I desperately tried to give this "just another cupcakes spinoff" a really deep story. and to give it more of an emotional feeling that just death. I hope it payed off

the first chapter is the only gory one, would have tagged it as teenager if it weren't for the cupcakes references and of course the gore,

the second chapter contains character death, and about three lines of physical shipping (kissing) i don't usually ship, but you'll understand the necessity of it if you choose to read it,

if you wish to read the story this is based on, it is entitled, "cupcakes" by "sargeant sprinkles", i don't suggest reading this if you're not a fan of gore, (it is very gory). other than that, constructive criticism please, don't just write "this is crap" give me something to work on :].