The Immortality Prophecy: Book one; It must be True Love

by theviciouskiller

When I saw her

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                                    It must be True Love

                                    written by theviciouskiller

                              Chapter one: When I saw her

                                      (Pinkimena)

It was a hot, moist day when Pinkimena gazed out of her window. She seemed so depressed. She didn't know what exactly happened yesterday, how it happened, and why. She wished she knew, all she could remember was the scarlet red eyes, the short, and yet sexy mane, how it fell down so perfectly. She looked amazing, even after the sore and gruesome events that was engraved all along her body. And yes, secrets out, (but not to the ponies in Ponyville,) that she was Pinkimena, the gruesome, most violent mare you have ever seen. She was unfortunately known, that is to that one mare. That evening, Pinkimena was out on her normal killing spree, the one thing that dared differ from her other events was the fact that this time it was at night, the bare moon shined down.

Pinkimena was waiting up inside of this tree, her goal was to capture a Pegasus from the sky, a nice project she wanted to do, and has done, except for there was one species of pony that wasn't already devoted to her project. A Pegasus.

She watched the sky like a owl does it's prey. Seeking the sky for any soaring figures.

And suddenly, she felt herself rattle as something hit the tree, something way further down the trunk than were she was. Down below she saw a large figure of feathers, and when I say large, I mean HUGE. This...object had just crash landed on the bottom of the tree.

Possibly a Pegasus...

She jumped down from the tree, standing tall. She took a few steps as she froze when the huge monster-looking thing shuffled.

She watched as something else started to rise from behind the feathered walls, and came to realize that it was somepony.

It turned to face Pinkimena, eyes wavery as her eyelids bounced up and down slowly. And that's when they finally closed and the whole body came tumbling down.

She stood still before she moved closer. She gently moved her wing to reveal her face. It was a brown mare, no doubt. Her sleek complexion showed that she had to be some kind of gorgeous pony. Crystal, maybe?

She looked down and jumped back as the wisp, brown feathers started to fade into a black color, and as the moon shined down brighter on the sleeping mare.

She knew that she had wings, and that was all she needed. She grabbed the unconscious pony and started to drag her all the way to the quiet street of Sugar-Cube Corner.

                                                                (Vicious)

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Vicious slowly drifted her eyes open as she yawned and was about to bring her hoof to her mouth- when she realized that something was holding it back.

"What the-"

She wiggled her hoof around to find that it was in some sort of metal bar. What on earth was she doing here anyways? She certainly didn't remember being here when she went to sleep. Or did she? Where did she sleep, anyways? She may never know...

"Ah! Look who's awake!"

"Who's there?" Said Vicious in a irritated voice. It was bad enough that she woke up in "Wonder Land," but there's someone else here too?

"Oh silly me! I should give you some more light."

Vicious watched as the suspicious being that was with her pulled some sort of chain that brought some light into the room.

And her heart stopped as she saw a bubble gum pink mare, with a perfect pink, sassy, straight mane parted to the side. And her eyes! Those amazing aqua orbs glared into her soul. And she liked it.

"Hello...uh, who are you?"

"Oh that's not important. We need to get down to business! You slept in way to much."

She then trotted over to a table, covered by a white sheet. Vicious didn't know what was going on, but she looked forwards to it as long as that pretty pink mare stayed here.

She watched as the pink pony pulled the sheet, revealing a whole table of knives, saws, even a sword! And other items that she did not recognize.

"Hey, cool toys! What's that for?"

"For the project,"

"What project? Can I help?"

"No, YOUR the project, goof!"

Vicious raised a brow at the young pony."I'm... the project?"

She blushed rapidly. She knew exactly what was going on."Oh...right. I-I'm sorry, I don't know what I promised you, but I don't have any money."

"Money? Why would I want money?"

"So, you do this for free?"

"What are you talking about?"

"Are,- wait, are you even a stripper?"

"No!"

"A Prostitute?"

"Why do you think I'm a prostitute?!"

"Oh. Never mind." She said laughing. She could tell she was getting really mad now. It was cute, but she couldn't help it.

"But then... why am I here? And why do you have that...uh, clothing on?"

She then grinned as she approached her with a knife.

"That...is an excellent question."

She slammed the knife two inches away from her face, slicing off a couple strands of her hair. She watched in bewilderment as the mare got closer.

"But I am not a teacher. Too bad you just are gonna have to sit here, not knowing what's going on."

"Uh-huh. Well, let's see what you've got."

The pink mare frowned when she pulled the knife out of the wall, and returning it to the table. She picked up what Vicious thought was a hack saw and came back towards her way.

"Now, lets see what I can do here."

Vicious yelped as she hacked off her ear, causing it to gush blood everywhere."Um...ow! That hurt!"

Pinkimena looked at her in shock. The expressions that was on her face was like an open book to her thoughts. And not to mention the fact that she could read her mind. But... they just met so there's no point in telling her what she is and isn't capable of.

"Why isn't this working? Why is she still talking? Is she trying to mess with my head?!"

That was funny. She thought that she would beg for her life because she cut off her ear? Wow. This was going to be an interesting day.

"What are you doing? Sitting here and cutting off my limbs wont help you."

"SHUT UP!!"

"Fine... you want to waist time? Have at it." This mare was seriously about to get on her nerves. I mean- she's cute, hell she was hot and all, but maybe a hint was a tad bit hard to get to her.

She picked up a steak knife from the table and once again came back to the Pegasus.

"Let's try making you pretty!"

She then took the knife and started to carve into the mares chest. Vicious felt a little bad that she wasted her time coming all this way to have her do whatever it was her "project" was, and she was being annoying. So maybe when she starts to cut her, she'll scream or whatever.

As the knife started to stab the mares chest, she did as she wanted, yelling, pleading, and she even forced a tear to come down her face. Crying would totally get her to think that her project was working.

"Is this it? Just cut you and you finally scream and plead?"

Vicious didn't reply, but just hang her head low, acting as if she had no words to say as she forced more water to come down her face. She made sure that her mane covered her face, if she saw that she was smiling, then that would be it. There would no way she could make her happy.

That is until she grabbed her mane and pulled her hair back.

"Snap! Wipe that smile off your face!"

She did immediately what her mind had commanded her to do. The mare looked into her eyes. She grinned two inches away from her face, and it left Vicious to wonder how much it would throw her off if she leaned forward and kissed her. That would be funny.

Pinkimena's smile started to fade as she felt the corner of her face start to rise, and she saw Pinkimena starting to catch on.

"Ah shit! Not funny! Not funny! Get it out of your head! Now!!"

She then did as her mind had ordered, but it was too late. Pinkimena immediately caught on to what was really going on. Damn.

"Why...aren't..you...Dying!?!" She exclaimed as she slashed the knife across Vicious' face, leaving a cut right above her muzzle. She didn't know what to do: scream or not, but a special attempt was that she grunted and tried to shield her face away from the angry mare.

Ten points!

Pinkimena looked at the mare as blood started to trickle down her face, and started to blend with the blood that was coated on her chest from the giant X mark that was carved into her chest.

"Just... why. Why do you have to be so gorgeous?"

Vicious started to blush. What was she talking about? She looked more coltboyish than anything. She definitely wasn't prretttyy.

"Your like a... Angel of Darkness."

AN ANGEL?! What the hell was going through this mares head!? I mean, angel? Never! She had Alicorn blood, Crystal blood, Changeling blood, and whatever the hell else she had in her blood that made her this... this freakish.

"I'm not an angel."

"I think you are. Everypony is normally dead now. You are not an average normal pony."

"Doesn't mean I'm an angel, either."

"But, your not dead."

"So?" She said, teasing her. She was soooo cute when she was mad, it was nearly unbearable.

She didn't say anything back, but Vicious continued.

"Wanna tell me your name now?"

"NO!"

She wined. On the outside she done it well, but on the inside, she was dying.

Of laughter.

"Whhy nooot..."

"Never mind that, there is one thing I think I know of that will make you gone for sure."

She then turned around and went the other way, going into this room, leaving Vicious in the room by herself.

Pinkimena sat in the tub, full of the Pegasus' blood. She twirled around her wine glass, mixing the blood that was on it. She took a sip, and stared ahead in disbelief. How. Is. She. NOT. DEAD!

While she was in her tub, Vicious clicked her tongue in boredom, wondering how much longer she was going to stay like this.

"So... does the blood taste...uh, nice?"

She didn't answer. She instead kept staring into space. Vicious had to come up with something, and fast."Hey, can I have a taste?"

Pinkimena replied by throwing the wine glass at her, it shattering all over her chest. The glass dug into her coat, causing multiple spots to start bleeding.

"Okay...next question. Can I call this a date?"

"Why...don't...you...get...it."

"Get what?"

"The fact that I want TO KILL YOU!?! I'VE TRIED SO MUCH!! WHAT ARE YOU?! A GOD? A PRINCESS? WHY WONT YOU DIE!?!"

Vicious didn't know what to say to that. She just wanted to make her happy, although it was sudden, she intended on making her feel better in every way she could, but nothing worked.

Her thoughts stopped as the pink mare spoke up.

"I'm Pinkimena, by the way."

"That's your name? Pinkimena? That's a lovely name."

Pinkimena jumped out of the tub, so quick that it scared Vicious, and that was when she walked forward and drew back her hoof. Vicious faced the other way as she was prepared to take the blow, until she heard a *clink* and opened her eyes.

she saw as Pinkimena had punched the cuff until it finally broke. Vicious watched in shock as she did it to the other one as well.

"W-What are you doing?"

"I'm setting you free. You're free to go."

"But aren't you scared that I'll tell somepony?"

"I doubt it."

Man! Now she knows me too well. Well, no more surprises for her. But she watched as Pinkimena walked away into a corner and sat sadly.

"But... what if I don't want to go?"

"LEAVE!!'' She yelled as she started to sob. Tears ran down her face, or what Vicious thought were tears, it was some sort of black goo that came from her eyes. But she wasn't one to judge, when she's in alternative mode, she cried blood, but... yeah.

Vicious lifted herself into the air and flapped her ginormous wings, spreading black feathers all over the room. She landed right behind the sad mare, and wrapped her wings around Pinkimena, forming giant walls, leaving her and the pink mare alone in the dark enclosed room.

There was plenty of light, her red eyes glowed brightly, and they lead her through the darkness.

"Pinkimena, look at me?"

She sniffled and turned herself around to face her. She watched as the mare reached her hoof out and lifted her chin. Observing the perfect face.

Pinkimena blushed as she planted a gentle kiss on the top of her head, and looked at her in bewilderment.

She then leaned in right next to her ear, and enclosed her in a soft hug.

"I'll come back tomorrow for more operation time."

With that said, she released her and made her way to a window in the room, softly slid it open, and flew away from the home of the pink mare.

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                                                       (Pinkimena)

It was a frustrating day yesterday, she had no idea what was going on. She had been charmed by that Pegasus. She never even caught her name! Why did she have to do that? And what was with her? She wasn't afraid. She didn't even bleed for more than five minutes.

So...what is she?

The thought of the warm kiss that was planted on her head from the day before caused her to blush. She smiled to herself. Saying the words,

"Stupid Angel of Darkness."

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