville and how he had saved Fleur from her captivity. Spitfire gritted her teeth, unable to fathom the idea that some griffon could possibly want to help anypony. “I want you to speak to this griffon and find out whatever you can.” Celestia said. “I also want you to bring Rainbow Dash with you back to Ponyville.”

Spitfire felt like she had just been stabbed in the heart when she heard that name. “Come again?” she asked, her mane rising slightly in anxiety.

“I need you to escort Rainbow Dash back to Ponyville to regroup with her friends. Right now we need the Elements of Harmony back together, just in case the griffons are planning some sort of attack there.” Celestia said, hoping that the griffon’s arrival wasn’t indeed some sort of trap.

Spitfire wanted to scream no and storm out, but there was no way she could do that to her princess. “Y-yes, of course. I’ll do that.” she said somewhat reluctantly.

“Thank you, Spitfire. I knew I could depend on you.” Celestia said.

With a quick bow, Spitfire headed for the exit and headed to where Rainbow was staying. Knocking on the door, she found it unlocked and let herself in, not seeing anypony inside. An odd noise caught her attention, and she found herself drawn to a closed door. The noises got louder, and she soon realized it was the sound of some mare panting loudly combined with the wet sounds of a cock sliding into a soaking wet pussy.

Opening the door ever so slightly, Spitfire gasped as she saw Rainbow Dash being taken from behind by a certain pegasus. Spitfire felt tears welling in her eyes as she watched her special somepony thrusting his cock into Rainbow’s cunt, both ponies loving every second of it. The stallion groaned and pulled his cock out of Dash’s hole, ejaculating all over her ass. Spitfire licked her lips as she saw the strands of cum erupt from his flared head, desperately wishing that it was her being coated with the white liquid. Heck, she would even be okay with licking his cum off of Dash’s body, sticking her tongue in her pussy just to get every last drop.

Dash began to turn around to lick her lover’s cock clean. Panicking slightly, Spitfire closed the door and backed away, heading back to the living room to wait for the two horny ponies to finish their time together. Walking into the living room, she was surprised to see another pegasus already there; her old teammate Soarin.

“Hey Soarin, you’re looking a lot better!” she exclaimed happily, walking up to him.

“Spitfire?” Soarin exclaimed in surprise. He hadn’t seen Spitfire since leaving the hospital, and he had never been sure if he could look at her the same way again. What made him the most uncomfortable was the fact that she didn’t seemed troubled by anything that had happened; she had no regrets about watching innocent griffons die, she had no sorrow for the three teammates they lost, and worst of all she had no guilt for taking the life of another creature.

Before Spitfire reached him, Soarin got up from his seat. “I… I gotta go.” he simply said, walking past her and left the building.

Spitfire was in absolute shock by his actions. ‘What the hay was that about?’ she thought to herself. ‘What’s his problem? I thought we were best buds. I saved his life from those griffons and now he treats me like a complete stranger! Something isn’t right, something must have…

…Rainbow Dash. She must have gotten to him, too! I can’t believe her, first she steals my special somepony and now she steals my best friend!’

Spitfire’s thoughts were cut short as Rainbow Dash and the other pegasus finally exited their bedroom and saw Spitfire. They both hugged Spitfire in greeting, the fiery Wonderbolt captain tempted to snap Dash’s neck but held back. Spitfire explained that she was to escort Dash back to Ponyville immediately, but also asked if he would come with them. Her heart sank when he declined as he had to stay in case Princess Celestia needed him for a delivery. Dash was still a little nervous about flying such a far distance, but with a few encouraging words and a passionate kiss from her lover, both mares were soon ready to go.

Rainbow Dash took the lead and Spitfire brought up the rear. The Wonderbolt Captain was furious with her junior wingpony. She had turned away in disgust as Rainbow and the stallion kissed goodbye, and she had also almost thrown up when they said ‘I love you’ to each other. The entire flight Spitfire wished that she could get Rainbow Dash out of the way, allowing her and her stallion to be together.

Unfortunately for her, Spitfire knew that she was powerless to do anything. She would surely be caught if she tried to do anything to Rainbow, landing her in Canterlot’s prison, or worse, banished to the moon for life. For now, she decided to wait and watch…

Both pegasi finally reached Ponyville in mid-afternoon. They landed by Twilight’s library as Princess Celestia had told them that the mysterious griffon was now residing there. Twilight had wanted to keep an eye on this griffon personally, as well as wanted him away from Fluttershy due to her last experience with griffons. Fleur had moved over to Carousel Boutique with Rarity as the accommodations there suited her style much better, not to mention she could finally get some rest without Spike trying to sneak a peek at her.

As Spitfire and Rainbow Dash were greeted by Twilight, Iron Rook came down the stairs to see who had arrived. Both pegasus mares froze as the sight of the griffon brought back suppressed memories. Dash managed to keep her emotions in control and reluctantly extended a hoof in greeting, even though flashes of her rape by the entire griffon barracks flashed through her mind. Spitfire, though, barely managed to say hi as her mind replayed the day where she killed a griffon with her own hooves, squeezing the life out of his drowning body in a rainbow colored pool.

Twilight knew why Spitfire was here, so she excused herself and Rainbow to allow Spitfire to complete her work. The two friends trotted off to visit Fluttershy, saying they’d be back just after nightfall. Iron caught Spitfire casting a hate-filled stare at Rainbow Dash as she left and decided to make a mental note of that incident as perhaps it would come in use later.

Finally alone, Spitfire lashed out at Iron, catching the griffon completely by surprise. Her rear hooves connected with his chest, sending him crashing into a bookshelf. It hurt for him to breathe, and as he looked up from his collapsed position he saw Spitfire staring coldly down at him.

“I know you and your kind. What are you doing here?” she demanded. She didn’t wait for his answer as she bucked him again in the same place, once again taking the breathe from his body.

“H-hol-*cough* hold on!” he gasped, trying to protect himself from her onslaught.

Spitfire lashed out a third time, but missed as Iron barely managed to dodge the attack. A sickening thud rung out as her hooves struck the bookshelf behind where his head was just a few seconds ago.

“Wait, hold on! Calm down!” Iron begged. Spitfire didn’t listen, instead chasing the unfortunate griffon around Twilight’s library.

“I know what you and your kind do to us ponies! There’s no way you could have saved Fleur without some sort of ulterior motive!” she yelled back at him.

Spitfire continued chasing Iron until the griffon finally sought shelter in Twilight’s basement, locking the sturdy door behind him to keep Spitfire out. The door shook as she gave it a powerful kick, but luckily for Iron the door held firm.

“Scum! Coward! Get out here and face me!” she yelled.

There was no way Iron was doing as she commanded. He sighed with relief as the banging on the door finally ceased, but he could still hear the crazed pegasus breathing heavily just outside.

“I swear I don’t know what you’re talking about. Please, I just wanted to get away from this whole war.” he tried reasoning with her again, but yet again failed.

“Open this bucking door now! If you don’t you’re going to wish that you were dead!” the pegasus threatened again. “I swear by Celestia I’ll kill you before I kill Rainbow Das-”

Spitfire quickly shut her mouth, hoping that the griffon either didn’t hear her or didn’t know who Rainbow Dash was. Unfortunately for her, heard every single word and knew perfectly well who Rainbow Dash was. In fact, he had some very close, ‘personal’ contact with her a long time ago…

Spitfire couldn’t believe what she just said. ‘What gotten into me? Why did I just say that? I couldn’t do that to… what’s wrong with me?’ She lowered her aggressive stance and stared at the floor, her emotions now conflicting with each other.

Iron slowly cracked open the door and saw Spitfire in her depressed state. “Jeez, what’s wrong with you ponies? First you try to kill me, now you’re about to cry?”

“S-shut up!” Spitfire snapped, glaring at the griffon. “Just get… get the buck out of my face!”

Iron cautiously approached her, not wanting to get in range of her powerful hind legs again. “Maybe I can help you. Would that prove that I’m really here to help? That you can trust me?”

Spitfire glared back at the griffon. “Feh! How could you possibly help me? You don’t know anything about me or my problems.”

Thinking for a moment, Iron Rook pieced together the information he had so far and made a guess. “So Rainbow Dash stole the pony you like, huh?” he asked, taking a shot in the dark.

His guess hit the bulls-eye, and Spitfire recoiled as his words struck right at her heart. “It’s not fair! Why should she have him all to herself? How come I have to be all alone?” she shouted, her emotions once again taking control.

Iron had to struggle to stop from smiling. “You’re right, you do deserve him, and I can help you get him. It sounds like you need Rainbow Dash to… go away somewhere. I can do that. I can make sure she never bothers you again, and you can be alone with your stallion forever.”

Spitfire ate up every single word that came from his mouth. “R-really? You c-can do that?” she asked hopefully.

Iron nodded yes.

“Okay… just promise that you won’t hurt her.” Spitfire added, not wanting any more guilt than needed.

“Don’t worry, she’ll love being with me.” Iron grinned mischievously. “She’ll absolutely love it.”


By the time Twilight returned home Spitfire had flown off back to Canterlot. Iron Rook sported a large bruise on his chest, but despite Twilight demanding to know if Spitfire had hurt him he refused to blame the pegasus, instead saying he tripped and slammed into one of the bookshelves. Twilight found the story hard to believe, but Iron refused to say otherwise.

Twilight eventually went to bed, leaving Iron alone once again. Once he was sure Twilight was sound asleep he slipped out one of the windows and flew the short distance to a house made of clouds. He slipped into the house through one of the unlocked windows. It didn’t take him long to find the one bedroom in the house, and as expected the bed inside was occupied by a rainbow-maned pegasus.

Rainbow Dash’s dreams were once again proving to cause problems as her sleep was full of restlessness. She hated having to sleep alone, but with nopony else in the entire house she didn’t have much of a choice. She wished she could feel her mate behind her as usual, or even Soarin. Just knowing she wasn’t alone was all she wished for.

Dash’s eyes snapped open as she felt a rush of cool air suddenly sweep over her entire body. Looking down at her body she saw that her blanket was no longer covering her body, leaving her exposed on her bed. She looked around trying to figure out where it could have gone but instead found the dark silhouette of a griffon standing at the foot of her bed.

“Please no…” she softly said, trying to move back to get away from then griffon. Her back bumped against the headboard, leaving her to cower in fear. The griffon chuckled as he got onto the bed and slowly took step after step towards the scared pegasus until he stood over her quivering body.

“Why hello there, it’s been a while.” he said, licking his beak. He stared at her slim form, appreciating the fact that she had started taking care of herself now that she was no longer a prisoner. Though the griffons all had fun using her body, they were always slightly put off by the stench of old cum that stuck to her fur. But now her body was spotless and clean, and Iron Rook couldn’t wait to get his claws on her.

“Spread your legs. Show yourself to me.” Iron commanded. Rainbow wanted to run away and find safety in her special somepony’s hooves, but he was of course miles and miles away. Instead, she followed Iron’s orders, spreading her legs and exposing her pussy to him. Though the room was dark, Iron could make out the small slit in Dash’s body that housed her sex. He was disappointed that there was barely any hint of wetness around her pussy. During her time in captivity she was always soaked down there, especially when any griffon would walk into her prison.

“Looks like you need your training again.” he sneered, roughly rubbing her pussy. She gasped at his touch but knew better than to try to move away, still well aware of the damage he could easily inflict on her with his sharp talons. Instead she was forced to endure the rough foreplay until her body began to respond to his touch. He brought his claw close to his face, seeing that it was now shimmering with a thin layer of her juices. He licked his talon and smiled. “Good, looks like you haven’t been fucked in a while.” he said as his cock began to harden.

Iron moved up Dash’s body so his cock was pressed against her lips. Dash kept her lips shut, still hoping that this was all just a bad dream. Annoyed by her resistance, Iron grabbed her throat and squeezed, causing Dash to cough and open her mouth in surprise. With his other claw, Iron grabbed the back of Dash’s head and pulled her forward as he thrust his hips, sinking his entire cock into her mouth and throat.

Rainbow gagged as the thick orifice mercilessly rammed its way into her. She had no problem deep-throating her lover, but he always allowed her to go at her own pace. Now she found herself being used like a fuck-toy once again, and with a deep groan of pleasure the griffon began to pump his cock in and out of her mouth.

There was no way Rainbow could try to push the larger griffon off of her. All she could do was hope that he would finish soon. As she felt him move back and forth in her mouth she licked the underside of his cock with her tongue, hoping the stimulation would cause him to finish soon. Iron grinned as he felt her tongue, enjoying the addition. “You really do like my cock in your mouth, don’t you, you slut?” he asked her.

Rainbow shook her head defiantly, using all her willpower to not become submissive once again. She was surprised when Iron withdrew his cock from her mouth, his shaft now soaked with her saliva. He moved back down so his body was above hers, his dick again pointed straight at her pussy.

“Hmm, too bad, guess I’ll have to try a different hole.” he said, pressing the tip of his penis against Dash’s hole.

“No… no… please no. Don’t.” Rainbow begged as she felt herself being opened by his cock. Her words fell on deaf ears as Iron slid inch after inch of his orifice into her body, and even though he wanted to violate her in one thrust he remained patient and instead took his time making Dash his once again.

Iron groaned in bliss as he finally bottomed out inside Dash. The poor mare, on the other hoof, was once again in tears as her worst nightmares were once again coming true. She called out for her special somepony in between sobs, but the only response she got was Iron’s laugh. “He can’t help you, nopony can.” he smirked as he pounded away at Dash’s body. She didn’t want to give up hope that somehow he would hear her cries and swoop in to save her, but each time Iron’s erect dick thrust into her tight pussy she lost hope a little bit more.

Iron thought back to the time where Rainbow Dash was held captive in the griffon king’s castle. He had used her quite a few times as he was one of the griffons assigned to guard duty, but every time he came to fuck her he had always been a little disgusted by having to take sloppy seconds. Now, though, he had all night to use the mare however he wished without having to share with any other griffon.

“Try not to get too lonely. You’re going to feel only my cum inside every single hole you have.” he said, thrusting faster as his pleasure heightened. Hearing those words scared Dash even more; knowing that he planned on cumming inside of her only seemed to make the rape ten times worse. She placed her forehooves on the griffons chest in an attempt to push him off, but all her attempts did was piss Iron off.

“How dare you try to throw me off! You should be honored that I would want to use such a lowly whorse like you!” he shouted. In his fit of rage Iron clenched his right claw tightly and swung at Dash’s head. His balled up claw connected with Dash’s head with a sickening thud, knocking the pony out immediately. Iron didn’t seem to notice or care in the slightest that his unwilling partner was now out cold as he continued thrusting in and out of her now limp body. His ego now boosted by the fact that he rendered her unconscious with one hit, he soon felt a familiar sensation in his dick and knew he was getting close. He thought about pulling out and shooting his load all over Dash’s body and face, but he figured that he would have plenty of time to coat her with his jizz, both inside and outside.

With a few more deep frenzied thrusts, Iron slammed his cock inside of the still unconscious pony one last time before releasing his load inside of her, shooting off five shots of sperm in her pussy before finally withdrawing from her body. He looked down with a smile of accomplishment as he saw her pussy still slightly gaped and a thin strand of cum slowly slipping from her love hole. He looked down at his own genitals and saw that his cock was still fully erect. Deciding that it was time for round two, he rolled Dash’s body over with little concern for her comfort and placed a pillow under her lower abdomen, leaving her rear vulnerable. Testing her puckered rear hole with a single talon, he smiled as he felt her anus tightly grip his talon. He scooped up the meager strand of cum from her pussy lips and smeared it around her asshole, but it wasn’t quite enough to fulfill his needs. He spit a large wad of saliva onto her rear hole to finish his preparations.

Iron mounted Rainbow Dash for the second time, positioning his cock so it rested right against her ass. He had hoped she would be awake for this as he wanted to hear her cry in pain as he reclaimed her final hole, but he figured that as long as she was out he could be as rough as he wanted.

Grinning with anticipation, Iron took a deep breath and thrust his entire cock into Dash’s ass in one swift motion. Even while out cold, Dash’s face seemed to tense up in pain as her asshole was ripped open and violated. Iron couldn’t believe the tightness of her anal opening and was happy that she had time to recover from her time in the griffon’s captivity. Her tight sphincter seemed to be trying to squeeze his cock off, but this just added to the pleasure Iron was finding in her tight ass. He kept still for a few moments, savoring the moment, before he began to forcefully fuck Dash yet again.

Consciousness began to slowly return to Rainbow Dash, but it was not a pleasant experience. A deep throbbing pain filled the left side of her head, but a fiery burning feeling in her rectum soon overpowered her headache. She groaned as she tried to turn her head to see what was causing the pain in her backside, but Iron saw she was awake and slapped her tight ass and slid his dick out of her body.

Dash yelped in surprise at his stinging strike. “Oh good, you’re awake. I was afraid you were going to miss all the fun.” Iron said coldly as he shoved his member right back into Dash’s gaping ass.

Now that she was aware of what was happening to her body, Rainbow screamed out in pain as the burning in her bum increased ten-fold as Iron continued to ravage her. Her cries of pain soon were mixed with her sobbing and tears as she began to finally mentally break down yet again. The damage done to her had taken so much time and energy from all her friends, especially her lover, but all their hard work was quickly being unraveled by one griffon. With each tear that fell from Dash’s eyes her mind began to shut out the outside world bit by bit.

The sounds of his victim crying made the moment so much sweeter for Iron, causing him to quicken his pace and soon shoot his second load into Dash’s bowels. Rainbow cringed as she felt the familiar feeling of a hot liquid filling her insides as his cock throbbed. Iron remained still until the last drop of his cum was deposited deep in her body, and once he was sure he had nothing left he withdrew his now shrinking cock.

Still sobbing, Rainbow Dash curled up back into the fetal position for the first time in ages. Iron couldn’t help but feel proud of his accomplishment, loving the sight of the broken pony with his cum seeping out from both her holes. He grabbed a claw-full of Rainbow’s mane and lifted her head up. “You loved that, didn’t you, you dirty slut?” he whispered into her ear.

Dash nodded, knowing that saying no would result in more pain. Iron Rook grinned at her obedience. “Good, because there’s plenty more of my cum for you. You’re going to let me fuck you whenever I want, in whichever hole I wish.”

Rainbow shook her head, drawing the line there. “No, I… I can’t! My special… I can’t betray him.” she said shakily. She knew the griffon would hurt her for denying him but she had to try.

Iron was somewhat taken aback by her refusal but he didn’t move to strike her. “Very well, if that’s what you decide.” he said.

What happened next shocked Rainbow; the griffon got off the bed and walked out of her bedroom. Dash sat up and stared at the doorway, unable to believe that he had listened to her and did as she wished. Her look of relief soon turned to horror as she saw Iron return shortly, but with something she loved held tightly in one of his claws…

“Tank!” she cried out, getting up to rescue her beloved pet. Her pet tortoise looked at her helplessly as Iron held him by the neck. She froze in place as Iron held the tortoise higher and began to tighten his grip. Iron had spotted Tank when he snuck into her house, and catching the slow animal proved easier than convincing Pinkie Pie to eat a cupcake.

“Please, please don’t hurt him! I’ll do whatever you want! I’ll suck your dick, you can use my body whenever you want! Just let him go, please!” Dash begged.

Iron shook his head. “You had your chance to pleasure me, but you selfishly chose not to. Now you have to pay the price for disobeying my orders.” he said, acting like it was all her fault.

“No! Just wait, no!” Dash screamed as she tried to run forward to rescue her friend, but it was too late. Iron Rook squeezed with all his might, constricting Tank’s ability to breathe. Using his other claw, he grabbed the tortoise’s head and twisted it with one swift movement, ending the life of Dash’s loyal pet.

The crack reached Rainbow Dash’s ears, stopping her in her tracks. Her heart felt like it had just been crushed by a mountain. She watched in slow motion as Iron let go of her pet and let the limp body fall to the floor, never to rise again. Dash’s legs gave out and she collapsed on the floor, streams of tears pouring down her face as she cried out her pet’s name over and over.

Iron kicked the dead pet aside like a piece of trash and walked over to the sobbing mare. Grabbing her mane yet again, he lifted her head to force her to look at him. “If you EVER disobey me again, your friends will all lose their beloved pets also. And don’t even think of trying to warn anypony of me. None of them will believe you. Do as I say, and you’ll soon love the pleasure I can give you.”

Rainbow had no choice but to nod again. Iron released her and spit on her face, his saliva hitting her on top of her muzzle. Without a single glance back at the still crying mare, Iron left her house with a satisfied grin on his face. He would continue his charade for Twilight and all the other ponies as the hero who saved Fleur, but he could also relax as he had completed his primary task; disrupt the Elements of Harmony should they all regroup in the same town.

Plus he now had a personal fuck-toy to use anytime he wished. For him, life was looking good for Iron Rook.


Even in Canterlot’s state-of-the-art hospital, Zecora guessed that it would take weeks for her patient to show any signs of improvement. However, thanks to some unconventional methods that she knew but most ponies looked down upon, the mysterious zebra had the injured creature stable within just a few days, and it only took a few more days before her charge finally regained consciousness.

“Where… where am I?”

“In my humble home you are, I take it you have traveled far.”

“Ugh… my head. What happened?”

“Your head you mustn’t try to touch. Your body has been through so much.”

“Who are you?”

“I am Zecora, pleased to meet. Your survival was quite the feat.”

“Nice to meet you, Zecora. I’m Thunderbird.”


Author's Note

Before anyone says anything... yes, I did just go there. Not even the pets are safe. Oh, and it looks like Rainbow Dash doesn't get her 'happily ever after' yet, either.

So... who wants to guess where Spitfire is off to now?

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