Big Mac and Cheerilee's relationship problems

by fluttershy 1700

Rating: mature
Tags: Tragedy, Romance
Length: 1525

Big Mac and Miss Cheerilee are having relationship problems after secretly staying together since their mishap with the Cutie Mark Crusaders. So you have to go over to their new home in Ponyville and help them through their crisis.

This is a story much like the game Facade if you have played it. Big Mac and Miss Cheerilee are having relationship problems after secretly staying together since their mishap with the Cutie Mark Crusaders. So you have to go over to their new home in Ponyville and help them through their crisis. The Cutie Mark Crusaders may come in to play and their may even be death(s). Who will die? Will Big Mac and Cheerilee's relationship work out? You will have to read and find out.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-04-07 13:48:43 UTC

Chapter 1: fluttershy's problem

You wake up to your alarm clock it is about eight thirty, you also realize today's the day you have to see Big Mac and Cheerilee. Oh come on Flutterwing you can do this, you are Fluttershy's brother after all you say to yourself, surely some of her willingness has rubbed off on you, but then you realize so has her shyness. Anyways if you weren't Big Mac's best friend he would have asked someone else right?, oh well just get up and prepare yourself.

You get up knowing today is going to be rough but you think to yourself at least i have the morning to myself, until you hear a knock on your door so you, go to answer it. You hesitantly crack open the door and suddenly your sister Fluttershy bursts in tears streaming down her face. although she usually went to one of her friends when she had a problem, but when she had something that made her really sad she knew she could always count on you her big strong brother, even though you were no stronger than anypony else.she embraces you with a huge hug. "Oh Flutterwing it was just absolutely terrible" she says between sobs. although she comes to you when she is desperate only you could tell that this was probably nothing and that she probably got in an argument, likely with that friend of hers, Rainbow Dash who was always insulting her and hurting her without realizing what she did. "There there little sis, now tell ,me whats wrong?". you respond. "its horrible i got in a fight with rarity!" she says. You knew that this was no big deal and that rarity wouldn't just stop being her friend just because of that, but you have learned from past experience that when Fluttershy even has the tiniest argument with anypony, especially a friend that she instantly hates herself for it and must run to you for comfort.

Since you have dealt with this before you repeat what you always say to her, "its okay I'm sure Rarity wasn't being completely true with what she said, you know how she always says things she doesn't mean." you continue to repeat this as she calms down and eventually she looks up at you with her piercing blue eyes slightly red from crying. she says thanks and you expect her to leave like she always does but instead she gets up and beckons you to sit with her on the couch. You get up from the couch and walk over to her hesitating before sitting down. This is new and you have never seen her act like this before. After sitting down you look into her eyes, those piercing, beautiful, blue eyes. she looks at you shyly, just as her name says and says to you "i know you have to go speak to Big Mac and Cheerillee today, and i know that you probably don't want to since you wont be able to help them with their relationship so before you go i want to give you a present!" she says a shy yet somehow seductive voice. You are confused as you didn't see her come in with any package. You ask her how she could have a present if she didn't bring one in. All she does is simply nod towards the door and says "open the door for your present"

You walk over and see none other than Rarity dressed up in some lingerie that instantly begins to turn you on. Fluttershy walks out the door and quietly says "I'll leave you two alone". You sit there dumbfounded with your jaw wide open while Rarity pushes you in and shuts the door. As she walks up to your bedroom she realizes you aren't following her. she turns around and says "My dirty cunt isn't going to fuck itself, come on!". you follow her upstairs and into your room, she jumps on your bed and spreads her legs apart giving you a full view of her pussy. Your cock springs to full attention and you fell it growing to full size. Rarity looks down and lets out a small giggle seductively saying "I knew you'd be big but that's nearly ten inches! Now get over here and ravage me!". As you are still dumbfounded instinct kicks in and you climb on top of her. You are still a virgin so you have to fumble around some until your cock finally connects with her wet pussy. You begin to push forward into her and you can hear her screaming out with pleasure. "oh my you are quite the big boy aren't you?" she whispers into your ear. This encourages you so you begin to push in faster, You hear Rarity scream out in a mixture of pain and pleasure. "be careful down there this is only my second time" she worriedly says. You slow down and push further and further into her. once you get your entire cock in she whispers into your ear that you can go as fast as you want. you take her words straight to heart and thrust as hard and as fast as you can. you after about a minute of vigorous fucking you feel your balls clench. You know your reaching climax and so is Rarity. You yell her name and she yells yours as you both orgasm at the same time. once you are finished you collapse on the bed and fall asleep.

chapter 2: helping the lovebirds

[size=12] You wake up to sound of your phone ringing, as you get up you realize the sheets are soaked with sweat and your cum. you remind yourself to clean that up later. as you walk over and answer the phone you look at the time, its five thirty. "shit i was supposed to be at Big Mac's for five. you answer the phone and hear Cheerilee's voice. "hello Flutterwing is that you?". "yes Cheerilee I'm sorry i am late I uh... I lost track of time." you reply. "oh that's fine dear I just wanted to make sure, are you still coming?" she asks. You reply with a simple yes and hang up. You look yourself up and down, and realize your blue coat and red striped mane and tail are sticking up everywhere and are soaked with cum and sweat. you decide to hop in the shower.

While in the shower you review what just happened. Lets see Fluttershy comes in crying about her fight with Rarity. She says she has a present and to check outside, and Rarity is outside dressed up in lingerie, and we just have sex. I just don't get it, why would that suddenly happen. i mean not that I'm complaining or anything but its just so weird. Oh well ill have to think about that later, right now i have to get ready to go over and see Big Mac and Cheerilee. You hop out of the shower and dry yourself off.

As you are walking back you notice Rarity and give her a sheepish smile. she simply responds with " Hello darling, lovely afternoon isn't is?". you reply with a yes and continue trotting over to the couples house. Maybe it was just a dream? I mean its not like I would get as lucky as that. But it seemed so real. you think to yourself. You continue to ponder over whether or not it was a dream until you reach Big Mac and Cheerilee's house.

You knock on the door and Cheerilee answers. "Flutterwing were so glad you could make it! I'm just fixing us up a nice dinner and then we can eat." she tells you. Oh Big Maaac Flutterwing is here!" she yells into the house. you hear him respond with a simple "eeyup!" as he walks to the door. He leans in for a kiss from his darling Cheerilee but she shyly dodges it and turns to head for the kitchen. Big Macintosh lets out a long sigh and hangs his head low. "Come in" he says to you.

As you walk in you stop to admire the decor and Big Mac bumps into you, "sorry Mac i was just admiring your home." you say as you take in all the expensive furnishings, it is a very modern house wand there are many things that must have been very expensive, such as paintings from Picasadle himself. and even a TV so big not even Celestias magic would be able to raise it. "this sure is a nice place you got, how could you afford all of this?" you ask. "lloans, ah gotta keep Cheerilee happy dosnt I" he responds. "well yes but isn't this a little much for her, I mean even Rarity probably wouldn't ask for something as grand of a place as this!" you ask him. "eeyup" is all he says. you sit down on a plush and very comfortable couch that must have cost a lot and waited for what you knew was going to be a delicious dinner from Cheerilee