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Alternate Ending: Equestria Girls

by TheGreatRarity
My first attempt at a story in which Twilight doesn't get back to Equestria, and somehow a different human called Fortune Fancy gets through... please, don't stroke my ego, actually critique it please?

Twilight looks back at her human friends… she wonders whether she'd ever return here… and looks up. The portal closes in one minute… she looks at Flash Sentry, wondering if he'd be alright with her leaving and if he existed in Equestria… she began backing through the portal… she gasps as she was pushed out of the way, and some girl charges through the portal… by the time Twilight recovers and runs toward the portal, it closed… she realizes everyone is staring… and soon she'll have to get used to this life.

Teen
Incomplete
Romance
Human
Anthro
Alternate Universe
 

207 words: Estimated 1 minute to read

1 Chapter:

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