It

by MlpWoof

Rating: teen
Tags: Dark
Length: 1110

When a mare leaves for Canterlot to presue her dreams of being a surgeon. Intill one day she meets it and help hers. But his he just a figmit of her imgination, helping her, or just playing games with her.

When a mare leaves for Canterlot to catch her dreams of being a surgeon. In till one day she meets it and help hers. But his he just a figment of her imagination, helping her, or just playing games with her. My first ever fic it will probably suck.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-04-30 00:20:02 UTC

Chapter 1

Do you see it? It’s constantly therein the corner of your eye. Most people don’t notice him. If you turn back to quickly he will not be there anymore. I would know he was there when the worst of stuff happened. I wonder what he was doing there looking like he wouldn’t belong in this universe.

“Yes mother” as she jumped onto the train. Painted as an old train well it was an old train actually. “Make sure you write me back when you get to Canterlot” the mother said hopeful that she would write her. “Yes mother” I’ll make sure I’ll write you when I’m there. “I’m going to miss you when you’re gone no pony to talk to anymore” she said talking like she was losing her best friend. Which was kind of true in this case she talked to her daughter all the time. “Bye mother” as the mare waved a good bye to her mother. As the train carried itself away along the tracks.

When she got to here cabin it had a bed blue to be precise. For wallpaper a pink flower patter torn in some places along the wall. And three shelves one above the other one. The floor boards a light wood color. As she fell down on her bed sighing a sigh of relief that she was finally on her way to a better life in a different city. This mare wanted to go into the medical business more precisely a surgeon. As she decided to take a small nap in her cabin for a short while.

She was a mare who loved education but getting sued back home in her hometown made it hard to get the money send their daughter off to college. They used to have a lot of money but getting sued for mostly all of their money made this not true anymore not having enough money needing to sell their shop. This made them pretty poor and not having enough money to send their daughter off to have a profession. But, after having a bunch of odd jobs around town they scraped up enough money to finally send her off.

When she woke up she decided to go to the bathroom while walking to the sink her herself a mare with lemon yellow coat with a light orange man curvy very nicely all over her body. As she splashed some water into her eyes and face loving the nice warm water over her face. The mare turned around and was going back to her cabin until she saw it a pony. But, it wasn’t really a pony was it. A long figure as I turned back he well she was guessing it was a he, he wasn’t there anymore. As she got rid of any silly thoughts and went back to her cabin and decided that it would be nice idea to get rid of the thought.

As dinner arrived it was a salad with fresh lemonade. Her typical favorite refreshment as she gulped down the drink. Then digging into her dinner eating it being her last meal was breakfast which was a while ago. The salad was fine the lemonade was great as she washed her face off via napkin. She lay down her head and slept for the day hoping for a glorious start in Canterlot tomorrow.

When she awoken she wasn’t in her bed but she was sticky all over as she opened her eyes she found one of the train workers lifeless dead on top of me. She screamed as she moved the body off of me. The blood was splattered all over the train panels the train didn’t seem like it was moving. But, I was being towered over by a thing pretty sure the same thing that was saw in the bathroom. That long slender figure. It was definitely not a pony. It was wearing a white suit and had a huge smile going from one side to the other side of the mouth. It was a sight to see this thing. As he offered my hand to get up and said “Run” taking advice the door was being banged on as I bolted out the other door. After running through the train I turned back and lost the figure that originally helped me out as gone from sight.

She ended up getting to the end of the train and jumping out the end. As the train guards screamed something that she couldn’t hear because she was a fair distance away from the train. As she swore she saw it again she turned her head and found nothing. Walking off to the forest lying right next to the train tracks which she just jumped from. As she was walking through the forest she saw him again. Turning slowly for he wouldn’t disperse.

“So Lemonflame I see you’re convicted of murder” the slender figure talk with that huge smile still plastered on that otherwise blank face.

“Well I went to sleep and I woke up to you and a dead pony on me” she said worried that she would never lead a normal life again.

“Also how do you know my name” she said confused about how he knew his name anyway.

“Well that’s just my knowledge you see” it said. “It’s just something I know girl” the man talked opening up that huge smile. As Lemonflame walked through the forest flinching at nearly every sound along the way she was walking.

“It’s still night you sure you don’t need anything a house perhaps” as he spoke a house came out of no were look very run down and broke.

“Thanks” she said walking into the house.

“I know your past” the figure said.

“So I don’t care” she said

“When you were six you killed your original father” he said hoping for a reaction of some sort

“So that’s behind me” she said obviously not caring about it.

“He nearly killed my mother” said nearly crying.

Walking away from the figure Lemonflame turned around and found the figure to have dispersed away. She then decided to take cover in the newly summoned house. Thinking of what just happened being greeted by a figure so much taller than anything I ever seen before. Waking up and finding a dead pony on me. This was certainly a lot for Lemonflame to take in currently. Well she would abandon her dreams of ever having a good education possibly being arrested on sight. Was this figure to be trusted or was he causing this all a game for this figure just met.