Bat Colt, Imagine Comet, and Tom Folk: Your triple life
The Portal (altered)
Previous ChapterNext ChapterYou come home from mowing the lawns of your neighborhood, sweaty but still strong and able. You grab your tool box and head down stairs. You make sure that you are wearing your watch. Not just any old watch, the watch that controls the portal. Last week you tested it out on a rat you caught outside the stream. You wore the watch, but attached the wrist band that warped you back once you were there. The rat survived the trip, but it came back with a human with mint green hair and a white stripe in it, who seamed very happy to be here. She ran out of your house and you haven't seen her since. You make sure you have a back pack containing a ten dollar bill. You use a backpack because you figure if you transform to fit the universe, you might not have fingers. Imagine opening a wallet without fingers. Also, if your money transforms, you don't know the exchange rate.You also bring your phone(in the backpack), a water bottle (ditto), some robotic parts (ditto), and a black cape (in backpack). You put on the fore mentioned band and activate the portal.
You begin to see white, and wonder if your dead. Then, as you spin, you realize you wouldn't be feeling spinning if you were dead. You feel weightless and yet heavy as black matter at the same time. You then appear on the ground. You don't fall or stumble, you're just there. You wake up, realizing you must have been knocked out at sometime. You open your eyes and see a cyan Pegasus standing over you. She has a rainbow mane. You soon realize that you don't have hands or feet. Your head is different but you can't put your nonexistent finger on it. You also notice you have a tail now. You have fur and a mane instead of hair. Your fur is dark blue, you mane as shaggy as your hair and the same ginger-now red- hair. Or mane, as it is now. Then comes the best part. You feel new appendages. Could they be as you always have dreamed? You look and see on your pony side...
"Wings! I have wings! This is amazing!" You couldn't contain it. You look back up to the Pegasus standing above you. She gives you a look like you just spat up on yourself like a baby.
"Yes, you do. Um...... Where'd you come from? And why are you just realizing your wings?" She asks. Her voice for a moment almost made you think she was a guy. Her raspy voice could have been either sex. You notice her build is different than yours, sort of like human girls, so you assume she's female. "Did you hit your head or something?"
"Um....yeah." You say
"TWILIGHT! There's a suspicious pony out here!" She yells. You look over and notice that a couple of yards away is a giant tree. Then, finally, it hits you!
"You're a Pegasus! I'm a Pegasus! We're Pegasi! We're ponies!" She looks at you with the same look from earlier. A purple unicorn trots out of the tree. "Oh my god you're a unicorn! A purple unicorn! Who lives in a tree! This is amazing!" She trots over and looks at you with the same look. Then, the adrenaline stops. "Oh gosh, was that me? So sorry. Must be side affects to the portal."
"Portal? Rainbow dash, get off of him so he can stand." Spoke the unicorn. With all the new stuff, the talking isn't a surprise. She looks over you and you see a look in her eye. 'What was that look'? She seemed to note something. She seemed interested in what you said and your confusion. You begin to notice her. Her coat was light purple, her mane dark with one strand of pink. On her rear you notice a six pointed star. On Rainbow dash, as she was called, was a cloud with rainbow lightning. On yours is-
Before you can look, the unicorn slaps you, then so does Rainbow dash. You realize that you had looked at their butts, which, no matter what creature you are, is frowned upon. Then, the unicorn realizes something by the looks of it.
"Oh you were looking at out cutie marks!" She says realizing her mistake. "I thought you were..." She blushes and helps you up. She wraps her hoof around your, which seems to work as a grip somehow. "I'm sorry. My name is Twilight Sparkle, and this is Rainbow dash. What's you name?"
"Oh, I'm-"
"Imagine Comet." Says Rainbow. You know your name is Tom Folk, but this sounds right, too. It must be your pony name. Then you wonder how she knew that. Almost as if she read you mind, she says "It says so on your saddle bag." You remember your name was on your back back, so it must have become a saddle bag. You look to your rear and see your cutie mark. It is a comet with a rainbow tail. It has several mythical creatures on it. You realize cutie marks must be your special talent.
"Here, lets all go inside my place to talk about all this." You follow, your eyes glancing at the tree. You are curious to what lies inside.
Author's Note
I feel good about this chapter, but I want to hear about it. If I messed up anything, you have an idea, or even just want to comment on my writing abilities good or bad, I'd love to hear.
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