The renewed life of Lucky Break

by airkiller100

First published

This story is about a stallion named Lucky Break who originally had died, however brought back to be send for a loop, coming along for the ride firstly will be a voice inside his head.
Secondly, a stallion who wished upon a star. Thirdly, a scarred mare and last but not least, Loving Shade. Lucky Break must try to find a way to keep his identity a secret, for should Loving Shade find out, his new life will come crashing down.
Hearts will be renewed, shattered and scarred.

(More shall be explained through the story, including the background of many characters which shall be introduced, not a big fan of spoilers at times.
Constructive criticism is highly appreciated. Alongside with the fact this is my first try with something of this nature.
For now, i got a direction set.)