Revenge.

by gstriela

Rating: teen
Tags: Dark, Alternate Universe, Spike, Tragedy, Sad, Main 6, Gore, Original Character, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Length: 3049

Twilight tries a new spell, but fails and lets out a horrible monster into Ponyville.

Twilight tries a new spell, but fails and lets out a horrible monster into Ponyville, that seeks out her friends and punishes them.
Credit to Artha-Amberose on deviantArt for cover.
It's still work in progress. I will add the rest of the mane6 in next chapters. My first language isn't English, so please point out the mistakes in the comments and I will fix them. Please rate and comment.

Published 2012-02-07 13:10:20 UTC
Last updated 2012-02-13 21:48:08 UTC

Sacrifice

It was a full moon in Equestria, when suddenly Owlicious woke up Twilight.
“Thanks Owlicious, I almost forgot. Spike! We’re going out!”
“But it’s midnight, what are you going to do at this time?” said Spike while still sleeping.
“I’ll explain en route, now just go.”
“Okay, okay, going.”
Ten minutes later they was near Everfree forest.
“So what are you going to do in Everfree forest, in the middle of the night, especially when it’s full moon?” asked Spike.
“Remember those ShadowBolts that Nightmare Moon summoned to distract Rainbow Dash? I looked for a spell that would do something familiar, and found a spell that can summon legendary ponies to life.” Explained Twilight with a creepy smile.
“So something like possessing?”
“Yes, something like that.”
“And you need me because…?”
“You are going to be my sacrificial body!”
“Oh no, forget it, I would never do this! What if you couldn’t dispel me afterwards?”
“Of course I couldn’t, it’s a forever lasting spell.”
“So you still chose me?”
“Of course, it’s because you are my number one asistant.”
“NO! Forget it, I’m not going any further.”
“But we are already here.” Happily said Twilight.
You could see some kind of grass field with altar shaped in cross behind the fog.
“Now, shall we begin?” Asked Twilight.
Spike noticed something different about her. She looked different, her hair was messy, eyes red and always had that creepy smile on her face.
“Twilight, this is not you, snap out of it, you would never sacrifice me for a spell.”
“Oh, but I will NOW, because if this works, I can get more power than you ever imagined. You are just a small detail, I won’t need you anymore.”
“But why Twilight? What if you don’t succeed?”
“It’s worth the risk.” Calmly replied Twilight.

Her horn glowed while Spike tried to run. Suddenly he stopped and felt pain like thousands of needles were piercing his skin. He never felt that much pain, because his skin was hard enough to brake anything that tried to stab or cut him, until now. He tried to move, but nothing happened, just felt more pain.
“Don’t struggle, it will only make your pain” said Twilight like she didn’t care at all.
Her horn glowed once more making spike flow to the altar, where he could see some bindings attached to it. Twilight used her magic once more making Spike bound to the altar. Spike could move as far as the bindings lets him, but he still couldn’t talk. Twilights horn started glowing so brightly, that Spike had to close his eyes. She started saying some kind of words he could not understand, when suddenly, on the ground, a burning pentagram appeared and altar was in center of it. A strange purple wall surrounded the pentagram. Suddenly a burning pain started ripping Spike apart from inside, he started changing, his skin and scales started falling down and some spikes coming from his heart started expanding, peeling his flesh from bones. After a while the spikes retracted his flesh and bones, at least what was left of it, shaping to a dark silhouette of a pony. The glowing stopped and you could clearly see that pony, it was a red colt with two horns and a pair of wings like bat. Twilight started smiling and laughing.
“Who dears to summon ME? Who dears to summon the great Duiwel?” shouted that pony.
“I-it was me! I did, you now belong to ME!!!” Twilight couldn't believe she actually did it.
“I belong to nopony, if you are wise, you will let me go or die in pain.”
“Oh, I’m not letting you, NEVER. You will do as I say and you will do it now. Don’t try to attack me, I set up some defense spells, you won’t be able to reach me.”
Duiwel opened his mouth and red flames came out burning Twilights face. It’s was seconds after he closed his mouth, but the damage was already done. Twilight started screaming as her face was skinless and blood was dropping on the grass.
“B-but how? How could you do this?” Said Twilight while trying to suppress the pain.
“My magic is beyond your knowledge pony, you could never set a spell that could stop me. Not even Celestia could.” Grinned Duiwel. ”Now let me show you what magic is really all about.”
Duiwels horns started glowing with bright red light as the little grass stems started expanding, until they started piercing her legs, stomach, neck and even her horn. It was pain she never imagined, she screamed and cried as much as she could.
“Ahhh, the screams of ponies, haven’t heard of those in awhile.”
She stopped screaming and the grass retracted.
“Ironic, isn’t it? You died the same way you sacrificed your friend, by making spikes pierce his body, but I guess you aren’t the only sinner in Equestria? How about we pay your friends a little visit?” laughed and walked away Duiwel.

Fluttershy's doorbell rang.
“I wonder who is it?” said Fluttershy when opening the door.
Duiwel stood and smiled at Fluttershy behind the door.
“Hi, Fluttershy.”
“Y-you know my name?”
“I know everyponies name.”
“I-I never seen anypony like you. Are you a alicorn?”
“Yes and no, but this is not why I came here.”
“Why did you came here?” Fluttershy got suspicious.
“I’m here to punish you, sinner.” The creepy smile on Duiwels face got bigger.
“P-punish ME? But I didn’t do anything wrong, have I?”
“You did and now you have to face the consequences. You used your stare power to control almost every animal in this forest, but only few times you used it right. You DON’T use it on farm animals, you DON’T use it to scare away pests, you DON’T use it on pets. You ONLY use it for calm wild animals that is threatening you.”
“Oh sorry, I feel bad now, I won’t do it again and if excuse me I will be on my way, please…?”
“Oh, but I’m not done with you yet, my dear Fluttershy” laughed Duiwel.
“You are starting to scare me mister, please let me go.”
“Not a chance. First, let us make you feel the pain you caused to the poor animals with your stare.”
Duiwels blank eyes started to shine and Fluttershy started to feel a strange pain behind her skin, it felt like every muscle in her body started burning. Fluttershy started screaming, but the pain rapidly increased. It lasted about ten minutes, she had no more energy left to scream or stand and almost every bit of skin has melted.
“Now you know the pain that the poor animals felt and the consequences of using the stare on animal for to long.”
Fluttershy pulled the last of her:
“B-b-but how? I couldn’t use stare on ponies.”
“It’s not the stare, it’s just the pain it causes, but anyways I think you learned your lesson.”
The pain suddenly disappeared and Fluttershy felt alive again.
“Will you let me go now?”-she asked because she knew that running was not going to help her.
“No, I will send you to hell, sinner.”
He started laughing while Fluttershy felt that she could not move. The strange pentagram from before reappeared on the ground where Fluttershy was standing.
“Well then my dear, I guess this is a goodbye then.”
The ground with the pentagram disappeared and Fluttershy fell into abyss. Soon enough the ground reappeared.
“This is so fun punishing these puny little ponies.”-said Duiwel while laughing hysterically.
He spread his wings and with a few little sweeps flew to Apple Acre farm.

Few minutes later he found Applejack bucking apples in farm, so he flew right next to her.
“Oh, hello there fella. You must be outsider, we don’t usually get visitors, how do you like it in Ponyville?”-asked Applejack as polite as she could.
“Why good, thank you for asking.”-smiled Duiwel.
“So what business do you have in Ponyville?”
“Well, as a matter of fact, I came here for you.”
“M-me?”-Applejack started getting suspicious.
“Yes, you see, I’m a Satan himself, your friend Twilight Sparkle summoned me, I killed her and now I’m after her sinner friends.”
“You must be joking. Are you some kind of psycho?”
“You were so focused on getting money for your farm, you didn’t notice that others started getting poor because of your greed. You know you are the only apple and its product suppliers for Ponyville, so you raised prices as much as possible, leaving few people without food for a few days or even weeks.”
“Look mister, I don’t know you, but you starting to creep me out, so please leave my property and Ponyville, we need to survive too and it’s not your business what we do with our clients or prices.”
“You are not trying to survive, you are getting spoiled and now you are going to pay for everything you’ve done. You better prepare yourself for some pain, BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!"

The end

And there she was lying on the ground next to the apple tree. Dead because of starvation.
“Well that was quick. Guess she really was spoiled. Anyways lets keep going. Who’s next? Ah yes, Rarity, our lady of Ponyville.”
Duiwel spread his wings once again and as lightly as last time he got to Rarity’s house with only few blows. He knocked the door to Rarity’s house.
“Ah, this must be Lyra for her dress.”
Rarity swiftly jumped from her desk chair and went to open the door.
“I just fini… oh you’re not Lyra. Who are you and what do you want?”
A quick shiver went down Rarity’s spine when she first saw him, she had a feeling it’s not going to end well.
“Rarity, I came here to judge you, worthless maggot!”-said Duiwel with an angry tone.
“How dare you to call a lady like that?”
“Lady? LADY? Don’t make me laugh, you little piece of shit, you have no idea what you’ve done, have you?”
“W-w-what? I don’t know.”
“Of course you don’t know, you were to busy with your fame, dresses and fashion. How dare you call yourself a spirit of generosity when you haven’t gave anypony anything good in this world?”
“But I always try to…”
“TRY HARDER NEXT TIME!”-Duiwel interrupted her speech.
“Ah, so rude, I can’t believe you done that. I refuse to speak with you anymore.”
She slammed the door and walked to her desk. She couldn’t believe what she saw next. It was Duiwel sitting in her desk with Twilights, Fluttershy’s and Applejacks bodies on the floor.
“You are going to be fourth.”
“W-what have you done to them?”
“They died the same way they caused the pain to others, now the same will happen to you to you.”
Duiwel’s horns glowed with darkness and suddenly everything disappeared. Her house , her items, her gems, her dresses, her money. They were standing on a plain field where her house used to be. She had nothing and she knew it.
“Congratulations, you are now homeless.”
“WHAAAAAAAAATT??????”.
His horns glowed once more, creating a giant dome surrounding that field.
“In this dome the time flows ten times faster than in the outside.”
“Why are you doing this to me?”-Rarity started crying.
“To watch how long can you survive when you have nothing.”
“Please let me out.”
“No.”
“But I’m huuuuuungryyy. It is diiirtyyyy in here.”-Rarity started whining.
“Don’t even try this, it may have worked on those weak minded diamond dogs, but not on me.”
Few hours passed, Rarity was lying on the ground with blue face from cold and almost dying from starvation.
“Please… Just… Let… Me… Out…”-she hardly had any energy left to talk.
“Well, you asked nicely, so I think it’s okay if I finish this quickly.”
A giant dark cloud gathered above Rarity’s head. It became so huge that almost the whole Ponyville was covered with its shadow.
“Rarity, you have always reached for the stars and tried to become popular no matter what, you even sacrificed your friends multiple times to get a chance to become one with the higher class forgetting about ponies who has no food, no money or no home. You became spoiled. You shall not live long enough to see yourself as a star, because this is your judgement, Rarity: eternal horror and suffering in hell. Now die.”
The air became electrified, suddenly a blinding flash came from the cloud. It was a thunderbolt like nopony has ever seen or heard of. It hit Rarity directly in her face, burning her skin off completely. It also left a titanic bottomless pit.

You could hear voices of scared ponies shouting all over the Ponyville.
“What was that?”-asked Rainbow Dash.
“I think it was a gigantic storm with thunder of some sort.”-explained Pinkie Pie.
“Storm? But Cloudsdale didn’t have any storm scheduled for today. It must be something else.”
“Lets go to check it out.”
Not even ten minutes passed when they reached Rarity’s that bottomless pit.
“What happened here?”-asked Pinkie Pie.
“I hope Rarity is okay, it looks like this thunderbolt hit her house.”-said Rainbow Dash.
“Don’t worry, she’s dead and in hell. Just like you will be soon.”-came Duiwel’s voice from air.
“What? Who are? What have you done with Rarity?”-Rainbow Dash got furious.
“Not just Rarity, but Twilight Sparkle, Fluttershy and Applejack are dead too.”
“You are lying, where are they? Who are you?”
“They call me the most sadistic demon in all nine hells, the rule of eternal pain, the lord of all worlds and plain: Duiwel. And now when my synchronization with this world is complete, you can’t do anything to stop me. I will admit, I risked my life possessing that weak body, but now I’m literally unstoppable. Now how about we think of your judgements.”
“Judgements? What are you blabbing about? Where are you? What synchronization?”-Pinkie Pie got confused.
“I’m everywhere, after synchronization I reached my final form, I’m now Equestria. All I had to do is banish a few souls.”-explained Duiwel.
“What about judgement? What we ever done to you?”-yelled Rainbow Dash.
“Rainbow Dash. A pony that has only one reason for life - speed. Your only dream was to join ThunderBolts, am I right? You tried to achieve it at any cost. You caused trouble to Ponyville, Canterlot and Clousdale, so you could reverse it and maybe impress ThunderBolts enough so they may let you join them. Remember old man Jenkins? You knew he had bad wings, but still dropped him from Cloudsdale, although you managed to save him and bring him back to Cloudsdale and ThunderBolts were impressed, but little did you knew that Jenkins had his wings broken from trying to fly and also he died from heart attack the after a few minutes you brought him back. He died from terrible pain and shack thanks to you, while you gained nothing more than a one night with ThunderBolts.”
“Did this actually happened Rainbow? Please tell me he’s lying.”-Pinkie Pie started crying.
“I’m sorry Pinkie, I didn’t know.”-Rainbow Dash felt ashamed.
“Y-you MONSTER!”-she started screaming and crying at the same time.
“Don’t worry Pinkie Pie, she will pay for her crimes, and so will you after I’m finished with you.”
“Me? But I don’t think I have done anything to anypony.”-sobbed Pinkie.
“Let me take care of Rainbow Dash then we’ll talk about your future.”
Rainbow started flying up against her will, like some kind of force got into her mind and told her to do that. After she went so high she could see the whole Ponyville, she done a rainboom, just this time it was different, she was not flying down, but forward and that’s not it, she wasn’t using her wings. She flew faster and faster, making circles around Ponyville. Her body could not take any more of this. Wings and legs has broken and almost every feather has fallen from her, but she kept going on. She couldn’t move her body, the pressure has now broken every bone in her body, even her spine, she was in terrible pain, but couldn’t scream, only cry.
“P-please STOP IT!”-screamed Pinkie.
“But I thought you wanted to see her suffer.”
“I wanted to pay for her crimes, not to suffer or die.”
“Too late she just died.”
Rainbow Dashes body fell near Pinkie. You could clearly see how deformed her body was, almost every bone was in her back.
“No, what have you DONE???”-Pinkie started crying again.
“Rainbow Dash, because of your passion for speed and love for ThunderBolts you put everypony to danger and someponies even got hurt because of you, so this was your punishment and now you will be sent to hell.”-chanted Duiwel.
Her body started levitating from the ground and flew next to the bottomless pit Rarity has fall in.
“Prepare for eternal suffering.”
Her body fell.
“Why? Why do you do that to us?”-Pinkie Pie could hardly talk from crying.
“Pinkie Pie, you have done some terrible things, you even killed some people, didn’t you?”
Pinkie stopped crying.
“So you know?”-she asked with a calm and strong tone.
“Oh, so finally our little cute Pinkie showed us her real face.”
“Shut your trap Duiwel. Do what you want with me, I don’t even care anymore, all that killing was done for my friends and you know it. You took them away from me, and now I have no reason to live anymore.”
“Pinkie Pie, for a serial killing I punish you with a swift death and eternal torture in hell.”
It felt like her legs was grasped by some kind of force, she couldn’t move anymore. The force started pulling Pinkie Pie up while her lower body was still. She started screaming, but it was too late, her body snapped and she was torn to pieces.
“Pinkie Pie, I hope you are ready for eternal pain.”
A thick fog covered Ponyville, it lasted for a few days, no one could see in it farther than their noses. When the fog finally disappeared everything seemed so quiet and peaceful. Even Duiwel has left, but Twilight, Fluttershy, Applejack, Rarity, Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie nor their bodies has been found.