A Fathers Love

by hydrix47

Rating: everyone
Tags: Comedy, Slice of Life
Length: 4127

a father moves to ponyville so his daughter can grow up learning the magic of friendship

Bumble Blitz is a father who has watched his beloved daughter Pastel mistreated, shunned and bullied for what she is. With the death of his last living relative Bumble sees no reason to remain tied to his ancestral home. With years of scrimping and saving behind him he finally calls in the last few favours the traditional community owes his family and leaves. But where will a filly like Pastel be happy, free to be what she is?

Pastel Dream is different from every other Pony she knows, at least that’s what they say, but she doesn’t think so. As words and actions take a heavy toll upon her in ways she is too young to understand, her father takes her to a new town away from her tormentors, but not all problems are so easy to fix.

A creature from myth and legend, acknowledged only in the most ancient of codices find herself far from home, the home she knows and the home she does not. Can the love and friendship of Ponyville mend wounded hearts both young and old? Will an ancient tragedy be repeated? Or does a greater destiny await the daughter of a world whose very soul desires not simple tolerance but true love, understanding and acceptance for all its children?

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2013-04-25 19:50:02 UTC

chapter one

It was relatively a quiet day in Ponyville. Everypony was going about their business. Lyra sat on a bench, playing her lyre. Carrot Top stood in the market place, selling some carrots, Pinkie Pie hopped around town, greeting everypony she saw, and Derpy flew around after Rainbow Dash, copying her moves in an attempt to clear the sky of unnecessary clouds. So, everything in Ponyville was in a peaceful state…

That is until a loud yell came from one of the supposed empty houses.

“AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!” A male earth pony screamed as a few large boxes stacked on each other fell onto him. The earth pony poked his head out of the pile and proceeded to free his black grey body of its box prison and tossing back his black and yellow mane, sighing as he did so.

“Bumble Blitz, will you ever stop hurting yourself?” he scolded himself. With a sigh, he went back to work. “I hate moving” he said to himself as he tried to stack the boxes back up, only to have the top box burst open and bury him in a pile of toys.

“MFHRGGGLFUH!” Bumble managed to shout under the mountain of toys. At this, a young green and orange filly with a red and neon green mane ran down stairs and stopped in front of the pile. She fluttered her small leathery wings anxiously.

“Did you call me, daddy?” she asked bubbly. At this, Bumble poked his head out of the mound of toys, shaking them from his mane. The little filly giggled and stared at her father with mischievous eyes.

“Yes, Pastel.” Bumble Blitz let out a sigh as he stood up, stepping out of the pile of toys. “Mind helping your daddy out?”

Pastel smiled and nodded. All of a sudden, she felt her mane shift, and her partner in crime poked his head out and jumped in the pile. Bumble smiled, presently. But a few moments later, he felt a bite on his rump and shot up in the air. The little ferret sat on his rump, and smiled up at him innocently. Pastel giggled at this, “Thanks for helping me get daddy, Barnaby!”

Bumble, now with a pain in his rump grumbled as he turned to his daughter and her furry companion.

“Thank you for helping, Pastel Dream…” he then glared at the ferret that bit his rump. Pastel stared at her father with sweet eyes, and then she looked at her pet ferret.

“Didn’t he help, too?” Bumble looked at his daughter, then back to Barnaby. He couldn’t understand how Barnaby had helped this situation at all, but he might as well say thanks anyway.

“…Thank you too, Barnaby” The earth pony said with a sigh. The ferret simply climbed onto his owner’s head as she saluted her father.

“Anytime, daddy! Need any more help?” asked Pastel, staring up at her father expectantly.

Bumble looked at the boxes, which, as though to challenge him they fell apart and spread their contents all over the floor. Bumble let out a small chuckle and rolled his eyes. “Yes, I think help would be nice. And afterwards, we’ll go look around town and see what our new home needs.”

Pastel tackled the mound of various items and started placing them around the house, squealing the entire time. “Yay! We get too look around! Maybe I’ll make friends!! Maybe daddy will make friends!! Maybe I’ll get CANDY!!!!!!!”

Bumble laughed at his daughter’s enthusiasm but silently promised his little ball of energy shouldn’t get any more sugar today. Or tomorrow, for that matter.

“Daddy, where’s the glue?”

On second thought…maybe the whole month. Bumble pondered this, smiling slightly. But he was interrupted by his daughter’s words:

“Daddy, I think I got Barnaby glued to the table…again.”

Make that two months.

---Later that afternoon--

“But daddy! I was a big help!” Pastel whined as she walked through town with her father. Bumble sighed and shook his head, not looking at his daughter.

“Tell that to the bare patches in your little buddy’s fur.” she just pouted with her ferret tucked safely in her mane. He gained some bald spots from the glue. Pastel pondered a few things:

One: It wasn’t fair she didn’t get sweets! It was Barnaby’s fault for sticking himself to the table. (In Pastel’s opinion, of course.)

And two: Would she meet anypony interesting on her walk today? She’d have to wait and see.

Pastel walked alongside her father as they toured the various market stalls, they were greeted by several friendly “Hellos” and even some free samples!  As they walked along Pastel received some questions and even some compliments about her wings.  Pastel thought to herself what nice ponies they all were, she had never had this much fun at the market back home and nopony apart from daddy had ever been so nice about her wings before. Pastel felt happy, she spread out her featherless wings to catch the warm sunlight, something she had never dared to do in public before.

As Pastel walked along, she saw three fillies. One was a white Unicorn, with a purple and pink mane. The other was a Pegasus filly, who was bright orange and had a magenta mane. The last one was an earth pony, she was cream colored and had a red mane with a cute bow in it. Pastel stopped to wave to the fillies. They smiled and waved back, then got back to their conversation.

Pastel was happy! These fillies seemed nice; perhaps they would meet up again! Just then, a smiling cream colored earth pony trotted by Bumble Blitz and Pastel. She had a curly pink and blue mane, and had three small candies as her cutie mark. Then Pastel remembered how badly she wanted candy, and frowned.

Then, Pastel saw a store that sold something even better than candy…dresses! As she and Bumble walked up to the building, and entered, they heard a regal voice come from the back.

“Welcome to Carousel Boutique! Where everything is sheik, unique, and magnifique!” a beautiful unicorn mare with a pure white coat and a curly purple mane walked out of the back closet. A pink pony with an even pinker frizzy mane followed behind her.

“Hello!” Bumble said, sticking out his hoof. “I’m Bumble Blitz. This is my daughter, Pastel Dr--” he was cut off by the pink mare who was now inches from both of them.

“HELLO, BUMBLE BLITZ! I'M PINKIE PIE! YOU MUST BE NEW TO PONYVILLE I KNOW VERYPONY IN PONYVILLE AND OMYGOSH I SHOULD THROW YOU A PARTY AND THERE COULD BE LOTS OF SINGING ANDDANCING AND MGFHH!!” at this, the white mare used magic to zip her friend’s lip.  Pinkie Pie looked at the zipper over her lips and groaned.

“Really now, Pinkie! Be more polite!” the Unicorn pranced up to Pinkie and whispered in her ear, “They may be new but don’t scare away potential customers!” She then turned to Pastel and her father and greeted them

“Hello! I am Rarity, and welcome to my boutique! …How may I help a handsome stallion and his lovely daughter?”

Pinkie Pie was looking at the two with a zipped smile -- Pastel made a mental note to stay ten feet from this crazy mare at all times.

“Aha,” Bumble cleared his throat. As I mentioned before, I’m Bumble Blitz and this is my daughter Pastel Dream.” He looked at his daughter and nodded. “I was wondering if you would sell me some gems. And if not, could you tell me where I could get some?”

Rarity gave him a confused look. “Dear…eh, I sell dresses. Not gems. I put gems ON the dresses. I do have gems but I don’t normally sell them, may I ask what they are for?”

Pastel was now bored of this conversation and decided to look around the shop. It was fun looking at all the pretty dresses until she saw an emerald, her favorite gem sitting next to an unfinished dress.

“Maybe Rarity won’t miss one gem. SNACK TIME!” at this, Pastel snatched up the gem and ate it.

“Pastel! We’re leaving! The furniture should be delivered to the house right about now!” Bumble called from the front room. Pastel trotted up to her father and smiled they said their goodbyes to Rarity, who had agreed to give them a few gems each month free of charge!

As Rarity went back to her newest creation, she talked to herself. “Such a nice stallion and his daughter is so cute! I can’t wait to make dresses for her, now back to work. Er…where did the emerald go?”

--That night…--

After a hard day of telling her father where all her toys and furniture should go in her room, Pastel was fast asleep. Bumble smiled as he watched his daughter sleep. He reviewed his whole day in his mind. What fun him and his daughter had!

With a yawn, Bumble Blitz went to his room and laid down in his bed. “Well, tomorrow we have the whole day to really look around town.” The gray pony paused, and stared at the ceiling.

“I hope that stupid ferret doesn’t bite me again.”

After he said that, a book fell of a shelf and hit him in the face. “OW!” he pushed the book off him and rubbed his nose, glancing up. He saw the furry terror jump off the ledge and leave the room. he grumbled to himself and turned over in bed. He mumbled to himself.

“Barnaby, one. Bumble Blitz, zero.”

chapter 2

--The Next Day--

Bumble blitz was comfy in his bed; the sun was shining through his window. As he woke up to the warmth, he felt some pain on his chest; he opened his eyes to see his daughter, Pastel jumping up and down on his chest. She fluttered her wings rapidly as she shouted at him, “Daddy! Daddy! Daddy! DADDY!!!! Wake up, it time for breakfast!” the little filly wagged her tail and grinned at him eagerly. Bumble Blitz grunted and sat up with his little filly sitting in front of him.

“Good morning, Pastel. What’s all this about breakfast?” He asked with a confused look. Pastel leaped off his bed and darted into the hall, then down the stairs. She yelled back from down the stairs, a remark that made the gray earth pony flinch.

“I made breakfast for you!” Bumble let out a sigh remembering his daughter’s many failed attempts at cooking. Never the less, he went down stairs to see a mess of a kitchen. Pastel was waiting happily for him with a plate. Bumble assumed that the “food” she had put on it used to be toast and eggs.

“Eat up, daddy! I made it special just for you!” Bumble glanced at the food. Then back to his daughter. That was when he noticed his nemesis, the ferret, snickering at him. Bumble got an idea.

“Why don’t you give some of this delicious food to Barnaby?” he said with a smile. Pastel grinned and rushed to the counter and fixed a plate of “toast and eggs” for her ferret. bumbel ducked just in time to dodge an egg thrown by the now irritated ferret.

Presently, Bumble Blitz sat at the table with the ferret beside him. They were both worried about hurting the young filly’s feelings, but neither of them really liked the look of the food. So, to keep his master’s approval, Barnaby dug in and ate it all quickly. After a few gags, he swallowed it all.

Bumble Blitz, on the other hoof, had a secret weapon to combat his daughter’s “cooking”. He walked to a box and searched around inside, even though he and Pastel had unpacked almost everything, there were still a few things left in boxes. He pulled out a jar of honey. Not just any honey, this was honey he got from bees he raised himself. And, true to his bumblebee cutie mark, it was the sweetest honey you could ever eat! After drowning the food in a very generous amount of honey, Bumble ate it, hardly tasting anything but the honey after he finished the last bite. He then gathered the plates and went to wash them. “Pastel, go wash up, we’re going to spend the day looking around Ponyville. And if you’re good I’ll give you some candy, alright?”

At this, Pastel squealed and ran up stairs to the bathroom. Bumble chuckled to himself, planning the day out in his head. “Hmm…let’s see. We’ll look around town a bit, then, I’ll take Pastel to the park. Oh, I can’t forget, I should look into registering Pastel for school.”  And as though on cue, Bumble’s little daughter zipped down the stairs and began hopping up and down at the front door.

“Come on, daddy!! We have lots of places to explore!” and with that, Bumble Blitz opened the door and he and his daughter went off to start exploring every part of this new town.

The day was starting of relatively quiet with ponies everywhere just opening their shops. Pastel let her father do the talking, she was a filly on a mission and nopony was going to stop her! She saw an apple stall with a southern cowpony named Apple…Apple…eh, Pastel didn’t remember her name. She also spotted a carrot stall run by a nice mare named Carrot Top. Pastel also saw a small juice bar that had all kinds of tasty sugary drinks. It was operated by a nice mare named Berry Punch. As Pastel was giving up hope, she spotted her target: A large shop with a slight castled theme. In its windows were every type of candies and treats Pastel had ever seen!

With her eyes bulging, she trotted into the store. Bumble looked up from his conversation and sighed. “Candy castle, huh? Well I’ll let her have a treat for the park then.” with a chuckle, Bumble followed his daughter into the store. Pastel looked around the store and noticed the mare she saw yesterday with the blue and pink mane and a cream colored body. Her dad trotted up to greet her. Pastel, on the other hoof, was having trouble not grabbing everything in sight. She was practically drooling just looking at all the tasty treats!

“Hello there!” said the cream colored earth pony. “My name’s Bon Bon! Welcome to my store, The Candy Castle!” Bon Bon grinned and came out from behind the counter. “Can I help you find anything?”

Bumble glanced back to his daughter, who looked at him pleadingly as her ferret poked his head out of her mane to look around.

“Well…” he said, trying to build suspense for his daughter. “No thank you, I don’t need anything but could my daughter, Pastel Dream look around?”

Bon Bon glanced at Pastel with a happy smile, “Sure! And if she can’t find what she wants, she can place a special order and I can make it in a jiffy!” Pastel squealed in delight and ran off into the aisles of candy to find exactly what she wanted.

At this, Bumble Blitz chuckled. “Thank you for that. I think she’s going to drag me here every day.” He said, smiling slightly. “I’m Bumble Blitz. We just moved here.” And the two proceeded to picking up a conversation.

“That one! Ooh, and that that one! That one, that one…” Pastel pointed out the candies one by one as she walked down the aisle. “Barnaby! Get that one, too!” the cheery filly watched as her little partner in crime scaled the shelves she couldn’t reach and knocked candy down to her.

After a few more minutes of gathering every type of candy he could grab, the ferret jumped down and sat back on the mane of his “commander” as he buried himself, Pastel wobbled through the aisles now carrying a pile of candy twice her size, some on her back, and some in her mouth.

“Ah!!” Pastel squealed as she tripped and fell. She closed her eyes and braced herself for a candy avalanche, but it never came. She opened her eyes and looked up to see her candy floating inches from her in a pale green aura.

“Oh, my! Are you ok, sweetie?” Pastel turned around to see a sea foam green unicorn mare with a white and mint green mane and tail standing before her. She reminded Pastel of mint candies.

“Um, thank you miss. I’m Pastel Dream and I was taking the candy back to my daddy to buy.” The unicorn mare looked at the large amount of candy and wondered what parent would give their child this much sugar? She smiled sweetly at the young bouncy filly.

“Well, let me help you! I’m Lyra Heartstrings, by the way.” Lyra nodded at Pastel and helped her up, and the two walked to the front where Bumble Blitz and Bon Bon were chatting. Pastel ran up to her father, giggling.

“Daddy, this is Lyra Heartstrings and she helped me from being buried by all my candy!” Bumble looked at the unicorn mare, and then to the candy she was levitating, Bumble sighed as he thought that next time he should escort his daughter so she wouldn’t get so much candy.

“Hello, Lyra” Bumble said, nodding. He turned his attention back to his daughter. “Well, Pastel… I think you got too much candy. Pick a few pieces and put the rest back” Bumble’s daughter frowned and she picked a few pieces of candy. Lyra levitated the rest back to their shelves. After being told she could wait outside with her candy while Bumble paid for it, Pastel ran to the door but not before running up to Lyra.

“Here, Miss Lyra! You can have this chocolate, it my favorite!” Pastel set it on the floor in front of Lyra and ran out to eat her candy. Lyra looked a bit confused, Bumble laughed.

“Wow, she must really like you! Pastel is really crazy about her candy and she doesn’t even like sharing with me.” Lyra and Bon Bon laughed at this as Bumble gave Bon Bon bits for the candy.

“By the way…err, I know it’s none of my bumble beeswax, but this looks like a foal’s candy store. What are you doing here, Lyra?”

Lyra, who was not often talked to very much by anypony other than Bon Bon was happy to answer, “Well, Bon Bon is my roommate and best friend! We’re practically sisters! So, sometimes I work here and help out. Uh… I’ve never seen you or your daughter here before. Are you guys new to Ponyville?”

Bumble chuckled a little and replied, “Yes, we just moved in yesterday; and I promised Pastel we would look around the town today. It looks like I’ve gained a daily stop for me and my daughter.” After talking a bit more, the three ponies said their goodbyes and Bumble Blitz left with Pastel right beside him.

“Ok, next stop is the park!”

As the duo left the vicinity, Bon Bon told Lyra, “Well, I think you deserve the day off!” Lyra was ecstatic, she hugged her friend tightly.

“Gee, thanks, Bon Bon! I get to practice more on my lyre!!” Before Lyra made it out the door she heard Bon Bon say something that produced a small blush.

“Be sure to go to the same park as Bumble Blitz! You can woo him with your magical talents~!” said the perky cream mare in a singsong voice. Lyra shot right back, “Bon Bon! Quit trying to play match maker in my love life!!” and with a slight hmph, Lyra stomped down to the park, still slightly crimson. Bon Bon laughed to herself, “Lyra, you’re so easy to mess with.”

--Meanwhile…--

“Come on daddy, we’re almost there!” Pastel said excitedly. Her daddy was spending the whole day with her and they were almost at the park! She didn’t want him to be so slow! She was running in circles around Bumble Blitz, who was glad to see his daughter having the time of her life; they continued their walk and soon found themselves in the heart of Ponyville Park. There were many ponies out and about. Bumble let out a happy sigh at how lively the town was, he was glad he moved here. He looked around to see the various ponies. There was a blue Pegasus with a rainbow mane doing various stunts in the air, she looked over and waved at Pastel, who smiled and waved back. There was also a muscular white Pegasus with tiny wings working out; he every so often yelled “YEAH!!!”

Over by the playground were many different fillies and colts playing. A small pink one with a white tiara was barking orders at the others. Over by the swings were the three little fillies Pastel had seen yesterday! The yellow one with a red mane, the white one with a pink and purple mane, and the orange one with a magenta mane! All three were being pushed by a large red stallion with an orange mane who seemed to prefer pushing the yellow filly the most.

Bumble smiled, “Well, Pastel? Where do you want to go first?” there was a moment of silence, “Pastel?” he looked down to see his daughter hugging his forehoof and trembling slightly. Bumble let out a small laugh as he thought, “Pastel, you’re such a bubbly and happy filly but you still get scared around strangers, huh?”

Realizing there were too many ponies for his daughter to handle, Bumble made the decision. He walked over to the swings with the three fillies and the large red stallion. Pastel stayed behind her father’s leg, trying to hide as they reached the four ponies. The red one turned and gave them a warm smile.

“Howdy. Ah haven’t seen you ‘round before. The name’s Big Macintosh. Call me Big Mac.” Bumble reached out his arm and shook the stallion’s hoof.

“Hello, Big Mac! I’m Bumble Blitz and this is my daughter Pastel Dream.” At this, Pastel looked around her father’s leg at the big red stallion, he didn’t seem mean. He looked really warm and fuzzy like a giant teddy bear.

“H-hello, Big Mac. I’m Pastel.” after about a minute the three fillies noticed their swing buddy wasn’t pushing them and they turned around to see two new ponies, and one was their age! The three gasped and jumped off the swings and ran to greet them.

“Howdy-do, you two! Ah’m Apple Bloom!” the yellow one smiled.

“Hi! I’m Sweetie Belle” the white one squeaked

“Sup? I’m Scootaloo!” the orange one said in a tone that just screamed “I’m awesome!”

“Well hello, girls! I’m Bumble Blitz and this is my daughter, Pastel!”

Pastel looked at the three fillies she was excited to make friends but also scared that they wouldn’t like her, she said nothing. Her ferret poked his head out of her mane and suddenly the three fillies zipped up to her.

“Ooh, he’s soooo cute!” Sweetie Belle said, awing.

“Oh! Oh! A ferret! Can Ah pet him?”Apple Bloom asked, jumping up and down.

“Wow, he lives in your mane? That’s so cool!!” Scootaloo said, flittering her wings. The three fillies liked Barnaby. And this gave the young filly the confidence she needed.

“This is Barnaby! He’s my best friend and we go everywhere together!” the three fillies were excited to meet this new filly! And her pet! Then, pastel saw them look at her wings and she felt fear, fear they would run and scream like the kids did at her old home. But then, something happened she didn’t expect:

“Those wings are so cool!” the three said in unison. They liked her and they liked her wings! Pastel was so excited she was back to her old bubbly self in no time!

“Would you girls like to play? I like to play, we should play and be friends!!” At this, the three fillies nodded. Then they ran off to play! The stallions stood there for a moment processing what happened, then Bumble spoke up.

“Well, they sure hit it off!” Big Mac nodded.

“Eeyup” Bumble chuckled and smiled.

“Are you related to any of them?”

“Eeyup. Apple Bloom’s my little sister.” the two stallions looked back to the fillies to see them climbing a tree and falling out, breaking a few branches. Bumble simply sighed at this.

“If we don’t keep an eye on them, they’re going to destroy everything, aren’t they?” Big Mac gave another nod.

“Eeyup” and as they both let out a sigh, they followed the four destructive fillies they had unleashed onto the park.