The renewed life of Lucky Break

by airkiller100
Ever thought how it'd be to live the life of someone who was once dead, then brought back to be send for a loop? This is the adventure of one such individual.

This story is about a stallion named Lucky Break who originally had died, however brought back to be send for a loop, coming along for the ride firstly will be a voice inside his head.
Secondly, a stallion who wished upon a star. Thirdly, a scarred mare and last but not least, Loving Shade. Lucky Break must try to find a way to keep his identity a secret, for should Loving Shade find out, his new life will come crashing down.
Hearts will be renewed, shattered and scarred.

(More shall be explained through the story, including the background of many characters which shall be introduced, not a big fan of spoilers at times.
Constructive criticism is highly appreciated. Alongside with the fact this is my first try with something of this nature.
For now, i got a direction set.)

Teen
Incomplete
Comedy
Tragedy
Dark
 

2151 words: Estimated 11 minutes to read

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