Mistakes are made. Mistakes happen.

In the grand tales of tactical espionage, what separates the heroes and legends from the others was a simple mistake. One. And nopony knows just what it is until….

Mistakes happen… but only if you allow them to…






Hey there readers. I felt the need to write, but couldn't come up with anything towards my main fic. I had this idea floating around in my head, inspired by this lovely piece of music:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wPfTXtsi1BQ&feature=related
Anyway, this idea started out in my head, actually, as something I wanted to try on GMod, but, since I lack any kind of actual skill in that game/program, I justified my thoughts down to writing it down as a side fic. I hope you enjoy this little tale. Ciao…


(PS: The "Captain" in this story is not whom you will think it is.)

"Sometimes, even when dealt a bad hand, from a stacked deck…
"life can throw you a curveball.
"And ye best be prepared for it,
"or it's going to sweep you off your feet….
"…not that that's a bad thing."
-words of a right wise elderpony


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The color issue has been fixed. Sorry to all who couldn't stand it!
…..and getting ratingbombed isn't fun… :<

…spotty and all-around cruddy description is just that. I can't think of good descriptions, and I apologize.
Anyway, hey all, OmGeeFace here, or as others might know me by, Ohm Macre!

This is my first 2nd-person fic, and my second fic overall…

I realize this story's pacing can be… wonky, but that's set up specifically… kind of tries to show you the thought process of the POV.
Anyway! On to the fic itself!

This was an idea that formed quite shortly after talking to a friend, but it never kicked off the ground until now.
Now, the reason I wrote this was, well, simply put, I promised a friend I would use an OC of his.

But! This also brings into play another OC of my own, just… never mentioned before. I do have a name I am sort of planning to use… but feel free to throw suggestions my way. ^-^'
Whatever is not said in here, won't be revealed… as of yet. I may end up using her again at some point, but for now, she's just another pony of this fic. Haha!

Hope you enjoyed this!
This is Ohm Macre/OmGeeFace, signing out. Have a good day!