Shrunken Dash

by Violet Emblem X

chapter 11

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A butter-yellow mare with pink hair trotted home happily with a very small cyan mare with a rainbow hued mane on her head. The sun shone brightly above them as they smiled in the sunshine. Unfortunately no-one had told Rainbow Dash of Fluttershy's current house guest so she didn't see much to worry about. She sat happily atop her friend's head and found herself thinking about something. She suddenly felt the urge to ask if she may stay with another friend but didn't want to upset her timid friend.

"Hey Fluttershy?" Dash asked in her squeaky voice.

"Hmm? Oh, yes Rainbow Dash?" Flutershy asked, still trotting along.

"Y-you don't think the animals will try to, y'know, eat me?" She asked with worry clear in her voice on the last two syllables. Fluttershy gasped in horror at the sound of somepony even saying that about her wonderfully behaved animals.

"Of course not Rainbow Dash how could you even say that!" Fluttershy squeaked.

"Umm, Fluttershy. I'm just bigger than a bee." Rainbow said with a blank look on her face.

"Don't worry, you'll be fine." Fluttershy smiled. Rainbow Dash sighed and remained quiet for the rest of the journey. They soon came to Fluttershy's cottage where a hungry Angel bunny angrily thumped his foot on the floor.

"Oh no, did I miss your feeding time Angel!? Oh dear, just a moment Rainbow!" Fluttershy panicked setting Rainbow Dash down next to Angel.

"Eh heh heh, h-hi Angel..." She said, worried about what the dangerous rabbit might do to her at this size considering all the things he done to ponies whom where normal sized. Angel hopped over to Rainbow Dash as she gulped still unable to move due to her fractures. "uh Fluttershy?" Rainbow called as Angel came closer. "F-Fluttershy?" Still no response. "FLUTTERSHYYYYYYYY!" She screamed, and not a moment after it Fluttershy came in with a bowl of salad.

"Angel!" Fluttershy gasped fluttering over to the bunny. "We don't hurt guests okay Angel? Good now eat your salad." She said before turning round to speak to Rainbow. " Hmmm, now where can you stay for now."

"Don't you still have the guest bedroom?" Dash asked with a puzzled look on her face.

"Oh yes of course I do, but it's being used just now by Discord." Flutershy said. Rainbow Dash gulped and stuttered.

"D-Discord is still here?" And then as if on cue Discord materialised in front of them.

"Did someone call for me?" He joked, making a telephone appear in his hand.

"Oh, actually Discord I was just wondering. Would you mind sharing a room with Rainbow here for now?" Fluttershy asked ending her sentence with an adorable *squee*.

"Umm where IS Rainbow Dash?" he asked making a pair of binoculars appear.

"I'm down here!" She glared at him. Discord stared at her for a few moments before breaking out into fits of laughter.

"BWA HA HA HA! Oh this is rich, the element of Loyalty is now about an inch tall!" Discord said through fits of laughter.

"Yeah laugh it up, why don't you?" Rainbow said rolling her eyes. "Fluttershy there is no WAY-"

"Of course Rainbow can share with me Fluttershy we'll have SOOO much fun!" Discord said narrowing his eyes and putting on a creepy smile.

"Wonderful!" Fluttershy cheered. "I'll just be down in the market, the chickens need more feed. Bye you two!"

"Oh good bye Fluttershy!" Discord said standing at the door waving at her with a handkerchief in his paw. As soon as she was out of view, Discord slammed the door behind him and turned to Rainbow now with a mix of a mischevious and creepy smile set upon his face.

"Well Rainbow Dash lets have some fun!" He cheered, as Dash backed away from him slowly.


"Ughhhh, I feel sick, let me out now!" Dash yelled, staring daggers at Discord.

"Oh, Dash you look so cute floating around in that bubble I couldn't POSSIBLY let you out!" Discord laughed, rolling on the floor and clutching his stomach.

"I want out! I'm gonna be sick!" She yelled, her face turning a sickly shade of green. She started banging on the bubble, however it did not burst. Then again she couldn't hit it hard at all considering her fractured limbs.

"I told you Rainbow Dash this bubble can only be popped from the outside!" Discord said making his eyes appearin his paw, rolling them.

"WHEN I GET OUT OF THIS I AM GOING TO BUCK YOU TO TARTARUS!" She yelled afer puking a few times, and now sitting in a puddle of her own vommit.

"Oh ho ho! Getting cocky are we?"

"Yeah, just get me ou of the celestia damned bubble!" She yelled again.

"Hmmm, you know, maybe I should get you out of the bubble." He said, with a creepy smile.

"Yeah well you be- uh, D-Dicord?" She stuttered when she noticed the look he had on his face.

"Bye bye Dashie!" He chuckled.

"Wait no I was just kidding I didn't mea-"

POOF!

And Rainbow Dash was gone. Meanwhile in another part of ponyville a pink pony was shaking like mad.

"Hey Applejack?"

"Yeah, sugarcube?"

"My pinkie sense is acting up." Pinkie said.

"Huh. Is that right? Well Pinkie whaddya think it's doin' that fer?"

"I think somepony is about to get mauled by Timberwolves in the everfree forest" Pinkie smiled, obviously not noticing what she had actually just said.

"sweet Celestia. we need ta get there now! Go get Twalight an' the others!" Applejack yelled, darting off like a bullet

"Okie dokie lokie!" Pinkie smiled cheerfully, bouncing off in the direction of the Golden Oaks library.


"Ughh where am I?" Dash asked looking around for an inkling as to where she may be. "Oh no..." She whispered noticing where she was. a loud snarling could be heard and a yellow glow peeked out from in the bushes. "Oh no! I'm gonna DIIIEEEEEE!"

She tried to move her hooves, but they where still broken. Her wings seemed to be doing better so she gave them a few small flaps. They worked! She gave them a few strong flaps, pulling herself up into the air. She immediately regretted doing so as a searing pain shot through her wings, and back. She fell back to the ground and let out a scream of anguish.

This however did not help matters in the slightest. In fact quite the contrary, it instead attracted the attention of four Timberwolves. If they where already seen by regular sized ponies as very large and intimidating creatures, well let's just say Rainbow's life flashed before her eyes. The largest Timberwolf (presumably the pack leader) inched closer until it's muzzle was right above Rainbow thus drenching her in floods of it's saliva which was tree sap.


Author's Note

Sorry for such a long delay it really has been a hectic week though X Well I didn't really know how to do a Discord personality so sorry about that. Also I was going to write another story but my brother stole that and is using it to write as I believe all you older bronies out here call it a *clop* fic. Yes he did change the story idea. When he is done I will let you know. -shudders-

Once again, criticism much appreciated X

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