Tyranny of the Sun
Sleight-of-Hoof is asked by Princess Twilight to become her personal bodyguard. After a year touring Equestria, the two of them head to Canterlot, where Twilight is captured and Sleight framed and nearly killed. Now Sleight must search for Twilight.
So after my new friend, Purple Prose, pointed out a few things, I realized that I had bit off more than I could chew with this one. I may come back to this later, or I may try drawing it into a comic, but for now this is on hiatus. Sorry if anyone was looking forward to more.
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