Cutie Mark Collectors

by ZaGreenThunder78

Rating: mature
Tags: Alternate Universe, Sad, Dark
Length: 788

Applebloom is expecting her cousin Babs for a visit all the way from Manehattan. Babs seems pretty excited, but what she doesn't know what she's getting herself into.

NOTE: This in my FIRST fanfiction, so it's sort of crappy. Now this is sort of gory. You have been warned. That's all I really need to say. Please enjoy!

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-04-11 06:46:14 UTC

The Fun

Applebloom turned from complete excitment to pure joy. She grabed a bonesaw and started spining it in circles. "Are you ready?" she cheered. Babs started violently shaking her head in disagrement. "Oh don't be so silly, of course you are!" she answered. "This is my favorite toy, our backstory is long, but since your about to die I can tell you....... That's it." Then Applebloom violentley striked her arms with the saw, impacting the bone. Babs cried and attempted to call for help. "Ooooh, what's wrong? Pony got your tounge?" she taunted Babs swinging her bleeding tounge around. Babs then grabed a blade and carved her flank off. She grabed a hammer and nailed Babs flank to the wall. "It looks alot better up there than it did on you." she said. Applebloom cut Babs stomach pulling oragans out one by one. "Like unwrapping a gift, except more amusing!" Applebloom cheered. Babs was almost about to bleed out and die. "Fuck, someone might find your body." she thought. Then Applebloom saw an iron mare. She then grabbed Babs body, put her inside and shut it. The spikes impaled in to her heart and Babs.... died. "Aww. So soon? I just was having fun, well you know what they say, if you love something let it die!" she said to herself. Applebloom mocked her dead body in ways suck as puppetering her skeleton with her esophagus, playing go fish, or just sitting there laughing at it. Applejack bursted in the room. "What in tarnation is goin' on in here?" she said. Applebloom grined and held her bone saw "You're next..." she chuckled.

The Begginig

Cutie Mark Collectors

"Morning Applebloom!" she hollered. Applejack pulled the covers off her.  Applebloom growled and tried to pull the sheet on her head. "Why do you have to wake me up now?" she moaned. Applejack helped her get up out of bed. "You're cousin Babs is visting all the way from Manehattan." Applebloom had a sudden jolt of energy. She began skipping around her bedroom. "Babs is coming!" she cheered. "Now ya better behave and not get into trouble." she instructed. After a while, Babs arrived. Applebloom rushed to her and hugged her. "Babs! I missed you so much!" she said. "Woah now, good to see you Applebloom" she replied. They then headed to the treehouse. "So, what you wanna do Applebloom?" Babs asked. "Well depends on your definition of fun, or gettin our marks." she replied. The two looked around Sweet Apple Acres for countless hours, attempting to get their Cutie Marks as they always desiered. Babs blew her mane out of her face. "I....just don't get it. How do we manage to not get our marks after countless times and attempts that put our lives into danger?" Applebloom cried. She spotted a rock afterwards. "I GOT IT!"  she hollered. "What, rock farmin.... Ahg!". Babs was stopped by Applebloom chucking a rock at full force aimed for her head. "Rock farming? More like rock throwing." she giggled.

The Reveal

When Babs woke up, she was in a slightly lit room. Her head had a bandage on it and felt healed and alot better. "Hello? Anypony there?" she shouted. "Yeah, I'm here." a familiar voice called back. Then Applebloom came out of the darkness. "Hey Babs, look I'm sorry for chucking that big rock at you." she apoligized. "Apolgy accepted, now lets get out of..." Babs was stopped by the apperance of the room. She saw walls of chrome blood stained. Lungs, kidney, liver and other oragans were hung on hooks. Cuite Marks nailed to the wall in alphibetical order, including a spot marked BABS SEED. "What's a matt.... Oh! That? Well, When I was younger, I acidentally cut another crusader's with a knife cause we attempted to get a wood carving cutie marks. But I thought, hey an undercover murderer mark. Why not?" Applebloom answered in a suprisingly calm voice. "What are you doing?" Babs cried in fear. "I still don't forgive you what you, Diamond Tiara, and Silver Spoon did to me. So not only will I cut your flank, I'll kill you jerk." she snapped. Babs started crying. "Help m..." Babs voice was stopped by Applebloom. "SHUT THE FUCK UP" she yelled. Applebloom grabed a small blade and cut her tounge off. Babs was crying in agony more than she was in fear. Applebloom strapped a surgical mask to her face. "Now lets have some fun..." She left Babs alone to bleed a little while. She came back with a medical kit scribbled out and read APPLEBLOOM'S TOYBOX. She began to laugh maniacly. "Oh, I haven't been this ready since I first made cupcakes with Scootaloo!" she cheered.