Shellshock

by Jman796

First published

The rush of battle is often a potent and lethal addiction, for war is a drug
Action Side: Demons from Tartarus have escaped their eternal prisons and took on a new physical form, The Corrupted. Equestria and the very planet are on the brink of annihilation… unless the Equestran Special Operations Command has anything to say about it.

Romance Side: Meet Echo, a 25 year old bat pony that just graduated from boot camp as a Private First Class and has just been assigned to the 2nd Infantry Unit based in Ponyville. Although proud to have graduated, he has to deal with years racism and being a social outcast since the day he immigrated from Rook Isles, a small, Celestia-forsaken, anarchic chain of islands between Equestria and Gryponia. However, he managed to capture the attention of a certain unicorn mare named Ember

This is my first story, please don't just shoot it down but help me revise it to make it better.
(Ember provided by the wonderful krisprowler)
(Arc 2 written by icedude94)