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Pontential Break Up Story

by Lunaplz
It was going to be a wonderful day. Just having a grand picnic with Rarity. When AppleJack is about to ask her on their 30th date...Rarity gives her a peice of her mind. 'What in the hay is the matter?!' AppleJack thought.

Rarity and AppleJack have a bit of a bump in their relationship. Can AppleJack possibly make it up to her high class girlfriend?
I was inspired to write this by the song: potential break up song by Ally and AJ.
IMPORTANT: THE FIRST CHAPTER IS VERY SHORT AND DOESN'T ADD MUCH PLOT VALUE. THIS IS BECAUSE I WAS TRYING TO GET THROUGH THE FIRST CHAPTER QUICKLY. I PINKIE PIE PROMISE THAT THE NEXT CHAPTERS WILL BE MUCH MORE DETAILED AND DEVELOP THE PLOT A LOT MORE. THANKS FOR VIEWING! :)
P.S. COVER ART BY ME!

Teen
Incomplete
Slice of Life
Romance
Comedy
 

628 words: Estimated 3 minutes to read

1 Chapter:

  1. What the Hay is Wrong? 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
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