Flutter Drunk

by TittySparkles

Rating: mature
Tags: Original Character, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Romance, Fluttershy, Sex
Length: 5432

Fluttershy gets drunk and has sex with you.

[Second person clopfic featuring Fluttershy and a ponified version of you]

Heart break and alcohol are never a good mix, so how does an emotionally fragile pony like Fluttershy deal with it? You would be surprised.

Story idea I got from a blog I saw on Bronystories page some time ago.

Published 2013-04-07 16:20:02 UTC
Last updated 2013-04-07 16:20:02 UTC

Chapter 1

The smell of large quantities of alcohol greets your nose as you walk inside the dimly-lit bar. You almost feel nauseous as you make your way to the counter to order a simple drink, with the bits you have stored away in your saddle bag. You sigh while looking around at the few passed out drunks on either the floor or at their respective tables. You enjoy drinking as much as the next pony, but there’s always a few that go overboard. Looking back to the counter, you notice yet another pony passed out and freeze in your steps. The pony in question is a yellow Pegasus with a somehow neatly combed pink mane who seems to have her face hidden in her fore arms. Turning your eyes to her rather curvy hips, you notice her butterfly cutie mark and realize the mare in question is Fluttershy, element of kindness. You honestly don’t know how a beautiful mare like her would be at a bar like this. Deciding to approach her, you start to hear soft sobs coming from her, telling you she wasn’t passed out after all.

As you walk towards her, you can’t help but feel how sticky the floor is beneath your hooves. Looking around you notice streamers and party balloons either floating in the air, or popped and spread out on the floor. From the looks of the place, there was a bachelor party earlier on and it was a big one. Looking away from the party site, you refocus on the counter wanting to quench your thirst with a hard earned cider for your days’ work.

As you reach the counter, you sit down on one of the padded sits and the white unicorn bar tender greets you with a smile as he finishes polishing off a mug.

“Hard cider Frosty!”

You reach into your saddle bag and pull out four bits and put them on the counter. Frosty nods his head and quickly fills the mug he just cleaned with a nice, golden, frothy liquid and quickly puts it in front of you while grabbing the bits. As you lick your lips and grab the mug, you start to hear those soft sobs coming from the yellow mare beside you again. For a few brief seconds you feel the need to try and comfort the sobbing mare and get curious to why she of all ponies would be at the local watering hole.

“Are you alright miss?” You ask her as you put the mug down and turn your full attention to her. Fluttershy hears your voice and turns her face to you, blinking a few times to get the crusted tears out of her eyes before she sits up to face you. At the corner of your eyes, you can’t help but notice Frosty shaking his head at you, giving you a look that talking to her is the last thing you should have done.

“Oh…H-hello shir…” Her voice is gentle if not greatly affected by the large amount of alcohol she has induced.

As she sits up, you can’t help but notice about 7 shot glasses sprawled out from where her face was. Looking at her face you can see she had been crying for a long amount of time as her eyes appear bloodshot and very puffy. You instantly realized you’re about to engage in a conversation with a very drunk and seemly emotional pony.

“Are you alright?” You ask as you suddenly feel your own cider giving you a cold glare.

“I-I’m f-fine…Mishter Mug, may I have anosher shot?”

Watching her trying to sit up straight without falling over almost makes you want to sit right beside her and let her lean on you for some kind of support. Of course you don’t not wanting to look like some sort of lecher pony, trying take advantage of the poor mare.

“I’m afraid you’re cut off Miss Fluttershy. Anymore and you won’t be flying or even walking out of here by yourself.” Frosty says to her, shaking his head no while trying to not upset her.

“Oh…if you say so…” She replies as tries to get off her stool to try and leave.

She takes longer than you think is necessary to get her hooves on the ground without falling over. With her body fully off the counter, you notice about five more shot glasses that were hidden by her body and fully realize how hard she was hitting the alcohol. It takes a couple tries for her to finally pull herself off the stool and stand on the sticky floor without falling over, yet a few seconds after, she falls to the floor too drunk to walk.

“Maybe I should have cut you off earlier.” You hear Frosty mumble before he turns around and walks away.

Fluttershy gives off a sad face into the floorboards and you just stare thinking you need to help her in a way.

“Miss Fluttershy, do you need a hoof?” You ask her as you walk beside her and try to comfort her in a way.

“If thash ok with you…” She answers back, trying to smile at you without looking to drunk.

Giving her a quick nod you put her front leg over your shoulder and slowly rise up so both of you are standing on your back legs. The drunken mare is still very wobbly even with you holding her. Before you just noticed it, but now you can feel it on her.

“Can you help me go to the washroom?” She asks you trying not to slur her words, keeping her eyes focused on the floor.

With a nod of your head, you start walking for the washrooms on the other end of the bar. The walk is long and very unbalanced to say the least. Every step you take forward, her body tries to go in many other directions at once, almost making you fall over a few times. As both of you walk, you hear her mumbling something about someone cheating on her with another mare and breaking up with her. Logically putting her almost incoherent mumbling together, you can see why she was drinking herself stupid.

“Do you think I’m a pretty mare?” She suddenly asks you, almost catching you off guard as both of you come up to the mares washroom.

“Oh uh, yeah you’re a pretty mare, why do you ask?” You answer back not wanting to make her more upset.

“Well…because my coltfriend saysh the same thing but he started going out with another mare while still with me…” Her voice is starting to sound like she’s about to start crying again. Being the gentlecolt you are you think of something to try and consul her a bit.

“Your coltfriend is just a jerk who doesn’t know better. You’re a beautiful mare who’s polite and very kind to everyone around town.” You say with a lot of pep in your voice, hoping it would help somehow.

“Y-You think I’m beautiful?” She asks you a bit surprised you would say such a thing.

Looking at her in her current situation, that beauty could be argued. Her mane is slightly disheveled, her eyes are very glazed over, and her breath reeks of alcohol and grass.

“Of course! Your coltfriend should have been thankful to get a marefriend like you interested in him. I bet there are a lot of other stallions out and about interested in having you as a marefriend!”

“D-Do you think I would be a good marefriend?”

As she finishes her sentence, you feel her legs give out, almost making the both of you fall to the floor. Even though she’s a smaller mare, the large amount of drinking makes her body feel like dead-weight. Thankfully you manage to keep your balance and help her stand back up straight.

“I would be lying if I said no Miss Fluttershy. A mare like you deserves to have a coltfriend who treats you right! Anyway you should take care of your business and head off home for some rest.”

Pushing your free hoof out, you push open the washroom and quickly scan the area to make sure there aren’t any other mares around looking at you.

“Could…you help me to a stall? I don’t think I can walk by myself…” She says quietly feeling that large amount of liquor starting to unsettle in her stomach.

You smile and nod your head, knowing very well she has barely any power in her body to move by herself. Walking into the washroom, letting the door close behind you, you take in your surroundings. The washroom floor is caked in dirty hoof prints, giving the white floor an almost checkerboard look, The small garbage can in the corner is filled with varying items, giving the place a very unpleasant smell, and you can see used condoms littering the floor, greatly implying that the place is a regular place for drunken sex, and that the cleaner doesn’t do his job very well.

Walking towards the stalls, you open one up and quickly leave it as you see a clogged toilet full of very unsanitary bodily refuse. Keeping your stomach intact, you make sure Fluttershy doesn’t notice it and try for the second one. Opening it you look inside and see a clean toilet for her to use. Just before you sigh with relief you hear her burp and see her put her hoof to her mouth as her cheeks start to tremble. Before she could move forward, you hear her gag and hear the sound of all the alcohol rushing back up from her stomach.

Some of the alcohol hit the floor and the toilet seat, but the rest she manages to get into the toilet. As her head gets nearly buried in it, the smelly washroom starts to smell 1000 times worse than it did before. Quickly looking away from the pathetic sight of her puking up all that alcohol, you try to hold down your own disgust by rubbing your throat.

“Heh…ughhh…hrk.” Fluttershy pants as she feels the final bit of sticky liquid leave her mouth, allowing her to pull her head out of the once clean toilet to sit on the floor. You don’t say a word in case she would start back up again, getting any remnants of liquor out of her system. After a few long seconds, it’s clear she’s done.

“Are you ok?” You ask still feeling a very uncomfortable feeling in your gut lingering about. You hear her sniffle a few times before she answers.

“No wonder he cheated on me. I’m so pathetic…” She cries softly, letting her fragile emotions start to get the better of her.

“It…it’s not your fault. Stuff like that happens.” You say unsure of what to think.

“You think I’m pathetic don’t you…” Her voice is starting to sound shakier, signaling she is going to start crying loudly at any given time.

“N-no! I still think you’re a beautiful mare, you just went over your limit.” You answer back trying to prevent that from happening.

“You still think I’m beautiful?” She asks you turning her head back a bit to look at you.

Looking at her face you notice a bit of puke hanging from her chin along with a very distant look in her eyes. Those things mixed in with her already disheveled look, she looks truly pathetic.

“Of course I do. You just need to take better care of yourself first. You feel good enough to walk yet?” You say putting on a forced smile. Fluttershy stays quiet for a few seconds before you see a slight glint in her eyes as she smiles at you.

“Could you help me up? I think I’ll be able to walk better now.” Her voice sounds a bit more cheerful and slightly reassured as she asks you for a bit of help.

You smile at her thinking you’ve avoided disaster and walk into the stall to help her up. As you start to help her up, she slowly rises up but her legs give out, this time catching you off guard, making you fall backward and hitting your head on the tiled floor slightly hard. You wince from the blow but quickly freeze up as you find Fluttershy on top of you, mere centimeters from your face. You can feel one of her back legs stuck in between yours, pressing against your stallionhood very uncomfortably, while both her front ones rest against your broad shoulders. Her once bad breath is now so rancid you feel that very uncomfortable feeling it your gut building back up and think of a way to avoid it.

“You alright? Come on let’s get you up.”

“You said I’m a beautiful mare right?” She asks you ignoring your earlier words.

“Yes Miss Fluttershy I do. Now how about we-Mmph!?” Your words get cut off as you feel her warm lips press against yours.

The first thing you feel is her tongue wiggling its way into your mouth, along with the taste of backwash. You freeze up at her sudden movements and feel sick to your gut as a bit of something falls into your mouth almost making you throw up as well. At the corner of your eye, you look at the door suddenly hoping no one would walk in, seeing the both of you making out on a dirty washroom floor. You let the feeling sink in for a few seconds before you start to feel bad about the situation and push her body away, breaking the kiss.

“I-I’m sorry. I shouldn’t have…” She pouts out as she notices the confused expression on your face.

Before you try to answer, Fluttershy’s eyes go wide as she quickly turns her head around and stares at your crotch. Turning your eyes as well, you suddenly feel embarrassed as you notice your boner slowly growing out of it’s sheathe. Seeing it growing leaves you at a loss for words and a very drunk Fluttershy with a curious glint in her eyes.

“You do think I’m a beautiful pony don’t you…Do-do you really think I would be a good marefriend too?” She asks as she turns back to you with a longing for affection in her eyes.

You don’t like where this is going and start to panic a bit. Taking in the whole situation, you realize you got an emotionally fragile, drunken pony wanting affection on to you, waiting for an answer. You wish you could say no and just go drink your cider you paid for, but if you do then you risk leaving an eager mare alone on a dirty washroom floor to cry herself senseless thinking you lied to her just to make her feel bad.

“I-I think you would be a great marefriend, b-but we just met so-mmph!” Again you’re interrupted as she quickly lurches forward, planting her lips on yours, more eager than before.

You don’t know what to do anymore. Everything is starting to go too fast for you to handle and your thought process is greatly affected by the sloppy beer flavored kiss Fluttershy is giving you. You can feel her tongue swirling around yours greatly as she softly moans into you like you were a lover rekindling a passion for one another. You want to try and stop her but for some reason you don’t want to. Those hungry moans that escape her throat, those sloppy kisses along with the warm feeling of her fur keep you at bay.

Fluttershy stops for a second and pulls her body up from yours and smiles at you softly. While you’re still a bit dazed from the kiss, you notice that she turns her for the stall door and pushes it closed to try and hide the both of you if any other ponies were to enter.

“I’ll prove I can be a good marefriend.” She says softly as she turns her eyes back a bit to your fully erect penis.

Everything about the whole situation feels very wrong to you. If you keep going at her pace, you’ll both end up having sloppy sex on a filthy washroom. Your morals tell you to end it and go home but your perverted mind tells you otherwise. As you still try to figure it out, Fluttershy gives a soft ‘mhm’ before she moves back forward into your face for another kiss. As your lips meet once again, the feeling is accompanied by the feeling of her soft hoof running along your penis, stroking it nice and slowly.

You finally give in to your perverted thoughts and start to enjoy the situation you’re in. Moving your hooves a bit, you start to move them along the sides of her ass, signaling you’re going to show affection back. She pulls away slightly and you hear her mutter something before going back in. Her rancid breath still makes your stomach very uncomfortable but as long as she doesn’t vomit in your mouth, you ignore the smell and hope any lingering backwash doesn’t fall into your throat.

“Please, I need you to rut me. I’ve been so lonely ever since he left on me. I need it so badly.” She nearly begs as you feel her warm body softly grind against your own, trying to urge you to say yes to her lustful desires.

This is not the Fluttershy you’re used to seeing. The mare you’ve noticed around town was quiet, cheerful, and never forcing herself onto hers. This mare on top of you has a goal. She’s pushing her assertiveness and getting what she wants. You can’t say no to this, nor would any stallion in their right mind would.

“If you say so,” You answer with a smirk before your give her ass a light smack.

Fluttershy smiles and tries to move her body off yours to stand up. She’s still very wobbly but at least she’s able to pull herself up and use the encased spaces as a means to stay up. Turning her body around, she puts her face in the direction of the toilet and quickly flushes it so she doesn’t have to look at her old bodily fluids while lifting her tail up slightly, presenting herself to you. Thanks to the lighting in the washroom, you can see a bit of wetness around her entrance, signaling how badly she wants it. Not wanting to keep a lady waiting, you quickly pull yourself up and stand on your back legs.

Resting your front legs on her back, you lean forward let your erection rest between those two fluffy buns beneath it. Fluttershy braces her body by moving her front hooves to the top of the toilet for support, while slightly spreading her back ones, giving you a bit more room.

You take a second to let it all sink in as you stand over her body, staring downward at yourself. You start to realize how lucky you got tonight, but your thoughts are cut off when you hear the mare whimper and fidget her back legs, signaling she really wants it. You really wish you had a condom and look to the floor in hopes an unopened one is resting on it, and in turn you only see empty packets and a bit of greenish vomit near the toilet. Looking back at her, you knew you’ll have to play it safe and pull out at the last second and either cake the floor or her backside with your seed.

“I-I don’t have a condom.” You tell her hoping she may have one hidden on her body somewhere.

“Don’t worry; I’ll finish you off nicely…If you want me to that is…”

Just listening to her talk to you in her soft yet drunken voice, sends pulses of energy throughout your body, nagging to get started. Pulling your body back a bit, you line up your dick with her moist pussy and feel the intense heat coming from it.

“Please just put it in.” She begs in a soft tone.

You obey and she moans softly as you rock your hips forward, sliding your erection into her with a bit of ease. You feel her body shake and feel her pussy clench around your dick, not wanting it to leave her body. You managed to get about an inch of it inside of her very hot and oddly tight pussy, before you start to slowly push the rest into her body. As you continue to push it inside, you feel her rear moving back a bit; almost like she just wants you to fully it get it in and fuck her silly. You plan on doing just that, but first you want to enjoy the first seconds, slowly teasing her. Once it’s about half way in, you slowly pull it out until only the head of it is still inside of her, and then quickly ram it in fully until her ass meets your stomach.

“Oh my gosh!~” She squeals with excitement as your member finally finds its way into her.

You don’t wait and start to slowly build a rocking motion, pulling yourself out and pushing it back in hard enough to hear a soft noise when both your bodies meet at the entrance. Fluttershy’s moans start to get a bit louder, and you slowly fear you many get some unwanted visitors, popping in to see what the notice is about. You pray to Luna herself and hope you don’t get caught in the act.

“Not so loud, I don’t want anyone getting curious.” You say to her in a hushed, yet serious tone.

Fluttershy acknowledges your words and her moans start to become muffled, by biting her lip to fight the urge. Fluttershy looks forward and stares at her reflection in the water below her face feeling very dirty for what she was doing. Closing her eyes she looks at the head of the toilet and starts to pull herself forward and slamming herself back, in order to try and met your movements, giving both of you a rush of pleasure every time.

You start to lose track of time as you continue to plow her cunt on the spot, noticing the vomit still lingering about is starting to smell worse. Just smelling the rancid air makes your mouth feel a bit disgusting, making you turn your head to the side and spitting out a glob of spit at the floor. You’re not going to complain about it though. You’ll take a bit of horse vomit in your mouth if it meant you would end up fucking a mare like Fluttershy any day of the week.

“Unnnn…I’m so close!” She whines trying ever so hard to get herself off, breaking your thoughts up.

Being the nice pony you are, you put a bit more power and speed into your thrust to give her the best ending possible. She notices the extra movement in your body and starts to struggle keeping her muffled moans to a low level. Fluttershy quickly looks around, hoping to find something to moan into to take the pain off her lower lip and just enjoy it without any restraints. She quickly decides to use her hoof to muffle her moans, realizing nothing is in reach. She gets a bit louder but not loud enough to warrant any visitors popping in on the both of you.

Suddenly you feel her body stop, making you realize she’s on the verge of cumming on your dick. You’re thankful you’re not close yet, considering you would love to feel her hot mare juice, coat your dick, giving you much more ease in fucking her.

“Mhmmmm!” Is the only thing she says as you feel her body tense up but quickly relax as a warm sensation greets your still erect dick, greedily pounding away at her. Her orgasm doesn’t stop you, rather it makes you want to go even harder into her body. Pushing her body a bit forward, you take a step and end up stepping in a vomit spot on the floor. The liquid catches you off guard, sending you falling backwards, hitting your head against the stall before your back hits the floor, while at the same time yanking your erection out from its little cavern.

“Ah Fuck!” You curse bringing your hooves to your head as a throbbing pain starts to start up.

Fluttershy notices you hit your head and is quickly taken out of her blissful state as she turns around and looks at you.

“Oh my gosh! I-I’m so sorry! A-are you okay!?” she says to you in a worried tone as she tries to pull you up.

Your head hurts for sure, but your happy it doesn’t feel like anything serious happened to you. You’ve taken worse falls and walked it off so this is something you’re used to dealing with.

“I’ll be okay, it wasn’t your fault. I didn’t hurt you went a fell back did I?” You ask her feeling a bit of pain in your dick from the painful exit it just took.

“I’m fine, but d-did you slip on…”

You watch her head travel to the side and he quickly notices the greenish smear on the floor and on your hoof showing it was her own previous vomit that made you slip. You quickly notice a saddened expression on her face and realize she’s going to cry at any given second. You don’t want it to end like this and quickly reach forward and pull her chin towards you.

“It’s not your fault. I should have been more careful when I moved.” You say to her, rubbing the sore spot on the back of your head.

The washroom goes quiet for a few seconds and you start to hear her taking deep breathes, noticing she is still trying to recover from her earlier orgasm. During the silence you notice her eyes shift from yours to your still hardened penis, making you wonder if she still wants it.

“I’m such a bad marefriend. It was my fault you got hurt.” She says softly as she moves her body a bit back so her face is level with your dick.

“F-Fluttershy it wasn’t-ahh!” You start to say but get cut off as she wraps her lips around the head of your cock.

You don’t say a word as you feel her velvety tongue rub against it as she hums gently into you, before she takes her lips off of it and quickly puts her hooves on the bottom of your shaft to keep it still.

“Will you forgive me if I do this?” She says as she licks the tip first, before running her tongue around head and circling all the sides before she pulls her mouth off and traces up and down your shaft, licking every drop of her mare cum off each side of your pulsating cock.

Even as she moved her head in a rather expert like manner, she never takes her gorgeous eyes off your trembling face. You honestly don’t know what to say, even though the words are sitting on your tongue waiting to come out. The only thing you think about is how depraved she looks, yet how beautiful she is at the same time. You only respond by sighing softly and resting your head against the door, staring at the roof. Fluttershy quickly takes your silence as a yes and continues to play with your dick, making sure no part of it is left untouched by her tongue.

Your body would feel wonderful if it wasn’t for the pounding in your head, making the perfect scene not so perfect. Yet like the vomit taste in your mouth, you ignore it and remember where you are right now. A little pain in exchange to get off by the mouth of a hero is enough for you.

The minutes pass slowly, and Fluttershy works your shaft accordingly, making your erection that much more wet, if not a bit smelly. For a brief second she pulls her lips away and you turn your head downward to she was she is about to do. As your eyes see her face, she puts the head of it in her mouth and starts to dive down on it, taking a few inches into her throat. You tense up as you watch her move a bit more down on it, taking just over half of it inside before you feel her gag a bit. For a second you worry she’ll take too much and gag hard enough to vomit even more then better. The last thing you want right now is to get your crotch soaked in beer and other things she may have not tossed out the first time. Not done taking it in, she continues to move more of it in.

“Holy fuck!” You curse as you feel about 3/4ths of it go inside of her throat before she hits her limit and stops briefly, only to start to slowly bob her head.

Again your head goes upward as you enjoy the feeling of her throat caressing your dick. You were always sure a small mare like her would never take so much in, but you know alcohol had a knack for bring out hidden talents in lots of ponies. It could have been that or she had experience with her previous boyfriend, and you started to wonder why the slimy bastard left her in the first place.

The worry of her vomiting on you quickly disappears as you move one hoof up to her mane and rest it against it while she starts to move in a perfect motion. Fluttershy doesn’t show any signs of feeling your hoof rest against her mane, as she focuses fully on getting you off.

Again time ticks on as the lustful Pegasus works your shaft expertly, making you come closer and closer to your climax. You would love for it to never end but the sound of bar music starting to play was signaling the bar was starting to fill up, making it more likely you’ll end up getting caught. You begin to wonder if she can hear the music, but her attention is fully on getting you off.

You don’t know how much longer you can hold on as you feel it building up, wanting to get released all over the place on preferably in her throat. You hope she swallows; hoping you won’t have to worry about cleaning up your fur too much and end up walking out just to have a pony point it out in the bar. The thought quickly dies off as you feel the end starting to approach you.

“F-Fluttershy, I’m getting close too…” You stammer out, trying to hold on as long as you can.

"Mmhm," Fluttershy answers back, humming into your dick without losing her pace. She makes no effort to move her mouth away and you take it as a sign she’ll show your load. Before you can worry about if she’ll vomit from attempting to swallow it, you feel a sharp jolt and start to cum. Once it starts fluttershy stops as starts to swallow as much as she can, doing her best to not lose it when she was so close to the end.

The seconds are long but you finally stop cumming before Fluttershy pulls her mouth away with a soft ‘ahh…’ before giving you an almost childlike smile. Catching your breath from the moment, you notice a bit of your cum on the tip of her lower lip. Before you can point it out to her, she reaches up and wipes it away and lets out a small burp.

“Umm…could you wait outside for a second…?” You notice her face starts to look a little sick and you know she’s about to vomit again. Even though you rather not move, you quickly get up and leave the stall just in time to hear her puke into the toilet.

As Fluttershy empties her stomach, you start to realize the full gravity of the situation. You and Fluttershy just had sex on a washroom floor, after meeting for the first time. The word ‘marefriend’ echoes in your mind as you start to realize she’ll want to be YOUR marefriend now. Leaning your head back against the stall, you start to realize your life is going to be a bit more complicated now.