Visitors to Equestria

Jared’s P.O.V.

I woke up the next morning feeling great. “No wonder she loves to sleep in clouds, they make the most comfortable beds in existence!” I said half awake. Then I thought of Lewis sleeping on hay. “Oh I bet he hates me for him sleeping on clouds while he’s stuck with hay” I said humorously.

“Well I should probably get up. I wonder if I should make breakfast. I wonder if she would like pancakes.” I said thoughtfully.

“Well there’s no better way to find out I said while getting out of bed. “Good thing I have practice making them at Pennsic.” I say while walking out the door of my room.

After about three minutes of looking I finally found the kitchen. “I am the smartest pony in all Equestria.” I said sarcastically to myself.

I then found out that they had 'Aunt jemima' pancake mix in Equestria, but with a brown mare on the cover. “Well that makes my life 20 percent easier.” I said holding the box. After about twenty minutes and several failed pancakes I had made about 30 good pancakes when I heard foot/ hoof steps coming down the hall.

“Techno? What are you doing?” she asked.

“Oh hey dash, I woke up and felt like making us some breakfast.”

“You really didn’t need to do that, but thanks. Hey what are those black things in the trash can?” she asked.

“He he, those are some failed attempts to make pancakes.” I said with a sheepish smile. "I forgot how hard it was sometimes"

“Oh, ha ha. Well let’s not waste the good one then.” She said while picking up one and eating it. “Wow, these are good!”

“Thanks, it’s nice to know somepony likes them.” I said smiling.

After I ate 15 pancakes I just couldn't eat any more. (I once ate that much in real life, they were sooo goood.)

“Those were the best pancakes I ever had.” Rainbow dash said.

“Really? Were they that good?” I said blushing a little.

“Ya! Those were amazingly epic pancakes!” She said raising my blush level.

“He he, thanks dash.”

“No problem."

Hey maybe I can give you a tour of PonyVille.”

"Actually, that would be great if you could.”

“Sure thing Techno.”

After we got to town she started showing me around town. “Let’s start with rarity, since you never got the chance to meet her because of her precious 'beauty sleep'.”

I continued to play the “who is/ what is that role. “Ok sure”

Once we got there Rainbow Dash knocked on the door.

“Who is it?” I heard rarity call from inside. And why do I have the feeling she’s going to want me to be a model for me?

“Its me Rarity, I'm just showing the new guy around.” Rarity immediately opens the door.

"A new pony? Oh I must have missed him at the party last night.”

“Ya I never got to meet you miss.” I said. “Oh and a gentlecolt to! Well, you can just call me Rarity.” “Well it is very nice to meet you Rarity.” “Idea!” she suddenly exclaimed. Oh God, this can't possibly be good for my ego and my pride...

She then pulled me into her boutique. “Wait, what are you doing?” I asked slightly frightened.

“Oh I just think I could use you for modeling of some outfits.” She said while putting clothes on me with her magic. I could hear Rainbow Dash laughing hysterically behind me.

“Oh no that won’t do, not that either, oh that’s good! Oh I think you are going to love this!” She said levitating a big mirror so I can take a look at myself. And I had to admit, I did look quite good. I was wearing a white striped vest. She even styled my mop of a mane. literally, i have been letting it flop down and it resembled a bunch of spaghetti. She said it was out of style, so she made it like vinyl scratches (as request of course).

“Wow, I look AWESOME!” i yelled looking myself over in the mirror.

“I am glad you like it my dear. You can keep the vest, I was just about to throw it out.”

“Really? That’s so nice of you.”

“Well I really need to get to work on a very important order. so ta ta!”

"Ok, see you later rarity.” Rainbow dash said.

“Well good luck.” I said walking out the door.

“Well that was interesting.” I said.

“Ya, it was quite funny.” She said.

“I think I am going to go look for a Job now.”

“Wait, what about the tour?”

“We can finish when I get a job. Hey do you know where Vinyl Scratch hangs out?” I ask.

“Ya, she usually hangs out at the music store.”

“Thanks a ton rainbow!" i said flying off. and then returning shortly afterwards. "um first of, where is it?”

“well that might help you. well It’s down the street take a left at Mane Street and followed the road, ya can’t miss it.”

“Thanks again Rainbow Dash.” i said flying off again.

“No problem dude.”

And with that I flew off down the road. Sure enough I found the place. “Well here goes nothing. She’s probably going to want me to sing or something. I hope I’m better at music than I was on earth” I say to myself.

I walk in the store and see her looking at albums that were titled PonyStep.

“Um, are you Vinyl Scratch?” I ask.

“The one and only dude.” She said turning to me.

“I was told I could come to you for a musical job.”

“Yup, that’s correct, nice mane style dude.” “Thanks, anyhay what do to get hired?” she asked and i nodded in agreement. “If you're looking to work for me then show me what you got.” Oh no! What do I sing? Oh I got an idea!.

I'm not a fan of puppeteers, but I have a nagging fear someone else is pulling at the strings

something terrible is going down through the entire town wreaking anarchy and all it brings

I can't sit idly no I can't move at all I curse the name the one behind it all

Discord, I'm howling at the moon, And sleeping in the middle of a summer afternoon

Discord, whatever did we do to make you take our world away?

Discord, are we your prey alone or are we just a stepping stone for taking back the throne

Discord, we won't take it any more, so take your tyranny away!

(Disco-o-oo-o-oo-ooo-oo-rd)

I'm fine with changing status quo but not in letting go now the world is getting torn apart

a terrible catastrophe played by a symphony what a terrifying work of art

I can't sit idly no I can't move at all I curse the name the one behind it all

Discord, I'm howling at the moon, And sleeping in the middle of a summer afternoon

Discord, whatever did we do to make you take our world away?

Discord, are we your prey alone or are we just a stepping stone for taking back the throne

Discord, we won't take it any more, so take your tyranny away!

(Disco-o-oo-o-oo-ooo-oo-rd)

Discord, I'm howling at the moon, and sleeping in the middle of a summer afternoon

Discord, whatever did we do to make you take our world away?

Discord, are we your prey alone or are we just a stepping stone for taking back the throne

Discord, we won't take it any more, so take your tyranny away!

“Wow dude that was awesome! You’re hired.” “Really? just like that!? great! So when do I start?”

“Well I need a new singer at the club here in PonyVille, the last guy who worked there quit for a better club in Las Pegasus. You will need to sing every night though.”

“Sure I think I can do that.”

“Great, meet me here and I will show you where it is.”

"Ok Vinyl. I have one question, where can I get glasses like that?” I say pointing at her purple glasses.

“You will get your own pair when you come here tonight, every one of my employees needs one. But what’s you’re favorite color?”

“That would be lime green. Why do ya ask?”

“Oh no reason… um… What’s your name? “My name is Techno Scratch.” I say. “are you some relative i don't know about?" she questioned.

"Nope, me and my brother live alone."

"What about a mom and dad?" she asked a bit worriedly.

"That would be no... We have no clue where they are"

"aw man that must suck..." she said looking down.

"it's ok" i reassured her.

"Ok then, meet me her at 7:00 tonight.”

“Ok, see ya then Vinyl.” I say walking out the door.

“Bye dude.” She said then resumed looking at the vinyl disks.

LEWIS’S P.O.V. Earlier that day.

(Yes, he is supposed to be always negative and angry most of the time. The idea was from my actual brother. Ps: he is kinda like that in real life.)

I woke up with the worst back ache I ever had. “Are you kidding me!? Hay! I was sleeping on hay!?” I yelled to myself. I get of the stupid hay bale. “Oh so help me if he slept at Rainbow Dash’s cloud home I will murder him.” I start to take in my surroundings.

“Oh well I seem to be at Apple jacks. I hate farms, they are just too dirty. I see why Rarity doesn't like it too.” I say walking out of the barn.

On my way out the door I literally bump into AJ. “Hey Keyboard, ah was just about tah come wake ya up, ya slept in all day.”

“Oh, well where is Techno?” I ask.

“Oh he was staying at Rainbows place.”

That’s it, I’m going to murder that annoying buck of a brother.

“Well do you want some breakfast?” she asked.

“I will just have a couple of apples, thank you very much.”

“Coming right up partner.” She said completely ignoring my rudeness.

She walked up to a tree and bucked it hard enough just to make three apple fall of the tree.

“Here you go keyboard”. She said handing me the apples.

“Thanks.” I said eating them quickly.

They don't seem that different from the one on earth, those fanfictions LIED. “Thanks AJ, well I’m going to go find him so I can murder- I mean tell him how much I love him!” I said

“well ok then, the exits that away.” She said while pointing to the front gate.

“Follow the path and you will get to PonyVille.

“Thanks AJ.” I said flying up in the air and head to PonyVille.

After a while I see that bum of a brother in a white vest humming what sounded to be Discord. “I am going to kill you Techno!” I screamed as I dived bombed him. He looked up just as I was about to get him, his eyes dilated instantly with fear.

Good, fear is good.

Jared’s P.O.V.

I looked up too late after I heard Lewis yell something about killing me should have seen that coming.... When I did look up I saw complete and utter rage on his face. “Oh god...” Is all I could say before I was tackled to the ground by Lewis.

“Gah! Due what are you doing!?” I screamed.

“How come you got to sleep at rainbow dash’s cloud home!? On a comfy cloud! Because I had to sleep on hay! In a barn! On a farm!” he yelled.

“Hey calm down dude. She only had one guest room up for grabs. Plus, you were passed out at a table.” I said calmly witch seemed to make him even angrier.

“I am older than you! I should have gotten the bed!” he yelled.

“Dude seriously? I am only one minute younger than you.” (Same as in real life sadly. And he will never forget it, or let me forget it either.) “

Still! I’m still older!”

“But shouldn't the wittle baby brother need his sleep.” I said in a mocking tone, which got him even angrier, if it’s even possible.

“So help me if we were not in Equestria I would sooo kill you.” He whispered in my ear

“ok, Whatever floats your cloud dude.”

“I hate you so much, so very much.” He grumbled while getting off of me.

“You’re going to hate me for this dude.” I said.

“What did you do this time?” he asked suspiciously.

“Well I got a job at a nightclub for Vinyl Scratch, although I’m not sure what I’m going to do at the club. Maybe I will sing or something.” I said tauntingly.

“Of course you did. You got a girlfriend/ marefreind whatever, a place to sleep and, now a job. He said face hoofing.

“Dude, I am not with Rainbow dash.” I said.

"knowing you, you will probably try.” He said.

“i am offended! i'm not going to yet.” i said

“Whatever. I’m going to go see if I can find a job and maybe a new place to stay, because I hate that dirty barn.”

“Come on dude cheer up. You’re in Equestria after all.”

“Fine. But if I can’t find a better place to stay I will fly up to the cloud home, rip you out of bed, kick you out, and take your bed.” He said.

“Come at me bro.” I said while bumping my forehooves of my chest.

“I hate you.” He said while flying of in what seemed to be the direction of Rarity’s.

"LOVE YOU TOO BRO!" i yelled at him.