Fluttershy in Heat (fixed, and edited and done being messed with)
Fluttershy in Heat
It was a warm and bright morning in Ponyville. The sun had risen and it's rays shone upon the whole of Equestria, Celestia's gift to her subjects. The ponies waking up would have a nice day to look forward to. All except one pink maned animal loving mare.
Fluttershy was the kindest mare in all Equestria, her noble and gentle soul was able to win over any animal or creature she met. She had the gift of compassion and caring. Sadly though, not all creatures or ponies were kind to the shy mare. That has been the case since she was a filly.
When she was young the canary filly was very shy, even more shy than she was on this very day. She had issues with opening up. She wasn't that good at flying either, which lead her to be the perfect target for all sorts of bullies. The shy pegasus had no means to defend herself from attackers. She thought she would be destined to live a life of being bullied, until that one day.
That one day she thought of was when she was rescued by a cyan filly with a rainbow mane. She soared from the heavens and into her heart by saving her. Ever since that day the two fillies had begun a friendship that has lasted ages. The protector of the meek pegasus was known as Rainbow Dash.
Fluttershy had been so happy to have made an actual friend. She was delighted that the knight in shining armor actually wanted to hang out and spend time with her. She didn't know how she could be liked by a filly with her charisma, she was so weak and shy.
She wasn't sure how she was able to keep such a good friend. Her friend was fast and strong, the complete opposite of the canary filly. The cyan filly had always been a speedster and was always showing off her skills and tricks. Fluttershy was just glad she had some-pony that cared for her. She decided she would do anything to keep this friendship.
Even after all these years their bond was still strong, being around the rainbow-maned filly made the shy mare feel safe. It was a resounding and joyful moment when they shared time alone. Never having to be afraid of showing each other's soft side and being able to just love one another, even if it was platonic. The platonic part of the relationship was much to dismay of the canary mare who secretly loved her friend.
When they became adults, they noticed their bodies had changed and they were forced to adapt to new sensations. Arousal had become an issue, as did the natural pheromone release during the moment a mare went into heat. Rainbow Dash had once fought off two stallions who were incensed by her friend's chemical signals her body was exuding. The effort was to keep her timid friend's innocence secured. Fluttershy was a virgin throughout her life and wanted to give herself to some pony she could love and not lose it during a mating call. She wanted it to be special and willingly so.
Rainbow Dash had made a promise to her shy friend that whenever she was in heat she would stay the day with her, and help her keep the stallions away. The promise was good until she would be able to find some pony special to be her first. That way the shy mare wouldn't have to worry about some pony randomly rutting her because of her natural condition.
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Fluttershy had woken up and felt the effects of her situation. She was needy today, this meant one thing. It was her time of wanton arousal and overwhelming desire to have sex. She was going to have to alert Rainbow Dash the only way she knew how. Using her pet to send for her.
She had trained Angel Bunny to get her friend if the canary mare was in heat. The reason for it was she couldn't run out and risk some mail stallion or mail mare, who was of that persuasion, know she was vulnerable.
Angel Bunny had his mission and he ran off to find his owner's protector. If anything that meant he could do as he pleased for the day since she was usually confined to her room. Just with her friend making sure no pony got in and she didn't rush out. It was a full time gig but better the cyan mare than him.
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Rainbow Danger Dash, the self proclaimed coolest and fastest mare in all Equestria, was just laying on her cloud napping. She was always up early making the day brighter for other ponies without them even knowing it. Her job made her busy at the most random hours of the day. Sometimes it would be early morning or at times as late as midnight. All just to keep the flow of weather going.
She was seen napping a lot and so ponies presumed she was naturally lazy despite her acrobatics and speedy flight shows, she randomly gave off to passerby's. She enjoyed being alone when napping but when up and about she was sometimes seen with friends. She didn't like being all emotional or gushy so she had scheduled activities, so she wouldn't end up in that type situation.
If she was hanging out with a certain farm mare, she was doing sports or other extreme physical activities. Applejack wasn't the mushy type, so she never had to worry about talks of feelings and stuff. So with that one worry gone she was usually able to enjoy her time with her friend.
Her other friend ,Pinkie Pie, was usually a cheery and happy pony, always up for random gags as long as no pony got hurt. There was never a moment of having to deal with all that emotional crud that other ponies had to endure. Rainbow Dash wasn't heartless just didn't do mushy or sappy.
She barely hung out with the drama queen of the group, since they don't have anything to do together except save Spike's flank from teenage dragons or play hero and damsel. It seemed that Rarity enjoyed falling from high places. It wasn't fun having to constantly save her life but Rainbow Dash felt like a true bad ass doing so.
Twilight was the most susceptible to want to talk if her face isn't in a book. Usually going to the library meant reading Daring Do, and that was good for Rainbow Dash. She didn't need to be a test subject or have talks about friendship with a mare whose sole interest is brown nosing a sun goddess.
Still one of her friends was the most dangerous to be around when it came to avoid feelings and mushy stuff. It was her long time friend and most dearest of them. She secretly enjoyed the soft moments she could share with Fluttershy, but was also was afraid of falling for the mare. Fluttershy wasn't hard to fall for, she was kind and beautiful, gentle and sweet. She had many other qualities but Rainbow Dash couldn't go on thinking about it.
She was interrupted from her thoughts by a rock hitting her side. She looked over to see who dared piss off a mare who could kick trees down while moving at wicked speeds. "Angel Bunny?" Her brain wasn't able to register why the bunny would be interrupting her nap unless.... "Oh crap! ‘Shy’s in heat I’ll be there in ten seconds flat." She rushed off leaving the bunny with a smile as he pulled out a pair of sunglasses and went on with his day.
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Fluttershy was already hoof deep into her marehood. Her whole body was burning with desire and she was moaning like a banshee. "Oh.... right there... come on you can do it.... ahhhh" She was touching herself rapidly. Her hoof was sopping wet as it drove into her love tunnel. "Shoot.... I need something else... this isn't doing it for me.... hurry up Rainbow Dash." She was getting desperate, her third orgasm and still wasn't satisfied.
Usually her hoof did the job but lately it wasn't enough. She knew that she needed, she craved something else, somepony else. Her hoof was getting tired of jabbing itself mercilessly into her leaking hole. The sounds it was making was keeping the gears of her arousal going. The sloshing noises made her want to cum even more.
"Almost there... so close..." She was driving her hoof faster into herself before using her other hoof to play with her clit, the small nub was being stroked and played with driving her to another orgasm. "Aaaahhhhhhhhh!" Her whole body shook as waves of thick fluids released from her throbbing and pained mare-hood. She sighed in frustration as her body was still aching with need.
She heard the noise of somepony coming into her house. She was scared of who it might be... then she heard the voice of the intruder that quelled her fears.
"I’m coming in Shy, are you decent?" The cyan mare inquisitively questioned while nearing her friend's door. The hallway was beginning to smell like the canary mare's essence, and it was causing Rainbow Dash to enjoy it inwardly. She couldn't show any sign of arousal in the presence of her friend. Often her wings would betray her, as they would randomly stiffen during Fluttershy's ordeal.
"Come in... please hurry." Her voice portrayed the fear about the situation she was in. Tears had begun spilling from her eyes as the seconds passed.
The cyan mare opened the door and noticed her friend's smell was potent and that she was on the bed crying. "Shy... " her view of the scene with the sheer eroticism being displayed was getting to her. She closed the door behind her after entering and waited for her friend to invite her to the bed. Not for sexual favors, but just to hold her while she suffers silently.
The timid mare was glad her friend was there, it had calmed her body a lot just seeing her. She tapped the side of the bed and waited. Soon she would be snuggled up to Rainbow Dash and not have to worry about the ache between her thighs. Her sudden lust would calm itself when around her protector as it made the canary mare feel satisfied in her heart somewhat, having her close.
"I’m here shy... shh it's okay." Her gentle voice, which was usually unlike her, was reserved for her dearest of friends. She pulled the other mare into a hug and held her gently. "I’m sorry I’m late...I didn't know it would happen today." She said sadly wanting to have been able to stop her suffering sooner.
"It's okay Dashie.... you’re here now and I can relax." Her tone was getting sultry and she was starting to purr while leaning into her friend and nuzzling her softly.
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They spent minutes like that together, constantly snuggling and rubbing one another gently. It was intimate but not sexual. The touches were just to calm the rising heat and lust of the canary mare. Usually it would be enough and the moment of intense need would die down for a while, but this time it wasn't going away.
"Rainbow.... please.... I need it.... I need to rut.... rut me Rainbow Dash.... take me.... I won't get mad I promise." Her voice was pained and definitely getting desperate. It was something the canary mare would do to tempt her friend and as much as she craved it, she didn't want her first time to be like this.
Rainbow Dash sighed "Shy... I can't... I am the element of loyalty, I won't break my promise." She stated with a gentle tone that was uncommon. She gently kissed her friend's neck hoping to quell the flames of lust that were threatening to consume them both.
Fluttershy decided to be brave, and attempt to use her closeness to try and make the mare of her dreams want to do it. Even if it was low and was going to cause her virginity to be lost the way she didn't want it to be, it was at least with the right pony. With rationalization backing up her cause she decided to go for it. She slid her hoof down her friend's body and gently licked the cyan mare's neck while making a throaty purr.
The athletic pegasus felt her wings flare out and become stiff. "Shy.... stop you know you don't want to do this." Her voice failing as her body was responding. "I’m not a stallion I am your friend Rainbow Dash." She said softly wanting to not hurt her friend's feelings. She was in a confused state. She wanted to take the mare right next to her, but knew it wasn't meant to be. If ‘Shy was into her then, maybe. The cyan mare figured her ward was just acting out because of her condition.
"I don't need a stallion Dashie... I need my knight in shining armor... that would be you." Her husky tone and her soft giggle accentuating the already tense situation. Her tongue kept sliding up and down her friend's neck with ease, and even carried down to her friend's shoulder, lapping away at it slowly. She could feel her friend's body respond as her hoof went down to her friend's nether region and gently played around it teasingly. "I want you to take me Dashie... can't you do that for me?" She begged in mock innocence.
"Shy... stop... you know I can't... I don't want to take your virginity like this... you wanted to save it for a special moment with somepony special... I won't let you lose that because of your condition... I am your friend to the end and I can't ....Oh my Celestia!" That moment her mind was betraying her vow as she felt a hoof rub her clit. She wasn't able to fight the shy mare off when her friend was playing dirty like that.
"Shh, Dashie.... you did your job for a long time. I couldn't have asked for a better protector... but even if this isn't the right moment, I am going to have to finally tell you that it's the right pony... I hope you don't hate me for telling you this, but I love you Rainbow Dash... and right now I am going to have my way with you. If you don't want to be my friend after that's fine but, for now; at least let me have this... one... moment." She was rubbing her friend's button and seductively begging for this one chance to have her virginity taken by the mare she desired.
"Whatever you want Shy... just don't stop please." Her scratchy voice when aroused gave off this effect that would turn mares and stallions into butter. If they ever heard it.
"Thank you Dashie... now let's play, since we have all day." She was going to enjoy her one day, just in case her tomorrow was rotten. She could possibly lose her friend for her reckless want. Her tongue started getting more aggressive and she was traveling down her friend's body as she positioned herself to be right in front of her lover's frontal area. Her hoof was continuing it's assault on her throbbing clit, keeping Rainbow in a constant state of arousal. Her tongue traveled down the cyan coat and went right to where she had been keeping her hoof. "Now... open your legs for me Dashie." Her tone was the epitome of lust at that moment. She was a virgin but she had read some books. She was also in love so her timidness hid for the moment.
Rainbow Dash reluctantly obeyed and turned her face to the side, embarrassed at how easily she was being dominated by her shy friend. The cyan mare had always been a top and even if she never mated with a stallion she had known she was only into mares. Gryphons didn't count as mares, though she simply let that thought go since she was being pleasured by the love of her life. While her mind was mentally clogged from the intense pleasure. She thought she heard her shy friend claim the feeling was mutual.
"Good girl Dashie...look at that dripping hole... I’m guessing you have been wanting this for a long time... shh don't talk, let me take good care of you." Her commands were so calming to the cyan mare and helped Fluttershy keep the spell she had seem to cast on her friend. Her tongue traced it's way to her first time lover's mare-hood. She started following what those erotic novels had been teaching her. She traced the outer edge of the other mare's slit while using her hoof to keep the love button stimulated. It was working like a charm.
"Shit ... Shy..Right there... don't stop." Her body was enjoying the sensations that were filling her. Sparks shot up her increasingly heating body as her mind was losing it's clarity. She was suddenly unable to speak words but instead just mumble incoherent thoughts.
Fluttershy's tongue was now sliding inside and she was excited. So this is how she tastes like... it's so yummy. She kept eating her friend's puffing mare-hood out. She was flicking her tongue around the walls and testing her reach. She was enjoying herself and getting lost in it all. Her friend's shaking and her scratchy moans were signaling the end of her delicious meal. She kept vigorously rubbing the nub of the cyan mare and slowly inhaled the air as the aroma of the meal was blanketing the room and filling her nose. Her tongue shot straight in deep and she was rewarded with her lover's orgasm. The sticky sweet fluids that had shot out had splashed her mouth and she was drinking it in stride. She lapped up what she missed and even made a gulping noise to let her lover know she swallowed her marecum.
"Oh shoot ‘Shy... that was amazing... I have never came that hard before." She said as she realized something off about what was in front of her face. "Shy.." Her mind was losing control as she was staring at her friend's marehood just begging to be lavished and eaten out.
"Go on Dashie... you know you want it... have at it..." Her husky tone was slowly working its way to her friend's defenses Please just eat me out, my love. She was about to just shove it on her lover's face if she didn't play ball.
"Fine... but we are going to talk about this after I make you cum... three times." She said cheekily before expertly assaulting her friend's dripping marehood with her lesbimare expertise. She had eaten mare's out before but no mare's nethers were as tasty as the fresh virgin meal she was devouring at the moment. The smell was so innocent and intoxicating and the taste was sweeter than most marehoods. It was driving her mind and tongue insane. The sensation of making her friend elated was also helping the mood. She could hear her friend's moans which sounded erotically cute. It was a mix of innocent and yet arousing. Her tongue slipped far in and she was now gently prodding her friend's clit with ease. timing the pressing of the love button with her tongues strokes against the walls of her friend's love tunnel.
"Oh Dashie.... right there... and there... oh Celestia... don't stop Dashie..." Her moans were now reaching the pinnacle of sultry. She wasn't even thinking; she could have been reciting the lyrics to a song and her brain wouldn't register it. The canary mare was so lost in thought, and the sheer bliss that she never wanted it to end.
Rainbow Dash was enjoying her meal so much, she forgot to pace and just spoiled her friend causing the canary mare's first orgasm to reach intense levels of ecstasy that was given by another pony, had taken place. The eruption of her friend's mare-hood allowed her to drink down her delicious nectar, she dived in and lapped up the rest before making a lewd gulping sound.
Fluttershy was breathless ".... " she couldn't even begin to explain how good that felt and suddenly she was positioned on her back with her legs open. "What... more?" She asked a bit afraid of this new dominance she was facing. She was already tuckered out and just reveling in the fact that she just had her first taste of being with another pony.
"Yes.... I said three orgasms Shy.. that was one... now be a good girl and keep your legs open for me... I am going to town on this pussy." Rainbow Dash’s tone had made her lover's body shudder in delight and arousal. Her hoof was barely touching the quivering mare as her body responded with a jolt. "Stay still Shy... I haven't even begun yet." Her voice dripping with lust and her mind was full of lewd thoughts.
The shy mare felt a hoof go in her and she moaned "Dashie!" Her voice was becoming far gone as her mind started to fog up. She was on Cloud Nine the entire time, her body not used to such pleasure. She felt the cyan's mare hoof go faster into her and her body was almost ready to give out and let loose there, but that wasn't enough. It seemed that her lover decided to add more to the sensation by suckling the shy mare's clit. The force of her lover's sucking and the ministrations caused her to erupt all over the cyan athlete's hoof and the shy mare's bed.
"That's two... one more and then, we can talk about what just happened." Her mind was set on one more orgasm from her friend. She was slowly kissing her way up the shy mare's body. She wasn't going to rut it again with such force or quickness. She wanted to take her time and make love to the mare before her. When her lips reached the soft lips of the other mare it was magical.
The lips pressing against one another making sparks shoot through their systems. The surge of want and need increased as the kisses turned erotic. The cyan's mare tongue invaded the mouth of the timid one. Their tongue's dancing as their love was pouring out during this slow act. Their bodies pressed together as their marehoods' bumped one another. They slowly started grinding into each other.
The rainbow maned beauty was now slowly rubbing her clit and slit against the other mare's own lady bits below her. It was getting very hard to stop, their bodies being moved by their love as they continued on. Their hearts beating faster and their bodies moving at a quicker pace.
The shy mare lost the tongue war, and let her mouth be dominated by her lover. Her body was almost ready to shoot out her last wave of marecum for the day. She wasn't sure what the talk would be about, but her mare-hood was rubbing against the cyan mare's and it felt like the best thing ever. She was about to have her final orgasm and she yelled out with tears in her eyes "I love you Dashie.... I love you." Her words fueled her orgasm as he arched her body and came with such great force it nearly depleted the rest of her energy..
The rainbow maned pegasus yelled out as she hit the final stride of ecstasy "I love you too... Shy!" Her body dripping in sweat and covered in her friend's juices. "Shit, Shy... that was... perfect." She blessed her friend with an after coitus kiss that lasted a few minutes.
"Yeah..." Her mouth, once free, was able to say before returning to the passionate kiss. "I am so happy... Please tell me you meant what you said... do you love me Rainbow Dash?" She asked, more like begged, but this was important to her.
"Yes... I do Shy.. I love you, which is why I feel bad. I gave in to temptation and ruined your first time." Her disappointment was quelled by her lover.
"No... it was perfect... you were the right mare..." she said as she grabbed her friend's hoof in hers "and this was definitely the right time..." Her happiness didn't fade as her lover asked her a silly but formal question.
"Want to be my marefriend Shy?" Her voice a bit more confident than usual.
"Yes... I do my love." Her lips moved towards the other mare's lips and kissed them for as long as she could before passing out from her body's lack of energy.
Rainbow Dash had the biggest smile in the world. She snuggled up to her new lover and kissed her forehead gently before drifting off into sleep.
Author's Note
Cloppity clop clop... I hope you enjoyed it.
Oh I noticed some minor errors that need to be edited still content > minor errors.
I did some editing and I feel like I worked it enough. I can always fix more errors if you spot any and because of this I have decided to drop my ego or self publication only mindset and just find some proof readers and editors.
Anyways thanks for the support. If you still don't like it with the fixes I have done that's alright because not everyone will like any of my fics.
If you dislike it for a good reason let me know why so I can improve as an author.
