The Storm (Need help. Pm me.)

by Rainbow Dash99

Rating: teen
Tags: Dark, Sad, Tragedy, Adventure
Length: 559

[youtube=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_cumSLIQQ7U]

The above video is the theme song.
I know this story isn't much right now but it's a work in progress. So please no heavy criticism.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-04-23 03:15:27 UTC

Chapter I

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The Storm Chapter I

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Chapter Is In Development

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Rainbow walked through Cloudsdale... Well what was now left of it. The skies were so cloudy you could barely see your own hoof. Dash never meant for it to happen but it did. She flew down to the Ponyville graveyard and lay by her friend’s grave.

“I’m sorry. I’m so sorry. I never meant for this to happen. If I hadn’t been so stubborn this never would have happened.” A tear from the cyan Pegasus’s eye fell, it melts as it lands on the grave...

I’m sorry but this is at a later time

Earlier

The guard commander rushed into Celestia’s quarters unannounced. “Princess Celestia! He has returned!”

“Who has returned Commander Fate?”

“It’s-it’s... *Gulps* Black Lightning!”

“It cannot be! We must inform the Elements of Harmony at once! Commander Fate, let everyguard know of his return. I shall inform Princess Luna at once!”

“Bah. Like thy Elements could stop me! NOPONY CAN STOP ME!” Black Lightning turned from his purple & red vision mirror to his changeling subject and began barking orders. “Changeling Grude, send a letter to thy Princess Celestia and tell her that those so called, ‘ELEMENTS’ couldn’t POSSIBLY beat me!”

“Yes your majesty. Right away.” Replied the subject before flying off.

“When I’m through with her nothing will be left, and Equestria will be MINE! Mwahahahaha! Now the first thing on my list is, to create a storm in Ponyville!”

“So what are we gonna do today to get our cutie marks?” asked Apple Bloom.

“I don’t know” replied Scootaloo. “But maybe we could go on an adventure with Rainbow Dash!

“That’s a great idea!” replied Sweetie Belle excitedly. “But first we have to find her. Where could she be?”

“She might be...” *BANG!* The Cutie Mark Crusaders screamed in unison at the loud roll of thunder!

“W-what was that”? Asked Apple Bloom in a scared tone.

“Uh girls, I think there might be a storm coming our way.” replied Scootaloo looking out the window.

“How big is it?!” Apple Bloom asked quickly.

“I don’t know but it looks huge! I think we should go to Apple Bloom’s house rather than this clubhouse.” suggested Sweetie Belle.

“Yeah I think you’re right, maybe we should go inside.” responded Scootaloo.

*BANG*

Another roll of thunder had the Cutie Mark Crusaders screaming in unison once more before running toward the barn.

“Mwahahahaha! Who knew this could be so fun!” said Black Lightning turning away from his vision mirror once again to face his subject. “Changeling Grude, have you sent the letter I told you to send to thy Princess Celestia yet?!”

With a single gulp the subject replied.“Uh... I uh...”

“HAVE YOU SENT THE LETTER?!” yelled the black alicorn.

“IwrotetheletterbutIforgottosendit!” replied Grude quickly.

“Out of all the!... HOW COULD ANYPONY FORGET TO SEND A LETTER THEY JUST WROTE!?”

*Gulps* “I-I don’t know sir...”

“Come here Grude!” the subject walked to his leader, his legs now shaking, the alicorn grabbed his ear and whispered. “You send that letter right now, and if you don’t, I will chop off your wings with a snip! And then I will have your head removed from your body... NOW GET TO WORK!!!” With his ear now released Grude gasps for air before taking off toward his room.