The Tragedy of Twilight Sparkle

by forgotten5p1rit

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Hi there everypony, I’m forgotten5p1rit and this is my 1st story.

This is derived from the famous play “The Tragedy of Macbeth” By William Shakespeare

The idea of creating this however, was not. Here is where this idea came to form.

This all started with the story “Cheerilee’s Garden” (Gore), there was a play in that in which the class of Cheerilee had to perform to an audience, I was reading that play (which was about 10 pages, I don’t know, that is somehow the number I remember…) while talking to a pegasister in my school on facebook. I said these exact words (First I groaned because it was 48 pages then said that My Little Dashie was shorter than this, she then replied with “It’s not that long, it only took me 15 minutes”) “I’m just skimming, wana see the goods bits…8 pages for a play, good god, somepony would probably make a parody of Macbeth...for god sake…” and she responded with something I cannot remember but that is not important because as soon as I typed those words and hit the “enter” key, the idea formed in my mind (I mentioned Macbeth because in school, we were learning Shakespeare and our English teacher chose Macbeth), I spent a few days planning it and, well, here it is! I hope you all enjoy and I hope you are reading this before you read on.

Before you read however, I must warn you that this is all typed in the English language we use today, none of the Shakespeare words, the format is different from the original play (By this I mean nothing like Scene 1 Act 1 ect ect) as well, so this might be a little different for those who have already known the play “Macbeth” in any form what so ever. And some parts of the play are cut out, some characters missing too. So for those filly and gentlecolts expecting that this story will be like the original play, I am sorry to say that this is not the case for I am only in year 9 and writing the play in the Shakespearian language is simply beyond my knowledge at this point in time. Sorry for any inconvenience. By the way, I do understand that Twilight has become a princess, I guess I wrote this fan fic a little too late, but I am still continuing this, so this is just Twilight, not in princess form.

And yea, that is really all I have to say about this story, I hope you all sincerely enjoy it and if you do, please tell me by leaving some feedback in the comments section, if you don't like it, give me some constrctive criticism as to why it is bad and what I cam make it more enjoyable for you. If you have anything you want me to change (spelling errors or incorrect transcription), please let me know.

Brony on everypony,

~5p1rit

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