Enter Equestria

by ThatGuyWithTheFimFiction

Chapter 33: A Peaceful Night With Luna (UPDATED)

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SO, I reread this when I WASN'T drunk off of energy drinks, I HATED my drunken plot, too rushed, and stupid, so, here's a new part, a MORE relaxed one.


It was 9:00 P.M, and it was time for Luna to raise the moon.

I went over to Celestia, to see if Discord had waken up yet.

"So, how long do you think he'll be out?" I asked.

"He should be up in the morning, guess I shouldn't have laid the News on him that hard." She said, looking sad.

"Its not your fault Celestia, its not that you laid the News on him to hard, its just him acting like a man, a man hears the word pregnant from his girlfriend or wife, and he freaks out." I said, she just smiled and gave me a hug.

"Thank's for trying to cheer me up." She said, I smiled back at her.

We were standing there, hugging for 5 minutes, when Luna entered the room.

"Hey Dill, are you ready to take up my offer of looking at the stars with m-, oh, am I interrupting something?" She asked.

"Of course not Luna, go on Dylan, don't want to keep a princess waiting." Celestia said, I nodded and went over to Luna.

We started to walk over to the balcony, when we heard Celestia call out.

"Hope you lovebirds have a wonderful time!" She called out, I rolled my eyes, while Luna's face went red.

Once we made it to the balcony, we both sat down.

I noticed a golden aura surrounding the Sun as it lowered.

I looked up at Luna, she closed her eyes as her horn started to glow. In the show, it just looked like her horn glowed up, and the moon would raise, but up close, was majestic.

We were both taken by whiteness, all I saw was white, I looked over at Luna, who still had her eyes closed, a smile crept on her face as her horn glowed brighter, then, everything went back to normal, all the whiteness, was gone.

But what made me keep my smile, was that the moon was full and bright, stars started to appear, I looked down onto Canterlot to see ponies lights go out, kids and adults going inside, I saw a couple kissing by a lake where the moon shimmered on the lake, it was beautiful.

I saw Luna start to open her eyes.

"Wow." Was all I could really say, she smiled.

"Thank you." She whispered.

I looked back up at the moon, the moons whiteness looked the same as the one were were taken by, a realization washed over me.

"Luna, were we . . . were we inside the moon?" I asked,  she nodded.

"Only our souls, my soul is connected to many things, but the moon, is the fourth best, next to my sister, my mom and dad." She said.

"Then, if your soul is connected to the moon, why was I able to see inside?" I asked.

"Well Dill, a thousand years ago, when our last Harmony Angel was here, he used to help me lower or raise the moon, same with my sister and the sun, so, your connected to the sun and the moon, without him, me and my sister tire, when we lower or raise the moon, the last Harmony Angel was a good friend." She said, a tear running down her face.

"Wait, what happened to the last Harmony Angel?" I asked.

"You already met him." She said, I was confused.

"I did?" I asked.

"Yes, Discord, Discord used to be the Harmony Angel, but one day, his heart was consumed by complete and utter chaos." She said, another tear run down her face.

Seeing someone cry would make me want to tell them to stop being such a baby, but to see Luna, my favorite pony cry, made me want to cry, but I tried to be strong for her.

"That's too bad, what did you do to try to stop it?" I asked,  she let a few more tears stream down her cheek.

"Nothing, we couldn't do anything, we didn't know what to do." She answered.

"But, you two are the most powerful beings in this world." I said.

"We are, but, chaos is too complex for ANY type of magic." She answered. "You see, a LONG time ago, Discord's personality was a lot like yours, fun, charming, but chaotic, but each day, he became more and more chaotic, his chaotic personality was taking over his others." She explained.

"So there's a chance that I could be Discord the second?" I asked.

"Yes, there's a chance, that's why I called you out here, to say this, I CARE about you Dill, not JUST because of the chance of changing, but as a friend, I CARE as a friend, a friend who worries about you, a friend that will give help when needed." She said.

"Wait, why did you call me in private, if you wanted to say I was important to you?" I asked.

"Well, less noise so you can hear me loud and clear, and in such a perfect place, plus." She said this next part looking away, pouting. "My sister would tease me about me caring, say that your my new 'Special Somepony." I chuckled.

"Well, thank's for caring about me, even though I may SEEM that I'm not afraid of anything, I am though." I said, she seemed surprised.

"You are?" She asked, I nodded.

"I'm scared of losing my friends, my family, things that are close to me, and, bees." I said plainly, she giggled.

"Bees?" She asked.

I smiled. "Terrified." I said simply.

After that, she couldn't stop giggling. "Bees, HA!" She said, I rolled my eyes, but smiled.

After she stopped giggling, we both went silent as we looked up at the stars.

I thought about our conversation, and couldn't stop thinking about losing my friends or family.

I would hate to lose them. I felt more glum the more I thought about it, but then I remembered something.

A song.

Thinking about the song made me calm down, I began to sing, but not too loud.

(Link To The Song)


Careful with what you love the most

'Cause it could disappear tomorrow

The secret to finding happiness

Lies nowhere else but in your soul

So now that you're back from paradise

Was everything really all that nice

Forget all the things that made you blessed

Remind yourself why you even left

The fact that you're standing here with me

The fact you can breathe and feel and see

The everyday miracles you miss

Every moment comes down to this

Careful with what you love the most

'Cause it could disappear tomorrow

The secret to finding happiness

Lies nowhere else but in your soul

You know the closer you get to something

The tougher it is to see it

And I'll never take it for granted

So go on ahead and chase your dreams

And don't give up when God stops giving

Don't let your life just pass you by

But don't forget it's for living

I'll let the hope you gave me show the way

With the courage to conquer every day

And I'll never take it for granted

Let's go


After I finished the song, I looked over at Luna, she was looking up at the moon, smiling, but a few tears got out.

"Dylan, that was beautiful." I heard a voice behind me, I turned around and saw Celestia and Discord standing there, I smiled.

"Thank's." I answered.

"Tia, how long have you been sitting there?" Luna asked.

"The entire time." She answered. "I didn't want Dylan here, "Try" anything." She said.

"Tia!" Luna exclaimed angrily, with a blush, I laughed.

"Don't worry Celestia, I wouldn't try anything, I see the Manliest man in the world is here." I said, looking at him, he smiled sheepishly.

"I'm sorry if I took the news so shocking, I didn't expect THAT." He said.

"What are you gonna name it?" I asked.

"Its gonna be a girl, and her name is gonna be-"

"WAIT, don't tell me, I want the audience to decide." I said, they looked confused, except Discord.

"Yes, let the audience decide." He said, winking at me.

"Audience?" They both asked.

"Never mind, just let "Me" decide." I said.

"Ahhhh Dill, so random." Celestia said, shaking her head. "I think its time for us to sleep." Celestia said, motioning us to the bedrooms.

So, everyone went to their proper beds, except for Luna, who stayed out on the balcony.

I went over to my bed, and jumped.

Landed right in the coziness.

It was soft and cozy.

I was about to go to sleep, when my door opened a little, I pushed my head up, to see Luna.

"Hey Luna, what are you doing in here?" I asked her.

She didn't respond, instead, leaned over, and gave me a hug, and a kiss on the cheek.

"Good night Dill." She said calmly, but even in the darkness, I saw her cheeks turn red.

"Good night Luna."

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