Visitors to Equestria

Visitors to Equestria

AN: Hello! This is my first story, so feel free to give comments, advice, constructive criticism, and any ideas that you think I should put in the story. Enjoy.

Hello I’m Jarred. I am 14. My hair is brown blond. I am 5’9 and a brony. I first saw the show after my brother became a brony before me. So I decided to see what it was all about. I watched about 5 or 6 episodes and became hooked. At first I was shy about it, but then I told people about it. Wait, I’m getting distracted. Any hoof my mystical journey started when I was on my computer watching episodes of My Little Pony on YouTube.

I am in the middle of watching the episode with the Flim Flam brothers when my computer turned a rainbow of colors. “The heck is this!?” I said eying the screen.  Then my brother Lewis came to see what was happening.

“Now what did you do!?” he said in an annoyed voice.

“Hey I didn't do anything. Don't blame me!” I said defensively.

“Well you are the one on the computer!” he said angrily. Just then the commuter turns into a rainbow portal. “You have got to be kidding me!” He said.

“This is cool and you know it dude”. I said happily.

“No! No a portal to some distant place of who knows what is NOT cool!” he said angrily.

Then we were starting to be pulled into the portal. “Awesome!” I said happily. “If we are still alive I am going to kill you!” he said. That’s the last thing that happened before we were sucked through the portal and blacked out.

Later in a field outside Ponyville

I started to wake up and I had a splitting headache. “Ugh my head” I said groggily. I put my hands to my head and realized. “Where are my fingers!?” I said surprised. I look at my hands and found that they were hooves. “Wait where are my hands?” I said nervously. “No way! I am a pony! This is awesome!” I said happily. Then as I tried to stand I quickly fell back over.

“Hmmm this is harder than I thought” I said. Then I tried again many times, finally ending with success. I saw a pond and decided to see what I looked like. When I reached it (with many stumblings along the way), I was amazed at my reflection. I see that I am a brown Pegasus, with bright green eyes, with a blond streaked mane, a pair of headphones with the cord as my cutie mark, and my white watch. “This is awesome!” I exclaimed. “I am the pony I made on my computer!” I said happily. “Wait where’s Lewis?” I said to myself.

Then I see him on the ground about 20 feet away from where I am standing. He seems to still be out cold. “wow, the dude is still asleep.” I said jokingly. He is a grey stallion, with blue eyes, a black derpy-style mane, freckles, wings, and a keyboard for a cutie mark. "ahhh, i see he is his oc

“Well he seems too peaceful to disturb.” I said grinning evilly. “Well I guess I have to drag him to Ponyville.” I said. Then I grab him by his hind legs and start to drag him down a trail towards Ponyville. Halfway there he started to wake up.

“Ugh what happened?” he said groggily. Ok time to let go!

“Wake up dude we are halfway to Ponyville.” I stated. “And it was hard to drag your flank all the way. Now learn how to walk so we can get there faster. I said panting.

“Wait so we are ponies, headed to Ponyville?” he asked.

“Eeyup.” I said imitating big Mac.

“Ok then I bet I should get used to four legs.” he said. He then tried to get up but fell right back down. “Ugh, this is harder than I thought”. He said annoyed.

“Yes, yes it is my friend.” After many failed attempts he finally managed to have success.

“About time”. I said in a bored tone. “Now on to Ponyville we go!” I said excitedly.

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just outside of town

We were practicing flying while closing in on PonyVille when I realized something important.

“Lewis, I just remembered that we need new names.”

“What do you have in mind Jarred?”

“Well I know that you called yourself Keyboard. So now I need to think of a name.”

“Well that shouldn't be too hard.”

“Oh I got it! How about Techno Scratch?” I said while lifting a hoof into the air dramatically. “Techno Scratch, that’s an epic name dude, but you might have trouble with the 'Scratch' part".

“I can see it now, Keyboard and Techno Scratch!” he said dramatically.

“Don't you mean Techno Scratch and Keyboard?” I asked suspiciously.

“Wait, no you're right Keyboard and Techno Scratch sounds better.”

“HA! I thought so. He said triumphantly. “Shut up and let’s just get to PonyVille.”

Later in PonyVille

Lewis’s POV

“Remember that we need to be on the look out for Pinkie Pie.” I said while scanning the area. “Oh right, I almost forgot. I just want to meet Rainbow Dash.” Jarred said. “I hope Jarred gets tackled by Pinkie and not me.” I thought.

Just then I saw a pink blur before I was tackled by none other than that pink pony of parties.

“Hello my name is Pinkie Pie and I have never seen you around before! You must be new here!” she was speaking so fast I was barely able to understand her.

“Oh God, why me?” I say under my breath when I hear Jarred laughing hysterically.

“Hello there Pinkie, my name is Techno Scratch and this is my brother Keyboard, we are new to PonyVille and need a place to stay while we get money for a house of our own.” Jarred said while trying not to laugh.

“You ARE new to PonyVille! so that means you don't have any friends! And if you don't have any friends that must mean you must be sad. That decides it! I am going to throw you two a welcome to PonyVille party!” then she dashed off somewhere.

So I then get up off the ground feeling very violated.

“Dude that was totally hilarious!” Jarred said grinning.

“NO! That was not fun!”

“Anyways I guess we should go to Sugar Cube Corner for our party later.” He said.

“Fine but lets not get any more attention before then.”

“Fine, I won’t do anything to embarrass you.” He says in a bored tone.

I swear… if his stupidity doesn’t kill him then I will…

Later that day

Jarred’s POV

“Well I think we should head over to Sugar Cube Corner now because I am hungry.” I said clutching my stomach.

“You’re always hungry Jar- Techno.”

“So what. I haven't eaten all day.”

“Fine let’s go then” as we walked through town I noticed that there were very few ponies out and about I guess that they were probably at the party.

When we got to Sugar Cube Corner we saw the lights quickly go out.

“I guess I was right again dude.” I said.

“Ugh, let’s just get this over with.” He said. I then opened the door and the lights turned on instantly and about all the ponies in PonyVille were here and they all yelled "Surprise!” then Lewis was tackled AGAIN by Pinkie, he muttered something about this is all my fault.

“Are you surprised!? It took time to get it all together. I invited every pony in PonyVille to you're welcome to PonyVille party!

“Ugh, not again…” Lewis said

“What he means is that this party is awesome. Thank you for doing this party for us, I really appreciate it.” I say with a genuine smile.

“Oh I know! I should introduce you two to my best friends!” she said while she got off of Lewis.

“Ugh, in the future please stop jumping on me like that?” he said in an annoyed voice.

“Okie dokie Loki!” she says while jumping up and down.

“And I would love to meet your friends’ Pinkie.”

“Oh that’s great follow me!” she said before she hopped off into the crowed with us in tow.

She first introduced us to Twilight sparkle. “Hey Twi meet the new guys.”

“Oh hello there my name is Twilight sparkle. But you can call me Twilight.” She said with a smile.

“Nice to meet you Twilight my names Techno scratch and this is my brother Keyboard, but you can call me Techno.” I said extending my hoof as to offer a hoof shake.

"Me too Techno.” She says while shaking my hoof.

“Hello twilight, nice to meet you.” Lewis says nice to meet you too Keyboard. She said still smiling.

“Well Pinkie I have to go. Spike is attending to the library and I need to put him to bed.”

“Awwww. Ok see you later twilight!”

“See you Pinkie. See you Keyboard. Bye Techno.” She said while walking out the door.

Then we hear a mare with a southern accent say. “Hey Pinkie this here is ah mighty fine party ya got here. Hey, let me guess, these two are the new ponies in town.”

“Yup nice to meet you Miss.” I said.

“Aw shucks, ya’ll can call me Applejack or AJ.”

“Sure thing applejack.”

"Well if ya’ll ah lookin fer a job you can come work at 'tah farm. We grow the best apples in Equestria!” she said proudly.

“He he, I believe you there.”

“Thanks, stop by anytime.” Then Pinkie trotted off some saying about something about the next batch being ready.

Then I spotted Fluttershy in the corner cowering under the table. Then Applejack also noticed and said

“that there’s Fluttershy, she is very shy and not into these type ah things. Let’s go talk to her, get her to know you two.”

“Sure, lets go.” I said. Then I noticed that Lewis was nowhere to be found. Eh, I will find him later. As we approached her she squealed and hid under the table.

“Its all right Fluttershy, there’s nothing tah be afraid of.” She said kindly.

“Ya, we won't hurt you.” I said smiling.

“Oh, ok” she said quietly as she got out from under the table.

“Fluttershy meet Techno, Techno meet Fluttershy.”

“Nice to meet you Fluttershy” I said smiling.

“N-n-nice to meet you too.”

“ Hehe, don’t worry, I don't bite, often.” I said.

“Meep!” she then hid back under the table while I was laughing a little.

“Now come on Techno, that’s not very nice.”

“He he, sorry Fluttershy, it was only a joke.” I said with a smile.

Fluttershy slowly gets out from under the table. “He he, I guess it was kind of funny.” She said with a smile.

"Well I guess I must be off to put angel to bed now, he gets cranky when he is tired." Then she trots out of the building.

“Wow she usually never warms up tah other ponies as fast as that.” Applejack said in amazement.

“That’s nice that she isn't too shy.”

Then I heard rainbow dash call to applejack. “Hey AJ rarity went home to get some beauty sleep, who’s the new guy?” she asked while I thankfully succeeded at keeping a straight face, when I was squealing like a little girl meeting that noob Justin Bieber on the inside.

“Rainbow Dash, this here’s Techno, he is new tah PonyVille.”

“Hey dude where do you live?”

My face must have shown that I forgot to get a place to stay.

“Oh, I see you forgot to get reservations.” She said apologetically.

“Hey, um do you possibly have any guest rooms by any chance?”

“Oh, um ya I got one guest room.”

“Oh no, there’s a problem, where will my brother Le- Keyboard stay?”

“Well he can stay in the barn at tah ranch.” Applejack offered. “That’s a great idea! But I wonder where he went though. “Wait, is he that grey Pegasus with a Keyboard cutie mark passed out at a table?”

“Ugh, that would be him.” I said while face hoofing.

“Well ah can get Big Mac to carry him there.”

“That would be awesome! Thanks AJ thanks Rainbow.”

“Not ah problem Techno.”

“ You're welcome dude.”

“Well ah guess I should get you’re brother to the barn so he can sleep well.” She said while walking towards big Mac to tell him the plans.

“So dash, should we get to your house?” I asked.

“I guess we should. So follow me slowpoke.” She said with a smile.

My God she is adorably cute.

“Wait what? Oh no this is bad.” I said out loud on accident.

“What’s bad Techno?” she asked.

“Oh don’t worry, its nothing.” I said.

“Whatever, come on lets go.” She said while flying out the door with me following.

After about 30 minutes of flying we finally managed to get to her cloud home. “Wow, this is a nice place.” I said in awe.

“Yup, it’s awesome, awesome like me!” she said taking out the key and opens the front door.

“Wow, nice setup dash.” I said in amazement.

“You bet it is! Anyhay the guest room is down that hallway third door on your right.”

“Thanks again Rainbow.” I said.

“No problem dude.” She said. Then I go to my room. As I lay down I am amazed at how comfy the cloud bed is. “Now this is a comfy bed.” I say to myself before falling asleep on the great bed.

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